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Beproudofwhatyoucan2015-1- Inthepast,themajorityof museumsweresolemnplacesforvisitorstogaindeeperunderstandingofthehistory,culture,technologyandsoon.Nowadays,museumsarenotquitethesame.Theyare moreenjoyableandentertaining,whichhassparkedcontroversyoverthepurposeof2015-1- Inmyopinion,despitethepossiblerisksofinvitingforeigncompanies,Istronglybelievethathavingforeigninvestmentisabettermethodtogetridofpovertyforadevelocountry.Whatthe ernmentshouldconsideristolimitthenumberofforeigncompaniesandthequalityoftheirinvestmentprojects.2015-1- 2015-1- 2015-1- 123.Itistodo….—?jiǎng)e讓初中老師罵2015-1- 1).Advocate-支持者和 Advocatesofguncontrollegislationarguethatguncontrollawsreducetheincidenceofviolentcrimesbyreducingtheprevalenceoffirearms.Opponentsofanykindofgunrestrictionsarguethattheyaresincecriminalsbydefinitiondon'tfollowthelaw,andthereforewon'tallowgunlawstohamstringtheircriminalbehavior. Enthusiastsofextremesportsareabletoexperienceuniqueandunusualexcitementthatcanneverbeprovidedbyso-calledsafesports.Youngparticipantsofcommunityservicesaremorelikelytobeindependentinthinkingandacting.2015-1- 話/訂閱),Reader-讀者,Buyer/Purchaser- 4).Viewer-觀眾,Spectator-(現(xiàn)觀眾場(chǎng)),Moviegoer-去看 Museumgoer-博物館參觀者Hiker-徒步旅行者,Backpacker-背包旅行者 ,zoologist-動(dòng)物學(xué)家,environmentalist-環(huán)保2015-1- 7).Resident-居民,Dweller-居住者,Citizen-城市/國(guó)家公民,Inhabitant-常8).Worker-工作者,Employee-雇員,Professional-專業(yè) ,Job-seeker-求職者,Job-hopper-跳槽的人,Superior-9).Student-學(xué)生,Pupil-年紀(jì)偏小的學(xué)生,Learner-學(xué)習(xí)者,Graduate-畢業(yè)生,Undergraduate-大學(xué)在讀,Postgraduate- Learningaforeignlanguageallowslearnersto eflexibleinthinkingandgrowvariableinexpressing.10).Donator-捐贈(zèng)者,Giver-給予者,Recipient-接受者11).Optimist-樂觀者,Pessimist-悲觀主義者,Activist-積極分子,Skeptic-懷疑者, 2015-1- 3).Workingathomeallowspeopletospendtimebetterfittingtheirindividualconditions.4).Employing ligentrobotworkersbringsdowncostof5).Livingalowcarbonlifemeansthatpeoplehavetosacrificetheconvenienceandcomfortintheirdailylife.2015-1- 6).Allowingemployeestohavelongervacationsisbeneficialforthemtomaintainaclosefamilybond.7Allowingchildrenthefreedomtomakedecisionsishelpfultoforgeagoodrelationshipbetweenparentsandchildren.–話嘮8Employingthesameproportionofmenandwomenseemstobeaneffectivemethodtodiminishgenderdiscrimination.–避免重復(fù)9Educatingchildrentounderstandtheimportanceofobeyingrulesalwaysbeginsinthehome.–只能意會(huì)10Beingabletosupportyourreasonsandideaswithdetailsishelpfultoleaveagoodimpression.–必須學(xué)會(huì)2015-1- Itis1).基本入門結(jié)構(gòu):ItistodoItiscommonforyoungadultstolivewiththeirparents.Itisnot montoseepeopleusetheirelectronicdevicesalldaylong.2015-1- 2復(fù)雜一點(diǎn)：Itis形容詞/thatItiscommonknowledgethatdrugabuseleadstoharmfulconsequences.Youngchildrenarefullofcuriosity,soitisnotsurprisingthattheirparentsmakemanyrulestorestricttheirbehavior.2015-1- 3)再?gòu)?fù)雜一點(diǎn)：ItisthatItissometimesarguedthatforeigntouristsshouldbechargedmorewhenvisitinghistoricandculturalattractions.Itisfrequentlysuggestedthatchildrenshouldnotbegivenanymoney.2015-1- popular-poor–happy–similar–different–difficult–various–avarietyilliterate–unable–2015-1- A:MoreandmorepeoplechoosetoreadB:Readingonlineis ingincreasinglyC:Thepopularityofreadingonlinehasbeen2015-1- 練習(xí)：越來越少的人寫傳統(tǒng)書信A：字面翻B：Therebe句C：用D：用E：用therebe結(jié)合2015-1- A：FewerandfewerpeoplewritetraditionalB：TherearefewerandfewerpeoplewhowritetraditionalC：Writingtraditionallettersis inglessandlessD：ThepopularityofwritingtraditionallettershasbeenE：Therehasbeenadeclineinthepopularityoftraditional2015-1- 2015-1- 第二大類Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyou1.Ithinkthat shouldberesponsibleforthis.2.Ithinkthat is/areto3.Ithinkthat shouldtakemajor2015-1- 1.第一段只需要將原題給出的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行改寫即可，Ithinkthat shouldberesponsibleforthis.格里的內(nèi)容認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)確填充。---30—40 序：Onasimplisticlevel,Furthermore這兩個(gè)短語(yǔ)千萬不要讓抽象的概念占了主要成分。--100—150詞2015-1- 3).第三段的任務(wù)是提出切實(shí)可行的解決方2015-1- 2015-1- 犯2015-1-犯1).PoorstudentbehaviorseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadproblemandIthinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsiblefor2).Inmanycountries,thebirthrateisdecreasingsothatfamiliesaresmallerwithfewerchildren.Thesechildrenareoftenspoilt,notintermsofloveandattentionbecauseworkingparentsdonothavethetimeforthis,butinmorematerialways.Theyareallowedtohavewhatevertheywant,regardlessofprice,andtobehaveastheyplease.Thismeansthatthechildrengrowupwithoutconsiderationforothersandwithoutanyunderstandingofwheretheirstandardoflivingcomesfrom.Whentheygettoschoolagetheyhavenotlearntanyself-controlordiscipline.Theyhavelessrespectfortheirteachersandrefusetoobeyschoolrulesinthewaythattheirparentsdid.2015-1- 3)Teacherscontinuallycomplainaboutthisproblemandmeasuresshouldbetakentocombatthesituation.ButIthinkthesolutiontotheproblemlieswiththefamilies,whoneedtobemoreawareofthefutureconsequencesofspoilingtheirchildren.Iftheycouldraisethemtobemoreconsiderateofothersandtobesocial,responsibleindividuals,thewholecommunitywouldbenefit.4)Perhapsparentingclassesareneededtohelpthemtodothis,andhighqualitynurseryschoolsshouldbeestablishedthatwouldsupportfamiliesmoreintermsofraisingthenextgeneration.The ernmentshouldfundthiskindofparentalsupport,becausethisisnolongeraproblemforindividualfamilies,butforsocietyasawhole.2015-1- LackofacquaintancewithneighborsisnowbelievedasacommonsocialphenomenonandIthinkthatmoderntechnologiesandstressfulworkingconditionsshouldbeprobablyresponsibleforthis.HighDefinition evisionwithdiversifiedprogramsandhighspeednetworkconnectiontotheInternetconsumeagreatdealofsparetimeratherthantalktopeoplelivingnextdoors.TVSeries,talkshows,andtalentcompetitionprogramdistractspeoplefromsocialactivities.Immersinginonlinegamesormobileapplications,ontheotherhand,hasbeenchangingthefocusonsurroundingstoscreens.Duetothepopularityofthesocialmedia,itisfarmoreconvenienttocommunicatethroughhigh-techdevicesthanface-to-faceinteraction.Swingersarelikelytoposttheirnewcarphotoson insteadofsharingthisgoodnewstotheirneighbors.2015-1- Despitetheseelectronicfactors,thehighpressureworkingcompetitioncausesemployeesto econsciousofthedemandforsavingtheirpositions,whichisthereasonwhyovertimeworkingaremorecommon altimehasbeenshortened.Especially,theincreasingnumberoftwo-careercouplesindicatesthatfewerpeopleareathomeduringthedaytime,whichleavesthemlesstimetomeettheirneighbors.Theabsenceofcommunicationandinteractionbetweenneighborsisaworryingtrend,someasuresshouldbetakentocombatthesituation.Communityeventsamongneighbors,suchasacompetitionofthebestdecoratedhousesforChristmas,orasmallgardenerskillsandinformationexchangecouldbeheldtohelppeopletoknoweachother.Itisalsotheernment’sresponsibilitiestoreducetheunemploymentrateandsupportcompulsorypaidleaves,inordertorisethestayinghometime.2015-1- Inconclusion,althoughtheshiftfromatraditionalwayoflivingtoamodernlifestyleisunstoppable,Istillbelievethatpeoplelivinginthesameneighborhoodshouldgettoknoweachotherasmuchasbefore.Thisisimportantnotonlytoindividualsbutthesocietyasawhole.2015-1- 第一段解析：痛快改寫原題+準(zhǔn)確回答問1).原題：Theaverageweightofgeneralpopulationhasbeenincreasing.改：Inmanycountries,therehasbeenariseintheaverageweightofaconsiderableproportionofpeople.Ithinkthatexcessiveconsumptionofunhealthyfoodandsedentarylifestylearetoblame.2015-1- 2).原題：Theimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionhasbeenwidelyrealized,butveryfewpeoplearemakingcontributiontothisgoal.改：Althoughitisknownbythemajorityofpeoplethatsavingtheearthiscriticallyimportant,onlyatinyproportionofthemaretakingrealactionstomaketheworldbetter.Ithinkthatmodernlifestylesareresponsibleforthis.2015-1- 3).原題Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.改:PoorstudentbehaviorseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadproblemandIthinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsibleforthis.2015-1- 4).原題：Therearesomeactivitiesthatareharmfultopeople'shealth,buttheyarestillpopularwithmanypeople.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?改：Itiscommonsenseth tivitieslikesmokingcigarettesorstayinguplateresultinhealthproblems.Unfortuna y,aconsiderableproportionofpeoplearestillobsessedwiththem.Inmyopinion,modernlifestylesshouldberesponsibleforthis.2015-1- 5).原題：Moreandmoreyoungpeoplearenotwillingtoworkasateacher.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?改：Thewillingness/desiretotakeateachingjobhasbeendecliningamongyoungadults.Inmyopinion,moderneducationshouldberesponsiblefor2015-1- 1.modern3.sedentary4.peer5.media6.thepursuitofaquality8.inabilitytoresistvarious2015-1- 1).Oneofthereasonswhypeopledonotgotomuseumsisthat………………2).Theotherreasonwhypeoplerarelyvisitamuseumisthat3).Theincrease/decreaseinobesityisduetothelackof4).Aleadingreasonbehindthewideningwealthgapisthat5).Sedentarylifestyleofmodernpeoplehascontributedalotto6).Livingalow-carbonlifemeansthatpeoplehavetosacrificemostofthecomfortandconvenienceintheireverydaylife,whichisthereasonwhymostofpeopleareunwillingtotakeearth-savingactions.2015-1- 1.keysentence+2.keysentenceForexample3InotherwordsFor2015-1- Theotherreasonwhypeopledonotknowabouttheirneighboursisthatcommunicationthroughhightechnologydevicesisfarmoreconvenientandinterestingthanface-to-faceinteractionwiththelivingnextdoor.Forexample,instantcommunicationappsconnectpeopleacrosstheworldtogethersothattheycantalkaboutsomehottopicsorsharetheirphotostakenrecentlywhenevertheywant.Ifyoucandoallthecommunicationinyourbedroom,whywouldyoubothertoleavethehouseandknockatyourneighbor'sdoor?2015-1- 1)Theabsenceofcommunicationandinteractionbetweenneighborsisaworryingtrend,someasuresshouldbetakentocombatthissituation.2)Merelylimitingthepopulationofbigcitiescannotbethesolutiontothisproblem,becausepeople’spursuittoliveaqualitylifewillnotjustdisappear.Instead,everyeffortshouldbemadebythe ernmenttowardnarrowingthegapbetweenruralandurbanregions.3).Therisei ageweightofthegeneralpopulationisusuallyfollowedbyaseriesofproblems,suchasaddingtofinancialburdenofthe ernmentadministration.Therefore,measuresshouldbetakentocombatthissituation.2015-1- 1).Oneofthesolutionstothisproblemlieswiththeparentswhomustbemoreawareoftheimportancetosparesometimefortheirchildren.2).Aneffectivestrategytodealwiththisproblemisthatthe ernmentshouldencourageyoungadultstostarttheirownbusinessesafterleavingschool.3).Also,byorganizingentertainingandappealingactivities,residentsarehighlylikelytogetinvolved.Forexample,…………4).Besides,whatyoungadultsshouldstolowertheircareerexpectationsontoareasonablelevelsothattheiremployabilitycanbegreatlyincreased.2015-1- 1).Inconclusion,althoughtheshiftfromatraditionalwayoflivingtoamodernlifestyleisunstoppable,Istillbelievethatpeoplelivinginthesameneighborhoodshouldgettoknoweachotherasmuchasbefore.2).Inconclusion,measuresproposedaboveshouldbetaken ytominimizetheadverseeffectsofincreasingjuveniledelinquency.Thisisnolongeraproblemforindividualfamilies,butthesocietyasawhole.3).Inconclusion,thesoonerhumanbeingsbegintotakeactions,thefewerspecieswilldisappearfromtheearth.Therefore,measuresproposedaboveshouldbetaken ytominimizetheadverseeffectsofmassiveextinctionoflivingcreatures.2015-1- Today,manypeopleknowlittleabouttheir Theimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionhasbeenwidelyrealized,butveryfewpeoplearemakingcontributiontothisgoal. Theaverageweightofgeneralpopulationhasbeen4.Thenumberofspeciesoflivingcreatureshasbeendecreasingrapidlyinthelastcentury.2015-1- 第三類題目：好處多還是壞處DoyouthinkitisapositiveornegativeDoyouthinktheadvantagesoutweighthe2015-1- 1改寫原題或者描述和題目相符的事實(shí)，然后給出自己的觀點(diǎn)(可以偏向/也可以既有好也有壞)—40—50詞2).一方面，好處的描述。一般兩個(gè)論據(jù)。--90—1003).另一方面壞處的描述。一般兩個(gè)論據(jù)。--90—1004).總結(jié)自己的偏向。---2015-1- 1).Traditionally,childrenhavebegunstudyingforeignlanguagesatsecondaryschool,butintroducingthemearlieris educationalists.Thispolicyhasbeenadoptedbysomeeducationalauthoritiesorindividualschools,withbothpositiveandnegative2).Theobviousargumentinitsfavouristhatyoungchildrenpickuplanguagesmu oreeasilythanteenagers.Theirbrainsarestillprogrammedtoacquiretheirmothertongue,whichfacilitateslearninganotherlanguage,andunlikeadolescents,theyarenotinhibitedbyself-consciousness.Thegreaterflexibilityoftheprimarytimetableallowsformorefrequent,shortersessionsandforaplay-centredapproach,thusmaintaininglearners’enthusiasmandprogress.Theircommandofthelanguageinlaterlifewillbenefitfromthisearlyexposure,whilelearningotherlanguagessubsequentlywillbeeasierforthem.Theymayalsogainabetterunderstandingofothercultures.2015-1- 3).Thereare,however,somedisadvantages.Primaryschoolteachersaregeneralists,andmaynothavethenecessarylanguageskillsthemselves.Ifspecialistshavetobebroughtintodeliverthesesessions,theflexibilityreferredtoaboveisdiminished.Ifprimarylanguageteachingisnotstandardized,secondaryschoolscouldbefacedwithagreatvarietyoflevelsindifferentlanguageswithintheirintake,resultinginaclassroomexperiencewhichundoestheearliergains.Thereisnoadvantageifenthusiasticprimarypupils edemotivatedassoonastheychangeschools.However,theseissuescanbeaddressedstrategicallywithinthepolicyadopted.4).Anythingwhichencourageslanguagelearningbenefitssocietyculturallyandeconomically,andearlyexposuretolanguagelearningcontributestothis.Youngchildren’sinnateabilitiesshouldbeharnessedtomakethesebenefitsmoreachievable.2015-1- 原題：Somepeoplethinkthatvisitingamuseumshouldbefreeofcharge.Doyouthinktheadvantagesoutweighthe2015-1- 改寫1：Thereare ingviewsonwhethermuseumsshouldchargeadmissionfeesornot.Inmyopinion,thispolicywouldhavebothpositiveandnegative 改寫2：Itisfrequentlyarguedthatmuseumsshouldchargenoadmissionfees.Inmyopinion,thispolicywouldhavebothpositiveandnegative 2015-1- 改寫3：IntheUK,itisfreeofchargetovisittheGreatBritishMuseumandtheNaturalHistoryMuseum.Also,inmanyothercountries,somemuseumschargenoadmissionfees.Inmyopinion,thispolicywouldhavebothpositiveandnegative2015-1- 1).Oneobviousargumentagainst/infavorofhostingtheOlympicGamesisthat…………2).Peopleagainst/infavorofgivingchildrenmoneyarguethat3).Oneofthereasonswhypeopledonotgotomuseumsisthat4).Anotherreasonwhypeoplerarelyvisitamuseumistha