科技論文翻譯個人常見錯誤總結

科技論文翻譯個人常見錯誤總結科技論文翻譯個人常見錯誤總結

科技論文翻譯個人常見錯誤總結

201*04論文翻譯個人常見錯誤總結1.分析:太中文化

原文示例:Aimingattheproblemthatthewirelesssensornetwork(WSN)nodeiswithlimitedenergyandputingcapabilities

修改后:Aimingattheproblemthattheenergyandputingcapabilitiesofthewirelesssensornetwork(WSN)nodeislimited

2.分析:狀語?使用方式錯誤。分詞做狀語

原文示例:ARealtimesuccess-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A)schemeisproposedwithnewpoliciesareaddedintotraditionauctionscheme.

修改后:ARealtimesuccess-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A)schemeisproposedwithnewpoliciesbeingaddedintotraditionauctionscheme.

3.分析:詞性混淆。句式錯誤。And連接兩個句子，只省略主語不能省略謂語。

原文示例:theproposedschemeisin-timeupdating,flexibility,and?highconsultationrateofsuccess

修改后:theproposedschemeisin-timeupdating,flexibleandhashighconsultationrateofsuccess

4.分析:狀語從句的使用，句式不熟識。

原文示例:WSNisaselforganizingwirelessnetworkposedofasetofrandomgeographicallydistributedsensor

修改后:WSNisaselforganizingwirelessnetworkwhichisposedofasetofrandomgeographicallydistributedsensor

5.分析:1，詞性不對；2，句子結構混亂，不知所云。

原文示例:Taskallocationisabroadareaofhigh-performanceputingresearchproblems

修改后:Taskallocationisanissuewhichisstudiedinhigh-performanceputingbroadly.

6.分析:句首大寫。名詞全部格。

原文示例:thetraditionalfieldofdistributedalgorithmscannotbeapplieddirectlyaswirelesssensornetworknodecapacityandcapabilityislimited.

修改后:Thetraditionalfieldofdistributedalgorithmscannotbeapplieddirectlyaswirelesssensornetworknode’scapacityandcapabilityislimited.7.分析:冠詞用法馬虎。句子不完整，缺少謂語。

原文示例:WSNcanbeseenasaMASifasensorisregardasaagent.However,wirelesssensornetworkswithhighdynamics

修改后:WSNcanbeseenasaMASifasensorisregardasanagent.However,wirelesssensornetworkshavehighdynamics8.分析:近義詞的區(qū)分。

原文示例:WSNissimilarwithMASdueto??thatSensorscanhandleproblemindepentelyandWSNisadistributedsystemwithaself-organizingfeature

修改后:WSNissimilarwithMASbecauseSensorscanhandleproblemindepentelyandWSNisadistributedsystemwithaself-organizingfeature.9.分析:連詞的恰當使用。助動詞的使用，句子結構混亂。

原文示例:AndtheintroductionofauctiontotheWSNisnotaverygoodtakingintoaccountthedynamicsofthenetworkenviromentanditsresourcesconstrained(restricted?)feature.

修改后:InadditiontheintroductionofauctiontotheWSNdoesnottakeintoaccountthedynamicsofthenetworkenvironmentanditslimitedresources.10.分析:被動語態(tài)；主謂全都；介詞使用

原文示例:Thestudyisbuildonclustering-basedWSNframework.Asensorwantfind修改后:Thestudyisbuiltonclustering-basedWSNframework.Asensorwantstofind

11.分析:動詞選擇；從句用法（要有動詞）；主謂全都

原文示例:Thesensorbroadcastthetaskallocationinformationtosensorswhichinthesamecluster,thenchoosethemostsuitableonebyaautomaticnegotiation.

修改后:Thesensorsendsthetaskallocationinformationtosensorswhichareinthesamecluster,thenchoosesthemostsuitableonebyaautomaticnegotiation.12.分析:詞性混淆；被動用法

原文示例:Thewholeprocessofannounce,negotiate,andsettleonisacplishbyourimpovedauctionscheme

修改后:Thewholeprocessofannouncement,negotiatiation,andsettlementisacplishedbyourimprovedauctionscheme13.分析:并列句，缺少連詞。

原文示例:istoolow,itstotalutilityis修改后:istoolow,anditstotalutilityis

14.分析:分詞做狀語；句子太長時的句式變通；從句中主謂全都

原文示例:Thesensorwilllaunchanauctiontofindasuccessorwhenit??cannotcontinuetocarryoutitsfunctionsforsomereason(toleaveortomeettheenergyfloorthreshold).ItwillsentNoticetosensorsthatinthesamecluster.

修改后:Thesensor,notcontinuingtocarryoutitsfunctionsforsomereason(toleaveortomeettheenergyfloorthreshold),willlaunchanauctiontofindasuccessor.ItwillsendNoticetosensorsthatareinthesamecluster.15.分析:分詞狀語從句

原文示例:WiththeDL(150s)remainsunchanged,修改后:WiththeDL(150s)remainingunchanged

16.分析:oneof究竟要不要定冠詞？上個批注里把a改為了the

原文示例:AuctionisoneofthetypicalmethodsfortaskallocationinMAS修改后:AuctionisoneoftypicalmethodsfortaskallocationinMAS17.分析:對于縮寫名詞第一次消失全稱后以后都用縮寫

原文示例:修改后:

18.分析:詞性混淆

原文示例:withnewpoliciesbeingaddedintotraditionauctionscheme修改后:

19.分析:定語倒置混亂

原文示例:Thetraditionalfieldofdistributedalgorithmscannotbeapplieddirectly修改后:distributedalgorithmsoftraditionalfield20.分析:句式調整

原文示例:wirelesssensornetworkshave(has?)highdynamics,thelimitednatureoftheputingcapacityandenergyfeatures

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21.分析:長短句劃分

原文示例:Theauctionmethodishighlyfeasible,itcanallocatetaskrationallyinshorttime.修改后:

22.分析:時態(tài)別人工作介紹用過去式。

原文示例:heworksofMelodiaandtheothersofferadistributedcoordination修改后:

23.分析:英文中句意的體現。

原文示例:Thesensorsendsthetaskallocationinformationtosensorswhichareinthesamecluster

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24.分析:介詞的使用

原文示例:Thewholeprocessofannouncement,negotiation,andsettlementisacplishedbyourimprovedauctionscheme

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25.分析:詞匯選擇

原文示例:Assumingthateachattributeisdefinedinsuchaway:修改后:

26.分析:從句介詞用法

原文示例:endereewillselectthebidwhichvalueisgreaterthanUthresholdaswinner修改后:

27.分析:謂語相同時可以省略？

原文示例:RTS-Acaneffectivelyreducetheauctiontimeandreducenodeenergyconsumption.

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28.分析:名詞單復數；句子分割。

原文示例:UndertheUthresholdconstraints,theremaybeasituationthatallbiddersutilityvaluearelessthanthethreshold,thiswillleadtoauctionfailuresinRTS-A.

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29.分析:介詞使用；專出名詞首字母大寫

原文示例:Forourexperiments,weusedjavalanguage修改后:

30.分析:副詞位置？

原文示例:Eachthreaddealsdirectlywithabidder"stransaction.Eachthreadrunsindependently

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31.分析:英語習慣用法

原文示例:Ascanbeseenfromthefigure,修改后:

32.分析:斷句。

原文示例:Thesensorsendsthetaskallocationinformationtoothersensorswhichareinthesamecluster,thenchoosesthemostsuitableonebyaautomaticnegotiation.Thewholeprocessofannouncement,negotiation,andsettlementisacplishedinourimprovedauctionscheme.

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33.分析:主謂全都

原文示例:Tendereedonot修改后:

34.分析:英文習慣；句子調整。長句盡量變短句。

原文示例:TheRTE-AandRTENF-Aare??Validatedonreal-timeproperty,respectively.andcarryingoutaparisononsuccessra