應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作-2024屆高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)揭秘高考原題【全國(guó)卷】

（5）應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作—2024屆高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)揭秘高考原題【全國(guó)卷】1.（2022年全國(guó)甲卷）

你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題,舉辦英語(yǔ)征文競(jìng)賽,請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括:

1.海洋的重要性;

2.愛(ài)護(hù)海洋的倡議。留意:

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫(xiě)好。OurOceans,OurResponsibility

June8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.

（2022年全國(guó)乙卷）

學(xué)校英文報(bào)正在開(kāi)展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom為題的爭(zhēng)辯。請(qǐng)使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿,內(nèi)容包括:1.學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)狀況描述;2.簡(jiǎn)潔評(píng)論;3.你的建議。留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫(xiě)好。LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom

TherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.（2021年全國(guó)甲卷）假定你是李華。你校方案舉辦介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會(huì),并在英文網(wǎng)站呈現(xiàn)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封郵件給外國(guó)伴侶Chris,向他了解哪些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)友人。郵件內(nèi)容包括:1.闡明寫(xiě)信事由;2.征求建議;3.表示感謝。留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;?2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、考情分析寫(xiě)作基本原則一、長(zhǎng)短句原則一個(gè)短小精悍的句子，通?？梢云鸬疆?huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。尤其是當(dāng)我們把短句放在段首時(shí)，它不僅可以承上啟下，還可以揭示主題，如：Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind，theyareinawayquitesimilar.由此可見(jiàn)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，可以給人抑揚(yáng)頓挫之感。因此，很多專(zhuān)家建議：在文章第一段（開(kāi)頭）用一長(zhǎng)一短，且先長(zhǎng)后短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候接受先短后長(zhǎng)的句群形式，這樣主體部分定會(huì)讓人賞心悅目，文章結(jié)尾只需用一長(zhǎng)一短。二、主題句原則一篇文章的開(kāi)頭（有時(shí)也可在結(jié)尾）有一個(gè)主題句，也就有了中心，然后圍繞主題開(kāi)放相關(guān)內(nèi)容，這樣的文章思路清楚，讓人一目了然。否則，若把主題隱蔽在文章的中間，很可能使讀者感到云里霧里，不知所云。如：Tobeginwith,youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbeforetheexam.（主題句）Withoutsufficientpreparation,youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectly.開(kāi)頭一句赫然醒目，直接點(diǎn)題。三、條理性原則一般來(lái)說(shuō)，假如一篇文章以第一其次、第三或首先、其次、再次等排列要點(diǎn)會(huì)讓人感覺(jué)層次分明、條理清楚、規(guī)律性強(qiáng)。猛烈推舉下列關(guān)聯(lián)詞和短語(yǔ)：1.tobeginwith，then，furthermore，finally2.tostartwith，next，inaddition，finally3.first，besides，lastbutnotleast4.mostimportantofall，moreover，finally5.foronething，foranother6ontheonehand，ontheotherhand（用來(lái)說(shuō)明不同的理由或緣由）四、短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則寫(xiě)作時(shí)，尤其是在考試時(shí)，假如正確使用短語(yǔ)，有兩個(gè)好處：一是用短語(yǔ)會(huì)給文章增光添彩，自然會(huì)增加得分點(diǎn)；二是同學(xué)在考場(chǎng)上有時(shí)由于過(guò)于緊急而造成思維短路，但還得湊夠詞數(shù)，那么用短語(yǔ)替代單詞不失為一種好方法。比如：Icannotbearit.可以表達(dá)為：Icannotputupwithit.這樣詞數(shù)明顯增加，表達(dá)也格外精確?????。五、多實(shí)少虛原則寫(xiě)文章還是應(yīng)當(dāng)寫(xiě)一些實(shí)際的東西，不能空話連篇。這就要求肯定要多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞。這里所說(shuō)的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們想表達(dá)人或事物很好的時(shí)候，不應(yīng)當(dāng)總用nice這樣空洞的詞，而是要使用一些諸如generous，humorous，interesting，smart，gentle，warm-hearted，hospitable之類(lèi)的形容詞。這些生動(dòng)形象的詞語(yǔ)肯定會(huì)讓你的文章大放異彩，令人耳目一新。六、多變句式原則1.并列（串聯(lián)）我們有時(shí)期望自己能寫(xiě)出結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單的長(zhǎng)句，但又怕寫(xiě)錯(cuò)。要解決這一問(wèn)題，最保險(xiǎn)的寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句的方法是在句子之間加and，但它們之間最好是先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。如：Ienjoymusicandheisfondofplayingtheguitar假如二者是并列的，我們還可以用notonly…butalso…表示并列關(guān)系的詞還有：besides，furthermore，likewise，moreover等。2.轉(zhuǎn)折用了表示轉(zhuǎn)折的詞，可以使文章要點(diǎn)明確，重點(diǎn)突出。如：Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.Thecoatwasthin,butitwaswarm.表轉(zhuǎn)折的詞或短語(yǔ)還有：still，however，nevertheless，inspiteof，despite等3.因果文章中使用了表示因果關(guān)系的詞后，可以讓你的句式變得豐富多彩，語(yǔ)言富于變化，更具說(shuō)服力。如：Thesnowbegantofall,sowewenthome.表示因果關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞或短語(yǔ)還有：then，therefore，consequently，asaresult，forthisreason，sothat等。4.失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）有時(shí)突然消滅一個(gè)不合乎常理的句子，必定會(huì)吸引別人的留意力，顯得與眾不同。其實(shí)就是使用了主語(yǔ)從句、表語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句。如：ThisiswhatIcando.Whetherhecangowithusornotisnotsure.5.附加定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是插入語(yǔ)的恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用，也會(huì)讓人感覺(jué)你既有深厚的語(yǔ)法功底，又具有極強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)力量。如：Themanwhomyoumetyesterdayisafriendofmine.Idon'tenjoythebookyouarereading.Mr.Liu,ouroralEnglishteacher,iseasy-going.6.排比文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過(guò)于此，假如要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，可以使用多個(gè)對(duì)偶、多個(gè)不定式、多個(gè)動(dòng)詞、多個(gè)短語(yǔ)等，如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)。如：Whetheryourtastesaremodernortraditional，complexorsimple，thereisplentyinLondonforyou.Nowadays，energycanbeobtainedthroughvarioussourcessuchasoil，coal，naturalgas，solarheat，windandoceantides.Wehavegottostudyhard,toenlargeourscopeofknowledge,torealizeourpotentialsandtopayforourlife.七、挑戰(zhàn)極限原則挑戰(zhàn)極限聽(tīng)似很難，但并非高不行攀。在同學(xué)的文章中，很少發(fā)覺(jué)諸如獨(dú)立主格之類(lèi)的句子，由于同學(xué)要么想不到，要么怕寫(xiě)錯(cuò)。其實(shí)這一語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目并不難，它只是分詞的一種特殊形式分詞要求前后主語(yǔ)全都，而獨(dú)立主格則有自己的規(guī)律主語(yǔ)。Theweatherbeingfine,alargenumberofpeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.Africaisthesecondlargestcontinent,itssizebeingaboutthreetimesthatofChina.這種句子消滅在文章中肯定會(huì)令人刮目相看，很自然地成了一個(gè)得分點(diǎn)。三、變式訓(xùn)練4.

假定你是李華。你家預(yù)備在下周日為你剛滿一歲的表弟舉辦“抓周”(Zhuazhou)儀式,你想邀請(qǐng)你校溝通生Lucy參與。請(qǐng)就此給Lucy寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括:

(1)時(shí)間地點(diǎn);

(2)抓周的內(nèi)容和意義。

留意:(1)詞數(shù)不少于100;

(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.

假定你是李華,你校海外聯(lián)誼學(xué)校要來(lái)你校參觀,請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)校致歡迎詞,要求包含以下要點(diǎn):

(1)表示歡迎;

(2)學(xué)校的活動(dòng)支配(如詩(shī)歌朗誦、書(shū)法競(jìng)賽等);

(3)表達(dá)祝愿。

留意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右;

(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。Distinguishedguests,

Onbehalfofmyschool,Iextendmysincerewelcomeforyourarrivalatourschool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.

假定你是英語(yǔ)校報(bào)負(fù)責(zé)人,請(qǐng)你在英語(yǔ)校報(bào)為學(xué)校油畫(huà)展寫(xiě)一則通知。內(nèi)容包括:

(1)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);

(2)活動(dòng)支配;

(3)留意事項(xiàng)。

留意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右;

(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.

假定你是李華,在留同學(xué)好友Henry的掛念下,你在學(xué)校舉辦的一千米長(zhǎng)跑競(jìng)賽中獲得了其次名的成果。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫(xiě)一封郵件:

(1)告知Henry這則好消息;

(2)回顧Henry是如何掛念你的。

留意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右;

(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.

假定你是李華,你們學(xué)校將要舉辦茶藝周活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿,始終自新西蘭的一批交換生介紹該活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括:

(1)介紹中國(guó)茶文化的特點(diǎn);

(2)介紹此次活動(dòng)的具體支配。

留意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右;

(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

答案以及解析1.答案：OurOceans,OurResponsibility

June8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.Itaimstoraisepeople'sawarenessofprotectingoceans.

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatoceansplayacriticalroleintheworld.Notonlydotheyprovideabundantresourcesandfoodforus(倒裝句),buttheyarealsocrucialfortheglobalclimatedevelopment.①Additionally,oceansare"thelungsofourplanet",providingmostoftheoxygenwebreathe(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ),其中包括一個(gè)省略關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句).

②Ashighschoolstudents,it'sourresponsibilitytoprotectthem.Firstofall,dowhatwecan(賓語(yǔ)從句)tomakeadifference.Forexample,stopthrowinggarbageintooceans.Inaddition,callonpeoplearoundustotakeaction,too.Ibelievewewillhavecleaneroceans(賓語(yǔ)從句).2.答案：LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom

TherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.Asthechartshows,studentsadoptdifferentwaystolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroom.

①ThepercentofthestudentswholistentoEnglishsongsisashighas65%.50%ofthemwatchEnglishmovieswhileonly18%readEnglishbooks.ThosewhovisitEnglish-learningwebsitesaccountfor12%.

②ThefiguresofthechartsuggestthatthereareavarietyofwaystolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroomwiththedevelopmentofmoderntechnology.StudentscanchoosewhattheyliketoenrichtheirEnglish-learningexperiences.

AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshoulddomorelisteningandspeakingsothattheycandeveloptheircommunicationskills.3.答案：DearChris,Howarethingsgoingthesedays?Iamwritingtoaskyouforhelp.MyschoolisgoingtoholdathemeclassmeetingaboutChinesetraditionalculture.BecausethisactivitywillbepresentedontheEnglishwebsite,Isincerelywantyoutooffermesomeadvice.Asfarasweknow,therearesomeculturaldifferencesbetweenChinaandWesterncountries.Inordertogetmoreclicks,IreallyhopeyoucantellmewhatkindofChinesecultureyouWesternersprefer.What'smore,ifIwanttodecoratemywebsitewithsomeChineseelements,whatshouldIdo?KnowingyouareinterestedinChina,Idobelieveyoucanhelpmesolvethesepuzzles.I'dbeverygratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua4.答案：DearLucy,

I

amLiHua.IamhonoredtoinviteyoutoattendaspecialceremonytobeheldinGrandHotelat6:30p.m.nextSunday,whichistocelebratemyone-year-oldcousin'sbirthday.

TheceremonyiscalledZhuazhouthatisdesignedtocelebratethefirstbirthdayofababy.InChina,weusuallyputsomeitems,suchaspens,seals,booksandcoins,infrontofthebaby.Thenthebabywillchooseone.Usually,eachitemstandsforapossibilityoftheirfuturelife.Itisreallyfun,right?

Idowishyoucanacceptmysincereinvitation.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua5.答案：Distinguishedguests,

Onbehalfofmyschool,Iextendmysincerewelcomeforyourarrivalatourschool.

Wearrangeawidevarietyofactivitiestogetyouexposedtoourschoollife.Therewillbeagrandwelcomingceremony,whereourschool'shistoryandachievementswillbeintroducedtoyou.Thenfollowscalligraphyshow,withsomestudentsdemonstratinghowtowriteitsstrokes.Equallyamazingwerestudents'works,whichareaperfectmixofstrengthandtechniques.WhatI'dliketostressisthatyoucantryifinterested.

Weareblessedtoreceiveyou,whichbroadensourstudents'horizonsandcontributestotheknowledgeofoverseaschoollifeandculture.Andwishourfriendshipandcooperationanoutstandingboost.That'sall.Thanks.6.答案：NOTICE

Dearfellowstudents!Anoilpaintingexhibitionwilltakeplaceintheschoolhallfrom2:00pmto5:00pmonWednesdayafternoon.

Firstofall,aguidewillintroducesomebasicinformationabouttheoilpaintingsandthepainters.Then,wewillgetachancetolearnhowtocreateanoilpainting,whichIbelievewillbeaninterestingexperience.Ifyouareluckyenough,youmaybeawardedapainting.However,allofyoushouldkeepquietandlistentotheguidewhilevisiting.Don'ttouchthepaintingsatrandomf