高考英語復(fù)習(xí)之讀后續(xù)寫課件勇敢追逐夢想終于在電視臺找到了夢寐以求的工作

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)勇敢追逐夢想，終于在電視臺找到了夢寐以求的工作1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Ihadadreamfromprimaryschool:toworkintelevision.Myparentsownedalittlegrocerystore,soweweredefinitelynotfancypeople.Thankfully,mydadhadraisedmetohavealotofconfidence.Heoftensaid,"Youcandoanythingyouwanttodo."Mydadwasparticularlysupportive.Hewasmysteadyrock—alwaysthereforme.Withhishelpandencouragement,IwasadmittedtotheradioandtelevisionartsprogramatRyersoninToronto.IreallylovedtheprogramandworkedhardandIwasnamedthemostoutstandinggraduate.IfeltlikeIwasalreadylivingmydream.IbegantothinkthatmaybeIcouldapplyforaninternship(實習(xí)資格)inCBCorCTV.Luckily,GlobalTelevisionhadjuststartedbroadcastinginCanadathatyear.Ithoughttomyself:I'mnewandthey'renew,soifI'mgoingtogettoknowonepersonatGlobal,itmightaswellbethepresident.Iwasscared,butIknewdeepdowninsidethatthiswaswhatIwanted.WhenIcalledmydadandtoldhimmyplan,hesaid,“Good,Faye.That'sexactlywhatyoushoulddo.”4續(xù)寫原文5段首句Para1：WhenIarrivedatthestation,Iwentdirectintotheauditionandbeganmyshortperformance.Para2：FinallycamethedayofmyfirstpublicappearanceonliveTVwithmyparentsathomewatching.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點8續(xù)寫思路分析話題：實現(xiàn)理想（勵志成長）主要內(nèi)容：我一直努力實現(xiàn)去電視臺工作的夢想。幸運的是新開播的加拿大全球電視臺在招兵買馬，我勇敢地給電視總裁打電話自薦，他給了我試鏡的機會，我的夢想得以實現(xiàn)。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：WhenIarrivedatthestation,Iwentdirectintotheauditionandbeganmyshortperformance.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當我到達電視臺時，我直接進入試鏡，開始了我的短劇表演?！笨芍?，第一段應(yīng)該描寫我終于得到了試鏡表演的機會。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：FinallycamethedayofmyfirstpublicappearanceonliveTVwithmyparentsathomewatching.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“終于有一天，我第一次公開出現(xiàn)在電視直播中，父母在家觀看?！笨芍?，第二段應(yīng)該描寫我在電視直播中的表現(xiàn)以及我的感悟。11續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1]NeverinmywildestdreamdidIimaginethatIwasindeedassignedtheinternjobtoactonaschoollifeshowandmyfirstpublicappearanceonTVwasinfivedays.（倒裝句）[高分句型2]Wearingfancydressanddelicatemakeup,Iwassoproudbutnervousthatmyshowwouldbewatchedbysomanyaudience.（現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語）12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)WhenIarrivedatthestation,Iwentdirectintotheauditionandbeganmyshortperformance.Withboldness,Ifinishedmyperformancerelativelysmoothlythoughpalmsweresweating.NeverinmywildestdreamdidIimaginethatIwasindeedassignedtheinternjobtoactonaschoollifeshowandmyfirstpublicappearanceonTVwasinfivedays.Aftersharingthethrillingnewswithmydad,Ireceivedthewarmestcongratulationsandexpectationsfrommyfamily.Picturingmyfamilieseagerlywaitingformyperformance,IworkeddayandnightasbusyasabeeforfearthatIwouldmakeafoolofmyselfliveonTV.14范文呈現(xiàn)FinallycamethedayofmyfirstpublicappearanceonliveTVwithmyparentsathomewatching.Wearingfancydressanddelicatemakeup,Iwassoproudbutnervousthatmyshowwouldbewatchedbysomanyaudience.MymindsuddenlywentblankasIwasimmersedinmythoughtsandtotallyforgotmylines.Deepfrownsgraduallyclimbedonmypartners'face,withwhosesuddenvigorouspull,Iwasdrivenbacktothereality.Isooncameupwithalittletricktomakeupfortheembarrassingblank.Astheshowwenton,soconcentratedwasIthatIhardlydaredtoevenblinkmyeyes.Aftermydebut,Irangmydadwithfrustrationanddisappointment,onlytoreaphistrustandencouragementagain.Itwasliterallydad'slovethatsupportedmealongmywaytobeanoutstandingactor.15范文譯文16范文譯文終于有一天，我第一次公開出現(xiàn)在電視直播中，父母在家觀看。穿著奇裝異服，化著精致的妝，我很自豪，但也很緊張，因為我的節(jié)目會有這么多觀眾觀看。當我沉浸在思緒中，完全忘記了我的臺詞時，我的腦海突然一片空白?；锇閭兊哪樕蠞u漸地皺起了深深的眉頭，在他們突然的大力拉扯下，我被趕回了現(xiàn)實。我很快想出了一個小技巧來彌補