2022-2023學年新教材高中英語Unit3GettingalongwithothersSectionⅣWriting人際關(guān)系學案牛津譯林版必修第一冊

1、PAGE PAGE 5Section Writing人際關(guān)系1寫作任務(wù)假定你是李華。你們班剛轉(zhuǎn)入的新同學李明一時無法融入新班級，感到很苦惱。請寫一封信表示你的關(guān)心，并且提出你的建議。注意：(1)詞數(shù)80左右；(2)可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_2寫作思路(1)一審：確定寫作體裁和主題 eq blc(avs4alco1(體裁：應(yīng)用文（寫信提建議）,主題：表示關(guān)心，提出建議) (2)二定：確定時態(tài)和人稱 eq blc(avs4alco1(時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主,人稱：第一人稱（I）和第二人稱（you）) (3)三明確：明確寫作要點得知李明的苦惱表示關(guān)心提出建議(4)結(jié)合要點分三個段落3素材整理(

2、1)關(guān)鍵詞語李明苦惱(have difficulty doing，suffer, at a loss)；表示關(guān)心(be concerned，cheer sb. up，keep ones company)；提出建議(in my opinion, take action, feel stressed，get along well with, go over the lessons together, take part in, count on)。(2)完成句子看到你苦于融入新班級，我非常難過。I am sad to see that _ fitting in the new class.我曾經(jīng)也

3、不知道怎么跟陌生人交朋友。I was once at a loss _ with strangers.作為你的同班同學，我非常關(guān)心你，想提出幾點建議來幫你。As your classmate, I _ about you and willing _ some suggestions to help you.在我看來，你不必感到有壓力。_，you neednt _不是所有人都能很容易交到朋友。Not all people _你可以和他們一起復習功課，在他們遇到難題的時候提供幫助。You can _ with them and offer to help when they_為了多結(jié)交朋友，你還可

4、以多參加班級活動。_， you can also take part in more class activities.希望我的建議對你能有用。I hope you find my suggestions _4滿分作文(連句成篇)請將以上句子連成一篇語言流暢、用詞準確、邏輯嚴密的短文。參考范文：Dear Li Ming，I am Li Hua. I am sad to see that you have difficulty fitting in the new class. I can understand your suffering because I was once at a los

5、s how to make friends with strangers. As your classmate, I am concerned about you and willing to offer some suggestions to help you.First, you neednt feel stressed. Not all people can make friends easily. Second, you can go over lessons together with our classmates and offer to help when they are fa

6、ced with problems. Last, to make more friends, you can also take part in more class activities.I hope you find my suggestions beneficial to you and adapt to the new life as soon as possible. Yours，Li Hua綜合點評范文要點齊全，語言地道，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。作者在其中使用了地道的短語和句式來達到寫作目的，例如：“have difficulty; at a loss how to make frie

7、nds with strangers；I am concerned about you; offer some suggestions; when they are faced with problems；to make more friends; beneficial to you”。要點過渡時使用正確的過渡詞，例如第二段中的“first，second，last”簡潔串聯(lián)三個建議。整篇文章以關(guān)心開頭，以祝福結(jié)尾，符合作者身份，完成了寫作要求。5佳作背誦(1)佳作一假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫你學習英語的Alex即將回自己的國家。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：表示感謝；回顧Alex對你的幫助；臨別祝愿。

8、注意：詞數(shù)80左右；可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢。_(2)佳作二一份調(diào)查顯示，當今中學生最關(guān)心的一個問題就是人際關(guān)系的處理。良好的人際關(guān)系能使他們的生活更愉快，精力更充沛，身體更健康。但是，對于中學生來說，處理好人際關(guān)系并不是一件容易的事，僅有主觀熱情是不夠的，還要講求方法。請你結(jié)合下列要點寫一篇主題為“How to Improve Interpersonal Relationship”的英文演講稿。尊重他人；消除自私心理；主動交往，消除自卑心理；尊重他人權(quán)利，虛心接受他人的忠告和建議；樂于助人。注意：對所給要點不要簡單翻譯，可以適當發(fā)揮； 詞數(shù)80左右； 參考詞匯：自卑inferiority

9、。_Section Writing人際關(guān)系3you have difficultyhow to make friendsam concernedto offerIn my opinionfeel stressedcan make friends easilygo over lessons togetherare faced with problemsTo make more friendsbeneficial to you5(1)參考范文：Dear Alex，I am so sad to know that you are going to return to your country bef

10、ore long. We get along well during your stay in China and you have offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English. While staying in China, you always spend your time helping me improve my oral English. It is you who share rich knowledge of English

11、and English culture. Never will I forget you and your kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible.Yours，Li Hua(2)參考范文：Good morning, everyone !The topic of my speech today is “How to Improve Interpersonal Relationship”. To improve interpersonal relationship , a student should respect others and be generous. In a way a selfish person cannot make true friends. It is better to be active and get rid of the sense of inferiority. It is wise of you to respect others and follow their advice