01“三首歌”學(xué)會環(huán)境描寫-備考2023年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫四大招式

讀后續(xù)寫大招一：“三首歌”學(xué)會環(huán)境描寫環(huán)境描寫，是續(xù)寫重要描寫手段之一，可以起到融情與景的效果，襯托人物的內(nèi)心世界。適當(dāng)?shù)沫h(huán)境描寫可以使文章讀起來有真實(shí)感。比較下面兩種表達(dá)：Igotoschoolhappily.加上環(huán)境描寫：Themorningsunshineshininggently,fragrantflowerssmilingfromeartoear,greentreesswayingcheerfully,ItogetherwithTomandJerrysetoutearlyridingmybike,talkingandsingingalltheway.環(huán)境描寫示例：1.Icanwellrememberthattherewasatimewhenadeepbluesky,thesongofthebirds,moonlightandflowerscouldneverhavekeptmespellbound.2.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringheavily,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtress，astrongfeelingofhorrorcreepingonme.環(huán)境描寫大招一劉德華演唱《冰雨》：冷冷的冰雨在我臉上胡亂地拍形容詞意象介短副詞動詞Theicyrainiswhippingmyfacemercilessly.大招一：形容詞+意象+動詞+副詞/方位介短招式體驗(yàn)：1）Thewindblew.改寫：Thegentlewarmwindblewsoftlyontheface.2）Thetreeswaved.改寫：Thetallgreentreeswavedquietlyontheroadsides.3）Thesunshone.改寫：Themorningsunshoneonthegroundwarmlyandgently.Thewarmmorningsunlightfellonthegroundmildly.具體續(xù)寫過程中，可將三個(gè)（多個(gè)）意象結(jié)合起來，形成排比句，綜合表達(dá)，構(gòu)建更動感的畫面。如：Thatnightwindhowledruthlessly.夜風(fēng)無情地呼嘯著。Someunknowncreaturesmurmuredinthedark.一些不知名的生物在黑暗中喃喃自語。Themoonlightshoneweaklyontheground.月光微弱地照在地上。合并：Thenightwindhowledruthlessly,namelesscreaturesmurmuredinthedarkandthemoonlightshoneweaklyontheground.排比句：意象1+動詞1，意象2+動詞2，and意象3+動詞3.場景綜合表達(dá)示例：1.stream溪流:Theafternoonsunlightfellonthegrass,thewindblewlightly,andthewaterflewsilentlydownthestream.2.flame火災(zāi):Hotairenvelopedtheroom,thelightsglowedinthesmoke,andflamesspreadwildlyinalldirections.3.beach海邊:Themildsunlightfellonthesand,theairblewsoftlyfromthesea,andthecrowdsplayedhappilyonthebeach.4.lake湖邊:Thethincloudsflewslowlyinthesky,thetallgreentreeswavedwildlyinthewind,andthesunlightshoneonthelake.5.classroom:Lightsshonebrightlyonthefloor,tidydesksandchairslinedupneatly,andthestudentslistenedtotheteacherattentively.6.playground:Blazingsunlightburnedlikeanoven,hotairsurroundedtheplayground,thecrowdswerecheeredwildlytherunners.真題實(shí)踐：根據(jù)中文，完成下列句子1.Thesunshonewarmlyontherunway,thetreesglowedinthewarmsunlight,allofwhichwereencouragingDavidtocompletetherun.陽光熱烈地灑在跑道上，樹木閃爍著微光，這一切都在鼓勵著David堅(jiān)持完成跑步。2.Theleaveswereshimmering,theairwasfilledwithdelight,andeverythingaroundwascelebratingDavid’sbravery.樹葉閃著微光，空氣彌漫著快樂的氣息，周圍一切都在慶祝David的勇敢。3.ThewarmsunshoneonDavid’sface,thetreesswayedwiththewind,andthewholeforestapplaudedDavid’scourage.暖陽灑在大衛(wèi)的臉上，樹木們隨風(fēng)搖曳，整座森林都為大衛(wèi)的勇氣而喝彩。4.Bathedinthewarmsunshine,thetreeswavedinthebreeze,sharingDavid’sdelightoffinishingthegame.沐浴再溫暖的陽光下，樹木在微風(fēng)中搖曳，分享著David完成比賽的喜悅。環(huán)境描寫大招二伍佰《與你到永久》：風(fēng)兒輕輕的吹，雨也綿綿下個(gè)不停Thewindblowsgently,andtherainkeepsfalling.---Agentlewindbreezing,afinedrizzlewasfallingsteadilylikemymissingforyou.大招二：寫景+比喻+特點(diǎn):句式：寫景句(本體)，+like+喻體+that從句/非謂語動詞招式體驗(yàn)：1.Thestarsareinthesky.---Thebrightstarsscatteredinthesky,likegemstwinklingbrilliantly.天上的星星像寶石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。2.Thetreeiswaving.---Thetreeswavedwildlyintheair,likedrunkenmantremblingfromsidetoside.樹像醉漢一樣搖搖晃晃。3.Thestarssparkled.---Thestarssparkledvividly,likeacuriouschildglazingatus.---Thestarssparkledvividly,likeacuriouschild,thatglazedatus.---Thestarssparkledvividly,likenaughtychildrenlookingatuswithcuriosity.頑皮的孩子好奇地看著我們。4.Afirestill

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abirdtryingtofinditswayoutoftheroom.一團(tuán)火還在壁爐爐膛里舞動著，就像一只掙脫束縛的鳥。5.Thelastleafofautumnflutteredtotheground,likeadropofautumn’stear,meltingsilentlyinhisoverwhelmingsorrow.秋天的最后一片葉子像一滴秋天的眼淚一樣飄落在地上，在巨大的悲傷中默默融化。大招二表達(dá)示例：1.wind：Theicywindstartedhowling,likeasharpknifescratchingmyface.2.sun:Themorningsunlightfloodedinthroughthecurtain,likepiecesofgolddancingonthefloor.3.tree:Talltreeslineduponbothsidesofthestreet,likesoldiersthrowinglongshadowsontheground.4.cloud:Thewhitecloudshanglowinthesky,likepiecesofcottonsailingwiththewind.5.rain:Thedreadfulrainwaspouringdown,likemonstersbeatingwildlyagainstthewindows.6.flower:Theflowersdottedthegarden,likespiritsdancinggracefullyintheair.環(huán)境描寫大招三《漂洋過海來看你》：在漫天風(fēng)沙里望著你遠(yuǎn)去，我竟悲傷的不能自已Iwastoosadtocontrolmyselfasseeingyougoingawayinthesandystorm.---Thesandalloverthesky,yourfamiliarfigurefadingaway,afloodofgriefwelledupinmyheart,sweepingovermybody.方法三：情景交融：寫景+感受意象+動詞ing，+感受：句式一：（無靈主語）arippleof+情感名詞ranthroughsb’sheart;afloodof+情感名詞welledupinsb.句式二：（人稱主語）sb.wasbrimmedoverwith+情感名詞；sb.wasimmersedin+情感名詞.大招體驗(yàn)：Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature.Asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.風(fēng)可怕地嚎叫，雨從天傾瀉而來，拍打著成排的樹枝。我被自然發(fā)怒的力量抓住了。一種恐懼感悄悄爬到我身上。表達(dá)示例：1.wind：Theicywindhowling,arippleoftensionranthroughhisheart.2.sun：Themorningsunlightfloodinginthroughthecurtain,arippleofsatisfactionranthroughthetwins’heart.3.moon：Thesilverymoonglowinginthesky,arippleofgriefranthroughJane’sheart.4.snow：Featherilysnowflakefallingfromthesky,Iwasimmersedindelight.5.rain：Heavyrainbeatingdownonthestreet,Iwasimmersedinremorse.6.crowd：Crowdsofpeoplegatheringintotheclassroom,Iwasimmersedinawkwardness.綜合運(yùn)用：（先嘗試概括性描述，在概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系及語意的合理。）示例：Itgotdark.---Itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.---Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.大招綜合運(yùn)用：風(fēng)：這個(gè)冬季，天氣異常寒冷。此刻沒有風(fēng)。（概述）Thiswinter,theweatherwasunusuallycold.Therewasnowindatthemoment.（細(xì)節(jié)）Thiswinter,theweatherwasunusuallycold.Therewasnowindatthemoment.Theworldseemedtobefrozenandtheriverhavestoppeditsfootsteps.這個(gè)冬季，天氣異常寒冷。此刻沒有風(fēng)，世界好像停止有這一刻，河流也停下了腳步。2)外面刮起了大風(fēng)，地上的灰塵亂飛。（概述）Outside,therewasastrongwind,thedustonthegroundflyingindisorder。（細(xì)節(jié)）Outside,therewasastrongwind,blowingthebranchesinalldirections.Thedustonthegroundwasflyingindisorder,whichmadepeopleunabletoopentheireyes.外面刮起了大風(fēng)，吹的樹枝亂擺，地上的灰塵亂飛，讓人睜不開眼睛。雨：3)昨天下了傾盆大雨。（概述）Itwasrainingcatsanddogs.（細(xì)節(jié)）Itwasrainingcatsanddogsyesterdaywhenschoolwasover.IwasallwetwhenIgothome.昨天放學(xué)的時(shí)候在下著傾盆大雨。我到家時(shí)全身都濕了。4）湯姆在暴雨中淋濕了。（概述）Tomwascaughtinaheavydownpour.（細(xì)節(jié)）Unfortunately,Tomwascaughtintheheavyrain,wetthroughfromheadtotoe,likeadrownedrat.真不幸，湯姆在暴雨中被淋成了落湯雞。5)剛才還是白云朵朵，一霎時(shí)狂風(fēng)暴雨起來了。（概述）Justnowtherewerestillwhiteclouds,butinaflash,itpoureddown.（細(xì)節(jié)）Theweatherinsummerisunpredictable.Justnowtherewerestillwhiteclouds,butinaflash,lightningandthunderbrokeout,andtherecameadownpour.夏天的天氣真是變幻莫測。剛才還是白云朵朵，一霎時(shí)就電閃雷鳴，狂風(fēng)暴雨起來了。熱：hot（熱）；melt（融化）；sweatlikeapig（汗流浹背）；rainfire（天氣火熱）1）天氣悶熱得要命。（概述）Theweatherwassohot.（細(xì)節(jié)）Theweatherwassohotthattherewasnowind,andthethickairseemedtobefrozen.天氣悶熱得要命，一絲風(fēng)也沒有，稠乎乎的空氣好像凝住了。2)天氣熱得嚇人，我汗流浹背。（概述）TheweatherwasterribleandIwassweatinglikeapig.（細(xì)節(jié)）Thoughnotdoinganything,Iwassweatinglikeapig.

Itwasnotjusthot.ItwasAfricanhot,whichwastooterribletotolerate.雖然我什么都沒做，但還是汗流浹背。不止是熱，是像非洲一樣熱！天熱得嚇人。冷：cold,bone-chilling1）天很冷。（概述）It'sfreezingcold.（細(xì)節(jié)）Ican'tstopshiveringfromthecoldtremblingallover.我冷得不停打哆嗦。2）這寒風(fēng)真是刺骨.（概述）Thewindwasbone-chilling.（細(xì)節(jié)）Thewindwassobone-chillingthatitcutrightthroughme.這寒風(fēng)如此刺骨，直接穿過我的身體。應(yīng)試素材積累：1.夏夜：寧靜的夜空中掛著一輪明月和閃爍的星星,與慢節(jié)奏的村莊形成一幅和諧的美景。Thereisharmonybetweenthemoonandstarsinthequietskyandtheslowpaceofthevillage.2.春天戶外：小鳥像音樂家一樣，在樹上唱著優(yōu)美的歌，蝴蝶像多采多姿的舞蹈家一樣，拍動著翅膀，飛來飛去。Thebirds,likemusician,sangtheirmelodioussongsinthetrees,andbutterflies,likecolorfuldancers,wereflutteringhereandthere.3.露水：當(dāng)陽光照耀在露珠上時(shí)露珠像珠寶一樣閃閃發(fā)光。Thedropsofdewsparklelikejewelswhenthesunshinesonthem.路邊長滿了嫩綠的草，草上沾滿了小小的露珠，他們靜靜等待著大地母親的蘇醒。Thegrassissoftandgreenonthesideoftheroad,withlittledewdropsoneachpieceofgrass,theyquietlywelcomemotherearthtowakeup.4.日出：第二天，日出的光線很早就將他喚醒。夜晚的星星都被陽光藏在粉藍(lán)色的天空下。Thenextday,thesunlightwokehimveryearly,hidingthestarsunderapinkblueandbluesky.旭日從霧靄中冉冉升起,東升紅彤彤,新鮮而充滿生機(jī).Thesuncomingupfromitsflatbedoffog,redandnewandfullofpromises.5.月光：一個(gè)美麗而寧靜的夜晚,月亮像一個(gè)圓盤掛在黑暗的夜空中,淡淡的月光普照萬物.Itisabeautifulandquietnight.Themoonislikeadischangingonthedarksky,whichcastsits