讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)寫(xiě)作講義 高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)試題原題第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)（滿(mǎn)分25分）閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě),使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。ThoughIeatanapplealmosteveryday,onemonthagomydoctorcametomyhousestandinginfrontofme,notbeingkeptaway,duetomysuddenillness.“WellJian,IthinkI

needtohaveastrongtalkwithyou.Youareoverweight.HaveyoueverheardaboutBodyMassIndex(指數(shù)),BMI?Well,I’veweighedyouandmeasuredyourheightandyouhaveaBMIof28.

Thatisobese(肥胖的),”saidthedoctor.IknewIwasalittlebitoverweightbutIdidn’tthinkitwasthatbad.HeaddedthatmynamemeanshealthyinChineseandhethoughtitistimethatI

shouldbecomehealthy.Thereisadirectlinkbetweenmyhealthandsport.Soheaskedme,“Howmuchsportdoyoudoeveryweek?”ItoldhimthatIgoforawalkeveryweekend.Thenhereplied,“Hmm,that’snotalot.Sportandhealthgotogether.Theyaffectyourmental,physicalandemotionalhealth.Forexample,sportcanimproveyourmentalhealth,allowingyourbraintothinkbetterandfocus.Itwillhelpyoutolearnmoreeasily.Isthatclear,Jian?”“Ithinkso.Iknowitwouldbegoodtobeabletoconcentratebetteratschool.”Isaid.Thedoctorexplainedtomethatfromaphysicalpointofview,sportmakesustiredsohelpsustosleepbetter.Atthesametime,sportburnsoffthecalories

thatwehaveconsumed.Itbuildsmuscleandimprovesourcirculation

(血液循環(huán)).Sporthelpstocontrolourcholesterolcount(膽固醇指標(biāo))andthisisimportanttostopushavingaheartattack.Additionally,italsokeepsourbloodpressurenormalandstrengthensourbones.注意：1.

所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.

請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thedoctor’swordsleftmelostinthought.

“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynot:trysometeamsports?”thedoctorsuggested.

???試題分析1.主要人物?

I：overweight?

thedoctor：givesgoodadviceinjoininginsports2.前文情節(jié)雖然平時(shí)都注意健康飲食，但一個(gè)月前因?yàn)橥蝗簧?，醫(yī)生來(lái)到我跟前說(shuō)我超重要減肥了，然后跟我說(shuō)了好多體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處。于是，我......3.續(xù)寫(xiě)安排第一段：Thedoctor’swordsleftmelostinthought.①（與前一句銜接）我是怎么想的②我接下去有什么行動(dòng)③（與下文開(kāi)頭句銜接）鍛煉很枯燥，打算放棄。于是，問(wèn)醫(yī)生找對(duì)策第二段：“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynot:trysometeamsports?”thedoctorsuggested.①（與前一句銜接）于是，聽(tīng)從醫(yī)生建議去參加團(tuán)隊(duì)性運(yùn)動(dòng)②效果不錯(cuò)③（主題升華）反思鍛煉之路下水作文Thedoctor’swordsleftmelostinthought.Indeed,lackofexerciseiswhatIfeltashamedof.Sometimes,seeingothersdoingexercisehappily,Ihadsomethoughtsofdoingthesameasthem.ButtheresultwasthatIalwayshadtheexcusesofputtingofftheso-calledplanofexercise.Nowthedoctor’swordsdraggedmeintothedecisionthatIhadtoshowmygreatconcernformyhealth.Ipickedupjoggingastheeasiestwaytokeepmyselffit.However,aweeklater,Ihadtoturntomydoctor,fornofunofexercisingwasfound.(94words)“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynot:trysometeamsports?”thedoctorsuggested.Asanintrovert,Ishowednointerestinjoiningothersfortheworkout.Butwiththedoctor’sencouragement,Ifinallydecidedtohaveatryforthesakeofmyhealth.Contactingwithalocalrunningclub,Iwasshockedbytheirenthusiasm,acceptingmewithoutanythoughts.Peopleintheclubweresoeasy-goingthatIhadnodifficultyinsteppingoutofmycomfortzone.Everydaywegatheredandranalongthebeautifullake,enjoyingandsharingthemarveloustime.Thankstomydoctor,notonlydidIimprovemyhealthbutIharvestedpreciousfriendship.(99words)參考范文Thedoctor’swordsleftmelostinthought.IrealizedthatIneededtotakemyhealthmoreseriouslyandmakesomechangestomylifestyle.IstartedtolookintodifferentsportsandexercisesthatIcoulddotoimprovemyhealth.Ialsobegantopaymoreattentiontomydiet,cuttingoutunhealthyfoodsandreplacingthemwithhealthieralternatives.Iknewthatitwouldn’tbeeasy,butIwasdeterminedtomakeachange.(70words)“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynottrysometeamsports?”thedoctorsuggested.Ithoughtaboutitforamomentandrealizedthathewasright.Ihadalwaysbeenhesitanttojoinasportsteam,butIdecidedtogiveitatry.IjoinedalocalsoccerteamandwassurprisedathowmuchIenjoyedit.NotonlywasIgettingtheexercisethatIneeded,butIwasalsomakingnewfriendsandhavingfunintheprocess.Istartedtolookforwardtoourweeklypracticesandgames,andIcouldfeelmyselfgettingstrongerandhealthierwitheachpassingweek.Thankstomydoctor'sadvice,Ihadfoundanewwaytoimprovemyhealthandmylife.(111words)試題原題第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)（滿(mǎn)分25分）閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě),使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。thought.Onthewaybacktoschool,herememberedtheexactlocationofthecave.Thenextday,Williamaskedhisfourfriendstothecavetogether.Theytoldtheirparentstheywouldgotothelibraryandreturnhomeintheevening.Noneoftheteenagerstoldtheirparentsabouttheirplantovisitthecave.Whentheteenagersreachedthecave,theylefttheirschoolbagsoutsidetoreducetheburden.Onebyone,theyenteredthecave.Justwhentheytookafewstepsinside,somerocksfromthecavewallfellandblockedtheentrance.“Howarewegoingtogetoutnow?”oneoftheteenagersSarahshouted.Williamhadanideaandsaid,“Maybewecantrydiggingthroughthefallenrockswithourhandstoreachtheentrance.”Butrealizinggettingoutofthecaveonlybytheirhandswasimpossible,theyhadgreatfear.Thesunwasabouttogodown.Theteenagersstartedcallingforhelp,butnobodycouldhearthem.Theteenagerswerelosinghope.Victorhappenedtopassbytheentrancetothecave,andfiveschoolbagscaughthisattention.Healsoheardsomesoundscomingfrominsidethecave.“Who’sinthere?”Victorshouted.“I’mWilliam!Wecamehereyesterdaywithourteacher!”Williamrepliedinstantly.“Helpus,please!Wearestuck!Sarahcan’tbreatheherebecauseoffear.”“Okay,calmdown,children!”Victorsaid.“I’llhelpyougetout!”P(pán)aragraph1:Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.Paragraph2:Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.參考范文

Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.

Afteralittlewhile,Victorgotbacktotheentrancewithashovelandaflashlight."Hey!I'mback!"heshouted,assuringthekidsthathewouldrescuethem.Then,hebegandiggingthroughtherocksattheentrance.Itwasn'teasyforonemantodigthroughtherocks,buthewastryinghisbest.Meanwhile,Williamandhisfriendstriedtostaycalmand