讀后續(xù)寫 練習寫作指導 講義-高考英語復習寫作備考

讀后續(xù)寫練習寫作指導講義讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。TheSaturdaybeforeChristmas,1o'clocka.m.,Iwasheadingforabird-watchingsiteafewhoursnorth.Theweatherforecastcalledforthepossibilityoffog,butthedrivedownwasclear.AsIapproachedthedestination,thefogbegantobuild.Atabend,Ihitaroadshoulderandlostcontrolofthetruck.Itriedtocorrect,butitwastoolate.Withaclang,thebackofmytruckwentoverasteepbankandsliddowntothewater.Therewasaseriesofflashes,clicks,andwhirsbeforealllightsandelectronicswentout.Iprayedthatthewaterwasn'tdeep.Atfirst,thesceneseemedpeaceful,almostbeautiful.Inthedimlight,IcouldbarelymakeoutthatIwasinalargecanalfloatinggentlydownstreamandspinningslowly.Itriedtoopenthedoor,butitwaslocked.Thewaterhadshortedtheelectricalsystem.IrememberedIhadaglassbreaker.Itwasinthecentreconsole（儀表盤）.Igrabbedthetoolandgavethepassengerwindowasharphit,butthebreakermerelybouncedoff.Ihititagain,withthesameresult.Itriedatwo-handedswingbutonlymanagedtoscratchthewindow.Witheachfailedattempt,theurgencyofmysituationbuilt.Watergatheredatmyfeet.Ilaydownontheseatandtriedtokickoutthewindow,butmyfeetjustbouncedoff.Bythispoint,thetruckwasmostlysubmerged（淹沒）andthewaterwaspushingagainstthewindow.Inside,thewaterlevelwasovertheseat,andcoldwatersoakedmybackandneck.IfIcouldreachmytoolboxbehindtheseat,surelyIwouldfindthetooltobreakthewindow.Idivedforit,withobjectsfloatingaroundme:aplasticbottle,afoldablewindshieldcover,asmallpillow.Theinsideofmytruckhadbecomeagiantsnowglobe,andIwastrappedinit.注意：.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；.應使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Whilestrugglingwiththetoolbox,myhandhitmyfireextinguisherbyaccident.Paragraph2:Iswamforshoreandtriedtoclimbupthebankofthecanal.寫作解析■前文分析?時間theSaturdaybeforeChristmas,1o'clocka.m.?地點onthewaytoabird-watchingsiteachanal?人物I?事件Iwasheadingforabird-watchingsitebutanaccidenthappened.?主要情節(jié)圣誕節(jié)前的那個周六，為了觀鳥，我凌晨一點出發(fā)前往觀鳥地。天氣預報說，可能有霧，但沒特別留意。在接近目的地的時候，在一拐彎處，因霧太濃，看不清，車撞到了路肩上，之后車滑進了水渠里。車子到了水里，因為浸水，汽車出現(xiàn)了故障，更麻煩的是，車門打不開，沒法逃生。后來，經(jīng)過一系列的努力，……■下文分析?兩段開頭段1:Whilestrugglingwiththetoolbox,myhandhitmyfireextinguisherbyaccident....段2:Iswamforshoreandtriedtoclimbupthebankofthecanal....?情節(jié)安排段1:①于是就潛水去取滅火器，但因水冰車晃，沒法抓牢。②求生的欲望，讓我在拿到滅火器后把窗砸開了。③就從砸破的車窗逃出去。段2：①寒風低溫讓我一時爬不上岸。②最終經(jīng)過多次嘗試，用盡最后一點力氣，上了岸。③反思此事，吸取教訓。范文1Paragraph1:Whilestrugglingwiththetoolbox,myhandhitmyfireextinguisherbyaccident.Idivedforit,butthecoldwaterandtheswingingmotionofthetruckmadeitimpossibleformetograspittightly.However,itwasthebeliefofsurvivalthatgavemetheperseverancetoswimtothewindow.Igatheredallmystrength,graspedthefireextinguisherandslammedthewindow.Itwasreallyalife-savingtool,whichhelpedtocrackthepassengerwindow.Adefinitereliefcametome.Nothingwasmoreimportantthanbeingalive.Ipassedthroughthebrokenwindow.(86words)Paragraph2:Iswamforshoreandtriedtoclimbupthebankofthecanal.Thebitingwindandthelowtemperatureaddedthedifficulty,makingmybodylosealmostallsensation.Withseveralconstantattempts,Imanagedtotakeholdofthestoneonthecanalsidewithmylaststrength.Havingashortrest,Isucceededingettingmyselfoutoftrouble.Whendawnfinallycameandthefogfaded,survivingwasthehappiestthing,thoughIhadnochancetoheadforabird-watchingsite!Lookingback,Ialwaystoldmyselfneverblindlytobeover-trusting.(84words)范文2Whilestrugglingwiththetoolbox,myhandhitthefireextinguisherbyaccident.Igraspedandusedittobreakthewindow.Theextinguisher,too,merelybouncedofftheglass.Thewaterlevelhadrisen.Iexperiencedamomentoffearborderingonpanic.ButIknewIhadtocarryon.Inthefollowingtime,Iswungtheextinguisherunderwater,wentabovethewatertogulpair,andthendiveddownandtookasmanyswingsasmybreathwouldallow,withtheonlyhopeofweakeningthewindowthroughrepeatedimpact.Ididn'tknowhowlongitlasted,butsuddenlytheimpactfeltdifferent.Iextendedmylefthandandfeltaholeinthewindow.I'mgoingtolive!Iusedthetooltobreakawaytherestoftheglassandswamoutofthetruck.(127words)Iswamforshoreandtriedtoclimbupthesideofthecanal.ThebankwaswetandslipperyandInoticedmultiplecutsinmyfingersfromrippingthedooropen,allofwhichmadeclimbingupextremelydifficult.Apartofmejustwantedtogiveup.Mylifeflashedbeforemyeyes.IthoughtofallthepeopleI'dknown,theexperiencesI'dhad,andtheexperiencesIwouldneverhave.Ittookallmyremainingwillpowertoscreamatthetopofmylungs.Incredibly,someoneresponded.Twobirdwatchersspottedmeanddraggedmeontothebankofthecana