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威海市第一中學(xué)于艷紅威海市第一中學(xué)于艷紅12Whatisyourpromise?4Ifyourpromisewillputyouindanger,willyoustillkeepit?Haveyouevermadeapromise?1Haveyoukeptyourpromise?

3Sharing:Promise2Whatisyourpromise?4Ifyo22WhatdidtheunseenmanwantMarietodo?4WhydidthetwoGermansoldiersburstintothecottage?Whoistheownerofthevoice?1DidMariedoasshewasasked?3Promise2Whatdidtheunseenmanwant32WhatdidtheunseenmanwantMarietodo?Whoistheownerofthevoice?1PromiseWhyshouldsheholdalightedlamp?//Whatisthefunctionofthelightedlamp?WhatwastherelationshipbetweenFranceandEnglandduringWWII?2Whatdidtheunseenmanwant4DidMariedoasshewasasked?

3PromiseWhydidtheychooseMarietohelpthematfirst?Whywastheforestsoimportant?WhatwastherelationshipbetweenFranceandGermanyduringWWII?WhatkindofgirldoyouthinkMarieis?

DidMariedoasshewasasked?5PromiseCanshekeepherpromiseeasily?WhydidthetwoGermansoldiersburstintothecottage?4Willshekeepherpromise?PromiseCanshekeepherpromis6PromiseDoyouthinkthestoryiscomplete?Ifitistobecontinued,whatwillitbeabout?Whichkeywordswillreappearinthecontinued

story?PromiseDoyouthinkthestory7Keywordsinthefollowingpassage:

Marie/Germansoldiers/French

forest/cottageplane/light/promisethreeo’clockinthemorningtohergreatjoy/Iwon’tfail

whowherewhatwhen

storyhowfeelingKeywordsinthefollowingpas8PromiseThisstorytookplaceinFranceduringWorldWarII.AttheedgeofalargeforestlivedaFrenchgirlnamedMarie.Shespenthertimelookingaftergoatsintheforest.Oneday,shewassittingonafallentreewhensheheardavoicefrombehindthebush.Itsaid,“Don’tlookaround,butlistencarefully.Youknowthelittlewindowintheroofoveryourbed.Tonight,at11o’clock,standonyourbedandholdyourlightedlampjustunderthewindowfortenminutes.Andthenputoutthelightandgotosleep.”Thegirldidastheunseenmantoldher.Tohergreatjoy,sheheardaplaneflyingroundandoverhercottage.“I’mhelpingtheplane!”Mariesaidtoherself.AtthattimethousandsofFrenchpeoplewerehidingintheforestsandmountainstoresisttheGermans.Theywereinneedoffoodandweapons,whichhadtobedroppedtothemfromplanescomingfromEngland.Inthisway,Mariecarriedouthertask.ThenonemorningMariemettheownerofthevoice,ayoungFrenchsoldier.Hesatnearherandsaid,“Thankyou,Marie,forwhatyouhavedoneforthecountry.Tonightisveryimportant.Thingsofgreatvaluewillbedroppedhereandthelightmustbeshownat3o’clockinthemorning.Canyoukeepawaketillthen?”“Iwon’tfail.”Marienodded.Nightfell.Suddenly,twoGerman

soldiersburstintohercottage,withthegunsintheirhands.Theysearchedthecottageandremainedinherroomandshewasforbiddentogooutside.Shesatstill,wonderingwhatshecoulddo.Shecouldn’tstandonthebedtoshowthelightanymore.Sherememberedherpromise

totheFrenchsoldier.Atthesametime,thetwoenemysoldierswereasleepandallwasquiet.PromiseThisstorytookplacei92續(xù)寫的短文字?jǐn)?shù)為150左右；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)注你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好;1應(yīng)使用短文中5個以上標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3Requirements：2續(xù)寫的短文字?jǐn)?shù)為150左右；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)注你10Discussion：

Withtimeapproaching,Mariegotmoreandmoreanxious._______

1.Whatwasthetime?2.Whydidshegetmoreandmoreanxious?3.Didshecomeupwithanideafinally?Whatwasit?

Noiselesslyshegotoutofthecottageandsetfiretoit._____________

1.Whydidshegetoutofthecottagenoiselessly?2.Whatwouldhappenaftershesetfiretothecottage?(thetwoGermansoldiers/theplane/herfeeling/promise)

time

NoiselesslyitDiscussion：Withtimeap11WritingTime：WritingTime：12EvaluationStandard是否與所給短文故事情節(jié)銜接是否與段落開頭語銜接是否覆蓋5個及以上關(guān)鍵詞詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性和豐富性語法結(jié)構(gòu)和句式多樣化評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是否完成EvaluationStandard是否與所給短文故事情節(jié)13Discussion:Howtocontinueastory?Discussion:Howtocontinuea14HomeworkPolishyourcontinuedstory&writeitonyournotebook.HomeworkPolishyourcontinued15讀后續(xù)寫課件16THANKYOUTHANKYOU17Theoriginalversion

Shecouldn’tstandonthebedtoshowthelight.SherememberedherpromisetotheFrenchsoldier.TheGermanenemieswereasleep.Justthenshehadanidea.Noiselesslyshegotoutoftheroomandsetfiretothecottage.Inamomentthecottagewasburning.Sheranofftotheforest.Inthemorning,theFrenchsoldiercame.”Youhavedonewell,Marie,”hesaid,“Youdidnotfail.Theplanebroughtuswhatweneed.Yourparentsaresafe.Comeandjoinus.”TheoriginalversionSheco18威海市第一中學(xué)于艷紅威海市第一中學(xué)于艷紅192Whatisyourpromise?4Ifyourpromisewillputyouindanger,willyoustillkeepit?Haveyouevermadeapromise?1Haveyoukeptyourpromise?

3Sharing:Promise2Whatisyourpromise?4Ifyo202WhatdidtheunseenmanwantMarietodo?4WhydidthetwoGermansoldiersburstintothecottage?Whoistheownerofthevoice?1DidMariedoasshewasasked?3Promise2Whatdidtheunseenmanwant212WhatdidtheunseenmanwantMarietodo?Whoistheownerofthevoice?1PromiseWhyshouldsheholdalightedlamp?//Whatisthefunctionofthelightedlamp?WhatwastherelationshipbetweenFranceandEnglandduringWWII?2Whatdidtheunseenmanwant22DidMariedoasshewasasked?

3PromiseWhydidtheychooseMarietohelpthematfirst?Whywastheforestsoimportant?WhatwastherelationshipbetweenFranceandGermanyduringWWII?WhatkindofgirldoyouthinkMarieis?

DidMariedoasshewasasked?23PromiseCanshekeepherpromiseeasily?WhydidthetwoGermansoldiersburstintothecottage?4Willshekeepherpromise?PromiseCanshekeepherpromis24PromiseDoyouthinkthestoryiscomplete?Ifitistobecontinued,whatwillitbeabout?Whichkeywordswillreappearinthecontinued

story?PromiseDoyouthinkthestory25Keywordsinthefollowingpassage:

Marie/Germansoldiers/French

forest/cottageplane/light/promisethreeo’clockinthemorningtohergreatjoy/Iwon’tfail

whowherewhatwhen

storyhowfeelingKeywordsinthefollowingpas26PromiseThisstorytookplaceinFranceduringWorldWarII.AttheedgeofalargeforestlivedaFrenchgirlnamedMarie.Shespenthertimelookingaftergoatsintheforest.Oneday,shewassittingonafallentreewhensheheardavoicefrombehindthebush.Itsaid,“Don’tlookaround,butlistencarefully.Youknowthelittlewindowintheroofoveryourbed.Tonight,at11o’clock,standonyourbedandholdyourlightedlampjustunderthewindowfortenminutes.Andthenputoutthelightandgotosleep.”Thegirldidastheunseenmantoldher.Tohergreatjoy,sheheardaplaneflyingroundandoverhercottage.“I’mhelpingtheplane!”Mariesaidtoherself.AtthattimethousandsofFrenchpeoplewerehidingintheforestsandmountainstoresisttheGermans.Theywereinneedoffoodandweapons,whichhadtobedroppedtothemfromplanescomingfromEngland.Inthisway,Mariecarriedouthertask.ThenonemorningMariemettheownerofthevoice,ayoungFrenchsoldier.Hesatnearherandsaid,“Thankyou,Marie,forwhatyouhavedoneforthecountry.Tonightisveryimportant.Thingsofgreatvaluewillbedroppedhereandthelightmustbeshownat3o’clockinthemorning.Canyoukeepawaketillthen?”“Iwon’tfail.”Marienodded.Nightfell.Suddenly,twoGerman

soldiersburstintohercottage,withthegunsintheirhands.Theysearchedthecottageandremainedinherroomandshewasforbiddentogooutside.Shesatstill,wonderingwhatshecoulddo.Shecouldn’tstandonthebedtoshowthelightanymore.Sherememberedherpromise

totheFrenchsoldier.Atthesametime,thetwoenemysoldierswereasleepandallwasquiet.PromiseThisstorytookplacei272續(xù)寫的短文字?jǐn)?shù)為150左右；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)注你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好;1應(yīng)使用短文中5個以上標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3Requirements：2續(xù)寫的短文字?jǐn)?shù)為150左右；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)注你28Discussion：

Withtimeapproaching,Mariegotmoreandmoreanxious._______

1.Whatwasthetime?2.Whydidshegetmoreandmoreanxious?3.Didshecomeupwithanideafinally?Whatwasit?

Noiselesslyshegotoutofthecottageandsetfiretoit._____________

1.Whydidshegetoutofthecottagenoiselessly?2.Whatwouldhappenaftershesetfiretothecottage?(thetwoGermansoldie