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new

building

is

being

built

in

our

school.A

new

building

is

under

construction

in

our

school.It

is

raining

heavily.It

is

raining

cats

and

dogs.The

PRC

was

founded

in

the

year

1949.The

year

1949

saw

the

foundationof

the

PRC.二、盡量避免過(guò)多地重復(fù)使用某一單詞。I

like

reading

while

he

likes

playing

football.I

like

reading

while

he

enjoys

playing

football.When

summer

comes,

the

day

is

getting

longer

andlonger,

and

the

night

is

getting

shorter

and

shorter.When

summer

comes,

the

day

is

getting

longer

andlonger,

and

the

night

shorter

and

shorter.三、可適當(dāng)?shù)卮蚱瞥Ｒ?guī)，用一些倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句或感嘆句,可以為文意的表達(dá)增添一點(diǎn)新意。The

girl

was

hardworking

and

careful,

and

she

passed the

test.Hardworking

and

careful,

the

girl

passed

the

test.I

hit him

in

the

face.It’s

I

who

hit him

in

the

face.I am

glad

that

you

have

made

so

much

progress.How

glad

I’m

that

you

have

made

so

much

progress.四、使用主從復(fù)合句、分詞、不定式等來(lái)代替簡(jiǎn)單句，能使書(shū)面表達(dá)行文更加流暢有力。He

was

very

humorous.

We

all

like

to

play

with

him.He

lay

on

the

grass,

counting

the

stars

in

the

sky.We

are

studying

hard

in

order

to

pass

the

entrance examination.In

order

to

pass

the

entrance

examination,

we

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hard.He

lay

on

the

grass

and

counted

the

stars

in

the

sky.He

lay

on

the

grass,

counting

the

stars

in

the

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temple stood

between

the

two

buildings

,

in

which

an old

monk

lived.Between

the

two

buildings stood

a

temple,

inwhich

an old

monk

lived.The

remains

of

Tom

is

floating

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the

surface

of

theriver.On

the

surface

of

the river

is

floating

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remains

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he

was

deep

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thought,

he

forgot

his

lunch. Deep

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forgot

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later,

then,finally語(yǔ)可以是表示順序的，如now,

at

present,

in

the

past,

during

the

day的:and,

or或選擇的：because,

so,

thanks

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graduation,

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teacher,thenpost

office, he

quitted

his

job

and

did

business,he

became

a

millionaire.in

afinally;表因果的:first二00一年高考英語(yǔ)優(yōu)秀書(shū)面表達(dá)賞析[原題]假設(shè)你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友Dick聽(tīng)說(shuō)中國(guó)的中小學(xué)正在減輕學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)，來(lái)信詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的信息，寫(xiě)一封回信，談一談減負(fù)給你的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來(lái)的變化。周末活動(dòng)（減負(fù)前）周末活動(dòng)（減負(fù)后）白天：上課、做作業(yè)白天：參加博物館、學(xué)習(xí)電腦、繪畫(huà)等晚上：做作業(yè)晚上：看新聞、讀書(shū)、看報(bào)就寢時(shí)間：11：30就寢時(shí)間：10：00Dear

Dick,How

nice

to

hear

from

you

again.

In

your

letter,

you

asked

meabout

the

reduction of

learning

load

in

China.

Now,

I’ll

tell

yousomething

about

it.In

the

past,

we

had

lots

of

homework

to

do

and

had

little

timeto

do

other

things.

Even

on

weekends,

we

went

to

school

and

didhomework

in

the

daytime,

and

still

did

homework

at

night.

Iusually

went

to

bed

at

11:30,

so

I

felt

sleepy

the

next

day.Now,

after

reducing

learning

load,

we

have

much

more

sparetime.

On

weekends,

I

usually

go

to

museums,

study

computer,and

do

some

drawing

and

so

on.

At

night,

I

often

watc