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如何寫好英語旅游日記

1.語法：一般過去式2.重點：be動詞和實義動詞第1頁寫作要求本單元話題是談?wù)搶W(xué)生自己過去經(jīng)歷，圍繞“去某地旅游"展開，學(xué)生要能正確體現(xiàn)出在旅游過程中所見所聞所感。這一話題是以日記形式展現(xiàn)，因此要符合日記寫作要求。一般在正文上方，自左起寫上日期，星期幾和天氣情況，正文要用第一人稱和一般過去式來寫，同步，合適寫些自己感受。第2頁日記寫法．日記格式

英語旅游日記格式和英語其他日記格式大體相同。一般由書端和正文兩個部分組成。日記常以第一人稱記下當(dāng)天旅游中所見、所聞、所做或所想事情。英語日記書端是專門寫日記日期、星期和天氣。旅游日記還要寫明地點。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期，地點。右上角寫上當(dāng)天天氣情況

第3頁日期寫法

日期體現(xiàn)有多種形式。年、月、日都寫時，一般以月、日、年為次序，月份能夠縮寫，日和年用逗號隔開。例如：

December

16

2023或者

Dec.

16

2023

A)

September

1,

2023或September

1st,

2023可省略寫成Sept.

1,

2023或Sept.

1st,

2023或

the

1st

of

September

in

2023(月份不能夠縮寫)

B)只有月、日

September

1或September

1st(月份能夠縮寫)（

1或1st都應(yīng)讀作the

first）。

C)只有年、月

September

2023或the

September

of

2023(月份不能夠縮寫)

2.星期也能夠省略不寫，可將其放在日期前或后，星期和日期之間不用標(biāo)點，但要空一格，星期也可縮寫。如：

Saturday,

November

2nd,

2023；November

22nd,

2023

Saturday

第4頁天氣常用詞語天氣情況必不可少。天氣一般用一種形容詞如

:Sunny,

Fine,

Rainy,

Snowy

等表達(dá)。位于日記右上角。下面是某些常用描寫天氣英語詞語：

晴

clear/sunny/fine多云

cloudy

小雨

light

rain傾盆大雨downpour

大雨

heavy

rain

毛毛雨

drizzle

陣雨

shower有風(fēng)windy

東風(fēng)

east

wind

南風(fēng)

south

wind

西風(fēng)

west

wind

北風(fēng)

north

wind

西南風(fēng)

southwester

東南風(fēng)

southeaster

東北風(fēng)

northeaster

西北風(fēng)

northwester暴風(fēng)雨stormy

酷熱

scorching

heat

寒冷

icy

cold

下雪

snowy

第5頁思緒點撥1：開篇點題。指出旅行地點，人物和時間。2：詳細(xì)描述。詳細(xì)講述所參觀景點，以及在景點所進行活動。3：體現(xiàn)感受。對旅行做出評價，談?wù)勛约焊惺?。?頁佳作賞析

Tuesday,July8stSunny

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Iamgoingtospendhalftimeofmyvacationonsportsthisyear.Playingbasketballisalwaysmyfavourite,sosomeofmyclassmatesandIwillformasmallteamandplaybasketballtogether.Sometimeswewillhaveamatchagainstsomeotherteams.Iwillenjoythesensewhenwewinthegame.Ofcourse,Iwillspendlotsoftimeondoingmyhomework.It’simportantformetofinishmylessons.IfIstillhaveenoughtime,IamgoingtovisitBeijingCity,andvisitingBeijingismydreamfromchildhoodtonow.Oh,whatagreatvacation!第10頁MyvacationWednesday,August2ndSunny

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