讀后續(xù)寫遇險類-彩虹盡頭的女孩講義 高三英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項

讀后續(xù)寫原題：Onesummer

afternoon,whenIwasabouteightyearsofage,Iwaslookingatabeautifulrainbowthat,

bendingfromthesky,seemedtobelosingitselfinathick

wood

aboutaquarterofamiledistant.“Doyouknow,Gracie,”saidmy

brother,whowasjustrecoveringfromasevereillness,

weakandtired,"thatifyoushouldgototheendoftherainbow,youwouldfindthereprecious

treasures?”“Isittrulyso?”Iasked.“Trulyso,”answeredmybrother,witha

smile

butaveryseriousface.Now,Iwasa

simple-hearted

childwhobelievedeverythingthatwastoldtome;so,withoutanotherword,Irushedouttowardthewood.Mybrother

called

aftermeasloudlyashewasableto,butIdidnottakeanynoticeofhim.Icarednothingforthewetgrass,

onandonIran.

IwassosurethatIknewjustwherethatrainbowended.ButwhenIreachedthe

cedars

,

theendoftherainbowwasnotthere!

Abruptly

Isawitshiningdownamongthetreesalittlefartheroff;so

onandonIstruggled,throughthethickbushes,tillIcamewithinthesoundofa

stream.Ireachedthebankofthestream,andIcouldseeitalittlewayoffontheotherside.Icrossedthestreamonafallentree,andstillranon,thoughmy

muscleswereachingandmykneesshaking.SuddenlyImetinmywayalarge

porcupine(大豪豬).

Iranawayfromhim

asfastasmytiredfeetwouldcarryme.Inmy

fright

andhurryIforgottokeepmyeyeontherainbow,andwhen,atlast,Irememberedandlookedforit,itwasnowhereinsight!WhenIsawthatitwasindeedgone,Iburstintotears,forIhadlostallmytreasures,and

hadnothingbut

muddyfeetandawetand

torn

dress.SoIsetoutforhome.Paragraph1:ButIsoonfoundthatmytroubleshadonlybegun.______________Paragraph2:AtlastIheardmyownnamecalled.________________文本分析：故事介紹：一個夏日的午后，8歲的小女孩Gracie抬頭仰望天空看著美麗的彩虹出神，此時哥哥告訴她彩虹的源頭有著世間最為珍貴的寶藏。單純的Gracie相信了哥哥的話，她堅定地相信寶藏就在彩虹的盡頭，于是便奮不顧身地跑向叢林去尋找彩虹的源頭。途中出現(xiàn)的豪豬讓她失去了方向，她迷失在叢林中，找不到回家的路……

五要素：Who--GracieandherbrotherWhen--onesummerafternoonWhere--inathickwoodWhat--Graciewaslookingatabeautifulrainbowwhenbrothertoldthatifsheshouldgototheendoftherainbowshewouldfindthereprecioustreasures.Why--Graciewasasimple-heartedchildandshebelievedeverythingthatwastoldtoherHow--tosearchfortheprecioustreasures,Gracieranouttoathickwood......參考答案：Gracie發(fā)現(xiàn)自己迷路了，最終被哥哥找到并帶回家。這件事成為了她童年的一段美好回憶。Paragraph1:

ButIsoonfoundthat

mytroubleshadonlybegun.

Ilostmyway!Iwas

shivering

withcold,withmyemptystomach

rumbling.

Thenightwind

howledruthlessly,

nameless

creatures

murmured

inthedarkandthemoonlightshoneweaklyontheground.

Filledwithfright,I

dragged

myexhaustedbody,

inchingforward.

Eventually,Isatbesidethestream,myarmsandlegsaching.

Beingremorse

formysimple-mindedbehavior,thinkingaboutthemissingrainbowandtreasures,I

burstintotears

again,feelinghelpless.但我很快發(fā)現(xiàn)，我的麻煩才剛剛開始。我迷路了!我冷得發(fā)抖，空空的肚子咕咕作響。夜風(fēng)無情地咆哮著，黑暗中有無名的生物在喃喃低語，月光微弱地照在地上。我驚恐萬分，拖著疲憊的身體慢慢向前挪動。最后，我坐在小溪邊，四肢酸痛。我為自己單純的行為感到懊悔，想起失去的彩虹和珍寶，我又哭了,非常無助。

Paragraph2:AtlastIheardmyownnamecalled.

Thevoicecamefromdistance,butIcouldfigureoutitwasmybrother.“Here!Here!”I

shriekedat

thetopofmylung.Myweakbrother

madehisway

tome,

hiseyesfilledwithconcern.Asenseof

palpable

relief

enveloped

me.

I

threw

myself

to

him

and

hugged

him

tightly.

Following

him,

I

arrived

home

safeandsound

finally.Distant

though

itisnow,the

episode

has

wovenintomysweetchildhoodmemories,

lingering

inthedepthofmyheart.最后我聽到有人叫我自己的名字。聲音從遠(yuǎn)處傳來，但我知道那是我哥哥。在這里!”我扯著嗓子尖叫起來。我虛弱的弟弟向我走來，眼里充滿了關(guān)切。一種明顯的解脫感籠罩著我。我撲向他，緊緊地抱住他。跟著他，我終于平安到家了。雖然現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)很遙遠(yuǎn)了，但這件事已經(jīng)編織在我童年的甜蜜記憶中，縈繞在我的內(nèi)心深處.下水文1:Gracie發(fā)現(xiàn)自己迷路了，最終被家人找到。經(jīng)過這件事情，她最終感悟到家人的親情和關(guān)愛才是彩虹末端的財寶。Paragraph1:ButIsoonfoundthatmytroubleshadonlybegun.AllatonceIheardvoicesshoutingandhallooing.Iwasfrightened,fearingthatsomeunknownanimalswereuponme!Icouldnotfindmyway:Iwaslostinawood!Icouldnottellwhichwaseastorwest,northorsouth,butwanderedabouthereandthere,cryingandcalling,thoughIknewthatnoonecouldhearme.Iwashungry,cold,scared,--altogetherverymiserableindeed.Paragraph2:AtlastIheardmyownnamecalled.Thencamefamiliarvoicesnearme.Thatwasmyfamily!Instantly,Itriedtorespondloudlyandurgently,“Here!Here!”Withinminutes,myfamilycameintomyeyes.Rushingtowardsthem,Ithrewmyselftotheirwarmhugs.Inaguiltytone,mybrothersaid,"mypoorlittlesister!IthoughtyouwouldknowIwasonlyquizzingyou."Smilingathim,Isaid,“ThereisnotreasureattheendoftherainbowButourfamilyare!”(150words)下水文2：Gracie發(fā)現(xiàn)自己迷路了，在痛苦不堪之際，哥哥拖著病體找到她。她體會到了哥哥對她的愛。Paragraph1:ButIsoonfoundthatmytroubleshadonlybegun.Icouldn'tfindthepreviousway!Achillcreptoverme.Withmylipstrembling,Iwasreducedtotears.Hopingtofindsomethingmore,Istillwalkedthroughthewoods.However,itseemedthatthegodwasn'tblessingonme.Ultimately,Isatdownbythetreewithmyarmsaching.Ifeltextremelytiredandmyspiritssank,tearsstreamingdownmycheeksagain.Paragraph2:AtlastIheardmyownnamecalledAwildgaietytookholdofmysinkingheart.Somebodywaslookingforme!Trottingquickly,Isawitwasmybrother,whowasseizedbyaburs