公開課-高三英語寫作課件

公開課_高三英語寫作課件第一頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。英語書面表達(dá)EnglishCompositionWriting第二頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。[寫作內(nèi)容]1.以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2.以約120詞就“制定規(guī)劃與達(dá)成目標(biāo)”這一主題進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括：(1)海貍修水壩的故事給你的啟示是什么？(2)請(qǐng)結(jié)合你的生活經(jīng)歷闡述“制定規(guī)劃與達(dá)成目標(biāo)”之間的關(guān)系。[寫作要求]1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事．也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫第三頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。

Beaversareverydiligentdam-builderswhocanbuildextremelygooddams.However,theysometimesdon’tknowwheretobuildthedamsorwhichdamsshouldbefixedonlybecausetheyhavenoconsciousnesstomakeaplan.Thebeavers’storyillustratestheimportanceofplanning.Withoutaplanthebestintentionsandeffortswillnotproduceresults.Weshouldn’tworkblindlybuthaveaclearideaofourpurpose,theactionsneededtoachieveit,andhowtheseshouldbeordered.第四頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。Asajuniorstudent,IachievedconsiderablesuccessinlearningEnglishthroughthecombinationofhardworkandplanning.Ipreparedgoodmaterialswiththehelpofmyteacher,madeplansformydailystudyandself-monitoredthewholeprocessofmylearning.Imaderapidprogressandbecameveryconfident.IthinkIcouldn’thavedoneitwithoutagoodplan.第五頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。

Diligenceisakeytosuccess,butinmyopinion,goodplanisalsoessential.Throughplanning,wecandevelopcleargoals,findmoreefficientandeffectivemethodsandthushavemoreopportunitiestoreachourgoalsthanthroughhardworkingalone.第六頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。

AppreciateandlearnthethreewellorganizedcompositionsfromstudentsTheEssay第七頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。Whatmakesagoodessay?Discussion第八頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。ContentEverythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(內(nèi)容要完整)第九頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。Structure*Goodbeginningandending(好的開頭結(jié)尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(結(jié)構(gòu)合理,行文流暢)*Properlinkingwordsbetweensentences第十頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。1.Basedonthispassage,____________________,makingaplanbeforedoingsomethingisessential.2.____________,

we’llcompleteourgoalwithareasonableplan.3.___________________________it’simportanttohaveaplan.asfarasIamconcernedOnthecontrary

asfarasIamconcerned

onthecontraryasaconsequence使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞UseproperlinkingwordsAsaconsequence第十一頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。4.Asanoldsayinggoes,“nopains,nogains”,_____________________,Ithink,onlybytakingpainstocompleteourgoalswithaplan,canweattainsuccess.

5._________________,Ihaverealizedthevitalimportanceofastrongplan.

howeverSincethenhoweverSincethen第十二頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。Language*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(沒有語法錯(cuò)誤)*Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(詞語的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用和句式的富于變化)第十三頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。Adoptavarietyofsentencepatterns

使用較豐富的句式thispassage,asfarasIamconcerned,Somethingisessential.2.Withoutadetailedplan,Icouldn’tevenallocatemytimesensible,makingmeidleawaytheentirevocation

1.Basedonmakingaplanbeforedoing第十四頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。Adoptavarietyofsentencepatterns

使用較豐富的句式Formypart,Ithinkthatadetailedplanistoapersonwhatalighthouseistoaship.

Inaword,beingastudent,weshouldlearnarule,thatis,aplanofvitalimportanceforustoachievesuccess.第十五頁(yè)，共18頁(yè)。Adoptavarietyofsentencepatterns

使用較豐富的句式5.Althoughbeaversarealwaysthesymbolofworkinghard,theirunplannedworkingarealwaysuseless,leadingtothewasteofboththeirtimeandsuperbability.

6.Therefore,theconfine