書信寫作建議信學(xué)案-高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

高考英語復(fù)習(xí)之作文得分解【作文書寫總綱】高中作文雖大約在100-120詞左右，但也需要在書寫前安排好文章結(jié)構(gòu)，理清書寫思路后再下筆寫作，才能保證邏輯清楚，承接自然，首尾呼應(yīng)。稱為“五確定”，一般可以按照以下幾步：確定文章體裁。是書信，還是議論文、說明文等。即使是書信，也需要按照不同的書信類別進(jìn)行分析準(zhǔn)備，例如是否要寫自我介紹；是否需要寒暄；是否需要時(shí)間落款確定文章段落。一般段落在3-5段比較合適，段落太多會(huì)有冗余繁雜之感。但有些文章也可以兩段，例如通知或者是演講稿，也可以滿足要求。確當(dāng)各段內(nèi)容和段落之間的過渡。第一段往往起到引出話題的作用，安排2-3句話較為合適；二段為主要內(nèi)容，在分層和銜接上要求較高，文章的主要句子主要在這里體現(xiàn)；三段一般為呼應(yīng)和總結(jié)，安排2-3句話，這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)較為緊密完整，主次分明，邏輯清楚。確定人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。人稱使用一二人稱難度較小，時(shí)態(tài)使用一般現(xiàn)在或者一般過去失分風(fēng)險(xiǎn)會(huì)更小，但也需要根據(jù)文章的具體要求對應(yīng)調(diào)整。確定提分拔高點(diǎn)。主要是指從句復(fù)合句數(shù)量和書寫位置，特殊句型應(yīng)用，詞組代替單詞，諺語使用等。第一講建議信『段落安排』第一段：開門見山，點(diǎn)名問題和意圖第二段：分層次提出建議，并且適當(dāng)?shù)孛枋龀鏊峤ㄗh的效果或原因第三段：首尾呼應(yīng)，表達(dá)鼓勵(lì)或者會(huì)持續(xù)關(guān)注『常用句式』首段：寒暄并且引出話題1、I

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LiHua解析:這是一封書信，保證書信體格式。文章開頭簡單寒暄后即引出話題，同時(shí)二段采用To

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