2023學(xué)年完整公開課版建議信2022

建議信

文體概述

建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對(duì)方接受自己的想法、主張，解決有關(guān)問題。建議信不是投訴信，觀點(diǎn)要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)先。同時(shí)，建議信要簡潔明確、理由充足，具有合理性和說服力。通常包括：1.說明寫信目的;2.提出建議與改進(jìn)措施并給予忠告;3.表達(dá)希望采納建議并期盼回復(fù)。

1.給某人提建議________________________2.如下________________________3.在做某事時(shí)遇到困難

__________________________4.利用________________________5.向某人征求意見________________________asksb.foradvicegivesb.someadvice(on)asfollowshavedifficulty/troubleindoingsth.makeuseof

常用語塊

6.制訂計(jì)劃_______________________7.認(rèn)為……有用

_______________________8.參加_______________________9.聽從某人的建議_______________________10.把……考慮在內(nèi)

_______________________takesth.intoaccount/considerationmakeaplanfind…h(huán)elpful/useful/beneficialtakepartin/participateinfollowone’sadvice11.得到改善________________________12.有所好轉(zhuǎn)________________________13.依我看來________________________14.我已收到你的來信，得知你……________________________15.我建議……________________________Iwouldliketosuggestthat…/Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…/Iamwritingtoadviseyouof…/IfIwereyou,Iwould…/MayIsuggestthat…/Iwouldliketoputforwardthesuggestionthat…getimprovedchangeforthebetterinmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofview/asfarasI’mconcernedIhavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyou…

1.你就……向我尋求建議，我會(huì)盡力提一些建設(shè)性的建議。

2.我覺得如果能夠……將會(huì)很有幫助的。1.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.2.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif…

套用句式

3.我希望這些建議會(huì)對(duì)你有所幫助。4.我相信你會(huì)考慮我的建議的。5.如能看到……我會(huì)非常開心的。3.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful/beneficial.5.Iwouldbemorethanhappytosee…4.Itrustyou’lltakemysuggestionintoaccount./Itrustyou’lltakegoodconsiderationofmysuggestion.DearRoy,IamgladtoreceiveyourletteraskformyadvicetohowtolearnChinesewell.Herearefewsuggestions.First,thisisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspaperandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.askingon∧aitnewspapers

習(xí)作修改

Beside,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasier.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.HewilltellyoualotaboutChinaorhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritetomeinChinesethenexttime.Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHuaBesideseasilyTheyand1.ask→asking現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語，表示主動(dòng)關(guān)系。2.to→onadvice后常搭配介詞on。3.在few前加a根據(jù)句意，此處為提一些建議，表示肯定意義，用afew。4.this→it考查句型itis+adj.+todosth.意為“做……是……的”。5.newspaper→newspapers因?yàn)閚ewspaper為可數(shù)名詞，而且與前后的books,magazines屬于并列關(guān)系，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式。作者就如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語給Roy寫信提建議。6.Beside→Besides此處表示補(bǔ)充說明關(guān)系“此外/而且”，beside意為“在……旁邊”。7.easier→easily修飾謂語動(dòng)詞用副詞形式。8.He→They根據(jù)前一句話中的moreChinesefriends可知用They。9.or→and此處兩個(gè)動(dòng)作為“順承”關(guān)系，而非“選擇”關(guān)系。10.去掉nexttime前的the相對(duì)于現(xiàn)在的“下一……”，next前不用the。DearSuRu,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith,ifyouwanttomakefriends,youshouldbeafriendfirst.Inaddition,youshouldsharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriends.Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnotleast,wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyouputyourheartintomakingfriends?Itiswellknowntousthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful!Yours,LiHua

課堂練習(xí)

假定你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給材料，給Lora寫一封回信。要點(diǎn)如下：1.對(duì)Lora打算利用暑假打工表示理解。2.猜測Lora父母不同意的理由。3.你給Lora的具體建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。DearLora,Ihavejustreadyourletterinthemagazine.Iknowthatyouwanttoworkpart-timethissummer.Butyourparentsdon’tallowyoutodoso.Iunderstandyoursituation.Ithinkyourparentsmayhavetheirreasons.Theymayregardlearningasthemostimportanttaskforyou.Perhapsthey’dlikeyoutomakeuseofthissummerholidaytostudy.Besides,theymaythinkyouaretooyoungtowork.Ithinkyouhadbetterhaveatalkwithyourparents.Iftheyagree,youshouldmakeadetailedplanforyourstudyandwork,askyourfriendstoworktogetherwithyou,andtellyourparentsnottoworryaboutyoubecauseyouareoldenoughtomanagethingsproperly.Anyway,Iwouldbemorethanhappytowishyouapleasantsummer.Yourstruly,LiHua

課外作業(yè)

假如你是育才高中高三（1）班學(xué)生李華。美國之音（VOA）是你最喜歡的廣播電臺(tái)，在今年（2017年）成立75周年之際向廣大聽眾征集意見，請(qǐng)你給慢速英語（SpecialEnglish）欄目編輯寫一封信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.說明你是美國之音的忠實(shí)聽眾。2.贊賞該欄目的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：（1）語言地道純正；（2）適合初學(xué)者；（3）內(nèi)容豐富。3.提出你的建議：希望增設(shè)新的欄目，報(bào)道校園新聞、發(fā)表學(xué)生優(yōu)秀習(xí)作等。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭語和結(jié)語已為你寫好。DearSirorMadam,I’mLiHua,aSenior3studentfromYucaiHighSchoolinChina.Congratulationsonthe75thanniversaryofVOA!IhavebeenabigfanofVOAandfoundyourprogramSpecialEnglishverybeneficialtome.First,it’shelpfulforstudentslikemetolearnEnglishwell,forthespeakersspea