2024屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：環(huán)保主題

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)綠色環(huán)保主題1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Ididn’tseethethinplastictaperunningacrossthebreadbagwhenIputthebreadinmyshoppingcartorwhenIcheckedout.Itwasn’tuntilIunpackedthebreadathomethatIrealizedthatI’dbrokentherulesagain.ThatstupidplastictapejoinedthelonglistofmistakesImadeinjustoneweekoftryingtoeatplastic-free.Lastmonth,Ichallengedmyselftopurchaseaweek’sworthoffoodwithoutbringinghomeanyplastic.Thatmeantnoyogurtcontainersorplasticpackages.Ichoseabudgetof$115(roughlyhalf-waybetweentheaverageweeklygrocerybillforafamilyoftwoinMassachusetts).OnSaturdayafternoon,Ipulledintotheparkinglotofawell-knownzero-wasteshoppingcenter.Istartedintheproducesection,whereItypicallygotaplasticbagoforganicbabycarrots.Thistime,Icouldnotgotherebecauseeveryvegetableintheorganicsectionwaspackedinplasticcontainers.ButIfoundsomebeautifulcarrotsamongthenon-organicproduce.ThenIsawtheplasticpricelabelshangingofftheirrubberbands.Irolledmycartpastthegreenbeansandgrapes,allinsidetheplastic.Iweighedlooseapples,onionsandsweetpotatoes.Myanxietykickedin—afeelingthatIwouldn’thaveenough.So,Iboughtaheadofcabbage.4續(xù)寫原文Itappedpricesintothecalculatoronmyphone.Leavingtheproducesection,Iwasingoodshape,at$32.Itwastimetosearchforprotein.Iheadedtothemeatcounter.Again,everythingwasprepackagedinplastic.Butthemanbehindtheglasskindlyagreedtoputsomechickenandmeat,separately,inpaperbags.Togethertheywere$21.Tofu,cheese,yogurtandprettymucheverythinginthedairysectionwereprepackagedinplastic.Eventhebottledmilkhadaplasticcap.Buttherewerelotsofeggsinthosepaperbags.5段首句Para1：Atcheckout,Istillhad$62leftbutIcouldnotfindanythingelsewithoutplastic.

Para2：Atthemoment,IrealizedthatperhapsIshouldn’thavehadaimedtoohigh.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8本文以購(gòu)物為線索展開，講述的是作者一開始想要盡量避免使用塑料，購(gòu)物之后，最終明白不必苛求自己，量力而行就好。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Atcheckout,Istillhad$62leftbutIcouldnotfindanythingelsewithoutplastic.由第一段首句“結(jié)賬時(shí)我還剩下62美元，但是我找不到其他沒有用到塑料的東西?！笨芍?，續(xù)寫可以圍繞作者面對(duì)這一情況的反應(yīng)展開，包括描述作者的情緒，作者向購(gòu)物中心的經(jīng)理投訴的具體內(nèi)容，以及經(jīng)理的解釋。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Atthemoment,IrealizedthatperhapsIshouldn’thavehadaimedtoohigh.由第二段首句“那一刻我意識(shí)到，也許我不應(yīng)該把限塑目標(biāo)定得太高?！笨芍?，續(xù)寫內(nèi)容可包括作者對(duì)許多商品都使用塑料包裝這一情況表示理解，以及調(diào)整自己的限塑目標(biāo)。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索因塑料包裝過多而向經(jīng)理投訴——經(jīng)理解釋——理解緣由——調(diào)整個(gè)人限塑目標(biāo)12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①停業(yè)：closedown/shutdown②決定做某事：decidetodosth./determinetodosth.③減少：reduce/cutdown情緒類①生氣的：angry/mad②快樂的：happy/pleased13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：【高分句型1】Healsotoldmethatit’shardtoaddthatcosttothepriceoffood,andthatpaperbagsfornuts,beansorsnacksweren’tasattractiveonshelvesasplasticbags.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Thus,IdecidedtojustreducetheplasticthatIusedonceandthrewaway.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型3】Anyway,IwashappythatIavoidedusing27plasticcontainersintheweek.（系表結(jié)構(gòu)后接賓語(yǔ)從句）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Atcheckout,Istillhad$62leftbutIcouldnotfindanythingelsewithoutplastic.SoIbecamealittlebitangryandcomplainedtothemanagerthatthereweretoomanythingsIcouldn’tbuyplastic-free.Therewasnodairyorjuice.Hesaidhe’sinterestedinusingmorerecyclablecontainers,buttheyweremuchmoreexpensive.Healsotoldmethatit’shardtoaddthatcosttothepriceoffood,andthatpaperbagsfornuts,beansorsnacksweren’tasattractiveonshelvesasplasticbags.16范文呈現(xiàn)Atthemoment,IrealizedthatperhapsIshouldn’thavehadaimedtoohigh.Afterall,mostcustomershadtoshopwiththeireyesontheirwallets.Themajorplasticproducerscouldnotbecloseddownimmediately.Thus,IdecidedtojustreducetheplasticthatIusedonceandthrewaway.Anyway,IwashappythatIavoidedusing27plasticcontainersintheweek.MaybeIcoulddobetter.17范文譯文他對(duì)2017年6月的一次例行檢查中的一次雪崩記憶猶新?！拔覀冋郎弦粋€(gè)400米長(zhǎng)、海拔約5500米的山口，這對(duì)我們來說是最危險(xiǎn)的地方，地面積雪深度高達(dá)兩米，風(fēng)很大，”施說。突然，石聽到雷鳴般的聲音，一團(tuán)雪從山上滾落下來。施某迅速撲向巖石并抓住巖石，幸免于難，但受傷了。18范文譯文在保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物方面有很多艱苦的工作，但也有一些驚喜。施對(duì)大熊貓情有獨(dú)鐘。盡管他在保護(hù)區(qū)巡邏了三十年，但他只見過熊貓兩次。為了錄制保