英語中考一輪復(fù)習(xí)話題寫作人物篇課件

書面表達(dá)話題寫作人物篇2021年初中英語中考一輪復(fù)習(xí)

暑假即將來臨,對于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個(gè)假期,家長們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對暑假安排的觀點(diǎn)。Parents'opinionsGetreadyforhighschoolDosomehousework…Kid'sopinionsHaveagoodrestDosomesightseeing…Youropinion…[注意](1)表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息;(4)詞數(shù):不少于80。

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version:Howwillyouspendthecomingsummervacation?Parentsandkidshavetheirownopinions.Someparentsthinkkidsshouldgetreadyforhighschoolinthesummer,soit'simportanttotakesummercourses.Theyalsothinkkidscanhelpdohouseworktolearnsomelifeskills.Butthekidsdisagree.Theythinkit'stimetotakeagoodrest.Theyneedtohangoutwiththeirfriendstogosightseeing.Inmyopinion,wechildrencanhaveatalkwithourparents.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Weneedtorelaxourselvesafterworkingsohardatschool.It'sgoodforustodosomesports.【話題點(diǎn)睛】話題來源于學(xué)生日常生活中對某件事情的經(jīng)歷及感受,常見的情感類表達(dá)有愛、快樂、微笑、幸福、痛苦和煩惱等。典例分析[2020·衢州模擬]假如你是張凱,以下是你的加拿大筆友Tony發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件,請你根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給Tony回復(fù)并提出你自己的觀點(diǎn)。FromTonyToZhangKaiSubjectHowtogetonwithparentsContentDearZhangKai,Howisitgoing?Iamunhappyrecently.Myproblemismyparents.TheyneverstoptalkingabouthowIshouldkeepmyroomclean,studyharderorwearproperclothes.Theyevenmakemeeatanegganddrinkmilkeverymorning.Noneofmyfriendshassuchterribleparents.WhatshouldIdo?HowshouldIgetonwithmyparents?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,Tony[要求](1)請回復(fù)郵件中所提及的問題,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息;(3)詞數(shù):90—110。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點(diǎn)撥】1.要點(diǎn)提煉:通過Tony向朋友抱怨父母對自己的不理解以及要求自己做一些自己不愿意做的事情,從而提出主題“怎樣和父母相處?”。要注意圍繞主題以及真情實(shí)感的表達(dá)。本文可從以下方面展開:(1)提出觀點(diǎn):肯定父母的做法并非惡意,甚至應(yīng)感到是幸運(yùn)的;(2)具體論述:父母要求你所做的一切源于什么目的和原因;(3)提出建議:要理解父母,并注意怎樣和父母相處;(4)本文涉及提建議,注意should,can,trytodo等詞的使用。2.確定時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)3.確定人稱:第二人稱【寫作架構(gòu)】【基礎(chǔ)寫作】Ⅰ.寫主干句(根據(jù)所給提示補(bǔ)全下列各句。)1.擁有這樣的父母你很幸運(yùn)。(lucky)It's

foryou

suchgoodparents.

2.你應(yīng)該理解并且尊重你的父母。(understand)You

andrespectthem.

3.如果你有任何問題,要和你的父母交談并且和他們分享你的想法。(talk;share)

youhaveanyproblems,just

yourparentsand

yourideaswiththem.

4.他們讓你吃雞蛋是為了你能有一個(gè)強(qiáng)壯的體魄。(make;sothat)They

youeateggs

youcanhavea

body.

5.我希望你能和你的父母相處得好。(getonwellwith)I

youcan

yourparents.

luckytohaveshouldunderstandIftalkwithsharemakesothatstronghopegetonwellwithⅡ.句子升格(按括號中的要求完成句子。)1.Theywantyoutoworkharder.Theyhopeyoucangetagoodjobinthefuture.(用because改為復(fù)合句)2.Youdon'twanttodolikethis.Youshouldhaveatalkwiththem.(改為用if引導(dǎo)的復(fù)合句)3.Theydon'tallowmetogooutaloneatnight.(改為被動語態(tài))4.Yourparentsarenotterrible.Ithink.(改為賓語從句)Theywantyoutoworkharderbecausetheyhopeyoucangetagoodjobinthefuture.Ifyoudon'twanttodolikethis,youshouldhaveatalkwiththem.Iamnotallowedtogooutaloneatnight.Idon'tthinkyourparentsareterrible.【連句成文】FromZhangKaiToTonySubjectHowtogetonwithparentsContentHi,Tony,Ithinkit'sluckyforyoutohavesuchgoodparents.Youshouldunderstandandrespectthem,andtrytodowhattheyaskyouto.Theyhavericherlifeexperienceandwantyoutobebetter.Asyourparents,theysurelyhopeyoubecomeanexcellentperson.Theiradviceishelpfulforyourfuture.Don'tyoufindyourparentsarecaringaboutyouinmanyways?Theywantyoutokeepyourroomcleanbecausetheyhopeyoucangetintogoodhabitsandlivecomfortably.Theyaskyoutoworkhardersothatyoucangetagoodjobinthefuture.Theymakeyoueatanegganddrinkmilkeverymorninginorderthatyoucankeephealthy.Agoodbodyisgoodforstudy.Asateenager,weneedalotofenergy,soit'simportanttoeatwell.

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What'smore,everymembershouldberesponsibleanddosomethingforthefamily.Soyoushoulddowhatyoucando,suchaskeepingyourroomcleanandwearingproperclothes.Anyway,ifyouhaveanyproblems,justtalkwithyourparentsandshareyourideaswiththem.Ihopeyoucangetonwellwithyourparents.Bestwishes!Yours,ZhangKai拓展積累【相關(guān)短語】thanksfor…因……感謝……;makenewfriends結(jié)交新朋友;lookafter/takecareof照顧;keepintouch保持聯(lián)系;befriendlyto對……友好;bringback帶回【參考諺語】1.Asmilemakesyoutenyearsyounger.笑一笑,十年少。2.Joyandsorrowarenext-doorneighbors.悲喜常相伴。3.Laughteristhebestmedicine.笑是最好的藥。4.Worrykillsmorementhanwork.憂慮比勞累更傷人?！玖咙c(diǎn)句型】學(xué)校的感受1.I'dliketothankyouforgivingmeunselfishloveandhelp.2.Youalwaysencouragedmetostudyharder.3.Althoughyouwereverystrictwithme,Iunderstoodwhatyousaidintheend.4.I'msothankfultoyouforyourkindhelpthatI'llworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.家庭的感受1.I'dliketoshowmythankstoyouforyourdevotiontometheseyears.2.Weshouldhavegoodhabitsandtryourbesttotakeexerciseeveryday.3.I'llspendmoretimestayingandcommunicatingwithyou.4.WhenIfailedanexamandfeltstressed,youweretheonetoencourageme.實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練A在你的生活或?qū)W習(xí)中,你認(rèn)為快樂是什么?也許是擁有一位慈母、一位良師、一位摯友、一本好書、一只寵物、一個(gè)夢想……珍惜眼前的快樂,快樂就在身邊。請以“HappinessAroundMe”為題,選取一個(gè)角度,用英語寫一篇短文,以表達(dá)你的真情實(shí)感。[主要內(nèi)容](1)Whatishappinessinyouropinion?(2)Asastudent,howcanyougethappiness?Giveanexampleortellastory.[要求](1)詞數(shù):100左右;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱和姓名;(3)語言力求準(zhǔn)確,書寫美觀,卷面整潔。

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version:HappinessAroundMeHappinessisdifferenttodifferentpeople.Butitisimportantinourdailylife.Itisalwaysaroundyouifyouputyourheartintoit.Moststudentsthinkhappinessistogetagoodscore;togettheloveoftheirparentsorteachers;togetwellalongwithothersandsoon.Asforme,happinessishelpingpeopleinneed.LastSunday,onmywayhome,Isawanoldwomansatattheroadside.Shelookedverytired.IcametoherandaskedifshewasOK.Shesaidshehadaheadacheandshecouldn'tmove.Icalled120andsenthertothehospital.WhenIwaswaitingoutside,herfamiliesarrivedandthankedmeagainandagain.IfeltsohappythatIcouldhelpsomeone.B自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺,生活越來越精彩。假如你是李華,請你為?？⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文,談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?分享一次使你更加自信的經(jīng)歷,并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧提示詞語]powerful,happy,believein,keepdoing[提示問題](1)Whyisitimportanttobeconfident?(2)Whatexperiencemadeyoumoreconfident?(3)Howcanwebecomemoreconfident?[要求](1)詞數(shù):80—100(文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));(2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息;(3)文章必須包含所提供的主要信息,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

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version:It'sveryimportanttobeconfident.Self-confidencecanbringuscouragetosticktowhatwedo.Soit'svaluabletous.WhenIwasinGrade7,oncemyteacheraskedmetomakeaspeechinclass.AlthoughIpractiseditformanytimesathome,Istillfeltnervousandforgotthewordsatthebeginningofit.ThenIbreatheddeeplyandrelaxedmyself.Youcan'timaginehowhappyIwaswhenIrecalledthespeechandfinisheditsuccessfully.MyteacherthoughthighlyofmyperformanceandIgotmuchencouragementfrommyclassmates.Fromthenon,Ihavebecomemoreandmoreconfident.Tobuildconfidence,firstlyweneedtoclearlyknowaboutourownadvantagesandtrytodevelopthem.Itisthemostimportantthatweshouldputinenoughefforttowhatwedo.Thenwecanfinallymakeitandgainmoreconfidence.【話題點(diǎn)睛】話題來源于學(xué)生日常生活中對某件事情的經(jīng)歷及感受,常見的情感類表達(dá)有愛、快樂、微笑、幸福、痛苦和煩惱等。典例分析[2020·衢州模擬]假如你是張凱,以下是你的加拿大筆友Tony發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件,請你根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給Tony回復(fù)并提出你自己的觀點(diǎn)。FromTonyToZhangKaiSubjectHowtogetonwithparentsContentDearZhangKai,Howisitgoing?Iamunhappyrecently.Myproblemismyparents.TheyneverstoptalkingabouthowIshouldkeepmyroomclean,studyharderorwearproperclothes.Theyevenmakemeeatanegganddrinkmilkeverymorning.Noneofmyfriendshassuchterribleparents.WhatshouldIdo?HowshouldIgetonwithmyparents?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,Tony[要求](1)請回復(fù)郵件中所提及的問題,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息;(3)詞數(shù):90—110。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點(diǎn)撥】1.要點(diǎn)提煉:通過Tony向朋友抱怨父母對自己的不理解以及要求自己做一些自己不愿意做的事情,從而提出主題“怎樣和父母相處?”。要注意圍繞主題以及真情實(shí)感的表達(dá)。本文可從以下方面展開:(1)提出觀點(diǎn):肯定父母的做法并非惡意,甚至應(yīng)感到是幸運(yùn)的;(2)具體論述:父母要求你所做的一切源于什么目的和原因;(3)提出建議:要理解父母,并注意怎樣和父母相處;(4)本文涉及提建議,注意should,can,trytodo等詞的使用。2.確定時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)3.確定人稱:第二人稱【寫作架構(gòu)】【基礎(chǔ)寫作】Ⅰ.寫主干句(根據(jù)所給提示補(bǔ)全下列各句。)1.擁有這樣的父母你很幸運(yùn)。(lucky)It's

foryou

suchgoodparents.

2.你應(yīng)該理解并且尊重你的父母。(understand)You

andrespectthem.

3.如果你有任何問題,要和你的父母交談并且和他們分享你的想法。(talk;share)

youhaveanyproblems,just

yourparentsand

yourideaswiththem.

4.他們讓你吃雞蛋是為了你能有一個(gè)強(qiáng)壯的體魄。(make;sothat)They

youeateggs

youcanhavea

body.

5.我希望你能和你的父母相處得好。(getonwellwith)I

youcan

yourparents.

luckytohaveshouldunderstandIftalkwithsharemakesothatstronghopegetonwellwithⅡ.句子升格(按括號中的要求完成句子。)1.Theywantyoutoworkharder.Theyhopeyoucangetagoodjobinthefuture.(用because改為復(fù)合句)2.Youdon'twanttodolikethis.Youshouldhaveatalkwiththem.(改為用if引導(dǎo)的復(fù)合句)3.Theydon'tallowmetogooutaloneatnight.(改為被動語態(tài))4.Yourparentsarenotterrible.Ithink.(改為賓語從句)Theywantyoutoworkharderbecausetheyhopeyoucangetagoodjobinthefuture.Ifyoudon'twanttodolikethis,youshouldhaveatalkwiththem.Iamnotallowedtogooutaloneatnight.Idon'tthinkyourparentsareterrible.【連句成文】FromZhangKaiToTonySubjectHowtogetonwithparentsContentHi,Tony,Ithinkit'sluckyforyoutohavesuchgoodparents.Youshouldunderstandandrespectthem,andtrytodowhattheyaskyouto.Theyhavericherlifeexperienceandwantyoutobebetter.Asyourparents,theysurelyhopeyoubecomeanexcellentperson.Theiradviceishelpfulforyourfuture.Don'tyoufindyourparentsarecaringaboutyouinmanyways?Theywantyoutokeepyourroomcleanbecausetheyhopeyoucangetintogoodhabitsandlivecomfortably.Theyaskyoutoworkhardersothatyoucangetagoodjobinthefuture.Theymakeyoueatanegganddrinkmilkeverymorninginorderthatyoucankeephealthy.Agoodbodyisgoodforstudy.Asateenager,weneedalotofenergy,soit'simportanttoeatwell.

FromZhangKaiToTonySubjectHowtogetonwithparentsContent

What'smore,everymembershouldberesponsibleanddosomethingforthefamily.Soyoushoulddowhatyoucando,suchaskeepingyourroomcleanandwearingproperclothes.Anyway,ifyouhaveanyproblems,justtalkwithyourparentsandshareyourideaswiththem.Ihopeyoucangetonwellwithyourparents.Bestwishes!Yours,ZhangKai拓展積累【相關(guān)短語】thanksfor…因……感謝……;makenewfriends結(jié)交新朋友;lookafter/takecareof照顧;keepintouch保持聯(lián)系;befriendlyto對……友好;bringback帶回【參考諺語】1.Asmilemakesyoutenyearsyounger.笑一笑,十年少。2.Joyandsorrowarenext-doorneighbors.悲喜常相伴。3.Laughteristhebestmedicine.笑是最好的藥。4.Worrykillsmorementhanwork.憂慮比勞累更傷人?！玖咙c(diǎn)句型】學(xué)校的感受1.I'dliketothankyouforgivingmeunselfishloveandhelp.2.Youalwaysencouragedmetostudyharder.3.Althoughyouwereverystrictwithme,Iunderstoodwhatyousaidintheend.4.I'msothankfultoyouforyourkindhelpthatI'llworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.家庭的感受1.I'dliketoshowmythankstoyouforyourdevotiontometheseyears.2.Weshouldhavegoodhabitsandtryourbesttotakeexerciseeveryday.3.I'llspendmoretimestayingandcommunicatingwithyou.4.WhenIfailedanexamandfeltstressed,youweretheonetoencourageme.實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練A在你的生活或?qū)W習(xí)中,你認(rèn)為快樂是什么?也許是擁有一位慈母、一位良師、一位摯友、一本好書、一只寵物、一個(gè)夢想……珍惜眼前的快樂,快樂就在身邊。請以“HappinessAroundMe”為題,選取一個(gè)角度,用英語寫一篇短文,以表達(dá)你的真情實(shí)感。[主要內(nèi)容](1)Whatishappinessinyouropinion?(2)Asastudent,howcanyougethappiness?Giveanexampleortellastory.[要求](1)詞數(shù):100左右;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱和姓名;(3)語言力求準(zhǔn)確,書寫美觀,卷面整潔。

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version:HappinessAroundMeHappinessisdifferenttodifferentpeople.Butitisimportantinourdailylife.Itisalwaysaroundyouifyouputyourheartintoit.Moststudentsthinkhappinessistogetagoodscore;togettheloveoftheirparentsorteachers;togetwellalongwithothersandsoon.Asforme,happinessishelpingpeopleinneed.LastSunday,onmywayhome,Isawanoldwomansatattheroadside.Shelookedverytired.IcametoherandaskedifshewasOK.Shesaidshehadaheadacheandshecouldn'tmove.Icalled120andsenthertothehospital.WhenIwaswaitingoutside,herfamiliesarrivedandthankedmeagainandagain.IfeltsohappythatIcouldhelpsomeone.B自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺,生活越來越精彩。假如你是李華,請你為?？⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文,談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?分享一次使你更加自信的經(jīng)歷,并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。[提示詞語]powerful,happy,believein,keepdoing[提示問題](1)Whyisitimportanttobeconfident?(2)Whatexperiencemadeyoumoreconfident?(3)Howcanwebecomemoreconfident?[要求](1)詞數(shù):80—100(文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));(2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息;(3)文章必須包含所提供的主要信息,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

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version:It'sveryimportanttobeconfident.Self-confidencecanbringuscouragetosticktowhatwedo.Soit'svaluabletous.WhenIwasinGrade