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寫作中文翻譯我是3班的李華。我寫信是想表達我對學(xué)習(xí)小組劃分的建議。為了保證學(xué)生有更好的機會練習(xí)英語口語,你把我們隨機分成兩組,我認(rèn)為這在兩個方面都不合適。首先,它可能導(dǎo)致語言能力不平衡,從而阻礙順利練習(xí)節(jié)奏。其次,由于不熟悉,學(xué)生可能無法很好地配合另一位完成任務(wù)。根據(jù)我所說的,更好的方法是根據(jù)我們的語言水平進行配對,讓每個人都充分參與到活動中來,或者讓我們自己結(jié)對。無論哪種方式都不僅可以提高學(xué)生的積極性,而且有助于提高學(xué)習(xí)效率。以上是我的建議。謝謝您的考慮________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2023年高考全國乙卷作文假期所學(xué)到的新技能1.學(xué)的新技能是什么;2.分享心得感悟。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.題目和首句已為你寫好。【寫作思路】
結(jié)構(gòu)構(gòu)思:以描述假期學(xué)到的新技能為題寫一篇短文投稿,注意寫作的時態(tài)為一般過去時為主。假期學(xué)到的技能有很多,比如:學(xué)外語、做飯、學(xué)一門樂器、學(xué)書法、學(xué)游泳等。該寫作任務(wù)較難的地方是話題詞塊的準(zhǔn)確運用。因此,平時的訓(xùn)練中,要廣泛涉獵不同的話題文章,并有意識地積累話題詞塊。2.詞塊激活時間管理__________________玩手機等電子設(shè)備的時間__________________對任務(wù)進行優(yōu)先安排__________________分配我的時間段__________________重要性和緊急性__________________反思__________________做相應(yīng)的調(diào)整__________________效率
__________________成就感__________________
高分句型以前,我總是在沒有事先制定計劃的情況下花費時間,這樣就會在不知不覺中浪費太多的時間在屏幕上。(主句+非限制性定語從句)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________堅持一個月后,不僅我的工作效率提高了,而且我的控制感和成就感也提高了。(notonly...butalso
引導(dǎo)的倒裝句)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________管理時間的技能是我在這次假期中學(xué)到的一項重要技能,它使我受益匪淺。以前,我總是在沒有事先制定計劃的情況下花費時間,這樣就會在不知不覺中浪費太多的時間在屏幕上。幸運的是,我的朋友蘋果幫我制定了有效的計劃,并提前一天確定了任務(wù)的優(yōu)先級。在她的指導(dǎo)下,我學(xué)會了根據(jù)任務(wù)的重要性和緊迫性來分配時間。此外,每天晚上,我都會反思我是否按照計劃明智而準(zhǔn)確地度過了一天,并在第二天做出相應(yīng)的調(diào)整。堅持了一個月的技能后,不僅我的效率得到了提高,而且我的控制感和成就感也得到了提高。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________timemanagement/managetimescreentimeprioritizetasksallocatemytimeslotsimportanceandurgencyreflecton/makereflectionsonmakeadjustmentsaccordinglyproductivity
senseoffulfillmentsb.suggestdoingsthItis
advisedthatsb.shouldIsuggestthatsb.shouldIthinkitisimportanttoItishighlyrecommendedthat……studygroupdivisiondivideusrandomlyintopairs.beintendedtodo
unbalancedlanguageabilitieshinder
the
practicingpaceoutofunfamiliaritymatch
us
accordingtoour
languageproficiencycontributeto
betterproductivity1.Intended
to
ensure
abetterchanceforpracticingstudents'
oralEnglish,youdivideusrandomlyinto
pairs,whichIthink
isnotappropriateintwo
ways.2.Itmayleadto
unbalancedlanguageabilities,
thus
hinderingthe
practicingpace.3.Second,
studentsmay
notcooperatewellwith
anotherone
assigned
outofunfamiliarity.
BasedonwhatIhavestated,abetterwaywouldbeto
match
us
accordingtoour
languageproficiency,
makingeveryonefully4.involvedin
theactivity,
or
allow
us
topairgroups
by
ourselves.
DearRyan,
I'mLiHuafromClass3.
Iamwritingto
expressmy
suggestionson
yourstudygroupdivision.
Intendedto
ensure
abetterchanceforpracticingstudents'oralEnglish,youdivideusrandomlyinto
pairs,whichIthinkisnotappropriateintwo
ways.
Firstofall,
itmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilities,thushinderingthe
practicingpace.Second,
studentsmaynotcooperatewellwith
anotheroneassigned
outofunfamiliarity.
BasedonwhatIhavestated,abetterwaywouldbetomatch
us
accordingtoour
languageproficiency,
makingeveryonefullyinvolvedin
theactivity,or
allowustopairgroups
byourselves.
Eitherwaycannotonlyimprovestudents'enthusiasm
butalsocontributeto
betterproductivity.
Above
aremysuggestions.Thankyouforyourconsideration.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua1.Previously,Iwasalwaysspendingmytimewithoutaplansetinadvance,asaresultofwhich,toomuchtimewouldbewastedonscreensunnoticeably.
2.Afterstickingtotheskillforamonth,notonlydidmyproductivitygetimproved,butmysenseofcontrolandfulfillmentaswell.LearnanewskillTheskillofmanagingtimeisacrucialskillthatIlearnedduringthisvacation,anditbenefitsmealot.Previously,
I
was
always
spending
my
time
without
a
plan
set
in
advance,
as
a
result
of
which,
too
much
time
would
be
wasted
on
screens
unnoticeably.
Luckily,
my
friend
Apple
helped
me
make
effective
plans
and
prioritize
tasks
one
day
ahead.
Under
her
guidance,
I
learned
to
allocate
my
time
slots
for
each
task
based
on
its
importance
and
urgency.
In
addition,
every
night,
I
would
make
reflections
on
whether
I
spend
my
day
wisely
and
accurately
according
to
the
plan,
and
make
adjustments
accordingly
the
next
day.Afterstickingtotheskillforamonth,notonlydidmyproductivitygetimproved,butmysenseofcontrolandfulfillmentaswell.
下水作文1:①ThenewskillIlearnedduringthevacationiscooking.WhenIencounteredanAPPupdatescookingskillsregularlyin
June,Ifellinlovewithitatonce.IfollowedthestepswhileIworkedinthekitchenforafewtimesandsoonbecameexperienced.(①作文開頭快速入題,直接交代新技能是什么,在什么機緣下決定學(xué)習(xí)的)②Cookingshowedmeacompletelynewworld.③
NeverdidIknowthatthesecommoningredientsfromthemarketscouldbemadeintosuch
deliciousdishes.
Itseemedlikeamagic.
④Absorbedincooking,
⑤IfeltasifIwerecreatingamiraclelikeamagician.⑥NowonderthatIwasfascinatedbyit.
(②第二段就事論事,引出心得感悟,③倒裝句的應(yīng)用,增強語勢④
過去分詞做狀語,高一下學(xué)期的語法點,
⑤嘗試一下虛擬語氣,豐富句式)⑥
直接套用nowonderthat
結(jié)構(gòu)即可)⑥What'smore,cookinghelpedmereducemypressureindailylife.⑦
HoweverdepressedIwas,
asIenteredintothekitchenandgotmyselfinvolvedincooking,Iforgotallthetroubleinlife.⑧As
the
result,Igotrefreshedagain.(⑥第三段比第二段再往深挖一下,從物質(zhì)上升到精神,深化主題
⑦此處的However=Nomatterhow結(jié)構(gòu)
⑧再加個學(xué)生肯定能想出來的As
the
result湊熱鬧)⑨Itwassoblessedto
have
learned
anewskilllikecooking,⑩
whichmakesmehappy,healthyandrefreshedeveryday.(⑨結(jié)尾要短促有力
⑩這句也可以改成whichmakesmehappyandhealthy嘗試一下押頭韻的修辭手法,)下水作文2:①Ilearnedwritingfrommybrotherlastwinterholiday.
whenIcameback
home,Ifoundmybrotherwritingsomethingonthecomputer.Whenhepresstheenterbutton,
fanscrowdedinandgavehim
likes
belowhisarticle.
Itwassocool.
Iwanted
toexperiencethisimpressivemoment
aswell,soI
askedhimtoteachmetheskillofwriting.(①作文開頭直接交代新技能是什么,為什么想學(xué)這項技能)②AtfirstIgotnoideaaboutwritingatall,whichleadtotheresultthatIwriteawfullinesandnobodyreadsit.Igotdiscouragedandalmostwantedtogiveup.Mybrotherencouragedmetokeepontryingandwriteafewlineseverydaytokeepsensitivetowriting.
Heshowedmesomereallyimpressiveexamplesfromclassicalwritingartworksandorderedmetoimitate.Ifollowedhisadviceandtrytoimitatetensentencesfromclassicalwritingartworkseachmorning.Meanwhile,Ireadtheexamplesagainandagaintoexplorethesecretofwriting.(②展示學(xué)習(xí)新技
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