【省級公開課課件】基于教材文本的概要寫作教學(Unit 2 Healthy eating Workbook (Page52))

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HeAnewMcDonald’srestaurantisgoingtobebuiltyourhometown.McDonald’s

HeWhat'sthemainideaofthetwopassages?2.What'sthefirstperson'sopinion?3.What'sthesecondperson'sopinion?WhethertobuildaMcDonald'sForAgainstCheckthehomeworkHelikeseatingnothingbutChinesefood.Checkthehomework1.Guessmeaningfromcontext:Whichofthefollowinghastheclosestmeaningtothephrase“nothingbut”inSpeech1?()A.B.C.BnotatallonlynotimportantHeonlylikeseatingChinesefood.CheckthehomeworktorewritethesentenceinyourownwordsThereistheproblemofallthosecarsthattrytoparkandpreventothercarsfrommovingquicklythroughourtown.2.paraphrase:Allthosecarstrytoparkandthiswillcauseaproblemthatothercarscan’tpassthroughthetownquickly.

HeReadforstyleThestyleofthearticleis

.?ANarration（記敘文）Argumentation（議論文）BCExposition(說明文)HowtoWriteaSummaryofArgumentation

IwasexcitedwhenIheardthatourcommunitywastohaveitsownMcDonaldsrestaurant.Ithoughtaboutallthoseyoungpeoplewhowouldnothavetogotothenexttowntobuytheirfavouriteburgersandchips.McDonald'scaresabouthealthyeatingtooandworkswithscientiststoprovidefoodthatisofhighquality,safeandhealthy.Itisalsocheap.Theyoftenprovidesaladsaswellasburgersandchips.Youcanalsochoosebetweencolaandmilkshakes（奶昔）.Ofcourseitalsomeansmoreworkforourareathatneedsjobsbadly.McDonald’ssaystheyareinterestedindoingwhatisrightforthecommunityandbeingagoodneighbour.SoIthinktheywillbeconcernedaboutprovidingparkingforthecarsinourmainstreet.Manyofouryoungpeoplewillbeonlytoohappytoworkforthecompany.McDonald'smakesapromisetothepeoplewhoworkforthem.Theysay,“Wevalueyou,yourgrowingskillsandyourhelptothecompany.”Icanseenothingbutgoodifthiscompanycomestobuilditsrestaurantinourtown.ReadfortopicsentenceofSpeech1

IwasexcitedwhenIheardthatourcommunitywastohaveitsownMcDonaldsrestaurant.

Icanseenothingbutgoodifthiscompanycomestobuilditsrestaurantinourtown.supportingpoints(reasons)viewpointconclusionIwasexcitedwhenIheardthatourcommunitywastohaveitsownMcDonaldsrestaurant.

Ithoughtaboutallthoseyoungpeoplewhowouldnothavetogotothenexttowntobuytheirfavouriteburgersandchips.McDonald'scaresabouthealthyeatingtooandworkswithscientiststoprovidefoodthatisofhighquality,safeandhealthy.Itisalsocheap.Theyoftenprovidesaladsaswellasburgersandchips.Youcanalsochoosebetweencolaandmilkshakes（奶昔）.Ofcourseitalsomeansmoreworkforourareathatneedsjobsbadly.McDonald’ssaystheyareinterestedindoingwhatisrightforthecommunityandbeingagoodneighbour.SoIthinktheywillbeconcernedaboutprovidingparkingforthecarsinourmainstreet.Manyofouryoungpeoplewillbeonlytoohappytoworkforthecompany.McDonald'smakesapromisetothepeoplewhoworkforthem.Theysay,“Wevalueyou,yourgrowingskillsandyourhelptothecompany.”Icanseenothingbutgoodifthiscompanycomestobuilditsrestaurantinourtown.Readforkeywordsofthereasonssupportingpoints(reasons)keywordsfoodjobscars1.ofhighquality,videjobs2.valuetheiremployeesTheparkingforcarswillbeprovided.McDonald’sprovidesmorejobsandpromisestovaluetheemployees.Paraphrase(改寫)keywords連詞成句Thefoodisofhighquality,safeandhealthy.Anditisalsocheap.IwasexcitedwhenIheardthatourcommunitywastohaveitsownMcDonald'srestaurant..

Thefirstperson改變人稱hearingParaphrase(改寫)theviewpoint同義詞

happy變非謂語句型轉化willbeaMcDonald’srestaurant.there

Thefirstperson

was

happywhenhearingthattherewouldbeaMcDonald’restaurant.Thefirstperson

was

forbuildingaMcDonald’srestaurant.變簡單句

Icanseenothingbutgoodifthiscompanycomestobuilditsrestaurantinourhometown.同義詞改變人稱

He改變語態(tài)onlyrestaurantwillbebuilt

Hecanseeonlygoodiftherestaurantisbuiltintheirhometown.theirParaphrase(改寫)theconclusion

Heagreestobuildtherestaurantintheirhometown.

變簡單句Point1Point2Point3ForconclusionThestructureSpeech1viewpoint(food)(jobs)

(cars)

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First,Second,Therefore,Lastbutnotleast,Summary1.thethirdperson

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Thefirstperson

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forbuildingaMcDonald’srestaurant.

(viewpoint)(conclusion)

Thereasonsareasfollows:

要點1

要點2

要點3theparkingforcarswillbeprovided.McDonald’swillprovidemorejobsandpromisestovalueemployees.

heagreestobuildtherestaurantintheirhometown.

thefoodisofhighquality,safeandhealthy.Anditisalsotherewillbesafe,healthyandcheapfoodofhighquality.cheap.概要寫作的4C原則CompleteCoherent（連貫）Concise（精煉）CorrectSteponeFindthetopicsentenceandparaphrasethemSteptwoMarkoutthekeywordsofthesupportingpointsStepthreeWriteasummaryofSpeech2StepfourGroupworkMakeamindmapSteponeFindthetopicsentenceSteptwoMarkoutthekeywordsofthesupportingpointsStepthreeParaphrasethekeyinformationWriteasummaryofSpeech2StepfourIntegrate(整合)andwritethesummary

1.Changetheperson(改變人稱)2.Combinethesentences(合并句子)3.Usesynonyms(同義詞的運用)4.Summarize(概括)5.Changethevoice(主被動語態(tài)轉換)6.Changethesentencestructure(句型轉化)Tipstoparaphra