外研-高中英語(yǔ)必修4Module-2writing(共26張)課件

Module2TrafficJamWriting外研版必修四Module2TrafficJam外研版必修四Four(tooReadthepassageon1.Howmanyproblemtalkabout?BeijingTrafficFour(tooReadthepassageon

Whatisatrafficjam?Itmeanslotsoftraffictravelinginthestreetatthesametime.Whatisatrafficjam?ItmToknowsomethingabouttrafficjamsTowriteapassageabouttrafficproblemsindividuallyToknowsomethingabouttraffBrainstormideasaboutthetrafficPre-writingBrainstormideasaboutthet2.Whatarethecausesoftheproblems?3.Howmanysolutionsdoesthewriterfind?Readthepassageonpage18andanswerthequestions.1.Howmanyproblemsdoesthewritertalkabout?2.WhatarethecausesoftheProblemscausessolutions

Problemscauseswhile-writingSomeadvicehowtowriteapassageaboutthetrafficjamLearnsomevocaulary,phrasesandsentencepatterns

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Practice最近，你班同學(xué)圍繞“Howtosolvetheproblemofheavytraffic”這一話題進(jìn)行了激烈的討論，請(qǐng)將討論結(jié)果寫(xiě)成一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要點(diǎn)如下：交通擁堵的原因：人多、車(chē)多、人們遵守交通規(guī)則的意識(shí)淡薄。

第一步：審題構(gòu)思很關(guān)鍵一、審題1．確定體裁：此類(lèi)文體為議論文；2．確定人稱(chēng)：主要人稱(chēng)應(yīng)為第三人稱(chēng)；3．確定時(shí)態(tài)：主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。二、構(gòu)思第一段：簡(jiǎn)要提出目前多數(shù)城市出現(xiàn)交通擁擠這一現(xiàn)象，并展開(kāi)討論。第二段：分析出現(xiàn)交通擁堵的原因。第三段：針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象提出合理化建議。第一步：審題構(gòu)思很關(guān)鍵第二步：核心詞匯和句型1．haveadebateabout就……展開(kāi)討論2．trafficjam交通阻塞3．tostartwith首先4．leadto導(dǎo)致5．lastbutnotleast最后同樣重要的是6．respect/obeytrafficrules遵守交通規(guī)則7．dealwith處理，對(duì)付8．insiston堅(jiān)持9．pedestrian

行人；步行者第二步：核心詞匯和句型sentence

patterns1．Thereasonwhy…isthat…2．Sbholdtheopinionthat…3.Themostimportantreasonisthat…4.Onlywhen…cansb/sth…1.what'smore/besides/moreover/inaddition2.tobeginwith/firstofall...atlast...3.lastbutnotleast最后但同樣重要的是...4.inaword/allinall...TransitionalWordssentencepatternsTransitional第三步：由詞擴(kuò)句雛形現(xiàn)1.首先，人多導(dǎo)致了交通擁堵。(簡(jiǎn)單句)

Tostartwith,avastpopulationleadstoheavytraffic.2.最重要的原因是一些人沒(méi)有意識(shí)到遵守交通規(guī)則的重要性。(that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句)

Themostimportantreasonisthatsomepeopledon'trealizetheimportanceofrespectingtrafficrules.第三步：由詞擴(kuò)句雛形現(xiàn)3.為了解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題，一些學(xué)生建議建設(shè)更多寬闊的道路。(不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)；suggest)

Todealwiththisproblem,somestudentssuggestthatwe(should)buildmorewideroads.4.有人認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該多步行或多騎自行車(chē)。(賓語(yǔ)從句)Someoneelsethinksweshouldwalkandridethebikemore.3.為了解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題，一些學(xué)生建議建設(shè)更多寬闊的道路。(不5.減少私家車(chē)的使用。(privatecars)

Weshoulddriveprivatecarsless.6.行人應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。(obey)

Pedestriansshouldobeytrafficrules.7.行人在紅燈時(shí)不要亂穿馬路。(ataredlight)

Pedestriansshouldn'tcrosstheroadataredlight.5.減少私家車(chē)的使用。(privatecars)第四步：句式升級(jí)造亮點(diǎn)1.用insteadof合并句4和句5

Someoneelsethinksweshouldwalkorridethebikemoreinsteadofdrivingprivatecars.2.用and并列句合并句6和句7Pedestriansshouldobeytrafficrulesandnotcrosstheroadataredlight.第五步：過(guò)渡銜接聯(lián)成篇第四步：句式升級(jí)造亮點(diǎn)HowtosolvetheproblemofheavytrafficAlmosteverycityhasabigtrafficproblem.Today,ourclasshaveadebateabouthowtosolveit.Tostartwith,avastpopulationleadstoheavytraffic.Thereasonwhytrafficjamhappensfrequentlyisthatsomepeopledon'trealizetheimportanceofrespectingtrafficrules.Todealwiththisproblem,somestudentssuggestthatwe(should)buildmorewideroads.___________________________________________________________________Howtosolvetheproblemofhe

andmorebuslanesshouldbeopened.Besides,someoneelseholdstheopinionthatwehadbetterwalkorridethebikemoreinsteadofdrivingprivatecars.Lastbutnotleast,Pedestriansshouldobeytrafficrulesandnotcrosstheroadataredlight.

Inaword,onlywheneveryonestartsfromhimselfcanthetrafficproblemsbesolved.andmorebuslanesshouldbeRelaxationRoleplayRelaxationR

假設(shè)你是北京世園會(huì)的一名志愿者，正在接受記者采訪，就五一小長(zhǎng)假期間市民去世園會(huì)游覽的交通出行給一些適當(dāng)?shù)慕ㄗh。比如盡量少開(kāi)私家車(chē)，多乘坐公共交通工具；避開(kāi)出行的高峰期；遵守交通規(guī)則，綠色出行You(Y)Reporter(R)外研-高中英語(yǔ)必修4Module-2writing(共26張)課件AnexampleR:Hello.Y:hello.R:YouknowtheMayDayholidayiscoming,duringthisperiodthecitizensarelikelytotraveltotheBeijingExpo,whichmaycausetrafficjams,couldyoupleaseoffersomeadvice?Y：Ok.Y:SincetheExpoopening,therehavebeensomanytouristsaroundtheworldcominghereAnexamplemanytouristsaroundtheworldcominghere,Whichwillbeabigchallengefortransportation.I’d

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suggestions：Firstofall,weshouddriveprivatecarslessandtakemorepubictransports,suchasundergrounds,travelbuses,bikesandsoon.Second,avoidtravelingattherushhour.Lastbutnotleast,respectingtrafficrulesisveryimportant.manytouristsaroundtheworldR:Thankyousomuch.Let’shaveagreentravelandenjoyourtrip.Bye.Y:Bye.R:Thankyousomuch.Let’shaSharingandappreciatingSafetransportationisthekey.安全出行是關(guān)鍵。Civilizedtravelbringsoutourquality.文明出行顯素質(zhì)。Greentravelisworthpraising.綠色出行需點(diǎn)贊。Beautyliesinthes