運(yùn)用五種高級(jí)句型及結(jié)構(gòu)對寫作進(jìn)行潤色

運(yùn)用五種高級(jí)句型及結(jié)構(gòu)對寫作進(jìn)行潤色Ⅰ.常見的不足1漢語式英語2無過渡語3句式單一,平鋪直敘Ⅱ.高考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1.覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；2.應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；3.在使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或高級(jí)詞匯時(shí)允許有些許錯(cuò)誤4.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊Ⅲ.如何增強(qiáng)書面表達(dá)效果，為高考作文增分

1.使用較高級(jí)的詞匯2.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞3.使用較豐富的句式

學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)：1.學(xué)生能判斷長句中所使用的語法現(xiàn)象2.學(xué)生能運(yùn)用A.It’sadj.forsbtodosth句型，B.notonly…butalso…表并列結(jié)構(gòu)C.倒裝句，D.強(qiáng)調(diào)句E.定語從句等句型進(jìn)行句子的改寫。3.學(xué)生能運(yùn)用上述句型結(jié)構(gòu)對篇章的簡單句，零散句進(jìn)行整合潤色，為高考作文增分。Step1.讀句子，判斷句式1.It’simportantforusstudentstoraisetheawarenessofsaving.It’sadj.forsbtodosth2.It’sthescienceandtechnologythatdrivesoursocietytobeabetterone.強(qiáng)調(diào)句3.Agoodfriendwillnotonlyshareyourjoybutalsoyoursorrow.notonly…butalso…5.Manystudentsareaddictedtoplayingcomputergames,whichdoesharmtotheireyesight.定語從句4.Irecallanunforgettableexperiencethathaseverhappenedtome.定語從句7.Onlybystoppingthefactoriesfrompouringtheharmfulwastecanweprotectourenvironment.倒裝句8.Frommyperspective,nevercanweoverlookthegreatbenefitofbeingthrifty

.倒裝句Step2.

GroupDiscussion按要求改寫句子Rules:1.每小組必須在5分鐘內(nèi)完成討論2.最快討論完的小組，派代表馬上到黑板把句子抄下來，先到的小組可優(yōu)先選擇自己要做的題號(hào)3.句型結(jié)構(gòu)正確的，每個(gè)句子得2個(gè)“贊”4.對其他組答案進(jìn)行修改并正確的得3個(gè)“贊”1.Abalanceddietisbeneficialforus.Weshouldkeepabalanceddiet.()It’sbeneficialforustokeepabalanceddiet.Version1.It’sadj.forsbtodosth2.MillionsofteenagersareattractedbyDr.DuMinjun.TheystarttobeconcernedabouttheKoreanculture.Version1.定語從句MillionsofteenagerswhoareattractedbyDr.DuMinjunstarttobeconcernedabouttheKoreanculture.3.Musichelpsstudentsreleasestress.Version1.強(qiáng)調(diào)句It’smusicthathelpsstudentsreleasestress.4.Groupactivityhelpsstudentsgetalongwithotherclassmates.Italsoencouragesstudentstoexpressthemselves.Version1.notonly…butalso…Groupactivitynotonlyhelpsstudentsgetalongwithotherclassmatesbutalsoencouragesstudentstoexpressthemselves.5.Wecanformagoodstudyhabitonlybymakingupourmindandinsistingoniteveryday.Version1.倒裝句Onlybymakingupourmindandinsistingoniteveryday,canweformagoodstudyhabit.6.Beforeweleavetheclassroom,weshouldturnoffthelights.Thisisnecessary.Version1.It’sadj.forsbtodosth和非謂語It’snecessaryforustoturnoffthelightsbeforeleavingtheclassroom.Beforeleavingtheclassroom,It’snecessaryforustoturnoffthelights.7.Thisisagreatexperience.IthelpstoimproveourEnglish.Itisalsoagoodwaytolearnaboutthecultureofforeigncountries.Version1.定語從句,notonly…butalso…ThisisagreatexperiencewhichnotonlyhelpstoimproveourEnglishbutisalsoagoodwaytolearnaboutthecultureofforeigncountries.8.Thewhiteteahasabeautifulappearancelikesilverneedlesandithasasweettaste.Version1:notonly…butalso…,倒裝句Notonlydoesthewhiteteahaveabeautifulappearancelikesilverneedles,

butalsoithasasweettaste.Conclusion

兩個(gè)句子出現(xiàn)重復(fù)的詞語→

兩個(gè)分句存在并列關(guān)系→

需要強(qiáng)調(diào)突出某一內(nèi)容→only或never等在句首→

表示“某人做某事怎樣”→定語從句notonly…butalso強(qiáng)調(diào)句倒裝句It’sadj.forsbtodosthStep4.請對篇章進(jìn)行潤色改寫（請用上述句型結(jié)構(gòu)，每兩個(gè)數(shù)字之間為一個(gè)句子Rules請各小組利用3分鐘進(jìn)行討論討論完成后各組員獨(dú)立完成改寫

最快寫完的小組派代表上來分享答案，

每一個(gè)正確的句型結(jié)構(gòu)得2個(gè)“贊”。①Asweknow,studentsbenefitfromtakingpartinphysicalactivity,becausewestudentscankeepfit.Andwecanmakelotsoffriends.②What’smore,thephysicalactivityhelpsusreleasethestress.Thestressiscausedbytheuniversityentranceexamination.③Moreover,studentsspendhourssittingintheclassroom.Thisisnotgood.④Physicalactivitykeepsourmindfresh.⑤Allinall,wecanneverleadahealthierlifeorstudybetterwithoutdoingphysicalexercise⑥.Possibleanswer

Asweknow,studentsbenefitfromtakingpartinphysicalactivity,becausewestudentscannotonlykeepfitbutalsomakelotsoffriends.What’smore,thephysicalactivityhelpsusreleasethestresswhichiscausedbytheuniversityentranceexamination.Moreover,i