讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)歷險(xiǎn)故事類搭載摩托車遇險(xiǎn)成功脫險(xiǎn)課件高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)品德故事——搭載摩托車遇險(xiǎn)，成功脫險(xiǎn)1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Itwasanunusuallyhotday.Exhaustedafterfootballpractice,IheadedforthebusstoptowaitforBus112whichwouldtakemehome.IwasbeginningtodriftofftosleepwhenIsawthebusarriving.ThesunwasinmyeyesandthatwasprobablythereasonwhyIgotontoBus113Iwasgladtogetaseat.Withinminutes,Iwasstingagainstthewindow,fastasleep.WhenIopenedmyeyes,itwasdarkoutside.Iwastheonlypassengerleftonthebus.Icouldnotrecognizethepartoftownwewerepassingthrough.Ipressedthebellandthebusstopped.Iplannedtohopacrosstheroadandcatchabusgoingtheoppositedirection.However,Ifoundmyselfonaquietstreetwitharowofshopsthatwereallclosed.Ikickedmyselffornotaskingthedriverfordirections.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文AsIwaswonderingwhattodo,amotorcyclecamedowntheroad.Theriderlookedatmeashepassedandthenstoppedashortdistanceaway.IwenttohimandaskedhimhowtogetbacktotheCitySquare.Hesmiledandnodded.Hepattedthebackseatandsaidthathewouldsendmehome.Withoutasecondthought,Iclimbedupbehindtherider.HeturnedthemotorcyclearoundandheadedinthedirectionIwanted.Wetravelledforabout15minutesandthesurroundingsstilllookedunfamiliartome.TheridermadeafewturnsandIknewIwashopelesslylost.Iaskedhimwhereweweregoing,Hedidnotanswerbutincreasedhisspeed.Alarmbellsstartedtoringinmyhead.Itappedtheman,shoulderandtoldhimtostop.Heleanedforwardandwentathighspeednow.Thenhesloweddowntoturnintoadarkandnarrowroadthatledintoanoilpalmplantation.Ihadhadenough.5段首句Para1：Ijumpedoffthevehicleandfellontotheground.Para2：Igotoffthetaxiandrushedintomyhouse.6Part2題目分析7點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)8續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了足球訓(xùn)練結(jié)束后，我筋疲力盡，我走向公共汽車站，錯(cuò)上了反方向的車。下車后，外面一片漆黑，正當(dāng)我不知所措時(shí)，一輛摩托車從路上開(kāi)了過(guò)來(lái)，騎手主動(dòng)要求搭載我。一路上，他走的路很陌生，我要求他停下來(lái)，他卻全速前進(jìn)。9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1:Ijumpedoffthevehicleandfellontotheground.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我從車上跳下來(lái)，摔在了地上”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)我是如何跳下摩托車，逃離這個(gè)陌生人的。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2Igotoffthetaxiandrushedintomyhouse.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我下了出租車，沖進(jìn)屋去”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)我把這件事情告訴父母，父母告訴我今后遇到類似的事情，該怎么辦。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析續(xù)寫(xiě)線索筋疲力盡——上錯(cuò)車——搭載摩托車——遇險(xiǎn)——逃跑——訴說(shuō)——感悟12續(xù)寫(xiě)素材可用詞匯：行為類轉(zhuǎn)身：turnaround/turnback沖進(jìn)：rushinto/dashinto情緒類絕望地：desperately/hopelessly大哭：breakintotears/burstoutcrying13續(xù)寫(xiě)素材可用句型：[高分句型1]WhenIdaredtostop,IfoundthatIwasonamainroad.(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]ItwasafrighteningexperiencewhichIhopedwouldneverhappentomeagain.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句)14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Ijumpedofvehicleandfellontotheground.Themanturnedaroundandrodetowardsme.Iswungmyschoolbagathimandhelosthisbalanceandfelloffhismotorcycle.Withoutlookingback,Ijustranandran.WhenIdaredtostop,IfoundthatIwasonamainroad.Carswerepassingby,Iwasrelievedtoseeataxiandwaveddesperately,prayingthatitwouldstop.Itdid.Igotinandgavethedrivermyhouseaddress,shakinguncontrollably.16范文呈現(xiàn)Igotoffthetaxiandrushedintomyhouse.Ithrewmyselfintomymum'sarmsandbrokeintotears.Whenmyfamilylearnedwhathadhappened,theywerehorrified.MyparentstoldmethatIshouldhavejustlookedforapublicphoneandcalledhomewhenIwaslost.IknewIhadbeenfoolishtobelieveastranger.ItwasafrighteningexperiencewhichIhopedwouldneverhappentomeagain.It'sbettertobesafethansorry.17范文譯文我跳下車摔倒在地。那個(gè)人轉(zhuǎn)身朝我騎過(guò)來(lái)。我把書(shū)包甩向他，他失去了平衡，從摩托車上摔了下來(lái)。我頭也不回，只是跑啊跑。當(dāng)我敢停下來(lái)的時(shí)候，我發(fā)現(xiàn)我在一條大馬路上。汽車經(jīng)過(guò)，看到一輛出租車，我松了一口氣，拼命揮手，祈禱它能停下來(lái)。的確如此。18范文譯文我上了車，把我的家庭地址告訴了司機(jī)，無(wú)法控制地顫抖著。我下了出租車，沖進(jìn)了自己的房子。我撲到媽媽?xiě)牙锟蘖恕．?dāng)我的家人得知發(fā)生的