高中英語-Book6 Unit 3 writing教學(xué)課件設(shè)計(jì)

第一屆“一師一優(yōu)課”英語學(xué)科人教版Book6Unit3AhealthylifeReadingandWriting

目標(biāo)呈現(xiàn)教學(xué)目標(biāo)TeachingAims

TeachingAims:?Tolearnhowtowritealetterofadvice.?Todevelopstudents’writingability.話題導(dǎo)入★EnjoyavideoStep1LetterreadingReadthisletterandfindtheproblemsXiaoleifacesDear…,Canyouhelpmeplease?Mybestfriendhasjuststartedsmoking.IdonotlikeitandItoldherwhatIthought.ShelaughedatmeandsaidthatIwasnotgrown-upenough.ThensheofferedmeacigaretteandIfeltsoembarrassedandawkward.Ididnotknowhowtorefuseit.Pleasehelpme.Idonotwanttostartsmoking,butalsoIdonotwanttolosemybestfriend,either.Yourssincerely,LiXiaoleiWhatproblemsXiaoleifaces?①Hisfriendhasstartedsmoking,buthedoesn’tlikeit.②Whenhisfriendofferedhimacigarette,hefeltembarrassedandawkward.③Hedoesn’twanttostartsmoking,buthedoesn’twanttolosehisbestfriend,either.

Howtosolvetheproblems?①tellhisfriendthebadeffectsofsmoking②persuadehimnottofeelembarrassedandawkward③trytotalktohisfriend

課中探究

DiscussionThebadeffectsofsmoking2.ThestructureoftheletterofadviceDiscussion1.Thebadeffectsofsmoking◆beaddictiveandexpensive◆doharmtoyourhealth◆beadirtyhabit◆smellterrible◆havedifficultiesinbecomingpregnantPara.1Para.2Para.3showyoursympathyforhimandencouragehimlisttheadviceonhowtosolvetheproblemexpressyourwish2.Thestructureoftheletterofadvice

beginningbodyending課內(nèi)任務(wù)

Writealetterofadvice很好覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)；應(yīng)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)好雖漏掉1-2個(gè)要點(diǎn)，但結(jié)構(gòu)正確適當(dāng)雖漏一些內(nèi)容，有一些語法錯(cuò)誤五步寫作規(guī)范第一步：細(xì)審題、三確定1.確定體裁：本文為________2.確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應(yīng)為第_____人稱3.確定時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)用________建議信一一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)第二步：擬要點(diǎn)、列提綱1.對(duì)李曉磊表示同情：________________2.對(duì)李曉磊提出的建議：______________3.對(duì)李曉磊表示祝愿：_______________第三步：依提綱、準(zhǔn)翻譯要點(diǎn)一：很抱歉聽說你處在這種困難的局面。要點(diǎn)二：告訴她吸煙的危害。要點(diǎn)三：你沒有必要感到尷尬和害怕。要點(diǎn)四：你應(yīng)該靜靜地和你的朋友談?wù)劇Ｒc(diǎn)五：希望以上建議對(duì)你有幫助。I’msorry(that)youareinsuchadifficultsituation.Tellherthebadeffectsofsmoking.Youneedn’tfeelembarrassedandawkward.Youshouldtalktoyourfriendgently.Ihopewhat’smentionedabovemightbehelpful.第四步：句升級(jí)、求靚麗句式升級(jí)一：用whynot改寫要點(diǎn)二。句式升級(jí)二：用thereisnoneed改寫要點(diǎn)三。句式升級(jí)三：在要點(diǎn)五中強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語hope。Whynottellherthebadeffectsofsmoking.Thereisnoneedforyoutofeelembarrassedandawkward.Idohopewhat’smentionedabovemightbehelpful.第五步：巧銜接、順成文DearXiaolei,

Iamsorryyouare_____suchadifficultsituation.__________,thesituationiseasy___________(change)ifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesome_______(tip)tohelpyou.

First,whynottellherthebadeffectsofsmoking.Forexample,smokingcigarettesis__________(addict)andexpensive.Inthemeanwhile,smokingnotonlydoesharm____thehealthofsmokersbutalsoaffectsthehealthofnon-smokersaroundthem.Ifyoudothis,thereisnoneedforyoutofeel_______________(embarrass)inHowevertochangetipsaddictivetoembarrassedandawkward.Second,youshouldtrytotalktoyourfriend________(gentle)andexplainthatyouarestillgoodfriendsanddon’twanttobreakthisfriendship.However,youwillnotbegin_________(smoke)tosuither.Lastbutnotleast,youshouldgivehertheinformationabove,persuadeher_______(quit)smokingandthenexplainthatwhatevershechoosestodoyouwillremainherfriend.Idohopewhat’s___________(mention)abovemightbehelpful.Yoursincerely,SunGaogentlysmokingtoquitmentionedDear______,Iamsorry(that)youarehavingtrouble/difficulty/problemsin______(問題)。However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.First(ly),whynot…?Ifyoudothis,…Second(ly),youshould/can…Then/Thatway,…Third(ly),itwouldbeagoodideaif…Bydoingthis,…Lastbutnotleast,…Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yoursincerely,LiHua模板一模板二Dear______,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout_______(問題),andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:________(建議內(nèi)容).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour________(祝愿)Yoursincerely,LiHua建議信開頭常用句式：①I’msorry(that)youarehavingtrouble/difficulty/problemsin…②Iknowyouarenowhavingtrouble…③I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon…④However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.⑤Herearesometipstohelpyou./Hereareafewsuggestions.增分佳句2.表達(dá)建議常用句式：①First(ly),whynot…?Ifyoudothis,youcan…②Second(ly),youshould/cantryto…③Third(ly),itwouldbeagoodideaif…④Lastbutnotleast,youshould…⑤AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopini