【課件】Unit1ReadingforWriting建議信課件高中英語人教版必修第一冊

Unit1TeenageLifePeriod4ReadingforWritingDearSusanLuo，Ihaveaproblem.MybestfriendChenLeibecomeagameloverrecently.Heisinterestedincomputergames.Everyweekend,whenIaskhimtogoforawalkoutdoors,healwaysrejectedmeastostayathometoplaycomputergames.Sometimes,Ithinkhemayevenforgettohavemealsorsleepinordertostayonlinealldaylong.WhatshouldIdotohelphimgetoutofthesituation?I’mveryconcernedabouthim.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Thankyouinadvance.Yourssincerely,StevenWhatistheboy’sproblem?TalkingWhatistheboy’sproblem?TheboyisworriedabouthisfriendChenLeibecausehe__________computergamesandstayed________fortoomuchtime.isaddictedtoonline02STEP01STEP03STEP04STEPThinkingIfyouwereSusanLuo,whatwillyoudo?

aletterofadviceReadingWhatisMsLuo’sadvice?Talktohisfriendabouthisbehavior.Discusstheproblemtogether.Encouragehisfriendtotrynewhobbies.Besidestheproblemsandsuggestions,whatelsedoesSusanLuosayinherletter?SheunderstandsWorriedFriend’sproblemandfeeling.Shealsotalksaboutthenegativeeffectsofcomputeraddiction.02STEP01STEP03STEP04STEPThinkingWhatdoesaletterofadvicecontain?PartA:Iknowwhattheproblemis.PartB:Iunderstandhowyoufeel.PartC:Thisismyadviceandreason(s).PartD:Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.Anadvicelettermainlycontainsthefollowingfourparts:Readtheletterandfindoutthefourparts.Reading

010203HowdidSusanLuogivesuggestions?Irecommendthat…Ithinkyoushould…Whynot…?Tomakesuggestions:Irecommendthat…Ithinkyoushould…Whynot…?Howabout…?I’dliketosuggest…Whatdoyouthink…?Itmightbeagoodideato…Toshowunderstanding:I’msorrytohear/know/learnthat…Iknowhowitfeelsto…Ithappenstoeveryone.Iknowyoudidn’tmeanto…Everyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong.Paragraph1：the____________oftheletter點(diǎn)明寫作目的：就某事/問題提建議Paragraph2：the____________thatyougive闡述具體建議，并說明理由Paragraph3：thewriter’s____________

希望建議被采納并有所幫助。purposesuggestionshopeDear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出對方需要建議的主題).Hereareafewsuggestions(引出作者的建議).First/Tobeginwith,itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.（部分建議可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充以說明提出建議的原因或采納建議的益處）Ihope____________(表達(dá)愿望)。YoursSincerely,LiHua1.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergames…attractv.吸引；激發(fā)，引起attractiveadj.

有吸引力的；吸引人的

attractionn.

吸引力；吸引【歸納】

attractsb.to

把某人吸引到……attractone’sattention

引起某人的注意力

beattractedto...

被……所吸引人教版（2019）高一英語必修第一冊Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting課件(共40張PPT)人教版（2019）高一英語必修第一冊Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting課件(共40張PPT)【語境應(yīng)用】用attract的適當(dāng)形式填空。1)Janeissuchabeautifulgirlthatsheis__________eyesallthetime.2)BruceisalwaysannoyingusandIdon’tthinkheisan____________boy.3)Thetelevisionhaslittle__________forme.4）Babies_______________brightcolours.

嬰兒喜歡鮮艷的顏色。attracting

attractive

attraction人教版（2019）高一英語必修第一冊Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting課件(共40張PPT)人教版（2019）高一英語必修第一冊Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting課件(共40張PPT)areattractedto2.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternet…有些學(xué)生甚至上網(wǎng)成癮…be/becomeaddictedto沉溺于,醉心于人教版（2019）高一英語必修第一冊Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting課件(共40張PPT)人教版（2019）高一英語必修第一冊Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting課件(共40張PPT)【拓展】addictn.吸毒成癮的人；對……入迷的人addictiveadj.使人上癮的，使人入迷的addictionn.癮，入迷，嗜好，與介詞to搭配【語境應(yīng)用】根據(jù)提示補(bǔ)全句子1)Johnisonly9yearsoldbutalreadyaheavycomputergame______(addictive).2)Barbara______________________(addict)TVsoapoperasandneverwantedtowork.3)Morrisaddictedhimself_______rockmusic.4)Cigarettesarehighly

________(addict).5)Somestudentsareaddictedto________(play)computergamesandsomeoftencheatintheexams.addictbecameaddictedtotoaddictiveplaying人教版（2019）高一英語必修第一冊Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting課件(共40張PPT)人教版（2019）高一英語必修第一冊Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting課件(共40張PPT)Usefulwordsandexpressionsintheletter:beworriedabout為……而擔(dān)心，憂慮beattractedto喜愛focuson集中；特別關(guān)注beaddictedto(doing)sth.對(做)某事很入迷concentrateon集中精力于；全神貫注于encouragesb.todosth.鼓勵某人做某事allthebest一切順利，萬事如意人教版（2019）高一英語必修第一冊Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting課件(共40張PPT)人教版（2019）高一英語必修第一冊Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting課件(共40張PPT)Myparentswon’tlistenwhenItellthemthings.Iguessit’sbecausethey’readultsandcan’tunderstandme.Doyouhaveanysuggestions?suggestionreasonTobeginwith,youaresupposedtohaveatimelycommunicationwith…Inordernottomakethingsworse,you’dbetter…andIthinkinthiswayyou’llsurely…Inthatcase,youcantryto…andIbelievethat…Theyneedyourhelp!Ialwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecausemyparentsworkinanothercity.WhatcanIdo?suggestionreasonItwillcertainlyhelpalotifyou...Itisadvisabletodo...Isuggestthatyoutrytodo...ThereisagirtIlikeinmyclass,butI’mtooskytotalktoher.Pleasehelpme!suggestionreasonI(don’t)thinkitwiseofyouto…because…Itwouldbemuchbetterifyou...Inadditiontothat,wouldn'titbeagoodideato…?Supposeoneofyourfriendsalsohassomeproblemsinthenewterm,pleasewritehim/heraletterofadvicetohelphim/herout.writing假如你是李華，你的好朋友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難，請根據(jù)下面提示給她寫一封建議信。1.要交朋友首先要做一個(gè)朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3.友誼需要時(shí)間和投入(effort)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；Howtowritealetterofadvice?建議信是書信的一種形式，屬于應(yīng)用文。建議信是寫信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建議或忠告，有可能是寫給個(gè)人，就收信人遇到的某個(gè)問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)等方面提出建議或忠告。1.定義Paragraph1：the____________oftheletter點(diǎn)明寫作目的：就某事/問題提建議Paragraph2：the____________thatyougive闡述具體建議，并說明理由Paragraph3：thewriter’s____________

希望建議被采納并有所幫助。purposesuggestionshope2.結(jié)構(gòu)建議信注意事項(xiàng)第三段：避免籠統(tǒng)的期待和祝愿第二段：建議的內(nèi)容要詳盡具體，同時(shí)要注意內(nèi)在的邏輯。（1）說明建議的內(nèi)容（是什么）；提出具體建議的原因

（為什么）/指出采納建議的益處（怎么樣）；（2）建議一般為多個(gè)，要注意不同建議之間的銜接。第一段：弄清對方問題，顧及對方感受(語氣誠懇有禮貌）建議信一般以________人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)主要為_________________第一、二一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)（+將來時(shí)）Dear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出對方需要建議的主題).Hereareafewsuggestions(引出作者的建議).First/Tobeginwith,itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.（部分建議可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充以說明提出建議的原因或采納建議的益處）Ihope____________(表達(dá)愿望)。YoursSincerely,LiHua3.寫作模板1.Wordsandphrases①_____________________________n.建議②_____________________________n.情況③_____________________________交朋友④_____________________________做……有困難⑤_____________________________接受某人的建議⑥_____________________________和……同甘共苦⑦_(dá)______/need______________________需要⑧_____________________________全心全意

tip(s)/advice/suggestion(s)situationmakefriendshavetrouble/difficultyindoing...takeone’sadvicesharehappinessandsorrowwith...callforputone’sheartinto4.本篇習(xí)作相關(guān)表述2.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻煩，我很抱歉。(havetroublein...)________________________________________________________________________②如果你采納我的建議，改變這種情況是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋todo)________________________________________________________________________③要交朋友為什么不先做一個(gè)朋友呢？(whynot)________________________________________________________________________④你和朋友同甘共苦難道不是一個(gè)好主意嗎？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)________________________________________________________________________⑤正如一句諺語說的，患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asasayinggoes)________________________________________________________________________Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Whynotbeafriendfirst，ifyouwanttomakefriends?Wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.

Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.however，tobeginwith，inaddition(另外），lastbutnotleast(最后但同樣重要的是)Let‘sdoit!作文寫后講評15Sept，2019DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.（para1)1.范文Tobeginwith，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends？Inaddition，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes，afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnotleast，Irecommendyoushouldputyourheartintomakingfriends.Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.（para2)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.（para3)Allthebest.Yours，LiHua1.建議信首段常用句式（表明寫作目的）1.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高興收到你就……征求建議的來信。2.Learning/Knowingthat…,I’dliketogivesomesuggestionswhichIthinkshoudbehelpful.得知...因此我寫信來提供一些有幫助的建議，2.建議信常用表述概括表述1.建議信首段常用句式（表明寫作目的）3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...你向我征求關(guān)于……的意見。4.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…我正在寫信是想表達(dá)我對……的看法。5.Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.這里有幫助你的一些建議。

6.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.我的建議如下2.建議信常用表述1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.很遺憾聽說你在適應(yīng)新學(xué)校方面有困難。這樣的問題是很正常的?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh會有一些幫助。2.IhavereceivedyourlettersayingyouplantoplayavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.我已經(jīng)收到了你的來信。信上說你打算下個(gè)月來參觀中國十天?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh對你是有幫助的。3.YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.你關(guān)于如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語詢問我的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些建議。4.I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.很高興收到你的電子郵件?，F(xiàn)在，關(guān)于如何在高中學(xué)好英語，我寫信給你一些建議。具體表述2.表達(dá)建議常用句式Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthatyou…當(dāng)涉及到這樣的情況的時(shí)候，我建議你...2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…

我認(rèn)為（怎么做）....是有好處的3.IfIwereyou,Iwould…如果我是你，我將會...4.First(ly)，whynot加動詞原形?5.Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyou….Bydoingthis，youwill….6.AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion，youshould…7.Lastbutnotleast，youshould概括表述2.表達(dá)建議常用句式1.First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends.首先，為什么不參加一個(gè)俱樂部？如果你這樣做的話，就會交到朋友。2.Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway，youwillfeelbetter.其次，你應(yīng)該盡力與人交談。這樣，你會感覺好點(diǎn)。3.Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis，youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，如果你看書或聽音樂將會是個(gè)不錯(cuò)的主意。通過這樣做，你會使自己平靜下來。4.Lastbutnotleast，youshouldtalkwi