2020高考英語課件(山東專用)：專題十-概要寫作

專題十概要寫作高考英語

(山東專用)專題十概要寫作高考英語(山東專用)1Writing1(2019浙江6月)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.JennBerman,authorofThe

A

to

Z

Guide

to

Raising

Happy

and

Confident

Kids,says,“We'vegonetotheoppositeextremeofafewdecadesagowhenpar-

entstendedtobemorestrict.”Bygivingkidsalotofpraise,parentsthinkthey'rebuildingtheir

children'sconfidence,when,infact,itmaybejusttheopposite.Toomuchpraisecanbackfire

and,whengiveninawaythat'sinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthingsortakeariskforfear

ofnotbeingabletostayontopwheretheirparents'praisehasputthem.Still,don'tgotoofarintheotherdirection.Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingas

givingtoomuch.Kidswillfeellikethey'renotgoodenoughorthatyoudon'tcareand,asaresult,

mayseenopointintryinghardfortheiraccomplishments.五年高考五年高考2Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthan

thequantity.Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoften

asyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesaverbalreward.“Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeour

children'seffortstopushthemselvesandworkhardtoachieveagoal,”saysDonahue,authorof

Parenting

Without

Fear:Letting

Go

of

Worry

and

Focusing

on

What

Really

Matters.“Onething

torememberisthatit'stheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters.”Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.Butifhe'soutthereeverydayand

playinghard,youshouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.Praisingthe

effortandnottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardto

cleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.Butwhateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenona

case-by-casebasisandbeproportionate(相稱的)totheamountofeffortyourchildhasputintoit.

Sowhatistherightamountof3答案[寫作提示]1.本文是一篇議論文。文章論述了如何有效表揚(yáng)孩子的問題。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,論點(diǎn)明確。2.文章第一段指出過度的表揚(yáng)不利于孩子的成長。第二段認(rèn)為不表揚(yáng)孩子也不好。第三段指

出了表揚(yáng)的核心:要關(guān)注過程而非結(jié)果。最后一段指出,我們要表揚(yáng)孩子的努力,不必太過關(guān)注

結(jié)果。3.針對(duì)此類文章最好在概要中加入主旨句,先對(duì)文章的總體內(nèi)容給予介紹。Onepossibleversion:Howtopraiseourkidsisreallyasensitiveproblem.(主旨)Expertsbelievethattoomuchpraiseor

praisingthekidsinawrongwaymayhaveoppositeeffectsonchildren.(要點(diǎn)1)Ontheotherhand,

nopraisealsodoesharmtokids'development.(要點(diǎn)2)Togainthebestresult,ourpraiseshould

focusontheprocessratherthantheendproduct.(要點(diǎn)3)Therefore,whatweshouldpraiseisour

kids'propereffort,regardlessoftheresult.(要點(diǎn)4)答案4精彩語句

1.精美詞匯sensitiveadj.敏感的focuson集中于regardlessof不管2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu)①Howtopraiseourkidsisreallyasensitiveproblem.(“特殊疑問詞+動(dòng)詞不定式”結(jié)構(gòu)作主

語)②Therefore,whatweshouldpraiseisourkids'propereffort,regardlessoftheresult.(what引導(dǎo)主

語從句)精彩語句

5Writing2(2018浙江11月)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。It'sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolook

andsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacol-

legecampus(校園)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequip-

mentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovis-

itcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemore

thanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsof

yourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.There'snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplications

evenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon'tbeas

muchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsaren'tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsome

timebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou'dliketoattend.Writing2(2018浙江11月)6Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudon'tlikeaboutcertain

campuses,thingsthatyouwouldn'tknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCol-

legeWeekLive.It'sachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecoun-

selors(顧問),anditwon'tcostyouapenny!Youcanregisterforitsonlinecollegefairatcollege-

.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircan'ttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,

itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformed

decisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyou'dliketoattend.

Itcansaveyoualotofheart7答案[寫作提示]本文是說明文。文章結(jié)構(gòu)比較清楚,段落之間的邏輯關(guān)系也很緊密。文章第一段開門見山,提出觀點(diǎn):在你上大學(xué)之前,要去親眼看看目標(biāo)的大學(xué)。第二段特別指出對(duì)附近的大學(xué)一定要去看看。第三段的內(nèi)容是,如果你在申請(qǐng)之前沒有去過,在申請(qǐng)之后,或得到offer之前,一定要去看看,免

得將來后悔。第四段的主要內(nèi)容是如果無法去親自參觀的話,可以登錄網(wǎng)站了解相關(guān)的信息,并提供了網(wǎng)站

的信息。Onepossibleversion:Itisawisechoiceforyoutopayapersonalvisittothecollegeyouareapplyingto,especiallythe

onesthatareclosetoyou.(要點(diǎn)1)Inordertoavoidbeingregretful,youshouldatleastvisitthecol-

legeyoudecidedtoattend.(要點(diǎn)2)Ifalltheaboveisnotaffordable,itwillbehelpfultosearchthe

onlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLivewhereyoucangetthenecessaryinformation.(要點(diǎn)3)答案8高級(jí)語塊1.especially[??spe??li]adv.特別;尤其2.affordable[??f??d?bl]adj.支付得起的3.onlinecollegefair網(wǎng)上大學(xué)博覽會(huì)高級(jí)語塊9A組

2017—2019年高考模擬·考點(diǎn)基礎(chǔ)題組Writing1(2019浙江杭州高三一模)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Sometimes,wewishwecouldstoptheclockandgobackintime.Well,twiceayear,countriesin

theEuropeanUnion(EU)andmoststatesintheUnitedStatesactually“changethetime”them-

selves.Eachspring,theyputtheirclocksforwardanhourandinthefall,clocksareturnedanhour

back.Thisisknownasdaylightsavingtime(DST).ThepracticefirstbecamewidespreadduringWorldWarOne.Atthattime,artificiallightingwas

expensiveandhavinganextrahourofdaylightwasbelievedtohelpreducethecostofrunning

suchlighting.However,aboutacenturylater,thisoldpracticemaybecomeathingofthepast.StartinginOctober2019,theEUwillendthepracticeofDST,reportedBloomberg.Thedecision

cameafterasurveypublishedbytheEuropeanCommissioninAugustshowedthatabout85per-

centofthe4.6millionEUcitizenswantedtoendDST.It'sbelievedthatDST'soriginalfunction三年模擬三年模擬10ofsavingenergyisnowuseless.“Newerstudiesshowthattheenergysavingsnowadaysare

marginal(不重要的),”EuropeanCommissionVice-PresidentMarosSefcovictoldtheReuters.

Weareclearlyheadingtowardsmartcities,smartbuildingsandsmartsolutions,whichwillbring

muchmoresavingsthanchangesoftheclock.Meanwhile,itwasfoundthatDSTcouldactuallyhavebadinfluencesonpeople'shealth.Polish

lawmakerBronislawKarasektoldThe

Washington

PostthatDSTcouldcause“imbalanceinthe

bodyclock,leadingtomoodchanges,troublewithsleeping,andanincreasedriskofheartat-

tacks”.“Ourbodieschangeradicallyoverthecourseofadaybasedonhowmuchlightwesee

andhowmuchsleepweget.Evenanhour'sshiftinresttimeanddaylighthoursscrewseverything

upslightly,”accordingtoPopular

Science.However,DSTisn'tcompletelywithoutitsbenefits.AccordingtoThe

New

York

Times,withDST,

peoplecouldhaveanextrahourofactivitiesoutdoorsduringthespringandsummer.WhileDST

willcometoanendintheEUin2019,itisn'tgoingtodisappearforgood,asmanycountrieswill

keepitinuse.ofsavingenergyisnowuseles11

12答案[寫作提示]文章介紹了歐盟取消夏令時(shí)的前前后后。文章共分5個(gè)自然段,劃分的意群比較細(xì)致。在進(jìn)行

概要寫作時(shí),可以根據(jù)文章的邏輯進(jìn)行整合,不過要注意句子之間的邏輯銜接。Onepossibleversion:TheEUisplanningtoputanendtodaylightsavingtime.(要點(diǎn)1)Asameansofdecreasing

lightingcosts,daylightsavingtimebecamepopularinWorldWarOneandisbeingperformedin

manyplaces.(要點(diǎn)2)Butnowtherearebetterwaystosaveenergy.(要點(diǎn)3)Besides,it'ssaidthatit

maybeharmfultohealth.(要點(diǎn)4)Nevertheless,itwillcontinuetoexistinotherplacesasitdoes

providesomebenefits.(要點(diǎn)5)高級(jí)語塊1.putanendto結(jié)束;終止2.decrease[d??kri?s]v.減少;減小;降低3.saveenergy節(jié)能4.nevertheless[?nev?e??les]adv.盡管如此答案13Writing2(2019浙江金麗衢十二校高三第二次聯(lián)考)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Technologyisforeverchangingthewaywegetournews.Manypeoplenowgetalotoftheirnews

onelectronicdevices,insteadoftraditionalmedia,suchasnewspapers,televisionorradio.Anin-

creasingnumberofpeoplealsoreportturningtosocialmediaforinformation.Now,thereisanewtechnologythatcouldgreatlychangethewaywegetthenews:computer-cre-

atednewsreaders.Recently,Chinalaunchedwhatiscalledtheworld'sfirstartificialintelligence,

orAI,newspresenters.Thenewsreaders,supportedbymachinelearningtechnology,arebasedontworeal-lifeChinese

newsmen.OneisabletopresentnewscastsinEnglish;theother,inMandarinChinese.Reportsaid

machinelearningwasusedtoexaminevideoimagesandsoundsofthetwonewsmen.Similar

technologyhasbeenusedtocreatevideoproductsknownas“deepfakevideos.”Adeepfakeisa

videothatlooksreal,butwaselectronicallychanged.Suchvideoscanmakepeopleappeartosay

thingstheyneversaid.Writing2(2019浙江金麗衢十二校高三第二次聯(lián)考14It'ssaidthattheAIpresenterswillbeagreatimprovementtothenewsteambecausethey“can

work24hoursaday”onitswebsiteandonsocialmedia.Oneofthepresentersevenpromisedto

“worktirelessly”tokeeppeopleinformed.Somemachinelearningexpertssaidthesystem

showedoffChina'slatestprogressinvoicerecognition,text-to-speechtechnologyanddataanaly-

sis.Otherswonderedabouttheeffectsrobotsmighthaveonemploymentandworkers.Somepeople

arguedthatonlylow-leveljobsrequiringheavylaborwillbeeasilyreplacedbyrobots.Others

praisedthetechnologyasawayforcompaniestomakemoneyfromlow-costlabormachines.

Somebusinesseshaveexperimentedwithsimilartechnologyforpossibleuseinnewsoperations.Britain'sBBCrecentlyreleasedavideothatusedmachinelearningtomakeitlooklikeoneofits

newsreadersspeakingdifferentlanguages.TheLondon-basedcompanythatdevelopedthesystem

saysitsgoalisto“removethelanguagebarrier”formanydifferentkindsofvideosontheInter-

net.Also,Amazon'sworkingonAlexasmartspeakersystemtocreateaspecialnewsreadervoice.

AmazonisreportedlypreparingtolaunchAlexa'snewsreadervoiceinthenearfuture.It'ssaidthattheAIpresente15

16答案[寫作提示]文章介紹了中國開創(chuàng)的一種新的技術(shù):AI播音技術(shù)。文章共分6個(gè)自然段。進(jìn)行概要寫作時(shí),

一定要把握好每一段的核心,然后進(jìn)行有機(jī)整合。要注意語言的提煉和構(gòu)思。Onepossibleversion:Technologyhasbeenupdatingoursourceofinformation.(要點(diǎn)1)Now,anothertechnology,so

-calledAInewsreader,hasbecomeahit.(要點(diǎn)2)Thisnewinventionusesthevoiceoftwogreat

Chinesenewsmen,broadcastingbothinEnglishandChinese.(要點(diǎn)3)Oneadvantageofthema-

chineisthatitcanworknon-stop.(要點(diǎn)4)Manycompanies,includingBBCandAmazon,aretry-

ingtoproducebetterlearningmachines.(要點(diǎn)5)高級(jí)語塊1.update[??p?de?t]v.更新;升級(jí)2.so-calledadj.號(hào)稱的;所謂的3.non-stopadv.不間斷地,連續(xù)地精彩語句原句:Oneadvantageofthemachineisthatitcanworknon-stop.分析:本句話的主干是Oneadvantage...isthat...,that引導(dǎo)表語從句。譯文:這種機(jī)器的一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)是它能不間斷地工作。答案17Writing3(2019浙江麗水、衢州、湖州高三質(zhì)檢)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。In1971,China'sfirstsubwaylineinBeijingwasformallyputintooperation.ByDecember2017,

therewere171subwaylinesstretchingover5,083kmin35citiesontheChinesemainland.Cur-

rently,Chinahasthelongesturbanrailwaynetworkintheworld,whichispredictedtosurpass6,0

00kmby2020.TherapiddevelopmentofChina'surbanrailwaysystemreflectsthecountry'sgrowingeconomic

strength.Thesystemhasexperiencedthefastestgrowthoverthepast15yearsduetotheinvest-

mentofwealthaccumulatedfromthereformandopeningupinurbaninfrastructureconstruction.

Anurbanrailwaysystemisexpensivetobuild,withonekilometerofsubwaycostingapproximate-

ly700millionyuan($110million).Acitywithouteconomicstrengthcannotdevelopsuchanex-

pensivesystem.Theprogressinurbanrailwayconstructiontechnologieshasalsocontributedtothefastexpansion

oftheinfrastructure.Subwayconstructioninvolvesbuildingundergroundtunnels,layingrails,Writing3(2019浙江麗水、衢州、湖州高三質(zhì)檢)18manufacturingtrainsandtheoperationandmanagementofsubways.Itisasystematicproject

whichnotonlycoverstraditionalinfrastructurebuildingbutalsomodernelectronicsandinforma-

tiontechnology.China'srailwayconstructiontechnologiesarethebestintheworld,withChinese

subwaytrainsnowexportedtodevelopedcountriesincludingtheUnitedStates.TheexpansionofChinesecitieshasmadeitnecessarytodevelopurbanrailwaysystems.Sincethe

startofthereformandopeningup,alargenumberofpeoplehavemigratedtocitiesandthenum-

berofprivatecarshasincreaseddramatically,resultinginserioustrafficcongestion.Building

subwayshasbecomeanimportantwaytosolvethisproblem.Thisyearmarksthe40thanniversaryofthelaunchofChina'sreformandopeningup,andthe

rapiddevelopmentofChina'surbanrailwaysystemexemplifiestheachievementsmadebythe

policy.AsChinafurthersitsopeningup,itwillcontinuetomaintainsteadyandrapideconomic

growthandrailwaysystemswillbeavailableinmoreandmorecities.

manufacturingtrainsandtheo19答案[寫作提示]文章體裁為說明文。介紹了中國改革開放40年來城市地鐵的飛速發(fā)展。文章共分5個(gè)自然段,

思路清晰,主題鮮明。進(jìn)行概要寫作時(shí),可以根據(jù)需要將文章段落大意重新整合,并注意復(fù)雜句

子和高級(jí)表達(dá)的使用。Onepossibleversion:ThepastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthefastdevelopmentofChineseurbanrailwaysbothinnum-

berandlength,whichisareflectionofChina'sprosperouseconomy.(要點(diǎn)1)Actually,notonly

thegrowingconstructiontechnologiesbutalsotheexpansionofChinesecitieswithboomingpopu-

lationandheavytraffic,stimulatestheurbanrailwayconstruction.(要點(diǎn)2)Withthedeepeningof

thereformandopeninguppolicy,moreurbanrailwayswillcomeintouse.(要點(diǎn)3)高級(jí)語塊1.witness[?w?tn?s]v.見證2.urban[???b?n]adj.城市的;都市的3.reflection[r??

flek?n]n.反映4.prosperous[?pr?sp?r?s]adj.繁榮的5.expansion[?k?sp?n?n]n.擴(kuò)張6.stimulate[?st?mjule?t]vt.刺激答案20精彩語句原句:ThepastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthefastdevelopmentofChineseurbanrailwaysbothin

numberandlength,whichisareflectionofChina'sprosperouseconomy.分析:本句話的主干是Thepastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthefastdevelopment...。which引導(dǎo)非

限制性定語從句,先行詞為前面主句的賓語。譯文:幾十年來,我國城市地鐵在數(shù)量和長度上都得到了快速發(fā)展,這是我國經(jīng)濟(jì)繁榮的反映。精彩語句21Writing4(2019浙江臨安昌化中學(xué)高三上學(xué)期期末)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Noisyneighborsareacommonprobleminasocietywheremanypeoplelivecloselytogether.Ob-

viously,thisissuecanbemostsignificantwhenyousharewallsorafloor/ceilingwithaneighbor

inanapartment.Anoisyneighborcanmakelifechallenging,particularlyifnoisecontinueswell

intothenight,oroccursduringearlymorninghours.Thissituationneedstobedealtwithproperly,

whichrequiresyourabilitytokeepcalm.Youshouldfirstattempttotellyournoisyneighborsaboutthenoise.Thisconversationshouldbe

polite,evenfriendly.Itcanbeginwithastatementlike“I'mnotsureyou'reaware.”Explainthe

noiseissuebriefly,andasktheneighbortoturndownthemusic,ornottoholdpartiesuntil3a.m.

Youcanalsoaddthatyourealizetheyhearyournoisetoo,andyou'recertainlywillingtotryto

stopanythinginyourbehaviorthatiscreatingextranoise.Youshouldknowthatnotallneighborsaregoingtorespondtoyourrequest,andsomemayre-

spondinabadmanner.Ifthenoisyneighborsdon'tchangetheirbehavior,thenextstepshouldbeWriting4(2019浙江臨安昌化中學(xué)高三上學(xué)期期末22towritetheneighborsaletter.Thelettershouldstatethespecificgrievances(不滿)andanydates

whenthenoisewasparticularlybothersome.Forexample,ifyourneighborhasloudgatheringsev-

eryFridaynightthatlastintotheearlymorning,thenwritedownthosedates.Whenthenoiseremainsongoing,youshoulddefinitelyreportittolocalauthorities.Startwith

landlordsorHOASandcontinuewithcallstothepolicedepartment,whenabsolutelynecessary.

Often,however,theproblemisresolvedwhenthenoisyneighborsknowyouaregoingtocallthe

police.Dobeawarethatyoucannotalwaysrequestnoisyneighborstobequiet.Whenthenoiseremains

ongoing,itiswisenottorespondtonoiseinanangryorretaliatory(報(bào)復(fù)性的)fashion.Ifyouhave

followedthroughwiththestepsandletter,don'tstartbangingthingsaroundinyourhomeorturn-

ingupthemusictoannoytheneighbors.Simplyreporttheirbehaviortotheappropriateauthorities.

towritetheneighborsalette23答案[寫作提示]文章體裁為說明文。介紹了生活中常見的被吵鬧的鄰居打擾的現(xiàn)象,并給出了解決這個(gè)問題

的幾條建議。進(jìn)行概要寫作時(shí),可以根據(jù)建議的順序,有序展開。但是要注意概要的層次和邏

輯。Onepossibleversion:Beingdisturbedbynoisyneighborshappenscommonlyinourlife.(要點(diǎn)1)Todealwiththisprob-

lem,youneedtofollowthesesteps.(要點(diǎn)2)Firstofall,youareadvisedtohaveafriendlyconver-

sationwithyournoisyneighborsaboutthisissue.(要點(diǎn)3)Iftheydon'trespondorrespondinabad

manner,trywritingthemaletter,inwhichyoushoulddetailthenoiseandyourgrievances.(要點(diǎn)4)

Whenthesetwomethodsfail,justreporttheissuetorelevantauthorities,butdoremember:don't

returnlikeforlike.(要點(diǎn)5)高級(jí)語塊1.issue[???u?]n.問題2.inabadmanner態(tài)度惡劣3.detail[?di?te?l]v.詳述,詳細(xì)列舉4.grievance[?ɡri?v?ns]n.委屈答案24精彩語句原句:Iftheydon'trespondorrespondinabadmanner,trywritingthemaletter,inwhichyou

shoulddetailthenoiseandyourgrievances.分析:本句話的主干是trywritingthemaletter。前面是由If引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。后面是由in

which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句,先行詞為aletter。譯文:如果他們沒有回應(yīng)或以很不好的態(tài)度回應(yīng),請(qǐng)嘗試著給他們寫封信。在信中你應(yīng)該詳細(xì)

描述噪音和你的不滿。精彩語句25Writing5(2018浙江溫州一模)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Doeswritingcomehardtoyou?Areyoudiscouragedtofindyourselfpooratwriting?Nobodyis

bornknowinghowtowrite.Goodwritinghabits,whichhelpmakeyouwriteonaregularbasis,are

necessaryforyoutoimproveyourwriting.Firstly,youaresupposedtoreadawiderangeofbooks.It'sobviouswhenawriterisnotwell-read

lackofreadingwillbeobviousineverysentenceonewrites.Readingpreparesyouwithnecessary

knowledgetobeagoodwriter.What'smore,itprovidesyouwithbasicskillsforwriting.The

importanceofreadingcannotbestressedtoomuch:readasmuchandasoftenasyoucan.Secondly,it'simportanttomakeawritingscheduleandwritedailyifitispossible.Whetheryou

writefortwohoursadayorfifteenminutesaday,dailywritingisthekeytodevelopinggoodwrit-

inghabits.It'sbettertowriteforfifteenortwentyminuteseverydaythantositforfiveorsix

hourstowriteovertheweekend.However,ifyoucanmakeadailywritingschedulewithlonger

hoursonyourwritingonweekends,thenit'smuchbetter.Writing5(2018浙江溫州一模)26Oneoftheworsthabitsisnevertogethelpfromotherstoimproveyourwriting.Itisadvisedthat

youshareyourworkwithothers.Forexample,youcansendyourwritingtoafewfriends,round

upsomereadersandletthemcommentonyourwriting.Thatway,you'llfindyourwritinggradu-

allyimproved.

Oneoftheworsthabitsisnev27答案[寫作提示]文章主要講述好的寫作習(xí)慣對(duì)提高寫作水平的幫助。文章結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰,以自然段為基礎(chǔ)概

括要點(diǎn)即可。其中第一段是主旨段,而后面的三段為具體的做法。Onepossibleversion:Goodwritinghabitscontributealottoimprovingyourwriting.(要點(diǎn)1)First,youshouldreadas

muchaspossibletogettheknowledgeandskillsforwriting.(要點(diǎn)2)Youshouldalsomakeawrit-

ingplanandkeepupyourdailywriting.(要點(diǎn)3)Besides,you'dbetterturntoothersforhelptoim-

proveyourwriting.(要點(diǎn)4)高級(jí)語塊1.contributeto有助于2.keepup堅(jiān)持3.turnto向……求助答案28Writing6(2018浙江金華十校一模)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。ThefamiliaryellowschoolbusisthelargestsystemofmasstransportationintheUSandevery

schooldaytransportsroughly25millionyoungpeopletoschoolandhomeagainaftertheschool

dayends.Meanwhile,itisthesafestmethodforgettingkidstoandfromschool,accordingtothe

NationalHighwayTrafficSafetyAdministration(NHTSA).Childrenare70timesmorelikelyto

arriveatschoolsafelyontheschoolbusthaniftheyhadtraveledtoschooldrivingthemselvesor

ridingwithfriends.Theseschoolbusesmeetmoreofthenation'smotorvehiclesafetystandardsthananyothervehi-

clesontheroad.Also,severalnewtechnologiesavailabletodayaremakingschoolbuseseven

safer,suchasvideocamerasontheinsideandoutside,stoparmcameras,GPStrackingandcolli-

sionlesseningsystems.Anothersafetytoolonschoolbusesishighseatbacks,closely-spacedseats

andenergy-absorbingseats.ButeventhesafenessofschoolbuseswouldnotcompletelysumupwhychildrenaresaferwhenWriting6(2018浙江金華十校一模)29ridingthebig,yellowbus.Thebusisonlyassafeastheprofessionalmenandwomenwhodrive

them.AlldriversmustobtainaClassBorCCommercialDriver'sLicense(CDL).Theyareran-

domlytestedforalcoholanddrugs,usuallyhavetheirdrivingrecordchecked,andaregiventhe

samereviewofcriminalhistoryasteachersandotheremployeeswhohavecontactwithstudents.

Inordertoserveasaschoolbusdriver,mostapplicantsarerequiredtosuccessfullycompletea

trainingcourse,alongwithinstructionintheclassroomandbehindthewheel.Schoolbusesaresafefortheenvironment,notonlybecauseeachbusreplaces36passengercars

thatwould,butforthebuses,beontheroadtakingandpickingupschoolchildren.Additionally,

schoolbusesusealternativegreenfuelslikenaturalgas,andelectricpower.ToddMonteferrario,PresidentoftheNationalSchoolTransportationAssociation,saidparents

shouldrememberthatthesafestandsmartestchoiceistoputtheirchildrenonthebigyellowbus

whentheycan.

ridingthebig,yellowbus.Th30答案[寫作提示]本文是議論文。文章主要論述校車的好處。文章的結(jié)構(gòu)為“總——分——總”模式。第一

段是主題段,提出了主要觀點(diǎn)。第二至第四段分別是具體的論據(jù)。最后一段提出結(jié)論。Onepossibleversion:TheschoolbusisthesafestandwisestchoicetoschoolintheUS.(要點(diǎn)1)Firstly,schoolbusesnot

onlymeethighvehiclesafetystandardsbutalsoaretechnologicallyequipped.(要點(diǎn)2)Secondly,

thebusdrivershavetopassstrictqualificationtestsandsafetydrivingtraining.(要點(diǎn)3)Thirdly,

schoolbusespoweredbygreenfuelsareenvironmentallysafebyreducingthenumberofprivate

carshittingtheroads.(要點(diǎn)4)Thereforechildrenareencouragedtogotoschoolbyschoolbus.(要

點(diǎn)5)高級(jí)語塊1.vehicle[?vi??kl]n.車輛;交通工具2.safetystandard安全標(biāo)準(zhǔn)3.technologically[?tekn??l?d??kli]adv.技術(shù)上地4.qualification[?kw?l?f??ke??n]n.資格5.greenfuel綠色燃料答案31精彩語句原句:Firstly,schoolbusesnotonlymeethighvehiclesafetystandardsbutalsoaretechnologically

equipped.分析:本句話含有notonly...butalso...結(jié)構(gòu)。notonly...butalso...連接兩個(gè)并列的謂語動(dòng)詞。譯文:首先,校車不僅達(dá)到了很高的車輛安全標(biāo)準(zhǔn),而且還配備了技術(shù)裝備。精彩語句32Writing7(2017浙江衢州高三一模)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Amongallthefastgrowingscienceandtechnology,theresearchofhumangenes,orbiologicalen-

gineeringaspeoplecallit,isdrawingmoreandmoreattentionnow.Discussionsaboutitarein-

creasinglyheatedaroundtheworld.Thegreatestthingthatgenetechnologycandoistocureseriousdiseasesthatdoctorsatpresent

canalmostdonothingwith,suchascancerandheartdisease.Everyyear,millionsofpeopleare

murderedbythesetwokillers.Andtodate,doctorshavenotfoundaneffectivewaytocurethem.

Butifthegenetechnologyisapplied,notonlycanthesetwodiseasesbecuredcompletely,bring-

inghappinessandmorelivingdaystothepatients,butalsothegreatamountofmoneypeople

spendoncuringtheirdiseasescanbesaved,thereforeitbenefitstheeconomyaswell.Inaddition,

thehumanlifespan(壽命)canbeprolonged.Genetechnologycanhelppeopletogivebirthtohealthierandclevererchildren.Somefamilies

havegeneticdiseases.Thismeanstheirchildrenwillforsurehavethefamilialdisease,whichisaWriting7(2017浙江衢州高三一模)33greattroubleforthesefamilies.Inthepast,doctorscoulddonothingaboutgeneticdiseases.But

genetechnologycansolvethisproblemperfectly.Scientistsjustneedtofindthewronggeneand

correctit,andahealthychildwillbeborn.Somepeopleareworryingthatthegeneresearchcanbeusedtocreatehumanbeingsinlargequan-

tities.Inthepastfewyears,scientistshavesucceededincloninganimalssuchasmice,sheep,and

dogs;therefore,thesepeoplepredictthathumanbabieswouldsoonbeclonedandthatitwouldbe

beyondcontrol,leadingtosomedisastrousconsequences.Butmanybelievethatclonedbabieswill

notcomeoutinlargequantities,formostcouplesintheworldcanhavebabiesinaverynormal

wayandtheyalsobelievemeasureswillbetakentocontrolg