人教新目標八年級上冊Unit-1Where-did-you-go-on-vacation？話題作文課件

教學目標：親愛的同學們，通過這節(jié)課的學習，你們將能：

掌握以旅行為話題的日記的寫作技巧。

1.學會根據(jù)該文體進行審題，謀篇及潤色；2.學會使用常用的連接詞和過渡句,增強文章的連貫性；3.知道如何在有限的時間內快速構思、羅列提綱。教學目標：親愛的同學們，通過這節(jié)課的學習，你們將能：1GoforitGrade8AUnit1Wheredidyougoonvacation?話題作文ATravelDiaryGoforitGrade8A話題作文2Step1SharemytriptoBeijingStep13Task1Watchavideoandanswerquestions.1.Whatplacesofinterestcanyousee?2.HowdoyoulikeBeijing?(名勝古跡)Task1Watchavideoandansw4Task2SharemytriptoBeijing.IarrivedinBeijingbyplaneonAugust20thwithmyfriend.August,20thTask2SharemytriptoBeiji5thePalaceMuseumIlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedalotaboutChinesehistory.

Itwassunnyandhot.Itookquiteafewphotos.IwenttothePalaceMuseum.thePalaceMuseumIlikedthis6Fordinner,IateBeijingduck.Itwasdelicious.BeijingduckI

boughtsomethingspecial,butthethingswerekindofexpensive.Fordinner,IateBeijingduck7hotelIntheevening,wewentbacktothehotel.Ifeltreallytiredbuthappy.hotelIntheevening,wewentb8Step2Writeaboutmy

tripStep29hotandsunnytiredBeijingduckdelicioustakesomephotosbeautifulbuysomethingspecialinterestinglearnsomethingimportantAugust

Wednesday,_________20thTodaytheweatherwas_________________.Iwentto______________________.Itwas___________________________.We_____________________.Ilikedthisplacebecause________________________________.Fordinnerwehad______________.Itwas__________.Intheevening,Ifeltreally_______.AugusthotandsunnythePalaceMuseumbeautifulandinteresting

tooksomephotosIlearnedsomethingimportantBeijingduckdelicioustiredTask1Usethewordsandphrasesintheboxtocompletethediaryentry.hotandsunny10Whendidyougothere?Task2Knowmoreaboutthediary.Wednesday,August20thdateweatherplacetransportation(交通)partner(同伴)activitiessaw…,ate…,learned…,liked/disliked………feelingsHowdidyoufeelaboutit?Whatdid

youdo?Howwastheweather?Wheredidyougo?

Todaytheweatherwashotandsunny.IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwasbeautiful.Wetooksomephotos.IlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethingimportant.FordinnerwehadBeijing.Itwasdelicious.Intheevening,Ifeltreallytired.Whendidyougothere?Task211

Wednesday,August20thTodaytheweatherwashotandsunny.1.________,IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwasbeautiful,2.____wetooksomephotos.Ilikedthisplace3.________Ilearnedsomethingimportant.4.______,wehadBeijingduckfordinner.Itwasdelicious.Intheevening.Ifeltreallytired5._____happy.AtfirstsoThenbutTip1

正確地運用連詞使文章更具條理性Task3Fillintheblankswiththewordsinthebox.becauseatfirstbutbecausethensoand

12______________________________________________________________Inaword,itwasagreattrip!IhopetogotoBeijingagain.______________________________________________________________

Todaytheweatherwashotandsunny.Atfirst,IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwasbeautiful,sowetooksomephotos.IlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethingimportant.Then,wehadBeijingduckfordinner.Itwasdelicious.Atlast,wewentbacktothehotel.Ifelttiredbuthappy.IarrivedinBeijingbyplanewithmyfriend.Ireallyhadfunthere.beginning開頭body正文end結尾hopefeelings+7分+8分Headplacepeople…Task4Completethearticle(補全文章).Wednesday,August20th

Tip3文章需分三段開頭直奔主題正文描述見聞結尾抒發(fā)情感______________________________13Task4:Choosetheluckynumbers.

234luckynumbers1Task5:Playagameandbetterthepassage.選擇數(shù)字完成相應的任務,使文章更完美。.Task4:Choosetheluckynumbe14Wednesday,August20th

Manwhotravelsfarknowsmore.Iliketravelling.SoIarrivedinBeijingbyplanewithmyfriend.Ireallyhadfunthere.

Whatahotandsunnydaytoday!Atfirst,IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Thebuildingsweresowonderfulthatwedidn’twanttoleave.Itwasbeautiful,sowetooksomephotos.IlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethingimportant.Then,wehadBeijingduckfordinner.WhenIsawthedeliciousfood,Icouldn’twaittoeatit.Atlast,wewentbacktothehotel.Ifelttiredbuthappy.Inaword,itwasagreattrip!IlookforwardtogoingtoBeijingagain.

Task6Enjoythetraveldiary.+10分

15Step3KeepyourtraveldiaryStep316________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Task1Keepadiaryaboutyourtrip.你假期去了有趣的地方嗎？你玩得開心嗎？你在那里的所見所聞所做所感是什么？

請寫一篇你自己的旅行日記，80詞左右。評分依據(jù)：1.字跡工整，書寫美觀2.結構完整，信息齊全3.語言規(guī)范，格式正確4.詞匯優(yōu)美，句式多樣______________________________17________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Task2Showyourdiary.______________________________18Homework課后將旅行日記發(fā)送到微信（WeChat）上和朋友分享。Homework課后將旅行日記發(fā)送到微信（WeChat）上和19Lovetraveling!Lovelife!Lovesharing!愛旅游！愛分享！愛生活！Lovetraveling!Lovelife!Love201.Whatasunnydayitwas!2.Howsunnyitwas!Itwasasunnyday.改變語氣(+2)(+3)1.Whatasunnydayitwas!2.21Thebuildingswerebeautiful.Ididn’twanttoleave.1.Thebuildingswerebeautiful,soIdidn’twanttoleave.2.ThebuildingsweresobeautifulthatIdidn’twanttoleave.合并句子:(+2)(+3)Thebuildingswerebeautiful.222.Manwhotravelsfarknowsmore.1.讀萬卷書不如行萬里路。大聲朗讀美句:(+3)2.我期盼下一次再去。Ilookforwardtogoingthereagain.2.Manwhotravelsfarknowsm23(+2)給下面的句子選擇最佳評論：WehadBeijingduckfordinner.Itwasdelicious.A.Iforgotitstaste.B.WhenIsawthedeliciousfood,Icouldn’twaittoeatit.迫不及待地(+2)給下面的句子選擇最佳評論：WehadBeiji24

A.ItooktheplanetoBeijingwithmyfamily.Ireallyhadfunthere.

B.ItooktheplanetoBeijingwithmyfamily.Ihadreallyfunthere.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.

C.Hello,everyone!IamhappytotalkaboutmytriptoBeijing.Tip2根據(jù)不同的文體選擇合適的開頭。A.ItooktheplanetoBeijin25教學目標：親愛的同學們，通過這節(jié)課的學習，你們將能：

掌握以旅行為話題的日記的寫作技巧。

1.學會根據(jù)該文體進行審題，謀篇及潤色；2.學會使用常用的連接詞和過渡句,增強文章的連貫性；3.知道如何在有限的時間內快速構思、羅列提綱。教學目標：親愛的同學們，通過這節(jié)課的學習，你們將能：26GoforitGrade8AUnit1Wheredidyougoonvacation?話題作文ATravelDiaryGoforitGrade8A話題作文27Step1SharemytriptoBeijingStep128Task1Watchavideoandanswerquestions.1.Whatplacesofinterestcanyousee?2.HowdoyoulikeBeijing?(名勝古跡)Task1Watchavideoandansw29Task2SharemytriptoBeijing.IarrivedinBeijingbyplaneonAugust20thwithmyfriend.August,20thTask2SharemytriptoBeiji30thePalaceMuseumIlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedalotaboutChinesehistory.

Itwassunnyandhot.Itookquiteafewphotos.IwenttothePalaceMuseum.thePalaceMuseumIlikedthis31Fordinner,IateBeijingduck.Itwasdelicious.BeijingduckI

boughtsomethingspecial,butthethingswerekindofexpensive.Fordinner,IateBeijingduck32hotelIntheevening,wewentbacktothehotel.Ifeltreallytiredbuthappy.hotelIntheevening,wewentb33Step2Writeaboutmy

tripStep234hotandsunnytiredBeijingduckdelicioustakesomephotosbeautifulbuysomethingspecialinterestinglearnsomethingimportantAugust

Wednesday,_________20thTodaytheweatherwas_________________.Iwentto______________________.Itwas___________________________.We_____________________.Ilikedthisplacebecause________________________________.Fordinnerwehad______________.Itwas__________.Intheevening,Ifeltreally_______.AugusthotandsunnythePalaceMuseumbeautifulandinteresting

tooksomephotosIlearnedsomethingimportantBeijingduckdelicioustiredTask1Usethewordsandphrasesintheboxtocompletethediaryentry.hotandsunny35Whendidyougothere?Task2Knowmoreaboutthediary.Wednesday,August20thdateweatherplacetransportation(交通)partner(同伴)activitiessaw…,ate…,learned…,liked/disliked………feelingsHowdidyoufeelaboutit?Whatdid

youdo?Howwastheweather?Wheredidyougo?

Todaytheweatherwashotandsunny.IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwasbeautiful.Wetooksomephotos.IlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethingimportant.FordinnerwehadBeijing.Itwasdelicious.Intheevening,Ifeltreallytired.Whendidyougothere?Task236

Wednesday,August20thTodaytheweatherwashotandsunny.1.________,IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwasbeautiful,2.____wetooksomephotos.Ilikedthisplace3.________Ilearnedsomethingimportant.4.______,wehadBeijingduckfordinner.Itwasdelicious.Intheevening.Ifeltreallytired5._____happy.AtfirstsoThenbutTip1

正確地運用連詞使文章更具條理性Task3Fillintheblankswiththewordsinthebox.becauseatfirstbutbecausethensoand

37______________________________________________________________Inaword,itwasagreattrip!IhopetogotoBeijingagain.______________________________________________________________

Todaytheweatherwashotandsunny.Atfirst,IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwasbeautiful,sowetooksomephotos.IlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethingimportant.Then,wehadBeijingduckfordinner.Itwasdelicious.Atlast,wewentbacktothehotel.Ifelttiredbuthappy.IarrivedinBeijingbyplanewithmyfriend.Ireallyhadfunthere.beginning開頭body正文end結尾hopefeelings+7分+8分Headplacepeople…Task4Completethearticle(補全文章).Wednesday,August20th

Tip3文章需分三段開頭直奔主題正文描述見聞結尾抒發(fā)情感______________________________38Task4:Choosetheluckynumbers.

234luckynumbers1Task5:Playagameandbetterthepassage.選擇數(shù)字完成相應的任務,使文章更完美。.Task4:Choosetheluckynumbe39Wednesday,August20th

Manwhotravelsfarknowsmore.Iliketravelling.SoIarrivedinBeijingbyplanewithmyfriend.Ireallyhadfunthere.

Whatahotandsunnydaytoday!Atfirst,IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Thebuildingsweresowonderfulthatwedidn’twanttoleave.Itwasbeautiful,sowetooksomephotos.IlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethingimportant.Then,wehadBeijingduckfordinner.WhenIsawthedeliciousfood,Icouldn’twaittoeatit.Atlast,wewentbacktothehotel.Ifelttiredbuthappy.Inaword,itwasagreattrip!IlookforwardtogoingtoBeijingagain.

Task6Enjoythetraveldiary.+10分

40Step3KeepyourtraveldiaryStep341________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Task1Keepadiaryaboutyourtrip.你假期去了有趣的地方嗎？你玩得開心嗎？你在那里的所見所聞所做所感是什么？

請寫一篇你自己的旅行日記，80詞左右。評分依據(jù)：1.字跡工整，書寫美觀2.結構完整，信息齊全3.語言規(guī)范，格式正確4.詞匯優(yōu)美，句式多樣______________________________42_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________