高考英語書面表達高分寫作指導課件

英語書面表達高分寫作指導BeautifyyourComposition書面表達在評閱時遵循三原則語言第一位(語言高級)內(nèi)容第二位(要點齊全)結構第三位(文章分段)漂亮、地道高考作文的美語言第一位(語言高級)一、高級詞匯和句式二、修辭手法三、有效的連詞四、名人名言或諺語1.高級詞匯短語詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少,也是衡量英語水平的一個重要標志。詞匯使用的原則人靠衣裝,文靠詞裝

1、詞組優(yōu)先原則2、地道原則。3、避免重復原則

4、后、高、長原則—

后學到、較高級、較長詞匯。四項原則

1、詞組優(yōu)先原則［原文］Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.［修正］Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.

2、地道原則［原文］Throughtraveling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.［修正］Throughtraveling,Igained／obtainedalotofknowledge.3、避免重復原則［原文］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.［修正］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.

4、后高長原則—后學到、較高級、較長詞匯。

原詞替換詞

hard

very

payattentionto

happy

moreandmoreDiligentlyratherextremelyattachimportancetodelightedenjoyabletheincreasingnumberofAdj.聰明的、腦筋好的clever→smart→wise→bright→intelligent電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Cputersareofgreatimportanceinourlife. 5、運用高級詞匯：Asaresult,theplanfailed.(一般)SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.(一般)Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.(高級)Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme(高級)ShewenttoAustriaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.(高級)ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.(一般)Atthenewsofherdeath,hewent….(高級)Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.(高級)Whenheheardshehaddied,hewentpalewithsorrow.(一般)Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.(一般)運用高級詞匯：2.句式多樣,文章增“靚”使用較豐富的句式：運用得當?shù)木渥咏Y構可以給文章增色不少,從而使整篇文章因此而生輝

他昨天下午來的。1.Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.2.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.3.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.4.Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.思考：什么樣的作文會成為一篇好作文

無遺漏信息點(審題)篇章條理清晰：分段和過渡詞句式多樣地道的高級詞匯和恰當?shù)脑~組思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？

強調(diào)句倒裝句

with復合結構advancedsentences定語從句名詞性從句非謂語動詞常用諺語被動句…化腐朽為神奇十式一、將兩個簡單句合并為并列句。

操作難度★★寫作效果★★Igotuplatethismorning.Ididn’tcatchtheearlybus.(一般)Igotuplatethismorning,otherwiseIcouldhavecaughttheearlybus.(高級)Ifyougothroughthegate,you’llfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.(一般)Gothroughthegate,andyou’llfind….(高級)Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.(高級)Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(一般)二、主動句與被動句的互換。

操作難度★★★寫作效果★★★Thegovernmentshouldtakeimmediatemeasurestodealwiththepresentfinancialcrisis.Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakentodealwiththepresentfinancialcrisis.三、將陳述句改為感嘆句。

操作難度★★★寫作效果★★★1.Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant．Howimportantitistopreventthepollution!2.Sheisaclevergirl．Whataclevergirlsheis!四、將陳述句改為倒裝句。

操作難度★★★★寫作效果★★★★1.Wedidnotrealizeourmistakesuntilatthattime.Notuntilatthattimedidwerealizeourmistakes.五、將簡單句改為強調(diào)句。

操作難度★★★寫作效果★★★★1.Ourmoneyisearnedthroughhardworkbyourparents.Itis

throughhardwork

thatourmoneyisearnedbyourparents.六、將兩個簡單句合并為復合句。

操作難度★★★★★寫作效果★★★★★1.同位語和同位語從句(常用于描述人物、地點等介紹性文段)1)LiuXiangisanexcellentathlete.HewonthefirstprizeinMen’s110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames.(用同位語改寫)

,

,wonthefirstprizeinMen’s110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames.

2.定語從句(限制性/非限制性)1)The2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijing,anditssloganisOneWorld,OneDream.The2008OlympicGames,.WhosesloganisOneWorld,OneDream,willbeheldinBJ3.主語從句Hiswonderfulperformanceonthestageimpressedme.

mostwashiswonderfulperformanceonthestage.Whatimpressedme【推薦句型】：Whatsurprises\astonished\satisfied\impressedmeisthat…WhatIwouldliketosuggest\advise\putforwardisthat…Whatmattersmostisthat…WhatIlearn\concludefromthestoryisthat…4.表語從句

【推薦句型】：

…isnolongerwhatitusedtobe.我的家鄉(xiāng)不再像以前那樣了。Myhometownisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.5.狀語從句【推薦句型】

結果、程度so…that…;such…that…讓步nomatterhow\what\when\where….=whatever,however,whenever,wherever時間…wasdoing…when…七、將兩個簡單句合并為一個由which引導的非限制性定語從句

操作難度★★★★★寫作效果★★★★★Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings,whicharousespeopletothinkdifferently八、It作形式主語或形式賓語句型

操作難度★★★寫作效果★★★1.Youpretendtoknowwhatyoudon’tknow.It’snogood.

It’snogoodpretendingtoknowwhatyoudon’tknow.九、分詞結構代替狀語/定語從句

操作難度★★★★★寫作效果★★★★★Ifyouworkharder,youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime.

,youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime.Workinghard

十、with引導的短語或者復合結構

操作難度★★★★寫作效果★★★★★With+賓語+adj./adv./介詞短語/todo\doing\done常用句型withapopulationof….withatotalareaof…withalonghistoryof…years1)這個地區(qū)占地2000平方千米,人口10萬。Thisareacoversanareaof2000squarekilometers,

.

withapopulationof100,000.

一、肯定不如雙否好二、陳述不如倒裝妙三、主動不如被動巧四、從句不如分詞傲高級句式使用的原則：抓住高考閱卷老師的心理的秘訣四“不如”謄寫規(guī)范不要少

修辭的使用在書面表達中算作很大的亮點,在高中階段很少有學生會注重修辭的應用。雙重否定也是種修辭,而且對于考生來說,只要稍加注意,可以在文章中設計雙重否定的句子。就變成了亮點句,起到強調(diào)作用。一、肯定不如雙否好Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.

倒裝是一種最簡單易行的使句子呈現(xiàn)亮點的方法。在高中階段只需掌握倒裝的四種形式,足以應對書面表達,如何應用倒裝,有很多方法和技巧。Onlywhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectioncanwesolvetheproblemofpollution.Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.Diligentashewas,hefailedinpassingtheexam.Bynomeansshouldteenagersgetintothehabitofsmoking.二、陳述不如倒裝妙三、主動不如被動巧英語中經(jīng)常用被動語態(tài),漢語經(jīng)常用主動語態(tài);英語中經(jīng)常用是事物或形式主語開頭,強調(diào)一件事發(fā)生在什么人身上,而漢語經(jīng)常用人稱開頭強調(diào)一個人發(fā)生了什么事。所以使用被動語態(tài)符合英語的習慣,如