（2023年）山西省陽(yáng)泉市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試(含答案)

（2023年）山西省陽(yáng)泉市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試(含答案)學(xué)校:________班級(jí):________姓名:________考號(hào):________

一、1.Writing(10題)1.1.一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為運(yùn)動(dòng)要以興趣為中心

2.另一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為運(yùn)動(dòng)要以健康為中心

3.你的看法

Interest-orientedOrHealth-orientedSports

2.Forthispart,youaresupposedtowriteashortessayentitledInternetaccordingtothefollowingoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.Thefirstsentenceofeachparagraphhasbeengiventoyou.

1.因特網(wǎng)越來(lái)越普遍地進(jìn)入到我們的學(xué)習(xí)、工作和生活當(dāng)中

2.因特網(wǎng)的益處

3.因特網(wǎng)的消極方面

Internet

Internethasbeenplayinganincreasingroleinourdailylife.______.

Internethasenabledustodoalotofthingsmoreeasilyandquickly.______.

However,ifnotmanagedproperly,Internetcancreatemanyproblemstoo.______.

Allinall,wecannotlivewithoutInternetnow.______.

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetitle:HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation

1．中國(guó)已漸漸步入老齡化社會(huì)(65歲以上的老年人已占全國(guó)人口的7%)

2．我認(rèn)為應(yīng)如何對(duì)待老年人群(社會(huì)關(guān)愛與福利制度，家庭溫暖，社區(qū)服務(wù)……)

3．我的結(jié)論

4.Directions:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCyberCrimes.Youshouldwritenolessthan150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:

1.網(wǎng)上犯罪的形式很多，如......

2.網(wǎng)上犯罪的根源

3.如何打擊網(wǎng)上犯罪現(xiàn)象

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledSayNotoDrunkDriving.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.眾所周知，酒后駕車十分危險(xiǎn)

2．但近年來(lái)越來(lái)越多的人酒后駕車．原因是……

3．我認(rèn)為……

SayNotoDrunkDriving

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledPrivateCarsinChina.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.簡(jiǎn)單介紹中國(guó)私家車發(fā)展的現(xiàn)狀

2．說(shuō)明擁有私家車的利與弊

3．指出私家車在中國(guó)的未來(lái)發(fā)展方向

Usefulwordsandexpressions：

溫室氣體排放：greenhouseemission

交通堵塞：congestion/trafficjam

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledGoingonStudyingorGoingtoWork.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.有些人決定畢業(yè)后讀研。

2．有些人決定畢業(yè)后工作。

3．你的看法。

GoingonStudyingorGoingtoWork

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledCollegeStudents'SocialResponsibilities.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.許多大學(xué)生缺乏社會(huì)責(zé)任感，比如……

2.造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因

3.大學(xué)生應(yīng)如何履行自身的社會(huì)責(zé)任

CollegeStudents'SocialResponsibilities

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteashortessayentitledGoodMannersYoushouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.禮貌的含義

2．禮貌對(duì)我們社會(huì)的重要意義

3．我們應(yīng)該怎么看待禮貌

GoodManners

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledForeignTravelersinChinaWillIncreaseafterBeijingOlympicGames.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)的成功舉辦對(duì)中國(guó)的影響

2．奧運(yùn)會(huì)后中國(guó)的發(fā)展尤其是外國(guó)人來(lái)華旅游熱的發(fā)展

3．分析來(lái)華旅游熱發(fā)展的原因

ForeignTravelersinChinaWillIncreaseafterBeijingOlympicGames

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)11.

75percentofthepressureonjointscanbereducedifyouswim______.

12.

Whatisthemainfunctionofcyanobacteria?

A.Tomakemoreduststorms.

B.Tokeepthesoilflying.

C.Tokeepthesoiltotheground.

D.Tocreatemorerocks.

13.

Usingwhatyouknowinotherfieldsoffersyouthechancenotonlytotesttheknowledgebutalsotodevelop______.

14.

Oneofthesecretsoftheforeigner'ssuccesscanbedescribedas"DoinRomeasRomansdo".

A.YB.NC.NG

15.

Whichofthefollowingprovidesdinnercruisesnow?

A.ThePotomacRiver

B.BostonHarbor

C.TheChicagoRiver

D.TheMississippiRiver

16.

InThailand,themostpopularsecondlanguagenowadaysisChinese.

A.YB.NC.NG

17.

Consideringchanceopportunities,unluckypeopledon'thavebecausethey______.

A.havemissedalotofchances

B.arebornwithmisfortune

C.havelittleabilitiestodealwithproblems

D.havenochanceactually

18.

DuringChristmasof1963______wascomingintoMiamiforalanding.

19.

Populationgrowthisthesolefactorthathaswidenedthegapbetweendevelopinganddevelopedcountries.

A.YB.NC.NG

20.Thepassageismainlyaboutwhyandhowtoplantmoretreestomakeuniversitiesbecomegreen.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)21.(35)

A.Acompanywithdangerousworkingconditionsislikelytobepunished.

B.Therearealtogetherthreedepartmentswhichprotectcustomersandworkers.

C.Storesdealinginfoodsanddrugsarecontrolledbythelocalgovernment.

D.Theprotectionofworkers'healthandsafetyisstillnotwellensured.

22.(28)

A.Peopleworkinginalargefactory.

B.Peoplewalkingoncrowdedcitystreets.

C.Aneverydayactivityinasmalltown.

D.Awell-knownhistoricalevent.

23.

【B6】

24.聽力原文：WelcometotheFourWindsHistoricalFarm,wheretraditionsofthepastarepreservedforvisitorslikeyou.Todaygivingthisbarnbehindmeasturdythatchedroofableto,withstandheavywindsandlastuptoahundredyears．Howdotheydoit?Well，inanutshell，thatchinginvolvescoveringthebeams'orrafters—thewoodenskeletonofaroof—withreedsorstraw．Ourthatchersherehaveharvestedtheirownnaturalmaterialsforthejob—thebundlesofwaterreedsyouseelyingovertherebesidethebarn．

ThatchingiscertainlyuncommonintheUnitedStatestoday．Iguessthat'swhysomanyofyouhavecometoseethisdemonstration．Butitwasn'talwaysthatway．Intheseventeenthcentury,thecolonistsherethatchedtheirroofswithreedsandstraw,justastheyhaddoneinEngland.Afterawhile,though,theybegantoreplacethethatchwithwoodenshinglesbecausewoodwassoplentiful.Andeventually,otherroofingmaterialslikestones,slates,andclaytilescameintouse.

It'sarealshamethatmostpeopletodaydon'trealizehowstrongandlong-lastingathatchedroofis.InIreland,wherethatchingisstillpracticed,theroofscansurvivewindsofuptoonehundredtenmilesperhour.That'sbecausestrawandreedsaresoflexible.Theybendbutdon'tbreakinthewindlikeothermaterialscan.Anotheradvantageisthattheroofskeepthehousecoolinthesummerandwarminthewinter.Andthen,ofcourse,there'stheroofs'longevity--theaverageissixtyyears,buttheycanlastuptoahundred.Withallthesereasonstostartthatching

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A.Puttingaroofonabarn.

B.Harvestingwaterreeds.

C.Usingstoneasabuildingmaterial.

D.Dailyfarmoperations.

25.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear8shortconversationsand2longconversations.Attheendofeachconversation,oneormorequestionswillbeaskedaboutwhatwassaid.Boththeconversationandthequestionswillbespokenonlyonce.Aftereachquestiontherewillbeapause.Duringthepause,youmustreadthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD,anddecidewhichisthebestanswer.

聽力原文：M:Well,Peggy,whatcanIdoforyoutoday?Howisyourmotherfeeling?

W:She'swell,thanks.Shewantstoknowwhetheryoucansendanorderforfoodovertoourhouse.

Q:Wheredoestheaboveconversationmostlikelytakeplace?

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A.Inagrocerystore.

B.Overthetelephone.

C.Ataparty.

D.InMary'shouse.

26.聽力原文：Manyoftheemployeesthinktheircareerpathandplansbeginsduringtheiremploymentorwhentheyhavealreadysecuredajob.(26)Butbasically,ifwelookatwhatbecomesofaperson,youcanrootitfromtheupbringingoftheperson,tobemorespecific,fromchildhood.

Asparents,weusuallygroomourchildren'sfutureaccordingtowhatweareorwhatwewantedtobe.Webuythemtoysandeducationalmaterialsaccordingtowhatwedreamourchildrenwouldbecomesomeday.

Incareerpathing,theparents'roleplaysamajorpartfortheindividual'ssuccessinidentifyingtheirchosencareer.(27)Thebestapproachistosupportthechild'sinterestandnotforcingthemtotakecoursesthattheparentswantedforthemselves.Supportcanbeprovidedbyhelpingthemreadmaterialsontheirfieldofinterest,(28)exposingthemtothecareerandprovidinginformationastotheadvantagesandsacrificesthatonemaytaketoaccomplishtheirchosenfield.Thisisnotdifficultnowadays.Theinternetandthepublicationsarenowveryaffordableandeventhemediaprovidestheinformationforthedifferentcareersthatourchildrenmaytake.Thereareshowsandprogramsthatcanprovideapictureofthedifferentfields.(29)Butbeforeyougotoyourtelevisionandchangethechannelofwhatyourchildreniswatching,checkfirstiftheprogramisfitfortheirageandmaturity.

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A.Duringtheiremployment.

B.Whentheyhavefoundajob.

C.Duringtheirchildhood.

D.Whentheyareincollege.

27.聽力原文：W:Congratulationsonyourbabygirl!How'sthemotherdoing?

M:Thanks,Mary,Helenisdoingverywell.Itwasatoughdelivery,butshecamethroughitwell.

W:That'sgreat.Howbigisthebouncingbabygirl?

M:Prettybig.It'seightpounds,tenounces.Shehashermom'sblueeyes,butshecertainlyinheritedherpapa'stemper.Idon'tthinkshe'sstoppedscreamingyet.

W:We'reallfamiliarwiththeworld-renownedTaylortemper.Haveyoupickedanameyet?

M:Wehaven'tmadeafinaldecisionyet,butwe'vegotitnarroweddowntothreeorfourpicks.

W:Everybodyintheofficechippedintobuysomethingforthebirthdaygirl.

M:Thanksforthekindthoughts.Bytheway,inkeepingwithtradition,thenewfatherhastogivehisfriendssomebig,fatcigarettes.Hereyougo.

W:ACubancigar?Ithoughtthatcustomwentoutwiththedinosaurs.Smellsgreat.

M:Youknow,itreallyfeelsgreatbeingadad.Ireallywanttosharemyhappinesswithmyfriends.

W:Yeah,thisisthesamecasewithanewmother.IrememberhowgoodIfeltwhenStevenandIhadourfirst.Well,plansforanymore?

M:Wereallyhaven'tthoughtaboutit.I'msureI'llhavemyhandsfullhandlingthisone.

W:You'reright.You'llfindyourdaysasbossofthehousearenumbered.

M:I'dbettergetovertothehospitaltoseethem.Again,Mary,thanksforthegiftsandyourgreetings.

W:Mypleasure.Ifthere'sanythingIcandotohelp,don'thesitate.

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A.Abusinesstransact.

B.Aget-together.

C.Theman'slife.

D.Thenewly10ombaby.

28.【B5】

29.(34)

A.Sherecognizedtherobbers.

B.Sheknewtherobbers'names.

C.Shefoundthestolenproperty.

D.Shereportedtherobbery

30.聽力原文：M:Wasthemovieasgoodasyouexpected?

W:It'shardtosay.Ionlysawthetailendofthefilm.

Q:Whatdoesthewomanmean?

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A.Shedoesn'tlikethefilm.

B.Thefilmishardtounderstand.

C.Shesawthefilmfrombeginningtoend.

D.Sheonlysawthelastpartofthefilm.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)31.

AccordingtoKateJones,whatshouldbedonetodetectandstoptheepidemicsbeforetheycanspreadacrosstheworld?

32.

WhichofthefollowingstatementsisTRUEaccordingtoPara.1?

A.Doctorsknowlessaboutchronotherapeuticsthanbefore.

B.DoctorsintheU.S.usedtobethirstytoknowmoreaboutthenewmedicalfield.

C.Theresearchersinsightsareprovidingnewstrategiestocurecommonkillers.

D.ThestrategicuseoftimeinmedicineattractsmoreattentioninthemedicalcircleintheU.S.

33.【S10】

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3題)34.TheSeattleTimesCompanyisonenewspaperfirmthathasrec-

ognizedtheneedforchangeanddonesomethingaboutit.Inthe

newspaperindustry,papersmustreflectthediversityofthecommu-

nitiestowhichtheyprovideinformation.ItmustreflectthatdiversityS1.______

withtheirnewscoverageorrisklosingtheirreaders'interestand

theiradvertisers'support.OperatingwithinSeattle.whichhas20

percentsracialminorities,thepaperhasputintoplacepoliciesandS2.______

proceduresforhiringandmaintainadiverseworkforce.TheunderlyingS3.______

reasonforthechangeisthatforinformationtobefair,appropriate,

andsubjective,itshouldbereportedbythesamekindofpopula-S4.______

tionthatreadsit.

Adiversitycommitteecomposedofreporters,editors,andpho-

tographersmeetsregularlytovaluetheSeattleTimes'contentandtoS5.______

educatetherestofthenewsroomstaffaboutdiversityissues.InanS6.______

addition,thepaperinstitutedacontentaudit(審查)thatevaluates

thefrequencyandmannerofrepresentationofwomanandpeopleofS7.______

colorinphotographs.Earlyauditsshowedthatminoritieswerepic-

turedfartooinfrequentlyandwerepicturedwithadisproportionate

numberofnegativearticles.Theaudithasresultedfromimprove-S8.______

mentinthefrequencyofmajorityrepresentationandtheirportrayalS9.______

inneutralorpositivesituations.And,witharesult,the,SeattleTimesS10.______

hasimprovedasanewspaper,thediversitytrainingandcontentaudits

helpedtheSeattleTimesCompanytowinthePersonnelJournal

OptimasAwardforexcellenceinmanagingchange.

【S1】

35.

【S4】

36.

【S5】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3題)37.

【S8】

38.

【S7】

39.

【S5】

參考答案

1.Interest-orientedorHealth-orientedSports(1)Studentsrushtotheplaygroundwithdifferentpurposes.Someareinterest-orientedandsportsforthemaresourcesforfunOtherparticipants(2)paymoreattentiontotheirhealthycondition.Somestudents(3)concentratingoninterest-orientedsportsclaimthatiftheydon'tfocusontheirinterestinsportstheycannot(4)benefitalotfromsports.That'stosaywithoutinteresttheyarenotwiltingtodosports.(5)Howeverotherstudentsbelievethatdoingsportsisforhealth.(6)Foronethingsportshavevariousfunctionsandoneofthemostmeaningfulistomakeyoustrongerandtrainyourwillpower.Higherstudyefficiency(7)originatesfromasoundbodyaclearandquickmindandthespiritofperseverance.(6)Foranotherinterest-orientedandunplannedsportsmayoccasionallyexhauststrengthandunderminehealth.(8)Iprefertotakepartinsportsbothtomytasteandofbenefitstomyhealth.Suchsportswould(9)ineverysenseentertainmyself(10)freshenupmymindandmakemestrongandenergetic.Interest-orientedorHealth-orientedSports(1)Studentsrushtotheplaygroundwithdifferentpurposes.Someareinterest-oriented,andsportsforthemaresourcesforfunOtherparticipants(2)paymoreattentiontotheirhealthycondition.Somestudents,(3)concentratingoninterest-orientedsports,claimthatiftheydon'tfocusontheirinterestinsports,theycannot(4)benefitalotfromsports.That'stosay,withoutinteresttheyarenotwiltingtodosports.(5)However,otherstudentsbelievethatdoingsportsisforhealth.(6)Foronething,sportshavevariousfunctions,andoneofthemostmeaningfulistomakeyoustrongerandtrainyourwillpower.Higherstudyefficiency(7)originatesfromasoundbody,aclearandquickmind,andthespiritofperseverance.(6)Foranother,interest-orientedandunplannedsportsmayoccasionallyexhauststrengthandunderminehealth.(8)Iprefertotakepartinsportsbothtomytasteandofbenefitstomyhealth.Suchsportswould(9)ineverysenseentertainmyself,(10)freshenupmymindandmakemestrongandenergetic.解析：本題要求寫一篇對(duì)比選擇型議論文?！斑\(yùn)動(dòng)是為了興趣還是為了健康”是所有大學(xué)生都非常熟悉的話題，與他們密切相關(guān)，很容易拓展內(nèi)容。注意用詞的準(zhǔn)確性和句式的變換。

[思路]第一段說(shuō)明學(xué)生的運(yùn)動(dòng)目的各有不同；

第二段詳細(xì)陳述兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)；

第三段提出自己的觀點(diǎn)：運(yùn)動(dòng)既要有興趣還要兼顧健康。

2.InternetInternethasbeenplayinganincreasingroleinourdailylife.Ithasbroughtuslotsofbenefitswhitemakingsomeseriousproblems.Internethasenabledustodomanythingsmoreeasilyandquickly.InternetInternethasbeenplayinganincreasingroleinourdailylife.Ithasbroughtuslotsofbenefitswhitemakingsomeseriousproblems.Internethasenabledustodomanythingsmoreeasilyandquickly.

3.HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation?Chinahasalreadysteppedintoanagingsocietyaccordingtointernationalstandards.Thosebeyond65madeupmorethan7percentofthenationalpopulation.Accordingtoexperts'predictionthisphenomenonisgoingtocontinuefordecades.Nowthesocietyisfacedupwiththeissueoftacklingtheoldpeople'sproblems.Firstthesocietyshouldfosterasocialenvironmentthatchampionsrespectandcarefortheold.Thisisprerequisiteintacklingthevariousproblemstheelderlyface.Withoutloveandrespectfortheoldanywelfaremeasurecouldnotbeimplementedfullyandforthebenefitoftheold.Thoughinmostareathetraditionalideaoflovingandrespectingtheoldstillprevailstherearesomeyoungpeoplewhoconsideroldpeopleaseconomicandmentalburdenandareeagertogetridofthem.ThereforechangingthiskindofattitudetowardsoldpeopleisuppermostinensuringthatourGrandmaandGrandpaleadahappylife.Secondbasedonthefactthatthetraditionofhomecarefortheelderlyfacesbigchallengeduetotheshrinkingfamilysizeacombinationoffamilycarecommunity-basedservicesandsocialwelfarenecessarytohelpouroldpopulationinhelpingandsupportingtheirlives.Inthiswayoldpeoplecanenjoythehelpandlovefromboththesocietyandtheirfamiliesthusrelievingthepressureontheiryoungerchildren.Thirdoldpeoplenotonlyneedhelptheycanalsogiveahandinraisingtheirgrandchildren.Ifwetreatthemaspreciousassetstheymaynotonlyliveafullerlifebutalsomakefurthercontributionstooursocialandeconomicdevelopments.AtpresentboththeproportionoftheoldintheChinesepopulationandthenumberofretiredpeopleareincreasing.Howtorespondtothisphenomenonaffectseverybodynowandinthefuture.Weshouldcombinecommunityhelpwithfamilycareandofferhelptothemineveryway.HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation?Chinahasalreadysteppedintoanagingsocietyaccordingtointernationalstandards.Thosebeyond65madeupmorethan7percentofthenationalpopulation.Accordingtoexperts'prediction,thisphenomenonisgoingtocontinuefordecades.Nowthesocietyisfacedupwiththeissueoftacklingtheoldpeople'sproblems.First,thesocietyshouldfosterasocialenvironmentthatchampionsrespectandcarefortheold.Thisisprerequisiteintacklingthevariousproblemstheelderlyface.Withoutloveandrespectfortheold,anywelfaremeasurecouldnotbeimplementedfullyandforthebenefitoftheold.Thoughinmostarea,thetraditionalideaoflovingandrespectingtheoldstillprevails,therearesomeyoungpeoplewhoconsideroldpeopleaseconomicandmentalburdenandareeagertogetridofthem.Therefore,changingthiskindofattitudetowardsoldpeopleisuppermostinensuringthatourGrandmaandGrandpaleadahappylife.Second,basedonthefactthatthetraditionofhomecarefortheelderlyfacesbigchallengeduetotheshrinkingfamilysize,acombinationoffamilycare,community-basedservicesandsocialwelfarenecessarytohelpouroldpopulationinhelpingandsupportingtheirlives.Inthisway,oldpeoplecanenjoythehelpandlovefromboththesocietyandtheirfamilies,thusrelievingthepressureontheiryoungerchildren.Third,oldpeoplenotonlyneedhelp,theycanalsogiveahandinraisingtheirgrandchildren.Ifwetreatthemaspreciousassets,theymaynotonlyliveafullerlife,butalsomakefurthercontributionstooursocialandeconomicdevelopments.Atpresent,boththeproportionoftheoldintheChinesepopulationandthenumberofretiredpeopleareincreasing.Howtorespondtothisphenomenonaffectseverybodynowandinthefuture.Weshouldcombinecommunityhelpwithfamilycareandofferhelptothemineveryway.

4.CyberCrimesNowadayscybercriminalsseemtobeeverywherewithafewclickscommittingallkindsofcybercrimes.Toillustratesomecommitfraudorliftintellectualproperty.Otherssubvertdealssnatchpasswordsordisrupte-commerce.Stillothersunleashvirusestocrashcomputers.Asaresultthesehackersdoagreatdamagetocompaniesandcomputeruserscausingcomputerlossesupto10billiondollarsperyear.Naturallytherearemanycausesforthecybercrimes.InadditiontothewickednatureofthehackersthefrailtiesofInternetpartiallynourishthecrimes.JustbecausethereareholesinInternet—thecomplexsoftwareisbuggyandofteninfestedthecybervandalscanfindouttheweaknessintheWebsitesoftwareprogramsandbymanipulatingsoftwareglitchesgainaccesstoWebsitecommittingallkindsofcrimes.Howeverweshouldn'ttoleratethesecybercriminalsanymore.Andit'shightimeforustotakealltheeffectivestepstobattlethecybercrooks.FirstweshouldreinforcethecyberlawstoprotecttheWebthepowerfulengineofeconomy.Besidesweshouldusehightechniquestoimproveintrusiondetectionencryptionandcomputersecurity.FinallyweshouldtrainmoretalentedpeopletobuildupmorefirewallssoastomaketheNetimmunetoallkindsofvirusesandunassailabletoallkindsofcybercriminals.CyberCrimesNowadayscybercriminalsseemtobeeverywhere,withafewclicks,committingallkindsofcybercrimes.Toillustrate,somecommitfraudorliftintellectualproperty.Otherssubvertdeals,snatchpasswordsordisrupte-commerce.Stillothersunleashvirusestocrashcomputers.Asaresult,thesehackersdoagreatdamagetocompaniesandcomputerusers,causingcomputerlossesupto10billiondollarsperyear.Naturally,therearemanycausesforthecybercrimes.Inadditiontothewickednatureofthehackers,thefrailtiesofInternetpartiallynourishthecrimes.JustbecausethereareholesinInternet—thecomplexsoftwareisbuggyandofteninfested,thecybervandalscanfindouttheweaknessintheWebsitesoftwareprogramsandbymanipulatingsoftwareglitches,gainaccesstoWebsite,committingallkindsofcrimes.However,weshouldn'ttoleratethesecybercriminalsanymore.Andit'shightimeforustotakealltheeffectivestepstobattlethecybercrooks.FirstweshouldreinforcethecyberlawstoprotecttheWeb,thepowerfulengineofeconomy.Besides,weshouldusehightechniquestoimproveintrusiondetection,encryptionandcomputersecurity.Finally,weshouldtrainmoretalentedpeopletobuildupmorefirewallssoastomaketheNetimmunetoallkindsofvirusesandunassailabletoallkindsofcybercriminals.

5.SayNotoDrunkDriving[1]Asisknowntoalldrunkdrivingisverydangerous.[2]Itputstorisksnotonlythedriver'slifebutalsothoseofotherinnocentpeople.[3]DangerousasitistherehavebeeSayNotoDrunkDriving[1]Asisknowntoall,drunkdrivingisverydangerous.[2]Itputstorisksnotonlythedriver'slifebutalsothoseofotherinnocentpeople.[3]Dangerousasitis,therehavebee解析：本文要求對(duì)酒醉駕駛的原因進(jìn)行分析，并提出門己的看法。如果要求分析酒醉駕駛的不良后果，那就容易點(diǎn)，可outline要求分析酒醉駕駛的原因，許多考生可能絞盡腦汁也不知道該說(shuō)什么好了。

范文從兩個(gè)角度分析原因：首先，經(jīng)濟(jì)上富裕了，開車的人更多了；其次，司機(jī)主觀上對(duì)自己的駕駛技術(shù)太過(guò)門信。這兩條都很好，與醉駕密切相關(guān)，很有說(shuō)服力。

是否還有別的原因呢?——無(wú)酒不成宴的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)慣勺現(xiàn)代生活不合拍；法律上對(duì)醉駕處罰力度不夠；酒席上人們的自控能力太差；等等。讀者可以自己盡情展開自己的思路，寫出好文章來(lái)。

最后還要說(shuō)明“我認(rèn)為”，當(dāng)然要與標(biāo)題SayNo的看法—致了。但要注意如何表達(dá)。

Analysis

[1]由outline改寫而來(lái)，得來(lái)毫不費(fèi)功夫。

[2]是[1]的支持句，putsthtodanger/risks是較好的搭配。

[3]還是描寫現(xiàn)象。其中暗含這種現(xiàn)象的存在原因，于是下文就可以就這些原因進(jìn)行分析。注意這句話與前一段話之間有轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，用了讓步結(jié)構(gòu)。

[4][5]onereasonisthat；anotherreasonisthat…，銜接自然。

[6]注意tallvictimto的用法

[7]是作文標(biāo)題的再現(xiàn)!主題句。

[8]怎樣sayno呢?再提—下具體措施，文章就更加有力度了。也是[7]的支持/擴(kuò)展句。

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