9.6雅思大作文相關(guān)范文附詞句解析

Withmajorcitiescontinuegrowing，arethereanyproblemstoyoungpeople?HowtosolvetheseInmanycountries,moreandmoreyoungpeopleareleavingschoolsandunabletofindjobsaftergraduation.Whatproblemsdoyouthinkyouthunemploymentwillcausetotheindividualandthesociety?Andmakesomesuggestions.許多的學(xué)生離開(kāi)學(xué)校找不到工作，失業(yè)對(duì)于社會(huì)和個(gè)人首段：背景介紹+問(wèn)題影響 寫作目Alarmingly,itisfarfromeasyforcollegegraduatestosecureidealjobsandcountlesscollegejobcandidatesfeelfrustratedwhenseekingforareasonablecareer.Thecrisisoftheyouthemploymenthasbeenexertingabanefulinfluenceonthosegiftedcollegeleaversandtheharmonyofthecommunity.Thisessayaimstoexplorethepossiblereasonsofyouthunemploymentandthenpresentmy Alarmingly,itisfarfromeasyforsbtodosth令人擔(dān)憂的是，做……很getareasonablecareerhasbeenexertingabanefulinfluenceonandtheharmonyofthecommunity……一直對(duì)于……和社會(huì)的和諧造成不良影響giftedcollegeleaversThisessayaimstoexplorethepossiblereasonsof……andthenpresentmy mendations.本文將會(huì)探究下……的原因，再提出個(gè)人的建議二段：?jiǎn)栴}原因的展Virtually,anumberoffactorsexplainthehardshipofcollegegraduates’employment. ,thepressureofyouthunemploymentcouldbeowedtothefactthatthesupplyofcollegegraduatesfaroutweighsthedemandofthesociety.Specifically,countlessuniversityjob-seekersarecompetingforlimitedpositions.Further,someenterprisessufferingfromeconomicdownturnarereducingstaffandcuttingdowntheplansofrecruitingnewemployees.Meanwhile,thedemandofsomecorporationsforjobcandidatesgrowscontinuously,eye-dazzlingacademicqualificationorrichworkingexperiencecouldallserveasexcellentexamples.Eventually,the petenceofsomecollegejob-huntersandimpropercareerconceptsaccountforthetruththatjobsarechallengingtoget.(110)二段寫作年輕人擇業(yè)難的三個(gè)原因：（從客觀原因談及原因virtually,anumberoffactorsexplain……實(shí)際上，很多原因解釋,……couldbeowedtothefactthat……，第一,……可以被歸結(jié)為someenterprisessufferingfromeconomicdownturn一些遭遇經(jīng)濟(jì)的企reducestaff裁cutdowntheplansofrecruitingnewemployeesthedemandofgrowscontinuously……eye-dazzlingacademicqualificationrichworkingexperiencecouldallserveasexcellentexamples……accountforthetruththat…………解釋了……的事實(shí)Consideringtheseverityofyouthunemploymentitistimethatweadoptedsomeeffective ,itisimperativeforthe ernmenttoenactrelevantlegislationstobalancethesupplyandthedemandofthecollegestudents.Meanwhile,the ernmentisurgedtoprovidecollegeleaverswithpreferentialpoliciessothatthoseambitiouscollegejob-hunterscouldcarveouttheirowncareers.Further,effortsshouldbemadebyrelevantenterprises,theyshouldcreatemoreon-the-jobtrainingchancesforyoungstersandproperlylowercriteriainselectingcollegejob-seekers.Ultimay,undergraduatesoughttostudyevenharderandadjusttheirmentalityintermsofcareerchoice.Moreprecisely,everycollegestudentshouldexcelacademicallyandstrivefromthebottomofthesociety.（118）Consideringtheseverityof……itishightimethatweadoptedsomeeffectiveitisimperativeforthe ernmenttoenactrelevantlegislationsto……頒布相關(guān)立 ernmentisurgedtoprovidecollegeleaverswithpreferentialpolicies應(yīng)該給carveouttheirowncareerseffortsshouldbemadeby……努力應(yīng)該有……createmoreon-the-jobtrainingchances創(chuàng)造的在職培訓(xùn)的機(jī)properlylowercriteriain……在……studyevenharderadjusttheirmentalityintermsofcareerchoiceexcelacademicallyandstrivefromthebottomofthesociety精通專業(yè)知識(shí)以及從社會(huì)底尾段：亮明作家立場(chǎng)：強(qiáng)調(diào)協(xié)同努力才能解決問(wèn)Inanuts ,itisnoeasytasktohelpeveryyoungjob-huntertosecureanidealjob.Concertedeffortsshouldbemadebythe ernment,therelevantcompaniesandeverycollegejob-seeker.Onlyinthiswaycancrisisofyouthunemploymentbetackledproperly.(45)ina itisnoeasy