初三英語寫作-省級公開課

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2021/5/91EyesCanSpeakWhentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeakers,inorderto________________Whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inorderto________________When…2021/5/92EyesCanSpeak人們常說眼睛會(huì)說話。在生活中，我們經(jīng)常借助眼睛來表達(dá)情感。有時(shí)，當(dāng)別人看我們時(shí)，我們會(huì)覺得不舒服。Peopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.Sometimes,wemayfeeluncomfortablewhensomeonelooksatus.2021/5/93EyesCanSpeakPeopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.Sometimes,wemayfeeluneasywhensomeonelooksatus.Whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeaker,inordertoshowthatheisinterestedinthespeaker’swords.Whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inordertoshowthathisfeelingistrueanddeep.Ifwearelookedatbyastrangerformorethannecessary,wewilllookatourselvesupanddown,toseeifthereisanythingwrongwithus.2021/5/94EyesCanSpeakPeopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.sometimes,wemayfeeluneasywhensomeonelooksatus.Whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeaker,inordertoshowthatheisinterestedinthespeaker’swords.Whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inordertoshowthathisfeelingistrueanddeep.Ifwearelookedatbyastrangerformorethannecessary,wewilllookatourselvesupanddown,toseeifthereisanythingwrongwithus.Forexample,Also,However,Doyouhavesuchkindofexperience?2021/5/95英語寫作時(shí)常用的過渡語:

表并列：and,_____________________…表轉(zhuǎn)折：but,_____________________…表因果關(guān)系：because,_____________________…表先后順序：First,_____________________…表時(shí)間關(guān)系：when,_____________________…表列舉說明：forexample,_____________________…發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)：inmyopinion,_____________________…表總結(jié)陳詞：ingeneral,_____________________…2021/5/96英語寫作時(shí)常用的過渡語:

表并列：and,besides,inaddition,what’smore,…表轉(zhuǎn)折：but,yet,however,onthecontrary,…表因果關(guān)系：because,so,therefore,asaresult…表先后順序：First,Second,Third,Next,Then,Finally…表時(shí)間關(guān)系：when,while,after,before,then,…表列舉說明：forexample,forinstance,suchas…發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)：inmyopinion,tomyunderstanding,frommypointofview,…表總結(jié)陳詞：ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking…2021/5/97EyesCanSpeakPeopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.sometimes,wemayfeeluneasywhensomeonelooksatus.whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeaker,inordertoshowthatheisinterestedinthespeaker’swords.whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inordertoshowthathisfeelingistrueanddeep.Ifwearelookedatbyastrangerformorethannecessary,wewilllookatourselvesupanddown,toseeifthereisanythingwrongwithus.Forexample,Also,However,Doyouhavesuchkindofexperience?

Generallyspeaking,eyecontactshouldbedoneaccordingtotherelationshipbetweentwopeopleandtheplacewherewestay.2021/5/98

文章結(jié)構(gòu)1.Heading點(diǎn)題，概括性2.Body中心記述部分；層次分明3.Ending小結(jié)，呼應(yīng)主題2021/5/99EyesCanSpeakPeopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.sometimes,wemayfeeluneasywhensomeonelooksatus.whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeaker,inordertoshowthatheisinterestedinthespeaker’swords.whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inordertoshowthathisfeelingistrueanddeep.Ifwearelookedatbyastrangerformorethannecessary,wewilllookatourselvesupanddown,toseeifthereisanythingwrongwithus.Forexample,Also,However,Doyouhavesuchkindofexperience?

Generallyspeaking,eyecontactshouldbedoneaccordingtotherelationshipbetweentwopeopleandtheplacewherewestay.

eyescanhelpusexpressourfeelings.2021/5/910Stepbystep1.審2.構(gòu)3.列4.連5.美文體_____時(shí)態(tài)_____人稱_____連字成句，連句成段在有把握的情況下，變換句型，靈活使用長短句和復(fù)合句，使文增色把握文章框架結(jié)構(gòu)，必要時(shí)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)列出要點(diǎn)2021/5/911HaveaTry!2021/5/912

網(wǎng)絡(luò)已成為我們生活的一部分。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)以“TheInternetinOurLife”為題，用英語寫一篇短文.

1.好處：多彩、便捷的生活，如：交友、放松；（請?jiān)倥e一個(gè)例子）2.壞處：沉溺于網(wǎng)絡(luò)，影響身體、學(xué)業(yè)3.你的觀點(diǎn)

（考生自擬，至少一點(diǎn)）

注意：1．詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不