讀后續(xù)寫SurvvingintheWild課件-高考英語(yǔ)備考復(fù)習(xí)

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SurvivingintheWild

Imaginewhatwouldyoudoifyouhavetospendanightinthewildsnow?閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,

“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp.”andwalkedaway.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.

Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.

para1:But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

was

dark.

para2:It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.

Pairwork:workwithyourdeskmatetosearchfortheinformationofwho,when,where,what(plot)andhow(feeling)inthereading.Basicinformation

keys1.who

2.when

3.whereJane,TomoneweekendinJulyintheforest,snow-cappedmountain

WhatistheplotandhowdidJanefeel?(whatandhow)

Development3:

Janeheardahelicopter...impossibletoseeher....anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingtoflagthemiftheycamebackagain.opening:

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tomcampedbyalake,...theystartedtoquarrel...,Janewassoangry,...andwalkedaway....Sherealizedthatshewaslost...shecried.“Help!”Development1:butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame...

Lyingawake

inthedark,...ShewantedtoholdTomandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.

Development2:Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty....Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries....Feelingstrongernow,...Annoyed,frightenedconfused,regretfuljoyful,strongerhopeful,anxiousClimax:But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

was

dark.Ending:It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.Plot(what)Feeling(how)Groupdiscussion:Howwouldthestorydevelopinthenextpara?

Groupdiscussion:Howwouldthestorydevelopinthepara1?

Q1.HowdidJanefeel(disappointedorexpectingtomorrow?)?andWhatwouldJanedonext?(para1)(feeling&action)Q2.Whathappenedinthenight(environment)and

how

didJanefeel(despair,scared?missingherhusband?regretful)?

Q3.DidJanefallasleep?ifyes,howdidshefallasleep?(para2)While-writing

Nowyouhave10minutestowritethefirstparagraph.someusefulsentencestructures

1.hearing/seeing/feeling....,sb...;2.asenseof...floodinto/wellupwithin/creepupononesmind.3.toone’s+n,sbdid...4.outof+n.,Sbdid...5.adj.andadj,sbdid...6.so+adj.besbthat

polishbasedonthechecklistscontentcheck(內(nèi)容方面）1.DoesheorshedescribeJane’sactionandfeelinginthatnight?2.Istherealinkwiththefirstsentenceofthisandnextparagraph?languagecheck(語(yǔ)言方面)1.Doesheuse

variouswords,phrasesandsentencestructure?2.Doesheusecorrectspelling,punctuation(大寫)andgramma?reference

Upsetanddisappointed,sheputonheryellowblouse.

Notknowingwheretospendthenight,Janethen,pacedbackandforthintheforest,hopingtofindashelter.Eventually,acavecameintohersight.Shewalkedinwithoutgivingasecondthought.

However,thelowyetcleardrippingwaterandoccasionalroaringofunknownanimalsforcedhertocurlupandheldherlegswithcrossedarms.Shebegan