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成都市2021年二診書面表達(dá)講評(píng)By:DaisyXuCONTENTSGradesanalysis點(diǎn)擊此處添加文本內(nèi)容，如關(guān)鍵詞、部分簡單介紹等。1Writingtechniquesharingandlearning點(diǎn)擊此處添加文本內(nèi)容，如關(guān)鍵詞、部分簡單介紹等。2Rethinkingandsummarizing點(diǎn)擊此處添加文本內(nèi)容，如關(guān)鍵詞、部分簡單介紹等。3Practice點(diǎn)擊此處添加文本內(nèi)容，如關(guān)鍵詞、部分簡單介紹等。4目錄Referencestandards檔次人數(shù)第五檔4第四檔14第三檔11第二檔2第一檔0Gradesanalysis

AdvantagesDABC書寫規(guī)范要點(diǎn)清晰句型得當(dāng)內(nèi)容豐富Shortcomings卷面雜亂拼寫錯(cuò)誤書寫潦草語法錯(cuò)誤Inwhichaspectsididwell?InwhichaspectsIneedtoimprove?WhatcanIdotogethighergrades?Rethink假如你是高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國朋友Peter正在做一項(xiàng)關(guān)于中國高三學(xué)生做家務(wù)的調(diào)查，想了解你的情況，請(qǐng)給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.你平時(shí)做家務(wù)的情況；2.你對(duì)高三學(xué)生做家務(wù)的看法。注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。Writingrequirements體裁人稱時(shí)態(tài)結(jié)構(gòu)anemailIthepresenttense

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endingbackgroundcontentsshowappreciationandexpectationforreply你平時(shí)做家務(wù)的情況你對(duì)高三學(xué)生做家務(wù)的看法writingpurposebuildingstructurewordsandphrasessentencesdelighted/feelhonored/conductasurvey/detailedinformationheadinginsist,docleaning,sweepfloor/asusualnotonly...butalso.../beneficial,essencial/relaxoneself/relievepressurebody1body2appreciate/lookingforwardtoendingtransitionalsentencesFINALWORK優(yōu)化細(xì)節(jié)optimizedetails標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題headingIamlihua,Iamwritingtotalktoyouabouthouseworkfortheseniorhighschoolgrade3提示：hearingthat...非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)/morethandelighted/greatlyhonored,privilegedHearingthatyouaredoingasurveyonthehouseworkconditionofsenior3students,Ifeelgreatlyhonoredtosharesomedetailedinformation..優(yōu)化細(xì)節(jié)標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題bodyIamaseniorthreestudents,thoughIhavemuchpressure,Ialwayshelpmyparentswhenevertheyneedme,suchassweepingthefloorandwashingthedishesTips:As.../filledwith..../insist/whenever....

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threestudent,thoughfilledwithheaveystudypressure,IusuallyinsistmyprentsindoinghouseworkwheneverIamneeded,forexample,washingthedishes,doingcleaning.優(yōu)化細(xì)節(jié)標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題Ithinkweshoulddohousework,becausethecollegeentranceexaminationiscoming,wecanrelaxourselvesandlearnsomelifeskillstips:thinkit+adj/essential,necessary/with.....approaching/notonly.....butalso...../relievepressure/定語從句（這對(duì)大學(xué)有用）Ithinkitessencialforstudentstodohousework.withthecollegeentranceexaminationapproching,itcannotonlyrelievemypressure,butalsostrengthenmylifeskills,whichisbeneficialforlifeincollegebody優(yōu)化細(xì)節(jié)點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題endingIwouldappreciateitverymuchifmyinformationwillbehelpfulforyou,lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply

Iwillbegladifthisopinionwillhelpyoutransitionalsentences連接過渡語句標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。點(diǎn)擊此處添加標(biāo)題因果關(guān)系轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系遞進(jìn)關(guān)系總結(jié)表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)therefore,asaconsequence/consequently,asaresulthowever,otherwise,onthecontrarybesides,inaddition/additionally,what'smore,furthermore,moreimportantlyinanutshell,allinall,inconclusion,tosumuppersonallyspeaking,frommypointofview,asfarasIamconcerned,frommyperspective連句成篇標(biāo)題數(shù)字等都可以通過點(diǎn)擊和重新輸入進(jìn)行更改，頂部“開始”面板中可以對(duì)字體、字號(hào)、顏色等進(jìn)行修改。DearPeter:擊

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