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1、現(xiàn)在越來越多的人成為低頭族(People who cant help checking their phones all day are known as phubbers. Phubbing trends to involve not only the young people, but also the elderly.), 如何弓I 導(dǎo)低頭族抬頭?你們班舉行了以“拒為低頭族”為主題的班會。假設(shè)你是學(xué)生李華,請為班 會寫一篇100詞左右的發(fā)言稿。要點如下:.你周圍有低頭族嗎?他們成為“低頭族”的原因。.成為“低頭族”給學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的影響。.就如何“拒為低頭族”提一些建議。【優(yōu)秀總分值范文
2、】Nowadays, we can see many people are watching their mobile phones in subway, restaurants, elevators, roads and so on. There is no denying that people who like mobile phones are concerned about its attractive functions. Phubbers cant stop sending messages, surfing the Internet, listening to music an
3、d even taking photos by using the mobile phone. Moreover, some people have less time to relax themselves. They make use of the time when they are on the way to school or other places to play mobile games.However, phubbing disturbs not only our study but also our life. On the one hand, phubbers waste
4、 lots of time playing cell phone games and sending messages, particularly in class. Other people also complain they are disturbed when phones ring in classrooms. On the other hand, it can lead to health problems. For instance, using a mobile phone on the sofa can cause back and neck pain.As far as I
5、 am concerned, it is high time that we put aside the phone and raised our heads up. Do cherish everything around us and appreciate the scenery ahead of us.Whats more, we should do more exercises and take part in real-life activities. In a word, only when we use the phone reasonably, can we realize t
6、he happiness of life.最近,某科技公司推出一款新型5G手機(Smart Mobile Phone 9),請你為該款手機寫一篇 英語廣告,內(nèi)容包括:.手機的功能;.手機的特點;【詳解】第1步:根據(jù)提示可知,本篇為一篇短文;假定你是李華,你校英文周刊本周討論的話題是 高中生在學(xué)校該不該用智能手機”。請你寫篇短文,說明你的觀點。請從以下兩個觀點中選 擇一個:1.高中生應(yīng)該在學(xué)校使用智能手機;2.高中生不應(yīng)該在學(xué)校使用智能手機。第2步:根據(jù)寫作要求,確定關(guān)鍵詞(組),如:smartphones (智能手機),spend too much time on (花費了太多時間),outd
7、oor activities (戶夕卜活動),get addicted to (上癮),have a bad effect on (不利影響),play an important role in (扮演重要角色)等。第3步:根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第4步:連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰, 保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?!军c睛】范文內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式, 如 I think it is wrong for us students to use smartphone
8、s at school.運用 了 賓語從句。we may get addicted to the phone so that it has a bad effect on our study.運用 了 so that 弓| 導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句; It is widely known that smartphones play an important role in our daily life.運用了主語從句。 with the development of the Internet, we can obtain a wider knowledge more effectively.運用了 wi
9、th結(jié)構(gòu)。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式,顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外,文章思 路清晰、層次清楚,上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然,為文章增色添彩。.適用人群。注意:.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Smart life from Smart Mobile Phone 9【答 案】Smart life from Smart Mobile Phone 9Smart Mobile Phone 9 will make your life smarter in an all-round way!Besides the general functions as a handset, it al
10、so serves as a laptop, with which you can surf the Internet wherever you are by using the 5G. It is so intelligent that it is ideal for office workers who are always on the go.Due to its small size and being light in weight, it is very convenient to carry. What/s more, it is a high-quality product s
11、old at a reasonable price.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生為一款新型5G手機寫一篇英語廣告,介紹手機的功能、 特點和適用人群?!驹斀狻?詞匯積累手機: mobile phone玲handset擔(dān)任:work asfserve as完美的:perfect玲ideal 除了: in addition to= besides.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句:Due to its small size and being light in weight, it is very convenient to carry.拓展句:It is very convenien
12、t to carry because it has small size and is light in weight.【點睛】高分句型 1 Besides the general functions as a handset, it also serves as a laptop, with which you can surf the Internet wherever you are by using the 5G.(運用了 介詞+關(guān)系代詞”結(jié)構(gòu)非限 制性定語從句)高分句型 2 It is so intelligent that it is ideal for office worker
13、s who are always on the go.(運用 了結(jié)果狀語從句)隨著手機及其他電子設(shè)備的普及,低頭族到處可見,大街上,公交車上,以年輕人為 主,針對這一問題,請寫一篇建議書,呼吁人們盡量抬起頭來注意:1.行文連貫流暢;2.參考詞匯:低頭族:phubber 3.詞數(shù):80詞左右【答案】The mobile phone and other electric devices have been part of our life, bringing us much convenience. However; more and more phubbers, especially young
14、 people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around.Obviously, while people are riding on a bus, crossing the street, or lying on the bed, etc., phubbing can be harmful to their physical health, their eyes in particular. Therefore, I call on everyone to pay more attention to th
15、is and hold your heads up to enjoy your surroundings.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達是提綱類作文,要求寫一篇建議書。【詳解】第1步:根據(jù)提示可知,本文要求寫一篇建議書:隨著手機及其他電子設(shè)備的普及,低頭 族到處可見,大街上,公交車上,以年輕人為主,針對這一問題,請寫一篇建議書,呼 吁人們盡量抬起頭來,時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。第2步:根據(jù)寫作要求,確定關(guān)鍵詞(組),如;phubber (低頭族),electric devices (電 子設(shè)備),convenience (方便),especially (特別是),everywhere (到處),obv
16、iously(明顯地) 及harmful (有害的)等。第3步:根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第4步:連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰, 保持卷面的整潔美觀。本文內(nèi)容完整,層次清楚,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,表達準(zhǔn)確。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式,顯示 了很高的駕馭英語的能力。【點睛】范文語言地道,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級詞匯和句式,高級詞匯 有 be part of (成為的一局部),care about (關(guān)心),be harmful to (對有害),in particular (尤其),call on (號召
17、)以及pay more attention to (關(guān)注),而且還使用了非限定性定語從句However; more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around/, 時間狀語從句while people are riding on a bus, crossing the street, or lying on the bed, etc., phubbing can be harmful to their physical h
18、ealth, their eyes in particular., 非謂語動詞The mobile phone and other electric devices have been part of our life, bringing us much convenience.及Therefore, I call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold your heads up to enjoy your surroundings/, 全文沒有語法錯誤, 上 下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然流暢。學(xué)會反思、提升自己是中學(xué)生必備的素質(zhì)。信息時代,智能
19、手機的普及對中學(xué)生的自控力提 出了挑戰(zhàn)。請你寫一篇英語短文,內(nèi)容包括:.反思自己使用手機時的問題;.提出合理化的改進措施。注意:1 .詞數(shù)100左右;.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;.題目已給出。Learn to Use Mobile Phones Wisely【答案】Learn to Use Mobile Phones WiselyI have to admit that the mobile phone has greatly distracted my attention while I am studying. I tap, swipe and click too many time
20、s a day, sending texts, scrolling on social media and playing games. Upon reflection, I find it gives me nothing but eye ache, blank mind and even phone addiction.I should turn over a new leaf. Firstly, start my morning unplugged. I will place my phone in another room, spending quiet moments without
21、 it. Ill never pick it up only when I have to look up some task-related information. Secondly, focus on my real life. I intend to set aside enough time to accompany my parents and do sports. What I want is not a wipe-out of phone in my life, but a rational use of this advanced technology. I should m
22、ake the best of it instead of being controlled by it.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達是一篇開放性作文。要求考生針對如何正確地使用手機寫出自己的看法。【詳解】.詞匯積累查詢:look up 玲 refer to集中:focus on - concentrate on足夠的:enough 玲 sufficient止匕夕卜:secondly 玲 besides先進的:advanced - progressive.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句:I will place my phone in another room, spending quiet mo
23、ments without it.拓展句:I will place my phone in another room so that I will spend quiet moments without it.【點睛】【高分句型 1 ril never pick it up only when I have to look up some task-related information.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)【高分句型 2 What I want is not a wipe-out of phone in my life, but a rational use of this adv
24、anced technology, (what 引導(dǎo)的主語從句)如今越來越多的中學(xué)生擁有了自己的智能手機。然而,無論是在課堂還是在休閑時間,都會 見到一些學(xué)生玩手機。請根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文,談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生使用智 能手機的利與弊,并提出你自己的看法。要求:1.內(nèi)容需包括使用智能手機的利與弊;.在文章的最后提出你自己的看法。.題目自擬【答案】Nowadays smartphones play an important role in our lives. A number of middle school students have owned them. No matter wh
25、ere we are, we can see students playing with their smartphones.Smartphones are really good for students. They make students keep in touch with their friends or family conveniently. And they help students get information more easily. However; everything has two sides. When students spend too much tim
26、e on smartphones, they dont have time to communicate face to face with their friends or family. Smartphones may take their attention away from their studies. More seriously, using smartphones too much may cause health problems.In my opinion, students should use smartphones wisely. And its necessary
27、for them to take partin more outdoor activities.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】這是一篇議論文。要求考生談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生使用智能手機的利弊,并發(fā)表自己的看法?!驹斀狻?詞匯積累在 中起重要作用:play an important role in玲play an important part in獲得:gain玲get造成:lead to-cause在我看來:as far as I am concerned玲in my opinion.句型拓展同義句原句:They make students keep in touch with their friends or fam
28、ily conveniently.拓展句:They make it convenient for students to keep in touch with their friends or family.【點睛】高分句型 1 No matter where we are, we can see students playing with their smartphones.(運 用了 no matter where引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句)高分句型 2When students spend too much time onsmartphones, they don/t have time to c
29、ommunicate face to face with their friends or family.(運用 了 when 弓I 導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)你校英文報“觀點”欄目征稿,請你以青少年過度使用手機”為話題寫一篇稿件投稿,內(nèi)容包 括:.問題產(chǎn)生的原因和后果;.你的建議(至少2點)。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)為80左右;.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貨。Smartphone addiction among teenagers【答案】Smartphone addiction among teenagersWith the development of social network applicatio
30、ns, we teenagers have become increasingly addicted to smartphones, which has given rise to conflicts between teenagers and their parents.My suggestions on teenagers overuse of phones are as follows. To start with, it is necessary that our parents set rules on how to use our phones appropriately. Onc
31、e reached, the agreement has to be strictly executed. Besides, participating in more activities will also help reduce our reliance on phones.No matter what approach we use, only by determination and self-discipline can we solve this problem.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達是征文。校英文報“觀點”欄目征稿,請考生以“青少年過度使用手機”為話題寫 一篇稿件投稿。【
32、詳解】詞匯積累沉溺于:become addicted to玲 bury oneself in恰當(dāng)?shù)兀篴ppropriately玲 properly方法:approach玲 method 處理:solve- deal with2 .句式拓展 同義句轉(zhuǎn)換 原句:Besides, participating in more activities will also help reduce our reliance on phones.拓展句: What more, getting involved in more activities will be of great help to reduce
33、our reliance on phones.【點睛】高分句型 1 With the development of social network applications, we teenagers have become increasingly addicted to smartphones, which has given rise to conflicts between teenagers and their parents.(運用了 which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)高分句型 2 No matter what approach we use, only by determinati
34、on and self-discipline can we solve this problem.(運用了 no matter what引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句和倒裝句)假定你是李華,你校英文版的官方網(wǎng)站上開辟了一個專欄:Opinion。本期話題是如何解決因 手機依賴(phone addiction)產(chǎn)生的親子矛盾問題。請你圍繞標(biāo)題用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談 談自己的一些看法或做法,內(nèi)容包括:.陳述問題.解決問題的方法注意:.詞數(shù)80左右;.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。My opinion on smartphone addiction among teenagers【答 案】My opinion
35、on smartphone addiction among teenagersWith the development of apps, young people have become more dependent on smartphones. The overuse of phones is likely to cause problems between teenagers and their parents. Here is my opinion on how to deal with such conflicts caused by phone addiction.First of
36、 all, it is important and necessary for us to talk with our parents and set rules on how to use our phones. Once reached, the agreement has to be strictly executed. Only in this way can we prevent any unpleasantness from happening. Being more active and participating in more activities will also hel
37、p reduce our reliance on phones. Last but not least, we can resort to professionals for an effective approach to free us from our phone dependence, if necessary.No matter what approach we use, we have to realize that it is our parents who we should always trust and depend on in life.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于開放性作文。要求考生英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勛约喝绾谓鉀Q因手機依 賴(phone addiction)產(chǎn)生的親子矛盾問題?!驹斀狻? .詞匯積累導(dǎo)致:cause 玲lead to處理:deal with - handle 重要的:important fvital 2 .句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句:Being more active and participating in more activities will also help reduce our reliance on phones.拓展句: W
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