雅思流程圖寫作技巧心得

Theillustrationsbelowshowhowchocolateisproduced.Summarisetheinformaitonbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures.川rlEJjNdne&iiAcnhFeriqicntcd叩看痛再如力的diyt-ak^nfactorytnn^xxirdbycr^inorloriybcanjcrushedOuterSheSJiein<ri?d【高分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】川rlEJjNdne&iiAcnhFeriqicntcd叩看痛再如力的diyt-ak^nfactorytnn^xxirdbycr^inorloriybcanjcrushedOuterSheSJiein<ri?d【高分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】Thediagramshowsthestagesintheprocessofmakingchocolate.【所有的小作文第一句話都要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。流程圖必備三個(gè)詞：process：整個(gè)過程,stage：階段，step：步驟】Chocolatecomesfromthecacaotree,whichisgrowninpartsofSouthAmerica,AfricaandIndonesia【開頭不能沖上來就直接介紹cacaotree，而是通過主題詞chocolate引出，否則顯得太唐突】【流程圖特點(diǎn)之一:介紹過程要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)】【流程圖特點(diǎn)之二:大量使用定語從句，將有關(guān)聯(lián)的兩句話連接。】【流程圖特點(diǎn)之三:大量使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)】Thetreeproduceslargeredpodswhichcontainwhitecocoabeans.Firstly,【流程圖特點(diǎn)之四：使用一些表示順序的連接詞】whenthepodsareripe,theyareharvested,thebeansareremovedandtheyarefermentedforseveraldaysinlargewoodenboxes.【三個(gè)句子的并列："句子A，句子Band句子C”?！緿uringthefermentingprocess,thebeansturnbrown.【流程圖特點(diǎn)之五：要適當(dāng)?shù)靥砑觽€(gè)別圖中沒有交代但能從圖片中直接讀出來的的一些內(nèi)容，否則可能達(dá)不到字?jǐn)?shù)要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千萬不要加上自己的主觀觀點(diǎn)，否則會(huì)扣分】Next,thebrownbeansarespreadinthesuntodry.Theyarethenputinlargesacksandtransportedbytrainorlorry.Afterthis,thebeansaretakentoachocolatefactorywheretheyareroastedinanovenattemperaturesofbetween250and350degreeCelsius.Afterbeingroasted,thebeansarecrushedandtheoutershellisremoved.Thispartisnotneededformakingchocolate.Finally,theinnerpartofthebeanispressedandliquidchocolateisproduced.【流程圖特點(diǎn)之六：一般不需要寫總結(jié)】最后再總結(jié)一下流程圖的特點(diǎn)：特點(diǎn)一：現(xiàn)在時(shí)

特點(diǎn)二：定語從句

特點(diǎn)三：被動(dòng)語態(tài)

特點(diǎn)四：順序詞

特點(diǎn)五：適當(dāng)添加特點(diǎn)六：無總結(jié)雅思流程圖范文《磚塊的制作》（含9分范文及考官點(diǎn)評(píng)）WRITINGTASK1Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Thediagrambelowshowstheprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustry.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Writeatleast150words.

BrickmanufacturingdryingovenBrickmanufacturingdryingovenpackaging*Clay:typeofstickyearththatisusedformakingbricks,pots,etc.【滿分范文】Theprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustrycanbeoutlinedinsevenconsecutivesteps.Firsttherawmaterial,clay,whichwasjustbelowthesurfaceofsoilincertainclay-richareashastobedugupbyadigger.Thenthelumpsofclayareplacedonametalgridinordertobreakupthebigchunksofclayintomuchsmallerareas,whichfallthroughthemetalgridontoaroller,whosemotionfurthersegregatesthebitsofclay.Sandandwaterareaddedtomakeahomogenousmixture,whichistheneitherformedinmouldsorcutintobrick-shapedpiecesbymeansofawirecutter.Thosefreshbricksarethenkeptinadryingovenforatleast24andamaximumof48hours,severaldozensifnothundredsofbricksatatime.Thedriedbricksarethentransferredtoaso-calledkiln,anothertypeofhightemperatureoven.Firsttheyarekeptatamoderatetemperatureof200℃-1300℃.Thisprocessisfollowedbycoolingdownthefinishedbricksfor48to72hoursinacoolingchamber.Oncethebrickshavecooleddownandhavebecomehard,theygetpackagedanddeliveredtotheirfinaldestination,beitabuildingsiteorstorage.(215words)【考官評(píng)語】Band9Thisresponsefullysatisfiestherequirementsofthetask.Allkeyfeaturesofeachstageoftheprocessareappropriatelyandaccuratelypresented.Anexcellentoverviewisgivenatthebeginningoftheresponseandthisskilfullyincorporatespartoftherubric,changingthegrammaticalfunction,togiveabriefsummaryofthewholeprocess.Themessageisveryeasytoread,withseamlesscohesionthatattractsnoattention.Paragraphing,linkingandreferencingareallskilfullymanaged.Thelanguageusedisveryfluentandsophisticated.Awiderangeofvocabularyandstructuresareusedwithfullflexibilityandaccuracy.Onlyrareminor/slips,canbefoundandthesedonotdetractfromthehighrating.雅思寫作劍橋范文解析流程圖下面是劍橋6的test3考到的流程圖，考官給的范文。范文中有兩步考官直接就寫成一步，本來是3-8天和16天兩個(gè)時(shí)間段，縮成了3個(gè)星期，大家寫的時(shí)候可以分別寫，不用寫這么精練?？脊俜段模篢hefirstdiagramshowsthattherearefourmainstagesinthelifeofthesilkworm.第一個(gè)圖顯示了，在蠶的生命過程中主要有四步。Firstofall,eggsareproducedbythemothandittakestendaysforeacheggtobecomeasilkwormlarvathatfeedsonmulberryleaves.首先，蛾子產(chǎn)出卵，每個(gè)卵用10天的時(shí)間變成蠶的幼蟲，他們以桑葉為食。Thisstagelastsforuptosixweeksuntilthelarvaproducesacocoonofsilkthreadarounditself.這個(gè)階段持續(xù)最多到六個(gè)星期，直到幼蟲周圍生產(chǎn)出繭(silkthread).Afteraperiodofaboutthreeweeks,theadultmothseventuallyemergefromthesecocoonsandthelifecyclebeginsagain.經(jīng)過三個(gè)星期的一段時(shí)間之后，成年的蛾子最終從繭里面出來，這個(gè)生命的循環(huán)就再一次開始了。Thecocoonsaretherawmaterialusedfortheproductionofsilkcloth.繭是生產(chǎn)絲綢的原材料。Onceselected,theyareboiledinwaterandthethreadcanbeseparatedintheunwindingstage.一旦被挑選出來，他們?cè)谒镏蠓?，絲可以在打開的階段中被分離出來。Eachthreadisbetween300and900metreslong,whichmeanstheycanbetwistedtogether,dyedandthenusedtoproduceclothintheweavingstage.每條絲是300到900米長，這就意味著，他們能夠被纏繞在一起，染色，然后在織布階段被用于生產(chǎn)布品。Overall,thediagramsshowthatthecocoonstageofthesilkwormcanbeusedtoproducesilkcloththroughaverysimpleprocess.范文總結(jié)：163個(gè)字。使用了很多合適的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，見陰影部分。主要是簡單的并列句。句型，搭配了一些被動(dòng)語態(tài)。動(dòng)詞使用豐富：produce, feedon,last,emerge,select,boil,separate,unwind,twist（多數(shù)原詞帶入）名詞比較專業(yè)：lifecycle,rawmaterial.表述時(shí)間：in10days,duringtheperiodof10days,Theprocesslastsforupto10days.after10days,10dayspassedutillsomethinghappened.表示然后：then,next,inthenextstate,followingthat,afterthat,thenextstepinthestageis 表示過程：process,procedure,formation,development表示步驟：step,stage,phase方法：l找到流程圖的過程，起點(diǎn)，終點(diǎn)。l 找到圖上標(biāo)出的已知?jiǎng)幼?，如果出現(xiàn)生詞，盡量猜測。無詞，用自己語言。l 按照步驟，分段描述，千萬不能省略任何一步。l切記！加入流暢合理的表示順序的關(guān)聯(lián)詞。l句型以主動(dòng)為主，搭配被動(dòng)，以及主語從句(例如：Itcanbeseenfromthegraphthat...)l 時(shí)態(tài)要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)補(bǔ)充的表達(dá)方式流程圖常用詞匯：時(shí)間階段：afteraperiodof..months/days/minutes,during.順序連詞： first,firstofall,inthefirststage,initially,tobeginwithSecond,then,next,alsoAfterthat,atthesametime,inthemeantime,meanwhilePriorto,untilthefirststageinvolves…/inthesecondstage/inthethirdstage/inthelaststage//Thenextstepinthestageisthat....目的連詞：inorderto/inorderthat;soasto/sothat常見動(dòng)詞：Produce生產(chǎn)，lay放置，put,accumulate積累gather/collect/收集obtain獲得,Heatup加熱expand膨脹bend彎曲turnoff關(guān)閉cooldown冷去口disconnect斷開連接spin旋轉(zhuǎn),紡,strike打擊,Compress壓縮”release釋放,move,flow流動(dòng),accelerate加□諫,form形成,Press按壓,adjust調(diào)整,absorb吸收,，process加口工,Rotate旋轉(zhuǎn),chop坎,grind磨（碎）,碾（碎）,Light點(diǎn)燃,burn燃燒,ignite點(diǎn)燃,Reflect反光，turn轉(zhuǎn),starts開女臺(tái)stops結(jié)束records錄音turnsup調(diào)高turnsdown調(diào)低，winds纏繞unwinds解開revolves旋轉(zhuǎn)（$。m,rotate）fold折迭unfold打開reverse顛倒，倒轉(zhuǎn)Adapt適應(yīng)adjust調(diào)整alter改變cure治愈disappear消失dissolve溶化，解散exchange交換expand擴(kuò)張,膨脹fade退色】increase士增長promote促.講,升職reduce減少renew使更新,使，恢復(fù)renovate革新,更新/修復(fù)replace取代swell腫脹switch改變transform.:完全改變vary改變swap:交換shrink收縮,melt溶解heal治愈，cure治愈form/comeintobeing/takeshape形成produce生產(chǎn)/gain/get/acquire獲取evaporate蒸發(fā)/volatilize揮發(fā)draw提取/recycle回收/extract拔/absorb吸收/collect/收集meet相遇/bemadeupof/由。。。組成bemadeof由。。。制成/bemadefrom由。。。制成/feedon以。。。為食/dependon/relyon依賴/release/sendout釋放/sort分類/separate分開conveyed運(yùn)送cutinto切成pouredinto倒入pouredinto倒入aheated力口熱meltedinto融化成flowsinto流入雅思圖表作文官方6分范文在雅思考生中，普遍存在一種觀點(diǎn)，認(rèn)為小作文只占1/3的比重，而大作文占了2/3,所以在復(fù)習(xí)的時(shí)候應(yīng)該以大作文為重，考試的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該先寫大作文，而后再寫小作文。但是在對(duì)考生實(shí)際考分的觀察中我發(fā)現(xiàn)，往往小作文寫得好的同學(xué)，作文的總分相對(duì)較高。我當(dāng)時(shí)考雅思，小作文是一副工廠重建的圖表題，有些考生直接就棄考了。但是，我還是堅(jiān)持按照邏輯慢慢寫好，結(jié)果可能就是小作文的優(yōu)勢給我?guī)?分當(dāng)時(shí)。這是什么原因呢？因?yàn)榇笞魑脑诙虝r(shí)間內(nèi)提高有限，而小作文卻因套路很多，句式有限，在短時(shí)間內(nèi)只要認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，就不難提高。所以要特別提醒，尤其是時(shí)間非常倉促的考生，千萬不要忽視了小作文的學(xué)習(xí)！以下提供的是一份6分的曲線圖作文范文，后附考官的評(píng)語?？梢詫?duì)照自己的文章，看下是否達(dá)到了6分的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)？也歡迎大家挑戰(zhàn)這位6分考生，提供自己的7分、8分甚至是9分的作文。你可以將你的大作寫好給我，我將提供參考的打分。WRITINGTASK1Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.ThegraphbelowgivesinformationaboutcinemaattendanceinAustraliabetween1990andthepresent,withprojectionsto2010.Cinemaattendancebyagegroupoooooooooo0987654321oooooooooo098765432110901992199419961998200020022004200620082010Year^^14^24/earolds---25-34yearolds1 35-49yearoldsT?504yearolds【考生樣文】ThegraphshowspercentagesofcinemaattendanceatleastonceayearinAustraliabetween1990to2010withprojectionsforthefuture.Thegraphisdescribedby4groupsofdifferentageswhichare14to24,25to34,35to49andover50yearolds.Theyoungestagegrouppeoplehavebeengoingtocinemamorethananyotheragegroupsandthepercentagehasbeenkeepingveryhighatapproximately90%since1990.Itispredictedtokeepthehighandtoincreasemorefrom2006.Themiddleagegroupspeoplehaveenjoyedgoingcinemabetween60%to80%.Thepercentageofage25to34grouphasbeenhigherthantheoneofage35to49groupbutfrom2006thepercentageof25to34yearoldspeoplewilldecreasewhiletheoneof35to49yearoldspeoplewillincreaseandgethigherthantheotherone.Theoldestpeopleseemtogocinemalessthantheothergroupsbutthepercentageoftheattendancehasslightlygoingupby15%from40%to55%between1990to