高三英語二輪復習建議信寫作課件

TolearntowritealetterofsuggestionThestructureofaletter1.TheHeading2.TheGreeting3.TheBody4.TheComplimentaryClose5.TheSignatureLine信頭是指發(fā)信人的地址和日期，通常寫在第一頁的右上角。行首可以齊頭寫，也可以逐行縮進寫。地址的書寫順序由小到大：門牌號、街道、城市、?。ㄖ荩⑧]編、國名，最后寫發(fā)信日期。私人信件一般只寫寄信日期即可。

TheHeading(信頭)TheGreeting(稱呼)正文是書信的主體。與中文信件不同的是，英文書信的正文的開頭不是先寫一些問候語，再闡明寫信的目的，而是直接說明寫信人的身份及寫信的目的，然后提出寫信人的情況、想法或要求，并加以必要的解釋或說明。英文書信陳述目的時，應該直截了當、意思明確、層次清楚、言簡意賅。書信正文的第一句話或第一段，通常被稱為起首語。一般說來，人們習慣用一些客套的寫法作為書信正文的起始，即先將對方來信的日期、主題加以簡單描述，以便使對方一看便知該信是回答哪一封信的。如果是第一次給別人寫信，也可用開頭語作必要的自我介紹，并表明自己寫信的主要目的。TheBody(正文)公務信件的結尾禮詞包含兩部分：發(fā)信人的結尾套語與署名。結尾套語寫在簽名上面一行，第一個字母要大寫，套語結尾后面要加逗號。在公務信件中，發(fā)信人常用的結尾套語有：Yourstruly,Yourssincerely,Respectfullyyours等。私人信件中，發(fā)信人常用的結尾套語有：Sincerelyyours,Lovelyyours,Yourlovely,Yourlovingson/daughter等。TheComplimentaryClose(結尾禮詞)寫信人的簽名常位于結尾禮詞正下方一二行。除非是給很熟悉的人寫信，簽名一般須寫出全名。簽名常常較潦草，不易辨認，因此在簽名的正下方須打印出全名。TheSignatureLine(簽名)TheHeadingTheGreetingThebodyThesignaturelineSunLei18HongyangYuquanCounty18March,202_DearMrXue,Ilearnfromthelocalnewsthatyouarethearchitectwhoistodesignthesupermarket.AsampleofaletterofsuggestionIamwritingtoaskifyouhaveconsideredthematterofeasyuseofthesupermarketbypeopleinwheelchairs.Inparticular,Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowingthings:1.Widthofaisles[a?lz]

走道，過道.Canyoupleasemakesurethattheaislesarewideenoughtoallowwheelchairstopassthrough?Insomesupermarketstheaislesaresonarrow

thatapersoninawheelchaircannotmovealongthemeasily.2.Heightofshelves.Canyoupleasedesignshelvesthatcanbereachedbypeopleinwheelchairs?Insomesupermarketspeopleinwheelchairshavetoaskothershopperstohelpthem.Thistakesawaytheirindependence.3.Liftstootherfloors.Liftscouldbeinplacesthatpeopleinwheelchairscangettoeasily.Itisverydifficultifliftsarerightatthebackoftheshopandpeoplehavetogoupanddowntheshelvesbeforetheygettoit.4.Carparks.Ihopeyouwillleavesomecarspacesclosetothefrontoftheshopforpeopleinwheelchairs.Itisverydifficultiftheyhavetoparkalongwayawayfromtheshopandwheelthemselvesoverroughgroundtotheentrance.Thankyouforreadingmyletter.Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestions.Disabledpeopleshouldhavethesameopportunitiesasable-bodiedpeopletoshopindependentlyandtheyshouldbeabletodosowithdignity.Iamsuremanypeoplewilladmireyoursupermarketifyoudesignitwithgoodaccessfordisabledpeople.Thesupermarketownerswillalsobehappyasmorepeoplewillbeabletoshopthere.Yourssincerely,SunLei假定你是李華，你市將修建地鐵。請你根據(jù)所給提示給負責該項目的英國設計師寫一封建議信，請求其考慮殘疾人的需求。1.專用坡道（ramp）、電梯及座位；2.手語（dactylology/?d?kt??l?l?d??/）和盲文（Braille/bre?l/）指示；3.專用服務窗口(Aspecialservicewindow)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearSiroMadam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua一、審題定調本寫作要求給地鐵設計師寫一封建議信，屬于應用文。建議信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建議或忠告。時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱多用第二人稱。提出的建議要合理、有說服性，語氣要禮貌委婉。二、謀篇布局因為本寫作開頭和結尾已給出，所以我們只需要寫出正文部分即可。正文部分可分為三部分：第一部分：引出話題（就地鐵的無障礙設施提建議）；第二部分：提出建議（提供殘疾人專用坡道、電梯及座位，增加手語和盲文指示，開設專用服務窗口）；第三部分：表達心愿（希望對方采納所提建議）三、組織語言1.引出話題，說明寫信目的。普通表達高級表達I’velearnedthatyouwilldesign...for...Ihaveheardthatyouwillberesponsiblefor/takechargeofdesigning...★I’mwritingtoremindyoutoconsider...★Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningtheserviceforthedisabled.★Ihopeyou’llnotmindmewritingtosuggestyouconsider...★Consideringtheneedsofdisabledpeople,Iwouldliketoofferseveralsuggestions.2.提出建議并說明理由。普通表達高級表達Youshoulddesignspecial...,whichwouldbeconvenientforpeopleinwheelchairstocomeandgo.

...shouldbedesignedtomakeiteasyforthemtocomeandgo.I’dliketoadviseyoutoaddinstructionsin...fordisabledpassengers.Thedisabledwillappreciateitifinstructionsin...areprovidedforthem.Itwouldbebetterifaspecialservicewindowwith...forthedisabledisdesigned.Aspecialservicewindowequippedwith...shouldbeopenedtohelpthedisabledgetwhattheywanttoknoweasily.3.表達心愿。普通表達高級表達Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsuseful/helpful/practical.★Iwouldhighlyappreciateyourconsiderationofmyproposals.★Ihopemysuggestionswillmeetwithyourapproval.Iwouldhighlyappreciateyourconsiderationofmyproposals.

Yoursfaithfully,LiHua讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:

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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Unfortunately,RamutoldShantisomeonehadboughtthedoll.

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thatmadehimwell.Thethreeofthemsoldgarlandsatthemarketthatafternoonandtheymadealotofmoney.Afterhelpingherauntpackupthestall,ShantirantoRamu’sshop.Sheburstinandtookoutallhermoney.Unfortunately,RamutoldShantisomeonehadboughtthedoll.ShantipickeduphermoneysilentlyandranoutthedoorbeforeRamucouldseehertears.MuchtoShanti’ssurprise,whenshearrivedhome,shereceivedalargepackageandthere