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?V.寫作
(Part
VI:Writing)
測試規(guī)定:
?學(xué)生應(yīng)能根據(jù)所給題目及規(guī)定撰寫一篇400詞左右的說明文或議論文。該作文必須語言通順,用詞得體,結(jié)構(gòu)合理,文體恰當(dāng),具有說服力。
題型:
?規(guī)定應(yīng)試者按題撰文??荚嚂r間為45分鐘。
一般作文規(guī)定:?Inthefirstpartofyourwritingyoushouldpresentyourthesisstatement,andinthesecondpartyoushouldsupportthethesisstat(yī)ementwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpartyoushouldbringwhat(yī)youhavewrittentoanat(yī)uralconclusionwithasummary.2023年真題?Itwasreportedinthepresssometimeagothat(yī)afewsecond-andthird-yearstudentsinaprovincialuniversitydecidedtotrytheirhandsatbusinessinordertogetpreparedforthefuture.Theyopenedsixsmallshopsneartheiruniversity.Theirteachersandclassmateshaddifferentopinionsaboutthisphenomenon.Somethoughtthatthestudents’businessexperiencewouldhelpthemadaptbettertosocietyaftergraduation,whileothersheldanegativeview,sayingthatrunningshopsmightoccupytoomuchofthestudents’timeandenergywhichshouldotherwisebedevotedtotheiracademicstudy.Whatdoyouthink?Writeacompositionofabout300wordsonthefollowingtopic:
?ShouldUniversityStudentsGoinforBusiness?Inthefirstpartofyourwritingyoushouldstateclearlyyourmainargument,andinthesecondpartyoushouldsupportyourargumentwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpartyoushouldbrigwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriat(yī)eness.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.
?2023年真題?Interviewisfrequentlyusedbyemployersasameanstorecruitprospectiveemployees.Asaresult,therehavebeenmanyargumentsfororagainsttheinterviewasaselectionprocedure.Whatisyouropinion?Writeanessayofabout400wordstostateyourview.?
Inthefirstpartofyourwritingyoushouldstateyourmainargument,andinthesecondpartyoushouldsupportyourargumentwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpartyoushouldbringwhat(yī)youhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionormakeasummary.Youshouldsupplyanappropriatetitleforyouressay.?2023年專業(yè)八級樣文解析?
Ambitionisthedecisiononemakesandtheresolutionwithwhichhecarriesoutthat(yī)decision.Itprovidesuswiththerequireddrivingforcetoaccomplishanyundertakingsinourlife.JustasJosephEpstein,afamousAmericanwriterputit,“Andaswedecideandchoose,soareourlivesformed.”Indeed,oncewemakeupourmindstochoosetodosomething,thenourlifebecomesmeaningfulandspecificallyorientated.Thisnotionoflife,asfarasIobserve,isclosesttotruthanddoesapplytoalmostallaspectsoflife.?
Firstthingsfirst,ambitionrendersusasenseofmission.Nomatterwhatdecisionyoumakeyouhavetoberesponsibleforyourchoice.Yourchoiceprocuresyouasenseoforientation,ormorespeciallyasenseofmission.Andonlyastrongmissionmayenableonetoaccomplishgreat(yī)ness.CaesaroftheancientRomanEmpirewasurgedbyhisambition“Icame,Isaw,Iconquered.”AndbecameanunrivaledempirebuilderinthehistoryofRome.JohnMilton,stimulatedalwaysbyhisambitionthataimedatwritingsome“mightylines”whichEnglandwouldunwillinglyforget,hadinduetimesecuredhispositionasthesecondShakespeareinthehistoryofEnglishliterature.?
Inthesecondplace,ambitioncanbringone’spotentialstothefull.Ambitionmaywellserveasacat(yī)alystactivatingone’sdormantpotentials.Withoutambitionone’spotentialswillremainslumberinglikeadormantvolcano.AcaseinpointisMsZhangHaidi,aChineseHelenKeller.ItwasherambitiontobeausefulpersonhasturnedthealmostparalyzedZhangHaidiintoawell-accomplishedfigurewhoseachievementswoulddwarfthoseofsomenormalpeopleaimatthesun,though,atworst,thebablylandonthemoon.?
Influentialasitisuponus,however,ambitionmustbechanneledintherightdirection.Ifwronglydirected,one’sambitionmaybringhavoconhimandothers.Hitler,whoseambitionwastoconquerEuropebywhateverevilmeans,finallyturnedhimintoademon.Itwasthisdemonthat(yī)almostcastEuropeintoanunfathomableabyssofanguishandsuffering.AnothercaseisMacbethwhoseambitionwastobecomethekingofScotland.However,hisambitionwasmaterializedbythemurderofKingDuncan.Consequently,unbearableguiltandpsychologicalagonydrovehimtohistragicdoom.?
Tosumup,ambitioncanbenefitustremendouslyifwiselyandcorrectlychanneled,otherwiseitmayruinothersandourselves.Apoetsays:lifecanbebad;lifecanbegood;lifecanbedirty;lifecanbesad,;lifecanevenbepainful.Inmymind’seye,apersoncanmakehislifebeautiful,meaningfulandrewardingandstandoutasarespectablepersonageifheismotivatedbyawell-orientatedambition.
專業(yè)八級作文評分標準20-18
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EFFECTIVECOMMUNICATIONWITHACCURACIESThewritingeffectivelyaddressesthewritingtask.Itdemonstrat(yī)esawelldevelopedlogicalorganizationalstructurewithclearlystatedmainideasandsufficeientsupportingdetails.Ithasalmostnoerrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,anditdisplaysanadequateabilitytousethelanguagewithappropriacy.Nodifficultyisexperienced
bythereader.
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GOODCOMMUNICATIONWITHFEWINACCURACIES?Thewritingadequatelyaddressesalmostallofthewritingtask?itdealswithsomepartsmoreeffectivelythanothers.?Itdemonstratesagenerallywelldevelopedlogicaanizationalstructurewithmainideasandsupportingdetails.?Ithasrelativelyfewsignificanterrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,anditdisplaysanabilitytousethelanguagewithappropriacy.?Verylittledifficultyisexperiencedbythereader.
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PASSABLECOMMUNICATIONWITHSOMEINACCURACIES.?Thewritingadequatelyaddressesmostofthewritingtask.?Onthewhole,itdemonstratesanadequat(yī)elydevelopedorganizationalstructure,thoughtheremayoccasionallybealackofrelevance,clarity,consistencyorsupport.?Ithasoccasionalerrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,whichmay,fromtimetotime,obscuremeaning,andforthemostpartitdisplayssomeabilitytousethelanguagewithappropriacy.?Occasionaldifficultyisexperiencedbythereader.11-9
PROBLEMATICCOMMUNICATIONWITHFREQUENTINACCURACIES?Thewritingonlyaddressessomeofthewritingtask.?Itdemonstratesaninadequateorganizationalstructure,andtheremayquiteoftenbealackofrelevance,clarity,consistencyorsupport.?Ithasfrequenterrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,anditdisplaysalimitedabilitytousethelanguagewithappropriacy.?Somedifficultyisexperiencedbythereader.8-6ALMOSTNOCOMMUNICATION?Thewritingalmostcompletelyfailstoaddressthewritingtask.?Ithasneitheranorganizat(yī)ionalstructurenorcoherence.?Almostallsentencescontainerrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,anditdisplaysnoabilitytousethelanguagewithappropriacy.?Evenafterconsiderableeffortonthepartofthereader,thetextislargelyincomprehensible.
專業(yè)八級作文開頭結(jié)尾寫作段首句?People’sopinionsabout…varyfrompersontoperson.Somepeopleconsider...Otherspointoutthat…?Whenitcomesto___,somepeopleholdthat___.Othersarguethattheoppositeistrue.Thereibablysometruthtobotharguments,but___.?Manypeopleadvocatethat___.Theyclaim/areoftheopinionthat(yī)___.Mineisthesameastheirsinthefollowingreasons.?Ithasbeenwidelynotedthat….
?It’suniversallyacknowledgedthat(yī)…
Thisraisesseriousdoubtsabout___?It’sgenerallyacceptedthat…
?Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…
?HereIwilldiscusstheprosandconsofthisquestion段首句?Asisknowntoall,
___isacommonphenomenoninoursociety.?Haveyoueverthought/wondered…??…Butdotheyrealizethat…??…Butisitreallythecase?PersonallyIthink…?…,butisitawiseone?Itisnowbeingchallengedbymoreandmorepeople.?It’sreportedbyarecent/newresearch/survey/studythat…結(jié)尾句–對比論證?Wecanconcludethat___hasbothpositiveandnegativeeffects.What(yī)wemustdoistomakesurethatthepositiveonesareencouragedandthenegativeonesareeliminatedasfaraspossible.?Onthewhole,___havebothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Butfairlyspeaking,everyoneshouldadmitthatitsadvantagesoutweighitdisadvantages.Weshould___.?AsfarasI’mconcerned,Idon’tagreewiththeviewthat(yī)___and___arealwaysinconflictwith/inoppositiontoeachother.…SoI’vecometotheconclusionthat___and___areequallyimportant.總結(jié)觀點?Inconclusion/Tosumup/Insummary/Inshort/Toconclude/Tobringalongstoryshort….?Tosumuptheabovearguments,Ithinkaproperattitudetowards___isthat___.?Experience/Evidence/Allthefactssuggest/show/demonstrate/indicate(s)that…?Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/Toaccountallthesefactors,wemaysafelydraw/reach/cometo/arrive/theconclusionthat(yī)…?If…,theeffortswillbeworthwhile/paid-off/rewarded.?Peopleusedto…inthepast,butthingsarequitedifferenttoday.?Personalexperiencehastaughtthat…
個人經(jīng)驗告訴我…?Thereiseveryreasontobelievethat…
完全有理由相信…?Thereisstrongevidencetoshowthat(yī)…
有缺鑿的證據(jù)顯示…專業(yè)八級短文寫作的基本模式
一、
段首句1)
People’sopinionsabout…varyfrompersontoperson.Somepeopleconsider...Otherspointoutthat…2)
Whenaskedabout…,mostpeoplesay…Butmanyotherpeopleregard…as….Ipersonallythink___.3)
Whenitcomesto___,somepeopleholdthat___.Othersarguethat(yī)theoppositeistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthtobotharguments,but___.4)
Manypeopleadvocatethat(yī)___.Theyclaim/areoftheopinionthat___.Mineisthesameastheirsinthefollowingreasons.5)
Ithasbeenwidelynotedthat….
It’suniversallyacknowledgedthat…
Thisraisesseriousdoubtsabout___.It’sgenerallyacceptedthat…
Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…
HereIwilldiscuss
theprosandconsofthisquestion.
6)
Withthedevelopmentofoursociety,___hasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Ithasbroughtusalotofbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeproblemsaswell.7)
?Asisknowntoall,
___isacommonphenomenoninoursociety.8)
Haveyoueverthought/wondered…?9)
…Butdotheyrealizethat…?/…Butisitreallythecase?PersonallyIthink…10)
…,butisitawiseone?Itisnowbeingchallengedbymoreandmorepeople.11)
Asthesayinggoes,…12)
It’sreportedbyarecent/newresearch/survey/studythat…
二、
結(jié)尾句(一)對比論證1)
Wecanconcludethat___hasbothpositiveandnegativeeffects.What(yī)wemustdoistomakesurethatthepositiveonesareencouragedandthenegativeonesareeliminatedasfaraspossible.2)
Onthewhole,___havebothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Butfairlyspeaking,everyoneshouldadmitthat(yī)itsadvantagesoutweighitdisadvantages.Weshould___.3)
AsfarasI’mconcerned,Idon’tagreewiththeviewthat___and___arealwaysinconflictwith/inoppositiontoeachother.…SoI’vecometotheconclusionthat___and___areequallyimportant.
(二)解決措施4)
Inmyopinion,itisnoteasyto___.ButI’mconfidentthatwe’llbeabletoovercomeallthedifficultiesthatconfrontusandachievesuccessesin___.5)
Manysolutionsareofferedhereandallofthemmakesomesense,butnoneisadequateenough.Theproblemshouldbestudiedindepthinthefutureandwestillhavealongwaytogo.6)
Itisimportant/necessary/essentialthateffective/proper/powerfulactions/measure/remediesshouldbetakento…7)
Inmyopinion,thewholesocietyshouldplacemuchemphasisontheimportanceof___.8)
Givenalltheabovearguments,itishightimethattheauthoritiesenforcedsomereformsto___.
(三)總結(jié)觀點9)
Inconclusion/Tosumup/Insummary/Inshort/Toconclude/Tobringalongstoryshort….10)
Tosumuptheabovearguments,Ithinkaproperattitudetowards___isthat___.11)
Experience/Evidence/Allthefactssuggest/show/demonstrate/indicatethat…12)
Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemaysafelydraw/reach/cometo/arrive/theconclusionthat…13)
If…,theeffortswillbeworthwhile/paid-off/rewarded.
三、
正文段落常用句型1、
分析因素a)
Thereareample/powerful/sufficient/variousreasonsinsayingthat(yī)…b)
Therearetwofactorsaccountingfor…c)
Therearesomegoodreasonsfor…d)
Therearetwopossiblereasonsfor…e)
Therearethreereasonsfortheimprovementinpeople’slivingconditions.Inthefirstplace,…Secondly,…Furthermore,…
2、
提出建議a)
Mysuggestiontodealwith/solve/tackletheproblemareasfollows.Tobeginwith,…Secondly,…Finally,…b)
Tocrackthishardnut,peoplehaveworkedoutmanyeffectivemeasures.c)
Toachievethebestresult,wehaveto…d)
Perhapsitisrecommendable/practical/feasibleto…e)
Maybewecouldfirstlyresortto…f)
Thetoppriorityin…is…g)
Perhapswecouldtry…asapremiumwayto…h(huán))
Perhapsnothingisbetterthan…i)
Inmyopinion,weshouldworkoutconcretesolutionstotheproblemof…
3、
發(fā)表見解a)
It’struethat…b)
Tobesure,…c)
Itcannotbemoreagreedupon…d)
Somethingimmediatelingtothemindis…e)
Wecandeducefromthispicturethatthedraweristryingtoat(yī)tractourattentionto…f)
Thepurposeofthispictureistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidto…g)
Butthereisadeepersocialmessageinthiscartoon.h)
It’simportant/necessary/urgent/difficult/easy/expensive/desirable/convenient/comfortableforsbtodo…It’sdesirabletobuildmorehospitals,shoppingcenters,recreat(yī)ioncenters,andotherpublicfacilitiestomeetthegrowingneedsofpeople.4、
分析利弊a)
Asapopularsayinggoes,“Everythinghastwosides.”Now…Ontheotherhand,…b)
Wheneverwetalkabout…,we’llinstantlyhavetheideathatit’sgoodfor…Indeed/Infact/Actually,…h(huán)aveadvantages.Wecantake…forexample.Inthemeantime/Meanwhile,wemustrealizethosedisadvantagesof…Firstofall,…Inaddition,…
5、
舉例闡述a)
forexample,…/forinstance,…b)
Let’stake…forexample.c)
…isagoodcaseinpoint.d)
Anexamplecominginhandisabout…e)
Anexampleisfoundin…f)
Wemaycite/quote/takeanotherexampleof…g)
Theopinion/point/ideamaybeproved/exemplified/illustratedbythefollowingfact…h(huán))
First/Second(Next)/Third(Then)/Last(Finally),…a)
Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly/Last(Finally)i)
Inthefirstplace/Secondly/LastbutnotleastThemostessential/mostimportant/primary/chiefis…j)
Firstandforemost/Secondly/Besides/Inaddition/Lastbutnotleast…
6、
引證觀點a)
Nowadaysthereismuch/generaldiscussionasto….b)
Now,itiscommonly/widely/increasinglybelieved/thought/held/acknowledged/heldthat…,c)
Accordingtoarecentsurvey/investigation/poll,…
7、
因果關(guān)系a)
…causes/produces/bringsabout/leadsto/resultsin/givesrisetosomeotherproblems……Thereisnodoubtthattheincreaseindemandcausestheriseinprices.b)
…resultsfrom/arisesfrom/liesin/canbeattributedtothefactthat……c)
asaresult,consequently,therefore,hence,so,d)
becauseofthis,forthesereasons,duetothefactthat…
8、
論述互相關(guān)系havemuch/something/nothingtodowith…becloselyrelatedto…bedirectlyboundupwith…Gohandinhandwith…l
Thepollutionofourenvironmenthasmuchtodowiththeincreasingnumbersofcars.l
Thestrengthofacountry’seconomyisdirectlyboundupwiththeefficiencyofitsindustryandagriculture.l
Morethantenleadingdiseasesarerelatedtosmoking,suchascancerandhearttrouble.
9、
比較對照比較:likeA,B…
JustasA,B…
A,similarly/correspondingly,likewise/inthesameway,B…
對照:Unlike/Contraryto/AsopposedtoA,B…Quitetotheopposite,…Differently…Thedifferenceliesin…Quitesurprisingly,……couldbetheotherwayround.?
A,however/ontheotherhand/incontrast,B..
A…,B,however/ontheotherhand/incontrast,…
10、
提出轉(zhuǎn)折觀點1)
Itsoundslikeagood/attractiveidea/suggestion,buttheyfailtounderstand/see/notice…?2)
Therebablyanelementoftruthinthearguments/ideas,buttheyignoreamoreimportantfact…
3)
Closerexamination/analysis,however,suggests/showsthatthisargument/claim/ideamaynotbeborneof/supportedbythefollowingevidence/facts/examples/stat(yī)istics.
4)
Howeverlogical/sound/forcibletheseargumentsmaybe,theydon'tmakesense/onlyskimthesurfaceoftheproblemwhen…isviewedtheotherway/takenintoconsideration.?5)
Asopposedto/Contrarytothewidely/commonly/generallyheldidea/belief/view,newstudies/factschallenge/failtojustifytheopinion/view.?6)
Good/Superior/Wonderfulas….,ithasitsowndisadvantages/itbringsitsownproblems.?7)
Theymayberightabout…,buttheyseemtoneglect/failtomention/takeintoaccount…?8)
Inallthediscussionanddebat(yī)eover…,oneimportant/basicfactisignored/overlooked/neglected.?9)Itistruethat/Admittedly,butitisunlikely/doesn'tfollow/doesn'tmeanthat…
10)Thereisanelementoftruthinthesearguments/statements,buttheyignoreadeeperandmorebasic/essential/importantfact/factor…
四、
英文寫作佳句1.Oneoftheblemsfacingournationtodayis…
我們國家如今面臨的緊迫問題之一是…2.Oneofthemostseriousproblemsmanypeopletalkaboutcenterson…許多人談?wù)摰囊粋€最嚴重的問題集中在…3.…isyetanothernewandbittertruthwemustlearntoface.…又是一個我們必須學(xué)會面對的痛苦的新情況。4.Thereisagrowingworldwideawarenessof…
世界上越來越多的人結(jié)識到…5.Agrowingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtorealizethat(yī)…isnotthesoleprerequisitefor…
越來越多的人開始意識到…不是…的唯一先決條件.6.Today,however,thingsarechangingand…
然而,今天,情況改變了…7.Peopleusedto…inthepast,butthingsarequitedifferenttoday.
過去,人們習(xí)慣于…。但今天的情況有很大的不同.8.Irecentlyreadanewspaperarticleon…Thedeplorableproblemof…hasarousepublicconcernnationwide.
最近,我在報紙上讀到一篇…?!膯栴}令人深感遺憾,它已經(jīng)引起了全國公眾的關(guān)注.
9.Wemustseekimmediatesolutionsfblemsleadingto…Ifallowedtoproceedunchecked,theproblemwillundoubtedly…
我們必須尋求立即解決引起…的辦法。假如任期自由發(fā)展,這一問題無疑會…10.Thereislittledoubtthatimmediateactionisrequiredto…
毫無疑問,必須立即采用行動11.It’shightimeweputanendto…
我們早該杜絕…的做法。12.However,wemustnotrestontheiraccomplishments,butmustinsteadwokassiduouslytorecordgreaterachievements.
然而,我們不能依靠他們的成績,而必須努力工作,取得恩輝煌的成績。13.Wedo,infact,havealongwaytogotoreachourfinalgoal,butachievingsomeremainswellwithintherealmofpossibility.
事實上,我們達成追最終目的尚有很長的路要走,但是,取得一些成績還是也許做到的。14.Themethodologysuggestedmaynotguaranteeultimat(yī)esuccess,buttheeventualpay-offcouldwellbeworththeeffort.Achievingevenpartialsuccesswillbenefitmankindandcontributetocreatingabetterworld.
所說的方法不一定保證最終的成功,但最后的結(jié)果非常值得付出努力。即使只獲得部提成功也會是人類受益,有助于發(fā)明一個更美好的生活。15.Whatevertheoutcome,wemustresolutelyproceedwithourobjective.
無論結(jié)果如何,我們必須堅定的繼續(xù)為目的而努力。16.Gonearethedayswhen…
…的日子已經(jīng)不復(fù)存在了。17.Historytellsusthat…
歷史告訴我們…18.Personalexperiencehastaughtthat…
個人經(jīng)驗告訴我…19.Thereiseveryrea
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