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給澳大利亞的朋友寫一封信，談?wù)劀p負(fù)給學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的變化。

Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.15分滿分作文

I’mverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesinceourhomeworkhasreduced.Beforethat,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwastheonlything

weshoulddo.Intheevening,wealsohadalotofhomeworktodo.Wecouldnotgotobed

until

11:30.Nevertheless,

since

reducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime.Intheevening,IalsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.Inolongerstayuplate;onthecontrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.

Inshort,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.詞匯,句型（高級(jí)）和語法多樣化

1.覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)

2.應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯

3.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊要點(diǎn)全連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading點(diǎn)題；一兩個(gè)句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body

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技巧1.使用較高級(jí)的詞匯3.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫一篇有“英語味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。增強(qiáng)書面表達(dá)效果的技巧2.使用較豐富的句式Let’senjoy1,Afterfinishinghishomework,theboyplantedhimselfinfrontoftheTV.2,Thelittleboywhistledhomebecausehegothighgradesinhismathsexam.3,Thepath(小路）lostitselfintheforest.4,Travellinginatrainsurelybeatsdrivingacarbyyourself.5,YoucanlaughaSaturdaynightawaybywatchingacrosstalkshow.1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.3.Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.4.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Thankstothegoodweather,

ourjourneywascomfortable.Practice1怎樣使用較高級(jí)的詞匯Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty–sixclassrooms詞組優(yōu)先1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名詞性從句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒裝句)3.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虛擬語氣）4.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用過去分詞).What

surpriseshim

isthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice2

怎樣使用較豐富的句式WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Practice

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請(qǐng)?jiān)谙铝芯渥又校ㄩg）填上恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或意思有聯(lián)系的短語。XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacar____________Icouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itwasnotlong_______thepolicecame.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.whensothatbeforeAssoonas

聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡(jiǎn)要介紹這個(gè)村的情況：

1)大小：近100戶人家，約500口人。

2)變化：過去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?，F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。

3)教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。注意：1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。

2）詞數(shù)：100-120之間。Practice4書面表達(dá)：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,

ithaschangedalotsince1978③andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.書面表達(dá)：Nowitistakingonanewlook.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥

Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦and⑧whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨What’smore,

theyenjoyfreeeducation.⑩Mayyouenjoyyourstayherethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.

Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisasmallone

with/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobevery