廣東省八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上冊(cè)寫(xiě)作教程課件：Unit-1-(共33張)

1、Unit 1 My travel diary寫(xiě)作話題：Travel（旅行）Unit 1 My travel diary寫(xiě)作話題：TrHope you enjoy my photos!Hope you enjoy my photos!1. 掌握以時(shí)間或地點(diǎn)為線索的記敘文寫(xiě)作方法。2. 培養(yǎng)自我糾錯(cuò)、自我賞析、自我反思的寫(xiě)作策略。3. 培養(yǎng)深入了解不同文化的意識(shí)和國(guó)際主義精神。Learning objectives1. 掌握以時(shí)間或地點(diǎn)為線索的記敘文寫(xiě)作方法。Learnin 以敘事為主的記敘文，側(cè)重以時(shí)間為線索描述事情所涉及的人物、地點(diǎn)、事件經(jīng)過(guò)、結(jié)局等相關(guān)內(nèi)容。 以敘事為主的記敘文，側(cè)重以時(shí)間為

2、線索描述事情所 命題作文是依據(jù)所給題目，確定中心,選擇材料，寫(xiě)出符合題意，內(nèi)容表達(dá)具體、充分的文章。寫(xiě)命題作文通常要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)審準(zhǔn)題目：文章的中心要對(duì)題目的分析來(lái)確定，一定要弄清主題的內(nèi)涵，確立與文章聯(lián)系的主題思想,表達(dá)不能游離于主題,否則即使內(nèi)容再精彩，也是“跑題”作文，得分將會(huì)大打折扣，因此，寫(xiě)命題作文最重要的是先審清題目，確立要表現(xiàn)的中心。命題作文型的寫(xiě)作 命題作文是依據(jù)所給題目，確定中心,選擇材料，寫(xiě)(2)構(gòu)思結(jié)構(gòu)：就是開(kāi)放思路，啟動(dòng)聯(lián)想，構(gòu)想表現(xiàn)形式，勾勒出文章的結(jié)構(gòu)層次，依次寫(xiě)出引言段,主題句，發(fā)展段和結(jié)尾句，努力使之新穎，別致。(3)選擇材料：這一點(diǎn)很重要，一定要圍繞想

3、表現(xiàn)的中心去選擇組織材料，所選的材料必須典型精要。命題作文型的寫(xiě)作(2)構(gòu)思結(jié)構(gòu)：就是開(kāi)放思路，啟動(dòng)聯(lián)想，構(gòu)想表現(xiàn)形式，勾勒出(4)表達(dá)：就是用最確切明了的語(yǔ)言貫穿材料，表達(dá)自己的思想，力爭(zhēng)用符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法規(guī)則。英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣，最順暢自然的詞、句、段去表達(dá)中心思想，與表現(xiàn)中心無(wú)關(guān)的話即使再生動(dòng)形象也不要去寫(xiě)。命題作文型的寫(xiě)作(4)表達(dá)：就是用最確切明了的語(yǔ)言貫穿材料，表達(dá)自己的思想，1Unit topic languages（單元話題語(yǔ)言） 以連線、標(biāo)序號(hào)等形式列舉本單元與本話題寫(xiě)作相關(guān)的詞塊、句子。 名詞/動(dòng)名詞詞塊: the fun park the next day another two

4、hoursLanguage box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）1Unit topic languages（單元話題語(yǔ)言）動(dòng)詞詞塊：go to the mountains, go to summer camp, go somewhere interesting, ride bicycles, buy something special, learn something important,arrive inLanguage box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）動(dòng)詞詞塊：Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）介詞詞塊：in the countrysideafter three hoursalong the wayLanguag

5、e box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）介詞詞塊：Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）名詞/動(dòng)名詞詞塊: （ ）游樂(lè)場(chǎng)， （ ）再多兩個(gè)小時(shí)（ ）第二天Quiz: Read aloud the chunks above and try to match the meaning by numbering.名詞/動(dòng)名詞詞塊: Quiz: Read aloud the（ ）爬山（ ）參加夏令營(yíng)，（ ）學(xué)到一些重要的東西 （ ）到達(dá)（ ）去某個(gè)有趣的地方，（ ）買些特別的東西（ ）騎自行車 動(dòng)詞詞塊：（ ）爬山 動(dòng)詞詞塊：（ ）沿途（ ）三個(gè)小時(shí)以后（ ）在鄉(xiāng)下介詞詞塊（ ）沿途介詞詞塊 We got to/arr

6、ived in . We decided to . I went somewhere interesting/quiet/relaxing . Because (of); so .that . My father didnt bring enough money to .（2）Patterns（句型） We got to/arrived in .（2）Pa I wonder . It seemed to be . I like/dislike . There were too many/ much . I found it enjoyable .（2）Patterns（句型） I wonder

7、 .（2）Patterns（句型）2. Extensive languages（拓展性語(yǔ)言）Famous saying，proverbs, aphorisms and Classical sample sentences（名言、諺語(yǔ)、警句與經(jīng)典例句）2. Extensive languages（拓展性語(yǔ)言）F(1)Travel broadens the mind. 旅游開(kāi)闊眼界。(2)Read ten thousand books,travel ten thousand miles. 讀萬(wàn)卷書(shū)，行萬(wàn)里路。(3)Life can be likened to a journey with an u

8、nknown destination. 生命可以被比作一次不知目的地的旅行。 (1)Travel broadens the mind. 旅(4)The world is a book and those who do not travel only read one page.世界就像一本書(shū)，那些從不旅行的人只讀其中一頁(yè)。(5) East or west, home is best. 金窩銀窩不如自己的草窩。(4)The world is a book and thoWhile writingWhile writing 假設(shè)暑假期間，你和你的家人外出旅行，請(qǐng)以旅行日記的形式，向大家介紹你的旅行

9、經(jīng)歷。要求：1. 內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)句連貫，語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確； 2. 詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右。寫(xiě)作任務(wù) 假設(shè)暑假期間，你和你的家人外出旅行，請(qǐng)以旅行日記1. 審題想一想，填一填。審題體裁：_人稱：_時(shí)態(tài)：_第一人稱 一般過(guò)去時(shí)記敘文1. 審題想一想，填一填。審題第一人稱 一般過(guò)去時(shí)記敘文(1) Where did you go for vacation? And how did you go there?(2)What was the weather like there?(3)What did you do there?(4) How did you feel about the vacation? 2. 內(nèi)容要

10、點(diǎn)列一列，回答下列問(wèn)題。(1) Where did you go for vacat 3. 寫(xiě)一寫(xiě): 寫(xiě)初稿Writing Time 3. 寫(xiě)一寫(xiě): 寫(xiě)初稿Writing Time4. 查一查請(qǐng)依據(jù)下表，檢查、修改自己的文章。4. 查一查請(qǐng)依據(jù)下表，檢查、修改自己的文章。請(qǐng)交換習(xí)作互相欣賞，用紅筆劃出對(duì)方的亮點(diǎn),并對(duì) 不足的地方進(jìn)行適當(dāng)修改。你能給同學(xué)什么建議，使得對(duì)方的習(xí)作更好呢？根據(jù)worksheet上的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，給同伴的習(xí)作打分。 5. 同伴互賞我欣賞，我快樂(lè)！請(qǐng)交換習(xí)作互相欣賞，用紅筆劃出對(duì)方的亮點(diǎn),并對(duì) 不足的地方修改習(xí)作時(shí)可使用這些符號(hào)：優(yōu)美句子； 漏詞；錯(cuò)處：； 刪除；語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤

11、G ； 人稱錯(cuò)誤 P；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤 T； 拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤Sp 請(qǐng)和同伴交換習(xí)作，依據(jù)以上提示和下列評(píng)價(jià)表，相互欣賞與修改習(xí)作，然后給對(duì)方的習(xí)作打分。修改習(xí)作時(shí)可使用這些符號(hào)：請(qǐng)和同伴交換習(xí)作，依據(jù)以上提示和下評(píng)分表評(píng)分表Show TimeShow TimeMonday, July 20thI had a nice day in Zhanjiang today. I went to a local restaurant for breakfast as soon as I got here by train. In the afternoon I visited Jinsha Bay Beach, one

12、 of the most famous scenic spots in Zhanjiang. I enjoyed the view there, but the weather was so hot that I didnt spend much time by the sea. Then I took a taxi to Dongfeng Market to have seafood. It was great, especially the crabs and shrimps. They were big, fresh but not very expensive. I really en

13、joyed my first day here!文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清楚，文章使用了開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山式的開(kāi)頭，并給出了關(guān)鍵詞“nice”。而文章的主體部分也緊密地圍繞nice一詞對(duì)旅行過(guò)程進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)。使用“as soon as, so.that., but, especially”等連接詞使文章銜接連貫自然，同時(shí)又使用“one of., spend., ”等句式使文章語(yǔ)言豐富流暢，亮點(diǎn)突出。在結(jié)尾部分，作者使用了“enjoy”一詞與開(kāi)頭的“nice”相呼應(yīng)，起到首尾呼應(yīng)的作用。Monday, July 20th文章結(jié)構(gòu)完Monday, July 20thToday, I went to Hong Kong

14、 with my family. We arrived there at noon by plane. After that, we had a quick lunch at a local canteen because we planned to visit Disneyland in the afternoon. When we get to Disneyland, we saw so many people having fun there. Because of the good weather, we could enjoyed ourselves in the theme par

15、k. We had dinner in the restaurant of Micky Mouse and watched the fireworks at night.All in all, it was an unforgettable day for me! I really want to go there again some day.本文思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)明扼要。文章使用了開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山式的開(kāi)頭。通過(guò)時(shí)間順序，描述了作者在香港一天的行程。文章中使用了不少連接詞，如：after that, because, because of, when，all in all等，使行文流暢。同時(shí)，作者也使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和原因狀語(yǔ)從句，使文章句式多樣。最后作者使用了unforgettable一詞作為總結(jié)，并表達(dá)了希望再次到香港迪士尼游玩的愿望，起到了畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。Monday, July 20th本文思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)Summary How to write a travel diary. 2. Learn some of the writing skills.寫(xiě)查想列評(píng)Summary How to write a