2022-2023學(xué)年新教材高中英語Unit4LookinggoodfeelinggoodSectionⅣWriting真正的美課件牛津譯林版必修第一冊

1、Section Writing真正的美1寫作任務(wù)假定你是李華，想給某英文雜志投稿，發(fā)表一篇關(guān)于什么是真正的美的文章。下面是被詢問學(xué)生的一些看法，要點如下：(1)有的學(xué)生認(rèn)為外在美很重要；(2)有的學(xué)生認(rèn)為內(nèi)在美很重要；(3)你的觀點。注意：可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Editor，Concerning beauty, we made a survey. Different students have different opinions._2寫作思路(1)一審：確定寫作體裁和主題體裁：議論文主題：真正的美(2)二定：確定時態(tài)和人稱時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主人

2、稱：第一人稱和第三人稱為主(3)三明確：明確寫作要點內(nèi)容要求：a開篇點明主題(談?wù)摰脑掝})；b根據(jù)提示的要點寫出對待這一問題不同的人的不同觀點；c發(fā)表自己的看法，提出解決問題的辦法。(4)四分段：結(jié)合要點分為三個段落。3素材整理(1)關(guān)鍵詞語外貌physical appearance對有影響 have an influence/effect on美的標(biāo)準(zhǔn) standards of beauty符合 live up to深信 hold the firm belief that .樹立信心 build your confidence相信 be convinced that.就我而言 as far

3、as I am concerned(2)重要句型有些學(xué)生相信外貌對一個人的生活有很大影響。Some students hold the firm belief that _ _a persons life.(同位語從句)外貌對每個人都有吸引力，尤其是異性。Physical beauty is attractive to everybody, _他們堅信，外貌美沒有固定標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，有些標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對我們來說根本不可能達(dá)到。They are firmly convinced that there is _ and some of the standards are simply _(賓語從句) physical

4、 appearance has a big influence onparticularly to the opposite sexno fixed standards of physical beautyimpossible for us to live up to更重要的是內(nèi)在美，因為它是我們的內(nèi)在，對社會來說是非常有意義的。It is _ because it is something beneath us and can be very meaningful to the society.(強調(diào)句)我認(rèn)為內(nèi)在美與外在美是并存的。_， physical beauty coexists w

5、ith inner beauty.the inner beauty that is more importantAs far as I am concerned4滿分作文(連句成篇)請將以上句子連成一篇語言流暢、用詞準(zhǔn)確、邏輯嚴(yán)密的短文。參考范文：Dear Editor，Concerning beauty, we made a survey. Different students have different opinions. Some students hold the firm belief that physical appearance has a big influence on

6、a persons life. Physical beauty is attractive to everybody, particularly to the opposite sex. Besides, charming faces can help us to win more chances to realize our dreams.However, other students are firmly convinced that there is no fixed standards of physical beauty and some of the standards are s

7、imply impossible for us to live up to. It is the inner beauty that is more important because it is something beneath us and can be very meaningful to the society.As far as I am concerned, physical beauty coexists with inner beauty. Physical beauty is by birth, but inner beauty is cultivated after bi

8、rth. It was confirmed by a famous Russian writer in words much like this “A person is not lovely for being beautiful but beautiful for being lovely.”綜合點評：(1)緊扣內(nèi)容要點，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，詳略得當(dāng)，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展與發(fā)揮；(2)人稱、時態(tài)運用恰當(dāng)；(3)關(guān)聯(lián)詞運用恰當(dāng)，如besides, however, as far as I am concerned等，使寫作銜接自然；(4)復(fù)雜句表達(dá)精準(zhǔn)，如同位語從句、賓語從句，強調(diào)句等。復(fù)雜多變、錯落有致

9、的句式給人一種美感。5佳作背誦(1)佳作一假定你是某健康欄目的主持人Mr. Helper，人們經(jīng)常寫信詢問健康之道，請你寫一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并針對“如何保持健康”給出自己的建議。信的內(nèi)容需包含以下信息：健康的重要性；給出保持健康的方法，如：避免高糖、高脂的食物，摒棄不良習(xí)慣，多鍛煉等。注意：詞數(shù)80左右。Dear readers，_Yours sincerely，Mr. Helper參考范文：Dear readers，It goes without saying that without health no pleasure can be tasted by a man. Healt

10、h is far more important than anything else. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.How can we keep healthy? Here are some suggestions for you to follow.To begin with, we should develop good habits. We should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat. Whats mo

11、re, we have to get rid of those habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking. Last but not least, wed better exercise every day to make our bodies strong. Proper diet and enough exercise do good to our health.If we follow the advice given above, we will lead a healthy life. Yours sinc

12、erely， Mr. Helper(2)佳作二假定你是學(xué)生會主席，你所在的校園的一些學(xué)生有不良的飲食習(xí)慣，請你在升旗儀式上發(fā)表演講，號召同學(xué)們養(yǎng)成健康的飲食習(xí)慣。 內(nèi)容包括： 簡述健康飲食習(xí)慣的意義； 不良飲食習(xí)慣：不吃早餐，吃零食，挑食和暴飲暴食等； 提出你的健康飲食習(xí)慣的建議。注意：詞數(shù)80左右； 內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 書寫須清晰、工整。_參考范文：Dear students，As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, its very important for us to form healthy eati

13、ng habits.However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.From my point o

14、f view, we should have various healthy diets in order to keep fit, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, wed better have meals regularly, and we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way ca

15、n we have enough energy to study better.Thats all. Thank you!(3)佳作三 假定你是李華，請你針對目前中學(xué)生越來越關(guān)注自己的外表，以及因缺乏知識，在表達(dá)自己思想與情感方面存在困難這些情況，給校長寫一封信，希望他就以下問題給學(xué)生作一次演講： 怎樣才算美； 如何處理同學(xué)之間的爭執(zhí)； 注意：詞數(shù)80左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Sir or Madam，_Yours truly，Li Hua參考范文：Dear Sir or Madam，I am writing to ask you to give us a talk ab

16、out what the real beauty is and what we students should be in school.As you know, there is an increasing tendency that we pay more and more attention to our appearance. However, for lack of knowledge, we have difficulty conveying our feelings and thoughts. Meanwhile, some students dont know how to d

17、eal with the quarrels with their classmates. Even some boys wear long hair while some girls wear strange clothes. To be honest, it is more and more important to help us students have a right attitude towards beauty.And please recommend some books about it to us to read in our spare time so that we c

18、an improve greatly.Best wishes!Yours truly，Li Hua(4)佳作四 假定你是李華，減肥以后，常常感到身體疲倦、虛弱，不知如何是好，想寫一封電子郵件向健康專家求教。請根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示寫一封郵件。詞數(shù)80左右。 減肥原因：覺得自己太胖，體重不斷增加，擔(dān)心身材不好，被同學(xué)嘲笑。 減肥過程：去健身房兩三次就放棄了，感覺太累也沒時間； 節(jié)食堅持了大約一個星期，經(jīng)常餓得不能繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)；服用減肥藥 一開始有效果，體重迅速下降，但減肥藥產(chǎn)生了副作用。_參考范文：Dear Health Expert，I have got a problem and I need to

19、 ask for your help. I feel I am too fat. Whats worse, I am putting on weight all the time. I am very worried about my figure. I even fear that some of my classmates laugh at me.At one time, I tried to work out in a gym two or three times, but I finally gave up just because I had no time for it and a

20、lways felt very tired after doing exercise. Once I tried going on a diet. However, after about a week, I could not go on it because I felt so hungry that I was not able to continue my study. Then I bought and took weight-loss pills in secret. Shortly after, they did work and I was losing weight quic

21、kly. But soon I felt tired and weak sometimes.I know those pills usually have bad effects on our health. Thus, I dont know what I should do. Could you be kind enough to give me some good advice?Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua(5)佳作五最近的一項研究表明，大約50%的青少年有不吃早餐的習(xí)慣。請根據(jù)下面的提示用英語寫一篇短文。 原因：晚上學(xué)習(xí)到太晚，不吃早餐可以多睡一會兒；女孩子為保持苗條身材不吃早餐； 結(jié)果：上課打瞌睡，注意力下降；學(xué)業(yè)不理想； 吃早餐的好處：提供全天所需要能量的30%；有助于創(chuàng)造性思維的發(fā)展，做出更好的判斷。 注意：可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容使文章充實； 詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 A recent study shows that nearly 50 percent of the school kids do not have breakfast._參考范文：A recent study shows that nearly