上海2022年中考英語話題作文專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練

1、話題作文. Write at least 60 words about the topic left me a new impression.,5 （請(qǐng) 以“給我留下一個(gè)新印象”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符 號(hào)不占格。）你身邊有熟悉的同學(xué)、朋友、老師，有一天可能因?yàn)槟臣伦?你對(duì)她（他）改變了原有的看法。請(qǐng)補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題，并結(jié)合這個(gè)事例談?wù)勊ㄋ┙o 你留下的這個(gè)新的印象。（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信 息，否則不予評(píng)分。）二. Write at least 60 words on the topic Happiness doesnt always disappear

2、during difficult times（以在困難時(shí)期，幸福感不一定會(huì)消失為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞 的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）.小到個(gè)人，大到團(tuán)隊(duì)、城市、國(guó)家，都會(huì)有困難時(shí)期，但即便是困難時(shí)期, 人們還是能感受生活中的小喜悅，感受幸福溫馨的片刻，請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己或他人的經(jīng) 歷，說說困難時(shí)期的幸福感。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予計(jì)分）三.Write at least 60 words on the given situation.（根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于 60 個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）法國(guó)“蜘蛛人”阿蘭羅伯特的經(jīng)歷告訴我們，戰(zhàn)勝恐懼也可以是一種勇敢。你對(duì)勇敢的

3、理解是如何的呢？請(qǐng)以“The time Iwas brave（那次我很勇敢）”為題, 根據(jù)自身的經(jīng)歷談?wù)勀銓?duì)勇敢的理解。（注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。2. 照抄閱讀的語篇不得分。）四.Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic Life in 2050”（請(qǐng)以2050 年的生活為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）提示：到2050年，我們的生活會(huì)是什么樣的？請(qǐng)選擇下圖中（或自擬）12個(gè)方 面展開描述。. Write at least 60 words about the topic

4、My opinion on remote lessons”（請(qǐng)以我 對(duì)遠(yuǎn)程課堂的看法為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）疫情期間我們開啟了一種全新的學(xué)習(xí)模式遠(yuǎn)程課堂（remote lessons）。在此期間你是如何學(xué)習(xí)的？請(qǐng)結(jié)合你自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)剬?duì)遠(yuǎn)程課堂的看法。 注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名以其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。 The following is for reference only.（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）because of the virus manage timeself-controleffective.Write a passage of at least

5、 60 words on the topic The first time I （以我第一 次”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。） 要求：.補(bǔ)全作文標(biāo)題。.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名以及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。七、Write at least 60 words about the topic When I met with a problem.（以當(dāng) 我遇到問題時(shí)”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）在日常的生活與學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)該具備一些解決問題的能力。請(qǐng)結(jié)合一次自 身經(jīng)歷，說說你是如何解決那個(gè)問題的，并分享一下你的經(jīng)驗(yàn)：如果未能解決, 也請(qǐng)談?wù)勀銖闹蝎@

6、得的教訓(xùn)。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng) 分。）The following is fbr reference only.（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）have difficulty in. enable me to. help me realize.八、Write at least 60 words on the given situation.（根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于 60 個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）在美國(guó)新澤西這一走丟孩子的眼中，馬是世界上最美好的事物。你眼中最美好的 事物是什么呢？請(qǐng)以“The greatest thing in the world”為題，結(jié)

7、合自身經(jīng)歷談?wù)勀?的看法。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。照抄閱讀語篇不得分。九、Write at least 60 words on the topic My choice”.（請(qǐng)以“我_的選擇”為題，寫一篇不少于60字的短文。）人生即是選擇。你在生活中一定做過無數(shù)次選擇，或許是明智的，亦或許是 錯(cuò)誤的；或許是難忘的，亦或許是遺憾的請(qǐng)結(jié)合你以往的一次選擇，談?wù)勊?對(duì)你的影響或你的感悟。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）十、Write at least 60 words on the topic Td like to get cl

8、ose to.（以“我想要 走近”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）人的一生會(huì)遇見很多美好的事物，人、物、景等各種美好的存在都會(huì)吸引我 們走進(jìn)。請(qǐng)寫寫你想走近什么？怎么走近？說說你的理由。十一、Write at least 60 words on the topic Keep your mind open”.（以敞開心扉 /心胸開闊”為題，寫一篇至少60個(gè)單詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）.在生活中，你對(duì)你的生活滿意嗎？不滿意的話，是什么原因呢？如果我們能 以開闊的胸懷面對(duì)不同的事物，從不同的角度去思考問題，可能會(huì)得到意想不到 的收獲。結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談一談你是如何做到心胸開闊、樂于接

9、受各種順勢(shì)逆境 的。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。） 十二、Write at least 60 words on the given situation （根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）石質(zhì)和雕像的經(jīng)歷告訴我們，不同的選擇會(huì)帶來不同的結(jié)果。生活中，我們 也會(huì)碰到很多選擇。請(qǐng)以I chose to為題，結(jié)合自身的經(jīng)歷，說說你 是怎么做的？你為什么會(huì)做出這樣的選擇？The following is for reference onlychoose to be / domake up my mindencourage me to（注意：

10、1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。2.照 抄閱讀語篇不得分。）范文及解析The teacher left me a new impression.Once I was not interested in English. That was Miss Wang who changed me.One day, our teacher told us we would have an English speech competition two months later. Everyone was happy except me, because I couldn*t da

11、re to speak English in public. My English teacher came with a smile and encouraged me. From then on, I practiced every day. The day came, I got the first prize at last. From Miss Wang, I know that if you decide to do something and put your heart into it, you will succeed. The teacher left me a new i

12、mpression.1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時(shí)首先補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題，并且根據(jù)漢語提 示，敘述因?yàn)槟臣伦屇銓?duì)她（他）改變了原有的看法，給你留下了新的印象。 2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱為主來敘述故事內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)； 描述故事時(shí)，力求描寫細(xì)致，故事發(fā)生的背景、起因等敘述完整，保證條例清晰。二.范文Happiness doesnt always disappear during difficult timesEveryone may have difficult times. Even in difficult times, people can still feel th

13、e small joys in life.One day, it was raining hard when I was on my way home from school. I didnt take an umbrella, so I was wet. Suddenly, a stranger came toward me. He passed me an umbrella and said he could drive me home. I didnt know him but I was very thankful he helped me. Although the weather

14、was cold, I felt very warm in my heart. 題干解讀：這篇作文要求學(xué)生們以“Happiness doesnt always disappear during difficult times在困難時(shí)期，幸福感不一定會(huì)消失”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短 文。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)發(fā)揮想象力，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際 生活，寫一篇切題的文章。這是一個(gè)難點(diǎn)，學(xué)生所選取的生活中的事例應(yīng)合情合 理。寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)、第一人稱為主來敘述，注意 謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)和表達(dá)習(xí)慣，寫完整的句子， 以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿

15、插并列句、復(fù)合句、非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)等復(fù)雜句式，提升作文 檔次。同時(shí)注意上下文的銜接，使文意連貫、表達(dá)流暢。三.范文:The time I was braveIn our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident.I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I never dared to step up and speak in front of a c

16、rowd. Then, in Grade 9, a speech contest was held in my school. With my teachefs encouragement, I entered fbr it and made full preparations for it. Luckily, I finished it smoothly. To my surprise, I won the second prize. This time I was brave. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing

17、myself in public.Don*t let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it!.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。但寫作時(shí)要根據(jù)漢語提示，首先敘述自身 的經(jīng)歷，然后根據(jù)經(jīng)歷談?wù)剬?duì)勇敢的理解。.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述自身的經(jīng)歷；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)敘述 過去的經(jīng)歷，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)來敘述自己的成長(zhǎng)和對(duì)勇敢的理解。描 述經(jīng)歷時(shí)，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，敘事完整，行文連貫，保證條理清晰。四.范文Life in 2050Life has changed a lot in 2050.

18、The environment will be better and better. The air is fresher and the water is clearer. In 2050, people will no longer eat traditional food. People will eat a special kind of food in order to stay full fbr a long time. Science and technology will be highly developed and robots will take the place of

19、 human beings. Flying machines will replace today*s cars. People won*t have to go to school to study. They will study at home through computers.1、題干解讀：文章要求對(duì)2050年的生活的影響，因此時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來時(shí)態(tài); 人稱應(yīng)以第三人稱第一人稱為主。2、寫作指導(dǎo)：例文先是一句話點(diǎn)題；然后分開介紹了環(huán)境、食物、科技、交通 和上學(xué)情況。語言流暢，無語法錯(cuò)誤。五.范文My opinion on remote lessonsBecause of the vir

20、us, I have taken online courses fbr over 6 weeks. By communicating with teachers on the online communication platform, I can also solve the problems in the new knowledge in time. It is important for me to keep learning every day. Remote lessons can provide us with a good opportunity to learn.Remote

21、lessons have many advantages over the traditional classes. However, remote lessons also has some disadvantages. For example, staring at the screen for a long time is very harmful to students9 eyes. And we students need self-control. Then we can finish learning effectively.題目解讀：本文是一篇話題作文，要求寫出自己對(duì)遠(yuǎn)程課堂的

22、影響，可以結(jié)合自 身的經(jīng)歷談。文章注意談?wù)撚^點(diǎn)看法時(shí)，需要觀點(diǎn)明確，有自己的見解。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文分成兩頓，第一段介紹自己六個(gè)月的遠(yuǎn)程課堂經(jīng)歷，以及如何學(xué) 習(xí)的，第二段介紹了作者認(rèn)為遠(yuǎn)程課堂的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。觀點(diǎn)明確，行文流暢，句型多 樣。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：solve the problems； for a long time； be harmful to； finish doingo 句型：it 作形式主語 It is important for me to keep learning every day.；現(xiàn)在完成時(shí) 應(yīng)用 Because of the virus, I have taken onli

23、ne courses fbr over 6 weeks.六、The first time I succeeded in cookingWhen I was very young, I liked to watch my mother cook. I always found it amazing when colorful dishes appeared on the table. So I begged my mother to teach me to cook. Though I started with some simple dishes, it wasn*t so easy as I

24、 had imagined. But I kept practicing. Then, one day in the holiday, I decided to make lunch without my mothers help. I tried two of the dishes I had learnt. To my surprise, I made it! At that moment I was proud of myself.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意要首先補(bǔ)全作文題目，然 后圍繞題目再寫作。.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用一段式；用第一人稱敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)，敘

25、 述清晰，行文連貫。.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：like to do； on the table； beg sb to do sth； teach sb to do sth； start with； so.as； keep doing sth； decide to do sth； to ones surpriseo語法：when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句；并列連詞so, but的運(yùn)用；though引導(dǎo)的讓 步狀語從句；頻度副詞always的運(yùn)用；定語從句的運(yùn)用。七.范文：When I met with a problemEveryone will meet a difficulty during his lif

26、e, especially for a student. I used to have difficulty with my homework. For example, sometimes I can*t work out a maths problem. In front of a difficulty, different people have different attitudes. Some will give up. To me, I will never give up. I will think it over and over, till I have solved it.

27、 Or I will turn to my teachers and classmates for help. This experience makes me know the importance of thinking over the problems.1、題干解讀：題目要求以“當(dāng)我遇到問題時(shí)”為題寫一篇短文，要求結(jié)合一次自 身經(jīng)歷，介紹如何解決那個(gè)問題的并分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)；如何未能解決，談一談從中獲得 的教訓(xùn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2、寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述自身經(jīng)歷；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主； 描述經(jīng)歷以及如何解決的問題并分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)或描述未能解決問題，從中獲得的教訓(xùn) 時(shí)，應(yīng)詳細(xì)具體，敘述完整，

28、保證條理清晰。八.范文：The greatest thing in the worldWhat is the greatest thing in the world? It is a smile. A smile can start a friendship and make us feel warm and joyful.Last year when I entered the new school, I had no friends and felt lonely. Then a boy with a big smile came up to me. I felt warm and che

29、erful because of his smile and we soon became good friends.How great the power of a smile is!.題干解讀：該題屬于話題作文，作文標(biāo)題是“The greatest thing in the world”。 題目要求結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談?wù)勀阊壑凶蠲篮玫氖挛?。注意文章字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60詞。.寫作指導(dǎo)：由于作文是夾敘夾議的議論文，表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描寫經(jīng) 歷時(shí)用一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。作文可以采用“三段式”結(jié)構(gòu)，第一段表明 觀點(diǎn)，第二段敘述經(jīng)歷，第三段再次強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的觀點(diǎn)。作文完成后注意檢查語法、 單詞拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)

30、。九.例文：My best choiceEveryone has to make different choices in the life. Five years ago, I also made my choice. When I played with my little brother, I broke my mothers favourite vase. I knew she would be angry. I wanted to lie at first. But soon I changed my idea. I told my mother the truth. To my s

31、urprise, my mother praised me instead.Honesty is valuable. If it is our mistake, we should accept it and then we can correct it. Thus, we can make progress in our life.題干解讀：該題目屬于夾敘夾議的文章寫作，要通過自己的一段經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勛?己所做的選擇對(duì)自己的影響或獲得的感悟。.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述自己的一段經(jīng)歷，說明自己做了如何的 選擇，時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去時(shí)；最后要談自己的感悟，可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意敘述 時(shí)的完整性，

32、并保證條理清晰。十.例文：rd like to get close to Pingyi. Td like to introduce a nice place to you. I live in a wonderful place in Pingyi. It is a wonderful housing estate with a lot of flowers and trees.East of the community is a wide road along the river. The river is clear and transparent. It was our favorite

33、 place when we were kids. There are many people walking and playing along the river every day. You can see six blocks in the middle. There is a swimming pool in front of Block 2. In summer, children love to swim in it. A big playground lies on the right of Block 4. You can often see many men, women,

34、 boys and girls take exercise there. There is a small kindergarten behind Block 3. It is convenient and comfortable for me to live there.As for me, Pingyi is very beautiful. No matter where I am, I always think of the food and people of my hometown. Tve been almost everywhere and I can feel the warm

35、th of my hometown. The people and things here all attract me to have a deeper understanding of it.What a wonderful place it is! I love my housing estate very much.1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。主要圍繞Id like to get close to.”來進(jìn)行寫 作，寫作時(shí)可以圍繞我們一生遇見的人、物、景等各種美好的事物來進(jìn)行闡述。 2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)描述場(chǎng)景; 描述故事時(shí)，場(chǎng)景應(yīng)描寫細(xì)

36、致；表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，沒有語法錯(cuò)誤等。H.例文：Keep your mind openIn our daily life, we sometimes dont feel satisfied with our life, especially when we meet difficult situations, such as getting a low mark, losing a precious gift and so on. If we can keep our minds open to different people or things, we may get unexpected ha

37、rvest.Last week, my good friend Lucy got a goodgrade in her English exam. But mine is very poor. I felt very sad. However, she always talked about the English test. It made meannoyed. But I didnt tell her how I felt. Later, I told my mother about it. My mother encouraged me to talk to Lucy and tell her how I felt. My mother said that friends should keep their minds open to each other. The next day, I shared my feelings with