高考英語讀后續(xù)寫之描寫人在自然環(huán)境下的活動(dòng)（含范文）

1、高考英語讀后續(xù)寫之描寫人在自然環(huán)境下的活動(dòng)（含范文）I .主題語境詞匯II .主題語境語塊常見與“水” 相關(guān)的詞匯n.岸shore河river小溪stream 瀑布 waterfall 水流 current 船 boat 郊游 outingV.釣魚fish游泳swim 俯沖dive拋錨、使固定anchor用槳?jiǎng)澊琾addle乘船游覽cruise流 動(dòng)flow多詞語塊習(xí)俗語塊短語架構(gòu)語塊句子組構(gòu)語塊離岸 off the shore賞心悅目、眼福a treat to eyes一個(gè)神奇的場(chǎng)景也 magic scene沖走 sween awaym.基于主題語境的續(xù)寫實(shí)踐（已提示語法結(jié)構(gòu)）1.完成句子（

2、1）一個(gè)夏日，蔡斯和阿比蓋爾在停好的船后面游泳，而他們的父親史蒂文 在甲板上釣魚。（while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）One summer day, Chase and Abigail were swimming at the back of the anchored boat while their Da Steven was fishing on deck.（2）這是一次完美的郊游，深藍(lán)色的天空、淺綠色的河水和五月末溫和的陽 光混合在一起，創(chuàng)造了一個(gè)神奇的場(chǎng)景。（where引導(dǎo)的定語從句；景色描寫）It was a perfect outing where the colors of the

3、deep blue sky, the light green river water and the mild late May sunshine mixed to create a magic scene.（3）岸邊靜悄悄地坐落著幾間小屋。（介詞短語置于句首引起的完全倒裝）Off the shore lay quietly several cottages.（4）一切都很完美，直到一股強(qiáng)大的水流出現(xiàn)了，沖走了阿比蓋爾。（until引 導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句；o.-ing作狀語）Everything was perfect until a strong .current emerged, sweep

4、ing away Abigail.（5）蔡斯立刻意識(shí)到這有多危險(xiǎn)，便游著追妹妹，（同時(shí)）拼命向父親求救。（。. -ing作狀語）Instantly realizing. how dangerous was, Chase swam after his sister, screaming at his father desperately for help.（6）史蒂文不假思索地跳入水中，用盡全力游向兩個(gè)孩子。（without短語；with 短語）Without thinking twice, Steven dived into the water and swam towards the two

5、 kids with all his efforts.（7）聽到蔡斯絕望的叫喊聲，小屋里的人立即沖出去。（a-ing作狀語）Hearing Chases desperate cries, people in the cottage rushed out immediately.（8）意識(shí)到發(fā)生了什么，他們抓起救援設(shè)備，跳上船，盡可能快地劃槳。-ing+what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；動(dòng)詞的聯(lián)動(dòng)；as.as結(jié)構(gòu)）Realizing what had happened, they grabbed the rescue equipment, jumped into the boat and paddled

6、as fast as they could.（9）經(jīng)過仔細(xì)徹底的搜查，史蒂文、蔡斯和阿比蓋爾被找到并獲救。（表抽象 意義的名詞；被動(dòng)語態(tài)）After a_ careful and thorough search, Steven. Chase and Abigail were found an rescued.（10）是人們的無私和慷慨拯救了他們。（強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）It was the selflessness- and generosity of the people that saved them.2.銜接美文將以上各句合并成小短文并背誦成文，注意使用合適的銜接過渡詞匯。One possible

7、version ：One summer day, Chase and Abigail were swimming at the back of the anchored boat while their Dad Steven was fishing on deck. It was a perfect outing where the colors of the deep blue sky, the light green river water and the mild late May sunshine mixed to create a magic scene. Off the shore

8、 lay quietly several cottages. Everything was perfect until a strong current emerged, sweeping away Abigail. Instantly realizing how dangerous it was, Chase swam after his sister, screaming at his father desperately for help. Without thinking twice, Steven dived into the water and swam towards the two kids with all his efforts. Hearing Chases desperate cries, people in the cottage rushed out immediately. Realizing what had happened, they grabbed the rescue equipment, jumped into the boat and paddled as fast as they could. Luckily, after a careful a