2023屆高三英語寫作專項讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)（水中救妻）課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)1——水中救妻子題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ItwasarainyNovembermorning.OvercomewithangerIknewifIdidn’tleavethehousesoonIwouldlosemytemperwithmyhusband,Joe.Asraincamedowninsheets,Joeofferedtotakemetowork.Istruggledintomyjacket,seizedmybagandteachingplansandignoredhim.Heinsistedandreachedforhisboots.Ilookedatthepilesofnewspapersandthedirtydishesstillonthetable.“Don’tyouhaveenoughtodo?Icantakecareofmyself”Istormedout,notevenkissinghimgood-bye.Joeshoutedaftermenottotaketheshortcut(捷徑).JoeandIhadbeeneagerlylookingforwardtoourretirementwhenaheartattackthatpastspringforcedhimtoleavehisjobearlierthanwehadplanned.AsthemedicalbillsmountedwerealizedIwouldhavetocontinueworkingfull-timewhileJoestayedhomeandtookoverthehousework.4續(xù)寫原文Thenewarrangementwasadisaster.Exhaustedafteradayoffullwork,allIwantedwasahothomecookedmealandagoodnight’ssleep.However,whatgreetedmeatthetablewasamicrowavepackage.Sometimeshewouldserveoatmeal(燕麥)forseveralnightsinarow.OnenightwhenIdraggedmyselftobed,IwasterrifiedtodiscoverJoehadturnedourwhitesheetsblue.Hetoldmehehadfoundouthowtosaveonwater,soapandelectricity.Hepattedhisbluetrousersandannouncedproudlywashingeverythingtogetherwasjustthesecret.Tenminuteslater,ignoringJoeswarningIturnedoffthemainroute.Ithoughtithadn’trainedenoughtofloodtheroad,butasIroundedthecornerwaterrushedacrossmypath.Afterafewfeet,thecargotstuck.Iopenedthedoorandwaterpouredin.Ihurriedlyclosedthedoor.Icouldn’triskwalkinginthis.Almost20minutespassed.Thecarbegantoshake.IgotfrightenedtodeathwhenIheardthreelonghonks(喇叭聲).5段首句Paragraph1：Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.Paragraph2：IscreamedthatIcouldn’tmakeit.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點8續(xù)寫原文方向OnarainyNovembermorning,IquarreledwithmyhusbandJoeforhisbadperformanceinhousehold.TooangrytorememberJoe’swarning,Itooktheshortcutbuthadmycarstuckbecauseofasuddenheavyrain.Facedwiththisdilemma,Ifoundthatthereappearedatruckwithlightsandhonkson,so……9續(xù)寫建議第一段：我的肩膀，我凝視著卡車閃爍的燈光。是喬！我忍不住淚流滿面。喬喊我不要害怕。然后他扔了一根粗繩子，這樣我就可以抓住它，徑直走向他。我打開門，抓住它，慢慢地走了出去。然而，一次突如其來的跌倒讓我陷入了湍急的水中。我掙扎著站起來，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)一根樹枝擋住了我面前的去路。插10續(xù)寫建議第二段：我尖叫著說我做不到。然而，喬仍然保持冷靜！他敦促我一步一步來，并向我保證我能做到。我慢慢地、小心翼翼地向前走，然后倒在他的懷里。我靠著他的胸膛抽泣著，道歉說我不應(yīng)該走捷徑。喬拍拍我，說他最關(guān)心的是我的安全。直到那時我才意識到喬實際上知道如何照顧我，盡管他在家務(wù)上很麻煩。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.ItwasJoe!Icouldn’thelpburstingintotears.Joeshoutedtomenottobefrightened.ThenhethrewathickropesothatIcouldhangontoitandwalkstraighttowardhim.Iopenedthedoor,grabbeditandinchedout.However,asuddenfallleftmeintherushingwater.Istruggledtomyfeet,onlytofindabranchblockingthewayrightinfrontofme.13范文呈現(xiàn)IscreamedthatIcouldn’tmakeit.Joe,however,remainedcalm!HeurgedmetotakeonestepatatimeandassuredmeIcouldmakeit.ImovedforwardslowlyandcautiouslybeforeIfellintohisarms.Sobbingagainsthischest,IapologizedthatIshouldn’thavetakentheshortcut.Joepattedmesayinghisprimaryconcernwasmysafety.OnlythendidIrealizeJoeactuallyunderstoodhowtot