外研版高中英語(yǔ)必修二 （On the move）PartⅤ 教學(xué)課件

PartⅤ

Writing——體育故事Unit3

Onthemove

故事重點(diǎn)在寫(xiě)事，而不在寫(xiě)人。但是，故事應(yīng)以人為主題，講述發(fā)生在人物身上的感人故事。故事應(yīng)具有激勵(lì)性，充滿正能量，給人以啟發(fā)，催人奮進(jìn)，積極向上。語(yǔ)言具有趣味性，耐人尋味，同時(shí)，精煉、言簡(jiǎn)意賅?！驹龇直磉_(dá)】1.oneofthebestathletesinourcountry2.Heisgoodat...3.Heiseventhemostcapable...intheworld.4.keepthebestrecordof...untilnow.5.Ifindmyselffullofpassioninmyheart.6.Heisthebestexampleofmakingeveryefforttodevelophissportcareerandbreaksomanyrecords.7.Thisspiritisworthytobelearnedbyallofus.8.Withthisambition，hecoulddefeatanydifficulties.9.Facingdifficulties，heneverlosesheart.10.makemoreprogress...請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇自己所經(jīng)歷的體育故事。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.我是山東人。2.學(xué)校游泳隊(duì)隊(duì)員。3.從小就喜歡游泳，在學(xué)校里認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，放學(xué)后認(rèn)真訓(xùn)練；經(jīng)過(guò)努力取得了一系列的成績(jī)。4.我認(rèn)為……注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第一步：布局謀篇很關(guān)鍵?審題1.確定體裁：

本文為記敘文；2.確定中心人稱：本文主要為_(kāi)___________；3.確定主題時(shí)態(tài)：______________________________。?構(gòu)思第一部分：簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己。第二部分：________________。第三部分：對(duì)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)和對(duì)未來(lái)的期許。

第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或過(guò)去時(shí)自己的故事第二步：核心詞匯想周全

1.__________________是……的一員2.__________________贏得一枚金牌3.__________________成為冠軍4.__________________獲得巨大成就5.__________________失去信心6.__________________建議某人做某事

amemberof...winagoldmedalbecomeachampiongetgreatachievementsloseheartadvisesbtodosth第三步：由詞擴(kuò)句雛形現(xiàn)1.Iam______________________________________.我是學(xué)校游泳隊(duì)的隊(duì)員。2.I___________________________whenIwasasmallboy.我小的時(shí)候喜歡游泳。3.Ihavegot_________________________________.我已經(jīng)取得了巨大成就。4.Inever______________________________________________.我從來(lái)不放棄訓(xùn)練。5.I___________________________________________________.我遇到困難。6.Inever______________________________________________.我從來(lái)不灰心喪氣。

amemberofschoolswimmingteamlovedswimminggreatachievementsgiveuptrainingmeetdifficultiesloseheart第四步：句型升級(jí)造亮點(diǎn)

1.將句2改成一個(gè)含有since狀語(yǔ)從句的句子。________________________________________________________________________2.將句3和句4合并成含有though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的句子。________________________________________________________________________3.將句5和句6合并成主從復(fù)合句。________________________________________________________________________IhavebeenlovingswimmingsinceIwasasmallboy.ThoughIhavegotgreatachievements，Inevergiveuptraining.WheneverImeetdifficulties，Ineverloseheart.第五步：過(guò)渡銜接連成篇

IamfromShandong，amemberoftheschoolswimmingteam.Iam198cminheight.IhavebeenlovingswimmingsinceIwasasmallboy.At7Ibecameamemberoftheschoolswimmingteam.Fiveyearslater，IwonagoldmedalattheCountySwimmingChampionshipandbecameachampionattheNationalSwimmingChampionshipslater.ThoughIhavegotgreatachievements，Inevergiveuptraining.OnedayIinjuredmyarmintraining，someoneadvisedmetoseeadoctor，butIrefused.WheneverImeetdifficulties，Ineverloseheart.Swimmingnotonlybuildsmybodybutalsoshapesmydeterminedcharacter.Idreamofbecominganationalswimmerandtakingpartintheinternationalswimmingeventsonbehalfofourcountry.Unit3

OnthemovePeriodFive

Writing—Writingasportsstory

PART1技法點(diǎn)撥PART

2寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練PeriodFive

Writing—WritingasportsstoryPART1技法點(diǎn)撥文體分析把握寫(xiě)作動(dòng)脈本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)一篇自己喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)故事，屬于事物介紹類說(shuō)明文。該類說(shuō)明文的主體時(shí)態(tài)通常采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，但具體情況具體分析，根據(jù)實(shí)際情況采用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)。在介紹自己喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)，宜采用“總—分—總”的結(jié)構(gòu)，介紹某項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)的發(fā)展史和某個(gè)體育明星時(shí)可以采用時(shí)間順序，介紹奧運(yùn)場(chǎng)館和舉辦城市時(shí)可采用空間順序。在行文時(shí)，應(yīng)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞匯，使各要點(diǎn)之間成為一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體。◆寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)1.表示喜歡：Ilike...best.Ofallthe...Ilike...best.Myfavourite...is...2.表示喜歡的理由：Ilikeitbecause...Thereisnodoubtthat...ThereasonwhyIlike...isthat...◆常用表達(dá)3.表示某項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)的優(yōu)勢(shì)：Itplaysanimportantrole/partin...Itdoesusalotofgood.Itisofgreatbenefittome.4.介紹某項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)的起源、發(fā)展：...originatedas......developedintoasportfrom...5.表示結(jié)論：Inall...Inaword...Itcanmakeushealthyandwealthy.PART2寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練弄清文絡(luò)寫(xiě)作妙筆生花請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文介紹你最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)。最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)籃球開(kāi)始產(chǎn)生興趣九歲，那時(shí)父親教我打籃球現(xiàn)在練習(xí)情況校籃球隊(duì)成員；放學(xué)后或周末打大約一小時(shí)喜歡的原因快樂(lè)；健康；交友最喜歡的籃球明星姚明審題寫(xiě)作要求是介紹自己最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：1.確定文體：這是一篇介紹類文章。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意介紹類文章的寫(xiě)作特點(diǎn)。2.主體時(shí)態(tài)：文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。3.主體人稱：由于是介紹自己喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)，所以人稱應(yīng)該以第一人稱為主?！魧忣}謀篇謀篇本文應(yīng)分為三部分。第一部分：簡(jiǎn)介我最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)。第二部分：對(duì)如何開(kāi)始這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)和練習(xí)情況進(jìn)行描述。第三部分：喜歡的原因，自己的偶像。1.對(duì)……感興趣

_____________________2.在……幾歲時(shí)

_____________3.與……比賽

______________________4.不但……而且…… __________________核心詞匯◆遣詞造句be/becomeinterestedinattheageof...havecompetitionswith...notonly...butalso...連詞成句1.我喜歡很多運(yùn)動(dòng)，其中籃球是我的最愛(ài)。(and連接的并列句)Ilikemanykindsofsports

.2.我在九歲時(shí)第一次對(duì)籃球感興趣，那時(shí)爸爸教我怎樣打籃球。(and連接的并列句)Ifirstbecameinterestedinbasketballattheageofnine______________________

.3.籃球可以給我?guī)?lái)很多快樂(lè)、健康和朋友，所以我非常喜歡它。(so連接的并列句)Basketballcanbringmelotsofhappiness，healthandfriends，_____________

.andbasketballismyfavoriteandthenmyfathertaughtmehowtoplayitsoIlikeitsomuch1.請(qǐng)用“介詞＋關(guān)系代詞”引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句改寫(xiě)句1。________________________________________________________2.請(qǐng)用定語(yǔ)從句改寫(xiě)句2。___________________________________________________________________________________________3.請(qǐng)用why引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句改寫(xiě)句3。________________________________________________________________________________________________句式升級(jí)Ilikemanykindsofsports，ofwhichbasketballismyfavorite.Ifirstbecameinterestedinbasketballattheageofnine，whenmyfathertaughtmehowtoplayit.ThereasonwhyIlikebasketballsomuchisthatitcanbringmelotsofhappiness