讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作講義 高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

試題原題第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

Inhighschool,Iwasastraight

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Astudent,amemberofmanyschoolclubs,andareceiverofmanyrewards.However,Ihadbeensubjectedto（受到......折磨）peerpressure.Wantingtobe“cool!”，Istartedgoingtopartiesanddrinking,drunkbeyondrecognition.Mylifetookaturnfortheworse.However,theexperienceinonesummerprogramtaughtmealesson:neverdosomethingyoubelieveiswrongjusttogaintheapprovalofothers.

InJune,Iworkedpart-timeatarestaurant.ThedaybeforeIleftfortheprogram,oneco-workerofferedmehisdriver’slicense,tellingmetohavefuninQuebecsincewetwoalmostlookedthesame.I’dseenfriendswalkintoliquor（酒）storeswithfakelicensesandcomeoutcarryingatwelve-packofbeer,smilingproudly.SoItookthelicense,butIpromisedmyselfthatIwouldn’tuseit.However,Ieasilygotcarriedaway.

Onthefirstnightoftheprogram,whilewalkingaround,mynewfriendsandIcameacrossaliquorstore.Kai

askedifanyonehadafakelicense.Aftereveryoneshookhishead,Iclearedmythroatanddeclared,

“IDo.”

Witheveryone’sadmirationandKai’stwentydollarsandinstruction,Iboldlyagreedtotakeonthetaskwithoutthinking.

Imanagedto

buyacaseofbeer.Theboyscheeredandgavemepatsontheback.“You’retheman,”

someonesaidto

me.Thepraiseboostedmyself-confidence.

Thelast

nighttherewasaparty.Afewofmyfriendsinsistedthatwedrinkbeforethedance.Theyaskedme,

the

“IDman”

tobuyalcohol.Toearntheiradmiration,Itookthecashandboughtwhattheywanted.Laterthatnight,

IwasenjoyingmyselfwhenKaisaidnervously,“Cristianisn’tokay.”

Worriedformyfriend,Iwenttoassessthesituation.Clearly,Cristianwasoverlydrunkandalmostunconscious.注意：1.

所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.

Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice.

寫作分析1.主要人物?

I：曾經(jīng)是一個優(yōu)等生，但為迎合同伴，用他人的駕照去買酒，導(dǎo)致其中一位同伴喝醉出現(xiàn)情況?

Kai：newfriend，提議用他人的駕照買酒喝?Cristian：overlydrunk&almostunconscious2.前文情節(jié)我一直來都是優(yōu)等生，但是為了迎合同伴的好感，在一家飯店兼職時候的一個同事把他的駕照給我，讓我好好享受在魁北克的生活。之前也看到過有人用他人的駕照買酒喝，接過同事的駕照后，雖然也對自己說不會用于買酒的，但我這個人太容易被“勸說”。于是，新朋友Kai提議說用駕照去買酒喝的時候，我不知道怎么的，就答應(yīng)了。當(dāng)晚，當(dāng)我們都沉靜在快樂中的時候，Kai焦急地跟我說Cristian喝醉了，近乎失去了知覺。于是，......3.續(xù)寫安排第一段：Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.①（與前一句銜接）Cristian當(dāng)時的情況如何②我們做了寫什么③（與下文開頭句銜接）當(dāng)天晚些時候我對此事的反思第二段：Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice.①（與前一句銜接）我主動說出了事情的真相②我受到怎樣的處理③（主題升華）在此事中應(yīng)該吸取怎樣的教訓(xùn)

下水文

Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.What’sworse,heseemedtobetotallyunconscious,handsandlegsstretchingstraightandeyesopenedwide.Peopleonthescenewereshocked,notknowingwhattodo.Afewseconds’

blankmind,Icalledtheambulance.KaiandIsentCristiantothenearesthospital,worryingalltheway.Fortunately,nothingwasseriouslywrongwithhim.Afteraquicktreatment,hewentbacktohislifeanddidn’thaveanybadresults.Butlaterthatday,theguiltywasalwaysdisturbingme,whichkeptmefeelinggreatregretforwhatIhaddone.(94words)

Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice.Beforeheasked,ItoldhimwhathadhappenedandpromisedthatIwouldneverdosuchsillythingsagain.TherecamethepunishmentthatIlostthechancetojoinintheprogram,whichwaslessseverethanwhatI’dexpected.However,theprogramdirector’swordswerestillechoinginmyears:neverdothingsthatyouthinkarewrongjusttopleaseothers.Ireturnedthelicensetotheco-workerwithoutanyhesitationandpromisedtomyselfthatbeforedoinganything,Iwouldthinktwiceaboutitwhetherit’sworthdoing.(93words)參考范文

Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.Seeinghispaleface,Istiffened,totallynotknowingwhattodo.Luckily,someonecalled911andCristianwaspulledintotheambulance,andIsawhisunconsciousfacedroopingoverthewhitesheet.IhadneverseenasituationlikethisbeforeandIwasguilty,notonlyforbuyingthebeerbutalsofortherisksIputhimat.LaterIwastoldCristian’sconditionwasserious,butfortunatelyhedidn’tsufferanypermanentdamage.Thewholenightfoundmetossingandturning,worryingaboutthemessIhad

caused.（93words）

Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice.HeaskedifIboughtthealcohol.Iknewthattherewasnopointindenyingthetruth.SoIadmittedeverythingthathappened.Likeacaughtcriminal,Iwasovercomewithshame.MypunishmentwasmuchlessthanwhatIdeserved:Iwasmerelyexpelledfromtheprogram.Backhome,Ishreddedthefakedriverslicenseandthrewitaway.Throughthisexperience,Ileanedanimportantlesson:neverdosomethingyoubelieveiswrongjustbecausesomeoneelseistellingyoutoanddon’tsacrificeanyone’swell-beingtogaintheapprovalof

others.（95words）讀后續(xù)寫第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TheannualHalloweenarrived,duringwhichkidsdressedintraditionalclotheswenttoneighbor'shousestoaskforcandy.Allisonlivedinasmalltown.Thatdayafterdinner,Allisonputonherdressherfatherhadjustboughtforher.Thedresswascheapandsecond-handbecauseherfamilywaspoor.ButAllisonstillthankedherdadandsaid,"Everyonewilllovemydress!"Then,sheleftforneighbors’housestoaskforcandy.Ontheway,shecameacrossAnnaandherfriendsandwantedtojointhem."No!Lookatyourdress!It'sugly!"Annasaid.Herfriendsalsolaughed."Lookatourdresses,especiallymine!It'snewandbeautiful,"Annaadded.Herfriendsnodded,andinsomewaytheywereright.Anna'sdresswasshinyandlookedexpensive.Shealwayshadthebestclothesbecauseherparentswererich.Allisonwasshockedandsad.Thekidsnotonlydislikedherdressbutmadefunofit."Youcan'tcomewithus!"Annastressed.“Wewouldneverhangoutwithyou!"Theotherkidsagreedandlaughed.TheyalllefttostartcollectingcandyforthenightwhileAllisonwasleftalone,embarrassedinthemiddleofthestreet.Anyway,sheknewalltheneighbors.Sheoftenhelpedaroundcarryingtheirgroceriesandhelpingthemwiththeirgardens.Peoplearoundthereknewher.Shedidn'tneedtohangoutwithAnnaorherfriends."I'llgojustalone,"thelittlegirlsaidtoherselfandstartedwalking.SheaswellasAnnaandherfriendswalkedinthesamedirection:towardstheirfirstneighborMrsVaughan'shouse.ButAllisonwalkedbehindandkeptherdistancefromthem.AndshestoppedwhenAnnaandherfriendswerenearMrsVaughan'shouse.Justthen,MrsVaughanlookedoutofherwindow.ShenoticedthatAllisonwasbeingexcludedbyAnnaandherfriends.SheknewitwasprobablybecauseofAllison'spoordress.SheimmediatelyfeltpityforAllison,whooftenhelpedherandotherneighbors.ShedecidedtogiveAllisonmuchmorecandyasarewardandteachAnnaandherfriendsalesson.參考答案:WhenAnnaandherfriendsknockedonherdoor,MrsVaughanopenedit.Thegirlsgreetedher,showedofftheirbeautifulclothesandaskedforcandy.MrsVaughan,whoheldabagofsweets,askedthemtowaitforamoment.Then,shewavedtoAllison,callingout,“Dear,comehere!”WhenAllisoncame,MrsVaughansaid,“Oh,howbeautifulyouaretoday!”Then,shegaveAllisonmostofhercandyalthoughthegirldeclined.WhenAllisonwalkedaway,MrsVaughandividedtherestofthecandyamongAnnaandherfriends,whowerealittleangryandconfused.(87)Annalookedupandsaid,“Ourclothesaremorebeautiful!ButyougaveAllisonmorecandy!Why?”MrsVaughanlookeddowncalmlyandexplainedthatAllisonwasalwaysfriendlytoneighbors.“Shehasgreatinnerbeauty.Innerbeautyismoreimportant.Whynotbefriendswithher?”MrsVaughanadded.Hearingthat,Annaandherfriends’facesturnedredandtheyrealizedtheyhaddonesomethingwrong.TheysaidgoodbyetoMrsVaughan,caughtupwithAllison,andsincerelyinvitedAllisontojointhem.Allisonnoddedgladlyandhadnewfriends,whowouldnolongerjudgeherbyherclothes.(85)下水作文:WhenAnnaandherfriendsknockedonherdoor,MrsVaughanopenedit.“Trickortreat?!”amixtureofjoyouscriesandmischievousyellspoundedhereardrums.Annaandherfriendsstoppedherinthedoorway,eyesgluedtothecandybaginherhand.Asdesigned,MrsVaughangavet