考研寫作秘笈

高分詞

因果：

forthesimplereasonthat...,thereasonforthisissimplythat...,

asaresult,asaconsequence

遞進(jìn)：

Tobegin/startwith,Firstandforemost,Primarily;Moreover,Furthermore,Whatis

more,Inadditiontothat,Besides;Finally,Lastbutnotleast.

并列：

and...aswell,coupledwith,foronething,foranother,ontheonehand,ontheother

hand

轉(zhuǎn)折：

but,yet,however,nevertheless,inspiteof...

否定：hardly,rarely,seldom,failto,farfromsatisfactory,nothingbutimportant.

雙重否定：Importantisnothing.Aneverfail(s)todoB.

比較：besuperior/inferiorto,morethanimportant

Therebe:Thereexist...Therearise...

Now:Nowadays,Atpresent,Inrecentyears

Moreandmore:agrowingnumberofpeople/anincreasingnumberofpeople/people

ingrowingnumbers/peopleinincreasingnumbers/Itisgrowinglygood/Itis

increasinglygood.

Many:aseaof,anoceanof,anarmyof,agreatmany

Some:asliceof,afractionof,quiteafew,several.

Allkindsof/different:avarietyof,adiversityof,various,diverse.

Adj.:of+n.ofimportance,oflowquality

Big:major,tremendous,immense,enormous,considerable

Small:minor,mini,tiny

Good:beneficiaLpositive,rosy,excellent,fabulous,awesome,fascinating,amazing,

terrific,fantastic,unbelievable,incredible

Bad:poor,terrible,horrible,negative,dreadful,adverse,unfavorable,severe,grave,

serious

Famous:well-known,outstanding,prestigious,distinguished,prominent,eminent,

enjoytremendousfame/popularity.

Important:significant,essential,basic,fundamental,indispensable,vital,crucial,

critical

Very:extremely,overwhelmingly,exceedingly,remarkably,impressively

Improve,better:further,promote,enhance,strengthen

Say,believe,think:hold,argue,claim,maintain,suppose,presume,assume,agree,

emphasize,Iamfullyconvincedthat...,harbortheideathat...,holdtheopinion

that...taketheattitudethat...

People:individuals,characters,folks,humanbeings.

十大萬能理由：科技、經(jīng)濟(jì)、教育、環(huán)境、健康、安全、交流、情感、時尚、生

活(內(nèi)容趨同最保險;相關(guān)即可、自圓其說)

科技：

exertpositiveinfluenceon/promote/enhance/improvethedevelopment/

advancementofscienceandtechnology

exertnegativeinfluenceon/setbarrierson/hamper/stop/affect...

經(jīng)濟(jì)：

exertpositiveinfluenceon/promote/enhance/improvethedevelopment/

advancementofeconomyandsociety

acquiregreatwealth

make/earnmoremoney

exertnegativeinfluenceon/setbarrierson/hamper/stop/affect/spoil/damage/

ruin...

sufferfromthelossofwealth

losemoremoney

教育：

exertpositiveinfluenceonchildren'seducationandgrowth

broadenpeople'shorizons

enrichpeople'slives

acquireadiversityofknowledgeandskills

developthespiritof...

exertnegativeinfluenceonchildren'seducationandgrowth

limitchildren'shorizons

makechildrenlacktheknowledge/skills/spiritof...

環(huán)境：

conserve/protecttheenvironment

maintainecologicalbalance

preserve/protecttheculturalheritage

damage/destroy...

健康：

exertpositive/negativeinfluenceonpeople'sphysicalandpsychologicalhealth

bringgreatbenefitto/beexceedinglybeneficialtopeople'sphysicaland

psychologicalhealth

havegreatharmto...

安全：

ensurethecommunity'ssafety/security

enjoythelifewithoutdiversecrimes

makepeopleconfrontthedangerofvariouspotentialcrimes

becheated/robbed/murdered/visitedbythievesandburglars

交流：

exertpositiveinfluenceon/promote/enhance/improvethematerialandcultural

communications/exchanges/mix/spreadofdifferentcountries

makepeopleknowmoreaboutothercountriesandtheworldoutside.

exertnegativeinfluenceon/setbarrierson/hamper/stop/affect...

makepeoplelackoftheknowledgeofforeignculturesandtheworldoutside

情感：

exertpositiveinfluenceon/promote/enhance/improvetherelationshipandemotions

offamilies

buildup/foster/developthefriendship/connectionsandharmoniesamongfriends

exertnegativeinfluenceon/setbarrierson/hamper/stop/affect...

drivepeopleselfish,coldandlonely

時尚：

becomemorefashionableandcool

becomeoutofdateandold-fashioned

生活：

enjoyahappyandconvenientlife

enjoyahappylifeandbrightfuture

enjoyabrightfutureandsustainabledevelopment

大作文模板

第一段：圖畫描述2句

1.人物/動物/事物+環(huán)境/服裝/表情/動作/文字說明1句

2.象征寓意（提出問題）：1句

第二段：意義闡釋（提出和分析問題）6句

1.象征寓意（提出問題）1句

2.論證（分析問題）：5句

（1）五大角度：背景、現(xiàn)狀（以小見大，把握象征寓意，個體想為群體，具體

想為抽象）、原因、后果、反方觀點(diǎn)

（2）九種手段：編造背景、編造共識、編造權(quán)威、編造報告、編造例子、虛擬

后果、正反論證、分類比較、解釋說明

第三段：建議措施（解決問題）4句

1.結(jié)論句：1句

2.針對雙方提建議：2句

3.包裝結(jié)尾、展望未來：1句

第一段

2000年

Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,sailsaboat,aremarkablyleisuredone,

huntinganoceanoffishes,incontrasttotheshockingsceneofthelowercartoon

whereintheseaof1995crowdsanarmyofboats,huntingonlyasinglefish,asight

thatbringsaboutinsightsintothemeaningofexcessivecommercialfishingamong

people./asightthatarouseswidespreaddiscussionsoftheissueofexcessive

commercialfishingamongpeople.

或Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionaboutapictureinthenewspaper.Asis

vividlyshowninthepicture,intheseaof1900sailsaboat,huntinganoceanoffishes,

whileintheseaof1995crowdsanarmyofboats,huntingonlyasinglefish.Sadand

shockingasthepictureis,thesymbolicmeaningbehindthepictureisasdeepasthe

ocean.Justasanoldproverbsays,wheretherearehumanbeings,thereisexcessive

commercialfishing./excessivecommercialfishingneverfailstoshockpeopleand

exertanegative/positive/tremendousinfluenceonanimals./humanbeingsarethe

mostdangerousenemiesofanimals.

2001年

Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,inthedarknessstandsalamp,aremarkably

brilliantone,glowinginpeace,inaccordancewiththetouchingscenethatabovethe

lampliesaslogan,sayingthatloveisalampthatbecomesbrighterespeciallyin

darkerplaces,asightthatbringsaboutinsightsintothemeaningofloveamong

peoplewhoareconcernedaboutthetopic.

2002年

Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,inthephotostandsanAmericangirl,a

remarkablycharmingone,smilingwithjoy,incorrespondencetotheinterestingscene

thatwithherappearsatraditionalChinesecostume,indicatingherfondnessof

Chinesecultures,asightthatarousewidespreaddiscussionsoftheissueofcultural

communicationamongpeople.

2003年

Asisvividlydepictedinthefirstpicture,inthegreenhousestandsaflower,a

remarkablydelicateone,bloominginpeacewithsunshine,incontrasttothenextone

whereintherainandstormstaysanotherflower,fadingawayrapidly,asightthat

bringsaboutinsightsintotheissueofjuvenileeducationamongpeople,especially

educatorswhoareconfrontedwiththeproblem.

第二段

2000

Withthetremendousdevelopmentofmodernsocietyandeconomy

changingpeople,slivesalmostovernight,perhapsnootherissuescan

bemoreinfluentialonusthanthatofexcessivecommercialfishingduring

thepastdecade.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatthatinourcurrent

societytheredoexistadiversityofexcessivecommercialfishingwhich

exertstremendouslynegativeinfluenceonus.uIndividualsofcurrent

age,facingagrowingnumberoffiercecompetitionsandenormouspressures

bothincareerandinlife,neverfailtoearnmoremoneybygofishing

alotthan/comparedwiththosewhodonot,“asMeng,anoutstanding

expertinsociology,onceconcludes.Amongalltheshocking/touching

factsrelatingtoexcessivecommercialfishingthatIhaveheard,noticed

andexperienced,themostimpressiveoneisFunanpeople,fishermenin

Chengdu,makingmoneybyfishingexcessively,withnofishtohuntnow.

AccordingtothelatestsurveyconductedbySichuanUniversity,oneof

themostfamousuniversitiesinChina,nearly70%oftheriversofoceans

areoverfished.Werethissituationtocontinue,ourenvironmentwould

bedestroyedandournaturalresourceswouldberunout.

2001

Apparently,wha\thedrawerintendstoconveyisthatourChinesecultureis

graduallyacceptedbywesternculture.TheAmericangirlstandsforwesternculture;

thetraditionalChinesecostumesymbolizesChineseculture.Obviously,ourhuman

societyhaswitnessedmanyexamples.Onecaseinpointisthatanincreasingnumber

offoreignpeoplestudytraditionalChinesemedicine.Basedonarecentsurvey,over

234,521,870foreignershavecometoChinatolearnChinese.Weretherenocultural

exchange,therewerenoadvancesofsociety.

2002

Whatisthemeaningof[hepicture?Thepastdecadehaswitnesseda

phenomenonthatanincreasingnumberofculturalintercourseshavetakenplace

owingtothereformandopendoorpolicybeingcarriedout.Accordingtoasurvey,

thenumberofpeoplecomingfromforeigncountrieshasreachedto100,000,000,who

havebroughtfreshideastoChinaandtakenawayChinesetraditionalessence.Were

therenosuchpolicy,wewouldnevertasteKFCatall;neitherwouldforeignersknow

anythingaboutChineseKungfu.

2003

With\heremarkablesocialreformbringingnewideasintopeople'slife,perhaps

nochangehascharacterizedthepastdecadesmoresignificantlythanthatofchildren's

education.Itisgenerallyagreeduponthat[oday'schildrenaresomuchprotectedby

theirparents.Theirparents,asissuggestedbysociologistswhoareconcernedwith

thisissue,wanttogivetheirchildrenalltheirlove.Withmoreaadmorechildren

steppingintothecomplexreality,thechildrenwhoareover-protectedbytheirparents

needmorehelpthanthosewhohavegrownupontheirown.Thereacemanycases

thatchildrenfailedtoadaptthemselvestothesociety.Onceleavinghome,theyleave

theprotectionthatofferscomfortableconditions,whichmakesitdifficultforthemto

earntheirliving.Asiscommonintoday'ssociety,agreatmanychildrengetlostin

realityandbecomeconfusedaboutlife.

第三段

2000

2001

Thenhowtoshowlovetoothers?Itgoeswithoutsayingthatwearelivingina

worldofloveandhelp.Wheneverwelendothersahelpinghand,wewillreceivehelp

somewhereelse.Allthemembersinthesocietyshouldjointheirhandsincreatinga

favorableenvironmentforothers.Onlyinasocietyfulloflovecanwehopeto

witnesstheidealsceneinwhichpeoplecanenjoytheirlivestotheuttermost.

2002

Hence,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.Foronething,weshould

appealtoourauthoritiestoencourageteenagerstoimprovethemselves.Foranother,

weshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethattraditionalChinesecultureisvery

vitaltous.Onlyinthiswaycanweprotectouryoungsters.AlsoIbelievethatwe

humanbeingscanimprovethepresentsituation,andwewillhaveabrighterfuture.

2005

Theproblembeingsoserious,itishightimethatwetookeffectiveandefficient

measurestocounterthemaltreatmenttowardsoldpeople.Foronething,lawsand

regulationsshouldbeworkedouttopunishthosewhowouldnotsupporttheir

parents9living;foranother,weyoungpeopleshouldbeeducatedtorespectand

esteemtheold.Onlyinareasonable,prosperousandhealthysocietycanwehopeto

witnesstheidealsceneinwhicholdpeoplecanenjoytheirtwilighttotheuttermost.

2002年20分作文：

Currently,nootherthingshavearrestedmoreattentionandconcernthancultural

exchange.InthemiddleofthepicturestandsanAmericangirl,smilingsweetlywith

hertraditionalChinesecostumeson.Itisdistinctthatthesignificantmeaningofthe

picturecannotbeoveremphasized.

Apparently,whatthedrawerintendstoconveyisthatourChinesecultureis

graduallyacceptedbywesternculture.TheAmericangirlstandsforwesternculture;

thetraditionalChinesecostumesymbolizesChineseculture.Obviously,ourhuman

societyhaswitnessedmanyexamples.Onecaseinpointisthatanincreasingnumber

offoreignpeoplestudytraditionalChinesemedicine.Basedonarecentsurvey,over

234,521,870foreignershavecometoChinatolearnChineseandTCM.Werethereno

culturalexchange,therewerenoadvanceofsociety.

Formypart,Iamgreatlyconvincedthatculturalexchangeplaysanextremely

vitalroleintheageofinformationandcommunication.Everynationreliesonone

anotherexcessivelyclosely.Accordingly,onlyinthiswaycanourcountycatchup

withothers.

2003年20分作文:

Thesetofdrawingsabovevividlydepictsthedestinyofaflower

indifferentcircumstances.Asisshowninthefirstcartoon,theflower

isplacedinacomfortablegreenhousewhichsheltersitfromthe

threateninglighteningandstorm.Withpropertemperature,moistureand

fertilizer,theflowerisgrowinginfullbloom.Onthecontrary,when

removedfromthegreenhouseandexposedtothedrivingrain,theflower

soonfadesandwithers,withthepetalscastaboutonthegrounds.

Tobeginwith,thepurposeofthedrawingsistoshowusthatthe

flowergrowinginthegreenhousecannotwithstandthetestofthestorm,

yetthesymbolicmeaningssubtlyconveyedshouldbetakenmoreseriously.

Thedelicateflowerisnaturallyassociatedwithyoungpeople,tobe

specific,theonlychildreninourcurrentsociety;thegreenhouse

epitomizesparents'dotingcareandabundantmaterialsuppliesthatcan

shieldthechildrenfromthestorms,ortheharshreality.Oncetheyoung

peoplebegintoseekindependenceandacceptchallengesfromthereal

world,theyarefoundtoospoiledtobestrongenoughinthefaceof

difficulties.

Accordingly,itisvitalforustoderivepositiveimplicationsfrom

thesethought-provokingdrawings.Ontheonehand,wecanfrequentlyuse

themtoenlightentheyouthtobemoreindependentinlife.Ontheother

hand,parentsshouldbesensibleenoughtogivetheirchildrenmore

freedomtodealwithtroublesandproblems.Onlybyundergoingmore

challengesandtoilsinadversitycanyoungpeoplecultivatestrong

personalityandability,andonlyinthiswaycantheybecomewinnersin

thiscompetitiveworld.

2004年18分作文:

Asisshowninthepicture,onarrivingatthefinishinglineof

araceontheplayground,thelovelyyoungmanhastocontinuehisnew

journeyinnotimeinsteadofstoppingtotakearest.Hehassuccessfully

settledthepuzzleof“stoppingorgoingon“whichmighthaveconfused

manyothers.

Withtheincreasingpaceofmodernlife,perhapsnochangehas

characterizedthepastdecasemoredramaticallythanthatofpeoples

viewontheirownlife.Itisgenerallyagreeduponthatpeoplehaveto

adjustthemselvestothisnewchange.Ontheonehand,nodoubt,people

willgainalotbysettingnewgoalsintheirdailylife,takethefamous

scientistThomasEdisonforexample.Hehaddoneverywellinhisearly

life,butcontinuedtopursuesomethingmoredifficultallthroughhis

life.Ontheotherhand,ifoneisobsessedwiththesuccesshehasachieved,

hewouldlosethechancetopursuenewsuccess.Whatismore,hemaybecome

theslaveofhissuccess.Therearemanycasesshowingthatpeoplelose

theircouragetobetterthemselvesafterbecomingsuccessful.

Tosumup,one'sviewonhissuccessdetermineshisfuture.In

myopinion,itisnecessarytocarryoutanation-widecampaign

publicizingpeoplewhohaveaburningdesireformoreandevergreater

achievementwhentheyarealreadywell-known.Sothatpeopleinthe

societywilldevelopaforward-lookingattitudeandmaketheirlifeworth

livingandtheworldmorebeautifulaswell.

2006年18分作文

Moreandmoreyoungpeopleareincreasinglyinfluencedbyforeign

culture.Ascanbeclearlyseenfromtheabovepicture,ayounggentleman

puts“Beckham”onhisface.Anotherdecentlydressedyounggentleman

iswillingtopay300yuantohavehishairmadeinhisfavoritestyle.

Itisclearthatthepictureimpliesacommonphenomenoninoursociety

today:moreandmorepeople,especiallytheyoung,areendlesslychasing

popularthings,disregardingthecostthattheymustpay.

Thereareatleastthreegoodreasonsforthisphenomenon.Inthe

firstplace,thespreadingofforeigncultureinourcountryinrecent

yearsmaybethemainreason.Secondly,manyyoungpeopleinourmodern

societyhaveanopenmind.Consequently,theyarewillingtoacceptnew

things.Lastbutnotleast,alotofpeoplehavebecomericherandricher.

Asaresult,theycanpayfortheexpensetodothatkindofthings.There

maybeotherreasons,butitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementioned

reasonsarecommonlyacceptable.

AsfarasIamconcerned,thespreadingofforeigncultureinour

societyisnotabadthing.Butasapopularsayinggoes,everythinghas

twosides.Thisphenomenoniswithoutexception.Mysuggestionastothe

bestwaytocopewiththeproblemisasfollows.Ontheonehand,people

shouldtakeaproperattitudetowardthisphenomenon.Ontheotherhand,

oursocietyisexpectedtoappealtothegeneralpublictoresistitsbad

effect.Iamsurethatmyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.

圖表作文：

Ascanbeseenformthebarchar,hepastthreeyearshaswitnessedvital

changesinthenumberofMA/MScandidates.In2005,thenumberofMA/MS

candidateswasabout1,300,000,whichwasnearlytwotimesaslargeasthenumber

in2003.Whatcausesthechangesasreflectedinthisbarchart?

Apparently,Icanthinkofnobettercausesforthephenomenonthanthe

following.Foronething,aseaofcandidates,includingthepersonswhoareworkers

andwhoarestillstudents,intendtoimprovethemselvesbystudyingingraduate

school.Foranotherthing,thehardnessofhuntingforajobmakesthembeMA/MS

candidates,hopingtohavehigherdegreesandhavesatisfactoryjobs.Itistheabove

factorsthatcausethechangesinthischart.

Consequently,we,fromthefactorsstatedabove,canconfidentlyanddefinitely

predictthatthenumberofMA/MScandidateswillneverdecreaseinfutureseveral

yearsandagrowingnumberofstudentsandworkerswilljinthearmyofMA/MS

candidates.

1999年滿分作文：

Fromthesegraphs,wecandrawaconclusionthat,withthegrowth

ofhumanpopulation,thenumberofspecieshasdecreasedrapidlyin

America,andsomespecieshaveevenvanishedfromourplanet.

Whydoesthisphenomenonappear?Ithinkthereareseveral

possiblereasonsforthis.First,witharapidgrowthofpopulation,more

andmorepeoplecametolivewheresomewildspecieshavebeenliving.

Thenthesespecieshavetomovetootherplaces.Someofthemprobably

cannotadapttothenewenvironmentanddie.Second,althoughmanypeople

lookonthewildlifeastheirfriends,somepeoplemaynotthinkso.They

catchalotofwildanimalsandselltheminordertogetmoremoney.Third,

withthedevelopmentoftheindustry,thenaturalbalanceandtheecologic

environmentaredestroyed.Thedeforestationhasbecomemoreandmore

serious.Sosomeofthewildlivesbecomehomelessandextinct.

Inordertoprotectthewildlife,Ihavesomesuggestions.First,

thegovernmentsshouldmakelawstopreventthemfrombeingcaughtand

killed.Second,thegovernmentsshouldeducatepeopletolovethenature

andprotectit.Third,asforourselves,weshouldtakepracticalactions

toprotectourlivingenvironment.

小作文

2005年

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