2023學(xué)年完整公開(kāi)課版中考寫(xiě)作

中考專題WritingiangjunJinghaiQiHui學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)：1學(xué)會(huì)作文審題，根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。（重點(diǎn)）2能夠根據(jù)要求列出關(guān)鍵詞，學(xué)會(huì)連詞成句,組句成篇。（難點(diǎn)，考點(diǎn)）3培養(yǎng)孩子找到更有生命意義的事。（情感目標(biāo)）Dailytranslation隨著我們的長(zhǎng)大，我們喜歡各種各樣的課后活動(dòng)。Aswegrow,welieallindsofafter-schoolactivities2我們應(yīng)該參加更多有意義的活動(dòng)。Weshoudtaeoremeaningfulactivities3在過(guò)去，我常常踢足球。我認(rèn)為那非常有趣。Inthepast,IusedtoplaysoccerIthoughtitwasinteresting4現(xiàn)在，我想成為一名志愿者去幫助需要幫助的人。Now,IwanttobeavolunteertohelpthepeopleinneedWarm-upWhatindsofafter-schoolactivitiesdoyouoftendoWhyesIt’shealthyIt’srelaingIt’sinterestingIt’secitingesIt’secitingWatch,watch,watchTVIt’sinterestingListen,listen,listentomusicIt’srelaingRun,run,runafterschoolIt’shealthyHeleaningful…Let’schant

實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：隨著年齡的增長(zhǎng)，我們的課外活動(dòng)領(lǐng)域會(huì)擴(kuò)大，關(guān)注點(diǎn)也會(huì)增多。你們學(xué)校的EnglishNewsletter正在以MyAfter-schoolActivities為題舉行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇征文?；顒?dòng)關(guān)注點(diǎn)以前1．看電視2.……自己現(xiàn)在1.和家長(zhǎng)交流2.做志愿者3.……家庭，……

我們?cè)诔砷L(zhǎng)，我們應(yīng)該……要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：80詞左右4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。我們的寫(xiě)作步驟：第一步:審清題意，定“基調(diào)”第二步:列出寫(xiě)作提綱第三步：抓住要點(diǎn)，列關(guān)鍵詞第四步：擴(kuò)詞，連詞成句第五步：集句成段，組段成篇,善用連接詞第六步：修改文章，抄寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔第一步:審清題意，定“基調(diào)”認(rèn)真審題，明確寫(xiě)作主題、體裁、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、結(jié)構(gòu)、字?jǐn)?shù)、提示要點(diǎn)和補(bǔ)充信息具體做法：用紅色筆勾畫(huà)并標(biāo)注展隨著年齡的增長(zhǎng)，我們的課外活動(dòng)領(lǐng)域會(huì)擴(kuò)大，關(guān)注點(diǎn)也會(huì)增多。你們學(xué)校的EnglishNewsletter正在以MyAfter-schoolActivities為題舉行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇征文。要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：80詞左右4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。主題人稱體裁結(jié)構(gòu)時(shí)態(tài)字?jǐn)?shù)已知信息未知信息對(duì)象一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)我們?cè)诔砷L(zhǎng)，我們應(yīng)該……家庭，……現(xiàn)在1和家長(zhǎng)交流2做志愿者3……自己以前1．看電視2……關(guān)注點(diǎn)活動(dòng)第二步：列出寫(xiě)作提綱（Outline）。具體做法：根據(jù)段落整理寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)不要遺漏要點(diǎn)！Introduction概括，點(diǎn)明主題，引起下文鳳頭我的開(kāi)頭：

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Conclusion（豹尾）inthepastnowWriteanoutline1看電視2……和家長(zhǎng)交流做志愿者------Youropinions------2------抓要點(diǎn)列關(guān)鍵詞，定句Listsomeeywordsaboutafter-schoolactivitiesintheeeywordsaboutafter-schoolactivitiesnoweeywordsaboutopinionsPhrases:________________________________________________________________________

第三步：抓住要點(diǎn)，列關(guān)鍵詞Nowchatwithparents,worasavolunteerIntheesMeaningful,maeourworldbetterMaesentenceswiththeeywordsaboutaesentenceswiththeeywordsaboutaesentenceswiththeeywordsaboutyouropinionsSentences:________________________________________________________________________________第四步：擴(kuò)詞，連詞成句IoftenwatchedTVandsesIchatwithmyparentsAlsoIworasavolunteertohelppeopleinneedWeshoulddomoremeaningfulafter-schoolactivitiestoimaeourworldbetter

Einutes第五步：集句成段，組段成篇,善用連接詞連接詞表并列and,also,too,aswell,aswellas,both…and…,notonly…butalso…,either…or…,neither…nor,inaddition(另外),besides(而且),What’smore(而且),表對(duì)比but,however,yet,although,though,while,表?xiàng)l件if,unless表原因because,becauseof,for,since,as,

表結(jié)果so,therefore,asaresult,so…that,such…that表說(shuō)明like,suchas,forexample

表強(qiáng)調(diào)surely,certainly,ofcourse,

表順序first(ly),second(ly),…firstofall,then,next,afterwards,finally表總結(jié)inaword,inall,inmyopinion(以我之見(jiàn))表目的inorderto,sothat

第六步：修改文章，抄寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔范文展示MyAfter-schoolActivitiesAswegrow,bothourafter-schoolactivitiesandwhatwecareaboutarebecomingmoreandmoreIntheesAllIcaredaboutwasmyselfinsteadofanyoneelseHowever,withthetimegoing,IrealieIshouldnotonlythinaboutmyselfbutalsocareaboutothersNow,IoftenchatwithmydosomehouseworinmyseBesidesIworasavolunteertoheloreore,IattimesmaeyclassmatestomaeentWearegrowingWeshoulddomoremeaningfulafter-schoolactivitiestoimaeourworldbetter連詞的運(yùn)用Afterschool,weshouldtaeanactiveoreafter-schoolactivitestomaeourlifecolorful,meaningfulandhappyOurworldwillbeabetterplaceLet’staeactionatonce!Lettheworldfulloflove!TenderlyholdingyourfaceTowiy