英文記敘文寫作模板

英文記敘文寫作模板第一部分記敘文題型作文寫作步驟要求考生寫一篇記敘文，描述事件發(fā)生的時間、地點、原因、人物及結(jié)果，最后對事件進行簡單分析，如：2003年6月四級作文、2003年9月四級作文、2004年6月六級作文。對這類題型，通常分為三個步驟來寫：第一段、總結(jié)描述交代清楚故事涉及的人物、時間、地點：主題句第二段、具體描述具體描述事件發(fā)生的原因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果：起因+經(jīng)過+結(jié)果第三段、對事件的分析分析句1+分析句2+分析3第二部分、記敘文題型寫作練習［實戰(zhàn)演練］directions:forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicthedaymyclassmatefellill.1、簡單描述一下這位同學生病的情況；2、同學、老師和我是如何幫助他的；3、人和人之間的這種相互關愛給我的感受是....［寫作模板：架構(gòu)階段］第一段：開篇句：abouto'clockoneeveningin,.擴展句：.（展開描述一下事件）第二段：主題句：withouthesitation,.itwasn'tlongbefore.擴展句：1、one.2、another.3、ourteacher.第三段：結(jié)尾句：is?whocantell?but.擴展句：1、when,peopleshowedspiritregardlessof.2、thiskindofcarebetweenpersonsistheverykindgiving,unselfishandpricelessdevotionorsacrifice.3、anditisjustbecauseofthiscarethatwecanhavewarmfamilies,ahappylifeandabeautifulworld.［寫作模板：填充階段］第一段：開篇句：aboutnineo'clockoneeveninginmay,myroommatelimingwaslyinginbed,tremblingwithcoldandhavingacough.擴展句：hisheadwasachingsointenselythathekeptgroaning.hisforeheadfeltveryhot.wetookhistemperature.itwas38.5°C.第二段：主題句：withouthesitation,idialed"120".itwasn'tlongbeforeanambulancearrived.擴展句：1、oneroommatebroughtablanketforhim.2、anothersupportedhimintheambulance.3、ourteacherinsistedongivinghimsomemoney.第三段：結(jié)尾句：isheasuspedtedsarspatient?whocantell?butwedid'tretreat.擴展句：1、whenthesavagesarswasspreading,peopleshowedfearlessspiritregardlessofdangerstotheirownhealth.2、thiskindofcarebetweenpersonsistheverykindgiving,unselfishandpricelessdevotionorsacrifice.3、anditisjustbecauseofthiscarethatwecanhavewarmfamilies,ahappylifeandabeautifulworld.第三部分、范文aboutnineo'clockoneeveninginmay,myroommatelimingwaslyinginbed,tremblingwithcoldandhavingacough.hisheadwasachingsointenselythathekeptgroaning.hisforeheadfeltveryhot.wetookhistemperature.itwas38.5°C.withouthesitation,idialed"120".itwasn'tlongbeforeanambulancearrived.oneroommatebroughtablanketforhim.anothersupportedhimintheambulance.ourteacherinsistedongivinghimsomemoney.isheasuspedtedsarspatient?whocantell?butwedid'tretreat.whenthesavagesarswasspreading,peopleshowedfearlessspiritregardlessofdangerstotheirownhealth.thiskindofcarebetweenpersonsistheverykindgiving,unselfishandpricelessdevotionorsacrifice.anditisjustbecauseofthiscarethatwecanhavewarmfamilies,ahappylifeandabeautifulworld.Unit14寫作練習【習作一】【寫作任務】生活中一定有你難以忘記的人，作為初中即將畢業(yè)的你，肯定有某個老師在你的心目中記憶猶新，你將永遠不會忘記他/她.請以“TheTeacherIWillNeverForget”為題，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，寫一篇不少于90詞的英語短文。【寫作指導】定基調(diào)體裁：記敘文時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主人稱：第一人稱和第三人稱列提綱、寫句子列提綱寫句子開篇點題TheteacherIwillneverforgetisMs.Qian,myjuniorhighschoolEnglishteacher.具體闡述介紹人物年齡Mr.Wangis38yearsold.外貌⑴（錢老師中等身材，留著長發(fā)）.喜好(2)(錢老師喜歡運動)andsheisgoodatplayingbasketball.性格⑶（錢老師非常有耐心，從不生我們的氣）.典型事例Istillremember(一天上午當我正在抄同桌的數(shù)學作業(yè)時),Ms.Qiancameintotheclassroom.IwassoafraidthatIdidn’tknowwhattodoatthattime.Tomysurprise,Ms.Wangwasn’tangrywithme.Instead,Ms.Qiantoldmecopyinghomeworkwasn’tgoodformeandthen(她說如果我需要幫助的話，她可以幫助我).Iwassomovedthat(我決定再也不抄他人的作業(yè)了）.Fromthenon,Ididmyhomeworkbymyself.（7）（并且在錢老師的幫助下，我在英語上取得了很大的進步）.結(jié)束語IwillneverforgetMs.Qian.IhopeMsQianwillbehappyandhealthyinthefuture.3.巧銜接本文中體現(xiàn)了語義搭配這一通過詞匯紐帶來使上下文緊密連貫的銜接方式。如本文中的...yearsold,ofmediumbuild,has...hair,likes,isgoodat,patient,isneverangrywith,stillremember,willneverforget這些表達都與描寫人物相關聯(lián)，從而使文章成為一個有機統(tǒng)一體。4.成篇章TheteacherIwillneverforget答案2.列提綱、寫句子Ms.QianisofmediumbuildandhaslonghairMsQianlikes/loves(playing)sportsMsQianisverypatientandisneverangrywithusonemorningwhileIwascopyingmydeskmate’smathhomeworkshesaidshecouldhelpmeifIneededhelpIdecidednottocopyanyone’shomeworkanymoreAndwithMsQian’shelp,Imadegreat/muchprogressinEnglish4.成篇章【高分范文】TheteacherIwillneverforgetTheteacherIwillneverforgetisMsQian,myjuniorhighschoolEnglishteacher.Ms.Qianis38yearsold.Sheisofmediumbuildandhaslonghair.Shelikessportsandsheisgoodatplayingbasketball.Sheisverypatientandisneverangrywithus.IstillrememberonemorningwhileIwascopyingmydeskmate'sEnglishhomework,Ms.Qiancameintotheclassroom.IwassoafraidthatIdidn'tknowwhattodoatthattime.Tomysurprise,shewasn'tangrywithme.Instead,shetoldmecopyinghomeworkwasn'tgoodformeandthenshesaidhecouldhelpmeifIneededhelp.IwassomovedthatIdecidednottocopyanyone'shomeworkanymore.Fromthenon,Ididmyhomeworkbymyself.Andwithherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.IthinkMs.QianistheteacherIwillneverforget.Iwillneverforgether.Ihopeshewillbehappyandhealthyinthefuture.【寫作練習二】假如你是李華，你的初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，三年的初中生活給你留下了很多美好的回憶。請給你的英國筆友Susan寫一封電子郵件，給她講一件發(fā)生在你和同學之間的難忘的事情。要求：詞數(shù)100左右，注意電子郵件的格式。DearSusan,Howisitgoingthesedays?Ihavesomanymemoriesofmythreeyearsatjuniorhighschool.Oneofthemimpressesmeverymuch.Istillrememberlastyearwhenanewstudentcametoourclass.HisnameisLiuKun.HewasveryweakinEnglish.Hebecamelessinterestedinitandalmostgaveup.AssoonasIfoundhehadaproblem,IhadatalkwithhimabouthowtolearnEnglish.Sincethen,I’vekepthelpinghimandwithmyhelp,hisEnglishlevelhasbeenimprovinglittlebylittle.Hewasveryhappyandthankfultome.Fromthis,Ilearnedweshouldtrytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Ifsreallyagoodthingtohelpothers.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua重點短語1.連續(xù)幾次地inarow2.彈琴playthekeyboards.暫停跑步takeabreakfromrunning對有耐心bepatientwith5.算出；解決workout6.無論多難nomatterhowdifficult7.投入；花費putin8.按時ontime9.交一些新朋友makesomenewfriends10.為做準備prepareforll.弄得一團糟makeamess12.玩得開心havefun13.沉住氣；保持冷靜keepone’scool14.高中seniorhighschool15.取得很糟糕的成績getpoorgrades16.在某方面有困難haveproblemswithsth.17.流逝goby18.在年底attheendoftheyear19.取得商業(yè)學位getabusinessdegree20.信任；信賴；相信believein21.接受邀請accepttheinvitation22.參加畢業(yè)典禮attendthegraduationceremony23.首先firstofal24.充滿befullof25.渴望；渴求bethirstyfor26.處理；對付dealwith27.長大growup28.為而驕傲/自豪beproudof29.沒有一個noneof30.的末尾/盡頭theendof31.的開始thebeginningof在前面；領先；比更先進aheadof犯錯誤makemistakes34.向?qū)W習learnfrom35.放棄giveup36.伴隨著困難alongwithdifficulties37.等待某人waitfor38.做出自己的選擇makeyourownchoices39.為負責beresponsiblefor40.分道揚鐮goyourseparateways41.啟程；出發(fā)；動身setout42.與分離se