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2正版地道的框架結(jié)構(gòu)和寫作思路discussbothviews劍橋雅思6P164agreeordisagree劍橋雅思7P173；6P172Report劍橋雅思8P167advantagesanddisadvantages從提問方式入手劍橋雅思5P165Page2正版地道的框架結(jié)構(gòu)和寫作思路discuss框架結(jié)構(gòu)A（advantagesanddisadvantages）Page

3(1+1)4段搞定雅思大作文introductionMainbody1(advantages)Mainbody2(disadvantages)conclusion真的這么簡(jiǎn)單嗎？看看考官怎么做吧?。▌?P53）框架結(jié)構(gòu)A（advantagesanddisadvant第一句：引出背景Itisquitecommonthesedaysforsb(+地點(diǎn))todosth+(+時(shí)間狀語(yǔ))第二句：引申和拓展例子、具體化（specific）第三句(optional)：我的觀點(diǎn)4第一段introduction4段搞定雅思大作文劍6P164(hugehousesandcars)劍7P173(…starsoffilm,sportorpopularmusic)劍8P167(bothincitiesandonmotorwayseverywhere)第一句：引出背景4第一段4段搞定雅思大作文劍6P164第二段：第一部分：對(duì)方的壞處點(diǎn)到為止，不要展開，要有針對(duì)性。第二部分：我方的好處（加bycontrast）好處一好處二好處三+一句話拓展Page

5Mainbody1(advantages)4段搞定雅思大作文“正反論證”以后詳聊…independent,whichisaveryimportantfactorinacademicstudyandresearch,aswellasgivingthemanadvantageintermsof

copingwiththechallengesofstudentlife.是要寫“出去玩或者工作的好處”嗎？第二段：Page5Mainbody14段搞定雅思大第二段的基本結(jié)構(gòu)對(duì)立方壞處我方好處一我方好處二我方好處三好處三的論證對(duì)立方壞處我方好處一好處一的論證我方好處二好處二的論證Page

6反正都是5句話第二段的基本結(jié)構(gòu)對(duì)立方我方我方我方好處三對(duì)立方我方好處一我方第三段：第一部分：引蛇出洞（對(duì)方對(duì)我的批評(píng)和我的壞處）第二部分：駁論（加轉(zhuǎn)折）駁其一點(diǎn)，破其全身Page

74段搞定雅思大作文Mainbody2(disadvantages)是要寫“出去玩或者工作的壞處”嗎？你是否注意到“certainly”“駁論”怎么用？下一節(jié)課詳聊第三段：Page74段搞定雅思大作文MainbodyPage

8中間兩段的邏輯1先說對(duì)立面的壞處2再說我方的三個(gè)好處3掉頭引出別人對(duì)我的批評(píng)4再把這個(gè)批評(píng)駁倒5觀點(diǎn)水到渠成這才是雅思作文的邏輯Page8中間兩段的邏輯1先說2再說我方的三個(gè)好末段：第一句：提出/重申總論點(diǎn)Myviewisthat…第二句：補(bǔ)充我的一個(gè)好處或原因第三句：howtodoit(measures)Page

94段搞定雅思大作文conclusion末段：Page94段搞定雅思大作文conclusion趁熱練習(xí)一下是否應(yīng)該資助藝術(shù)Governmentshavebeenspendinglargeamountofmoneyonsupportingart.Somepeoplethatpublicmoneyshouldbebetterspentonhealthandeducation.Pleasediscussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.完全可以改為“政府資助藝術(shù)的advantagesanddisadvantages”!Page

10趁熱練習(xí)一下是否應(yīng)該資助藝術(shù)Page10框架結(jié)構(gòu)B（discussbothviews）Page

11(1+1)4段搞定雅思大作文introductionMainbody1(A的觀點(diǎn))Mainbody2(B的觀點(diǎn))conclusion真的這么簡(jiǎn)單嗎？看看考官怎么做吧！（劍6P53）框架結(jié)構(gòu)B（discussbothviews）Page第一段：第一句：引出背景第二句：引申和拓展例子、具體化

specific第三句(optional)：我的觀點(diǎn)124段搞定雅思大作文第一段introductionAsaresultof=dueto=owingto=becauseof第一段：124段搞定雅思大作文第一段Asaresult練習(xí)因果關(guān)系的句型因?yàn)槿丝谠黾樱吧鷦?dòng)物數(shù)量在下降。Asaresultoftheincreaseofhumanpopulation,thenumberofwildanimalshasdecreased.Thenumberofwildanimalshasdropped

becauseoftheriseofhumanpopulation.Thereappearedafallinthenumberofwildanimalsduetotheclimbofhumanpopulation.主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)Theincreaseofhumanpopulationleadto/accountfor/beresponsiblefor/contributetothedropofwildanimals.Page

13rapiddramaticallyfromourplanetduringthepastfewdecadessharplysignificantfromourglobeduringthepastfewdecadesmight練習(xí)因果關(guān)系的句型因?yàn)槿丝谠黾樱吧鷦?dòng)物數(shù)量在下降。Page第二段：駁論Manypeoplefind/claim…+簡(jiǎn)單原因轉(zhuǎn)折反駁：駁其一點(diǎn)，破其全身注意：只要不是report類型的文章基本都需要駁論。144段搞定雅思大作文Mainbody1(A的觀點(diǎn))第二段：駁論144段搞定雅思大作文Mainbody1我們來聊一下駁論英語(yǔ)議論文不僅要說明自己的觀點(diǎn)是如何正確的，還要說明反方的觀點(diǎn)為什么是錯(cuò)誤的，這就是議論文中的駁論。駁論先不寫自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫反方觀點(diǎn)，然后對(duì)反方觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行反駁或表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。refuteoneofyourobviouscounter-arguments/opposingarguments反方觀點(diǎn)+轉(zhuǎn)折+立論P(yáng)age

15我們來聊一下駁論英語(yǔ)議論文不僅要說明自己的觀點(diǎn)是如何正確的，駁論的英文句型1 Somepeoplethinkthat…(反方觀點(diǎn)),because…(反方的簡(jiǎn)單論據(jù)).However,theyareoversimplifyingthesituation.Infact…(反駁反方觀點(diǎn)或建立己方觀點(diǎn)).2 Thereisawidespreadbeliefthatincreasingwealthencouragespeopletolivefartheroutwherecarsaretheonlyviabletransport.TheexampleofEuropeancitiesrefutesthat.Page

16駁論的英文句型1 Somepeoplethinktha我們也有簡(jiǎn)單的句型Itistruethat…(反方觀點(diǎn)中的某些方面)4 Thatisnottosaythat…not…(并不是說反方觀點(diǎn)完全沒有道理)Page

17我們也有簡(jiǎn)單的句型Itistruethat…(反方觀點(diǎn)一個(gè)例子：核技術(shù)Whatisyouropinionaboutnucleartechnologies?可能的總論點(diǎn)是：Infact,thenucleartechnologyismoreacursethanablessingforsociety.18一個(gè)例子：核技術(shù)Whatisyouropiniona一個(gè)可能的分論點(diǎn)是：Asanenergyprovider,thenucleartechnologywouldthreatenorevendestroytheenvironmentiftherewereatechnicalaccident,whichismoreoftenthannotthecase.19一個(gè)可能的分論點(diǎn)是：19這個(gè)分論點(diǎn)以前可以加上反方觀點(diǎn)，構(gòu)成一個(gè)駁論：Somepeoplethinkthatthenucleartechnology,asanenergyprovider,isbeneficialforsociety,becauseitcancreatecheapandcleanenergy.However,theyareoversimplifyingthesituation.Infact,iftherewereatechnicalaccident,whichismoreoftenthannotthecase,theoutcomewouldbedisastrous…20這個(gè)分論點(diǎn)以前可以加上反方觀點(diǎn)，構(gòu)成一個(gè)駁論：20Publictransportation:Thereisawidespreadbeliefthatincreasingwealthencouragespeopletolivefartheroutwherecarsaretheonlyviabletransport.TheexampleofEuropeancitiesrefutesthat.TheyareoftenwealthierthantheirAmericancounterpartsbuthavenotgeneratedthesamelevelofcaruse.InStockholm,carusehasactuallyfalleninrecentyearsasthecityhasbecomelargerandwealthier.21Publictransportation:21Airtransportisincreasinglyusedtoexporttypesoffruitandvegetablestocountrieswherethoseplantscan’tgroworoutofseason.Somesayitisagoodthing,butothersconsiderthisuseofairtransportcan’tbejustified.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.22Airtransportisincreasingly如果我們的總論點(diǎn)是“空運(yùn)蔬菜和水果的好處比壞處多”，支持的分論點(diǎn)可能有“當(dāng)?shù)鼐用窨梢杂卸喾N多樣的食物選擇”：Theairtransportoffruitsandvegetablesmightenablepeopletohaveavarietyoffoodchoice.23如果我們的總論點(diǎn)是“空運(yùn)蔬菜和水果的好處比壞處多”，支持的分第二個(gè)論點(diǎn)就要駁論了。。。Somepeopleholdtheviewthatitistooexpensivetouseairtransport.However,iftheamountofsuchcargoreachestoacertainlevel,thecostwillberatherreasonable.Inaddition,air-transportedfruitandvegetablesarenotnecessarilymoreexpensivethanthosegrowninlocalareas.24第二個(gè)論點(diǎn)就要駁論了。。。24第三個(gè)論點(diǎn)也可以駁論。。。Somepeoplesuggestthatweshouldinvestingreenhouseplantsinstead.However,suchgeneticgeneratedplantsarenotastastyasthosegrownintheiroriginallyareas.Inaddition,althoughitseemscheapersincewedonothavetotransportthem,thecostwillgrowenormouslyonceweincludetheexpenseofresearchingandconstructingthegreenhouse.25第三個(gè)論點(diǎn)也可以駁論。。。25最后一個(gè)關(guān)于駁論的例子Inmanycountries，theproportionofolderpeopleissteadilyincreasing.Doesthistrendmakepositiveornegativeeffectstosociety？最后一個(gè)關(guān)于駁論的例子Inmanycountries，t反駁老年人體力弱Somepeoplemightarguethatoldpeoplearephysicallyweakandthereforesocietymightbenotenergeticenoughtodevelop.However,modernsciencesandtechnologieshaveenabledoldmentobephysicallystrongenoughtomeetthechallengesinmodernsociety.(Inthepast,oldpeopleagedoversixtywereratherfragile.Butnowadays,becauseofmedicineinnovationsandscientificexercises,seniorpeoplecouldstillenjoyalifewithvariousactivities.Therefore,itisnotwisetoquestiontheoldpeople’sworkingabilitynow.)反駁老年人體力弱Somepeoplemightargu反駁老年人保守Quiteafewpeopleinsistthatoldpeopleareconservative.However,alargeproportionofoldpeoplenowadaysdonotworksimplyforeconomicreasons.(Theyaretryingallthewayouttobeinformedoffreshideasandtheories.Asaresult,theyalsosurfontheInternetandmakefriendsallovertheworld.Inaddition,tobeconservativesometimesistheprerequisiteofglorioussuccessinmodernsociety.)反駁老年人保守Quiteafewpeopleinsi還可以反駁“老年人搶了年輕人飯碗”！還可以反駁“老年人年紀(jì)大了，腦筋不靈活”！。。。還可以反駁“老年人搶了年輕人飯碗”！我方好處總結(jié)好處一好處二好處三（注意句型變化）一句話總結(jié)30Mainbody2(B的觀點(diǎn))4段搞定雅思大作文我方好處總結(jié)30Mainbody24段搞定雅思大作文末段：第一句：提出觀點(diǎn)第二句：補(bǔ)充我的一個(gè)好處或原因例子、具體化Page

31conclusion4段搞定雅思大作文末段：Page31conclusion4段搞定雅思大作Page

32中間兩段的邏輯1先說觀點(diǎn)A成立的理由2再把這些理由駁倒3接下來擺出觀點(diǎn)B成立的三個(gè)理由4總論點(diǎn)水到渠成比上一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單Page32中間兩段的邏輯1先說2再把3接下來4趁熱練一下運(yùn)動(dòng)設(shè)施的增加對(duì)大眾健康有無好處？Task2:Somepeoplebelievethattoimprovepublichealthshouldincreasethenumberofsportsfacilities;othersbelievethatithaslittleeffectsandneedothermeasurestoimproveit.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Page

33趁熱練一下運(yùn)動(dòng)設(shè)施的增加對(duì)大眾健康有無好處？Page3第二段的結(jié)構(gòu)341很多人認(rèn)為增加體育設(shè)施可以增進(jìn)公眾健康原因：方便社區(qū)、緩解壓力轉(zhuǎn)折：人們不健康的原因在于生活習(xí)慣不好而且，環(huán)境污染嚴(yán)重總之，只靠增加體育設(shè)施是不夠的。第二段的結(jié)構(gòu)341很多人認(rèn)為增加體育設(shè)施可以增進(jìn)公眾健康原第三段的結(jié)構(gòu)351面對(duì)環(huán)境污染、人們不良生活習(xí)慣，增加體育設(shè)施作用不大很多疾病和污染緊密相連所以，應(yīng)該先解決污染問題而且，當(dāng)代人們鴨梨山大，生活習(xí)慣不良所以，應(yīng)該呼吁緩解壓力，倡導(dǎo)健康生活方式。第三段的結(jié)構(gòu)351面對(duì)環(huán)境污染、人們不良生活習(xí)慣，增加體育框架結(jié)構(gòu)C（agreeordisagree）Page

364段搞定雅思大作文introductionMainbody1(agree)Mainbody2(disagree)conclusion真的這么簡(jiǎn)單嗎？看看考官怎么做吧?。▌?P128）框架結(jié)構(gòu)C（agreeordisagree）Page第一句：提出觀點(diǎn)Iagreewiththeviewthat…第二句：觀點(diǎn)基本拓展具體化specific+簡(jiǎn)要原因374段搞定雅思大作文第一段introductionItoftenseemsthat…第一句：提出觀點(diǎn)374段搞定雅思大作文第一段Itoften掉頭寫對(duì)方的好處或?qū)Ψ接^點(diǎn)成立的原因正版句型：itis(certainly)truethat/ithastobeadmittedthat…

有可能的話再寫一段，但不要過度展開。384段搞定雅思大作文Mainbody1(agree)真的在寫agree嗎？Itisalsotruethatitisonlythosewho…whocangetthesehugesalaries.形式主語(yǔ)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型定語(yǔ)從句掉頭寫對(duì)方的好處或?qū)Ψ接^點(diǎn)成立的原因384段搞定雅思大作文M第三段：（文章重點(diǎn)）我方的好處或我方觀點(diǎn)成立的原因前面加承接詞或承接句394段搞定雅思大作文unfortunately,assumingthat…..isnotthesameasclaiming….///assumingthat….doesnotnecessarilymeanthat…對(duì)方的好處isnotthejustificationfor）Mainbody2(disagree)

劍6P168第三段開頭“however,reachingtheconclusionthatchangeisinevitableisnotthesameasassumingthat‘changeisalwaysforthebetter’”真的在寫disagree嗎？第三段：（文章重點(diǎn)）394段搞定雅思大作文unfortu第一句：重申觀點(diǎn)（讓步在前）第二句：補(bǔ)充我的一個(gè)好處或原因或者對(duì)前面分論點(diǎn)的總結(jié)例子、具體化第三句：howtodoitPage

40conclusion4段搞定雅思大作文theremaybereasonswhy……shouldbe…Youngpeopleshouldbeencouragedtobroadentheirhorizons第一句：重申觀點(diǎn)（讓步在前）Page40conclusPage

41中間兩（三）段的邏輯1先掉頭說贊成的理由2有可能的話再說一個(gè)理由3接下來一個(gè)承接句，說出不贊成的理由4總論點(diǎn)水到渠成比上一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單Page41中間兩（三）段的邏輯1先掉頭說贊成的理由2趁熱練一下學(xué)生從老師那里還是科技那里學(xué)到的東西多？Task2:Studentsatschoolsanduniversitieslearnfarmorefromlessonswithteachersthanfromotherssources(suchastheinternet,television).Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?42趁熱練一下學(xué)生從老師那里還是科技那里學(xué)到的東西多？42第二段的結(jié)構(gòu)431確實(shí)，科技可以使學(xué)生更高效地學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)原因1：網(wǎng)絡(luò)上信息海量，方便獲得原因2：多媒體更有趣，引起學(xué)生興趣總之，當(dāng)代科技對(duì)學(xué)生教育幫助大。第二段的結(jié)構(gòu)431確實(shí)，科技可以使學(xué)生更高效地學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)原因第三段的結(jié)構(gòu)441但是，承認(rèn)科技有作用并不代表它們就可以取代老師原因1：網(wǎng)上不良信息，需要老師監(jiān)管和引導(dǎo)原因2：老師的優(yōu)勢(shì)在于互動(dòng)和反饋，這一點(diǎn)電腦無法做到所以，教師不能被科技取代，科技是教師的輔助。第三段的結(jié)構(gòu)441但是，承認(rèn)科技有作用并不代表它們就可以取框架結(jié)構(gòu)C的另外一種官方版本Page

454段搞定雅思大作文introductionMainbody1(agree)Mainbody2(disagree)conclusion看看另一個(gè)考官怎么做吧?。▌?P126）框架結(jié)構(gòu)C的另外一種官方版本Page454段搞定雅思大第一句：提出觀點(diǎn)Itendtoagreethat…第二句：觀點(diǎn)基本拓展具體化specific+簡(jiǎn)要原因464段搞定雅思大作文第一段introduction上一篇文章：Iagreewiththeviewthat…Thisispartlybecause…請(qǐng)注意：考官如何替換題目中usingacomputereveryday?1ToomuchtimespentonthecomputereverydaySittinginfrontofascreenfortoolongToomuchexposureUsetheequipmententhusiasticallyOverusecomputer第一句：提出觀點(diǎn)464段搞定雅思大作文第一段上一篇文章：I第二段：順著首段，說明我方觀點(diǎn)的原因二第三段：我方觀點(diǎn)的原因三Tips：這兩段可以合為一段474段搞定雅思大作文Mainbody1(agree)第二段的however與劍7P173第二段的however意思一樣嗎？Themainconcernis…第二段：474段搞定雅思大作文Mainbody1第二段的第三段：（讓步段；非重點(diǎn)）后退一步，承認(rèn)對(duì)方觀點(diǎn)存在的理由（承認(rèn)好的方面）前面加承接詞或承接句484段搞定雅思大作文Mainbody2(disagree)Inspiteofthis,theobviousbenefitsof（主題）cannotbedenied.<被動(dòng)句>主動(dòng)句呢？Wecannotdenytheobviousbenefitsof…However,itisdangeroustoconcludethatcomputeractivitieshavebroughtonlybenefitstoyoungstudents.thereforeitisimportant/necessary/appropriatethat…特別適合放在己方觀點(diǎn)段落最后一句，總結(jié)性句型第三段：（讓步段；非重點(diǎn)）484段搞定雅思大作文Main第一句：重申總論點(diǎn)第二句：howtodotocorrectPage

49conclusion4段搞定雅思大作文Ithinkthemainpointis……shouldbe…家長(zhǎng)們：mustensure老師們：監(jiān)管和引導(dǎo)學(xué)生們：提高認(rèn)識(shí)第一句：重申總論點(diǎn)Page49conclusion4段Page

50中間兩（三）段的邏輯1先順著說電腦用多的壞處2有可能的話再說一個(gè)壞處3接下來一個(gè)承接句，說出電腦的好處4總論點(diǎn)水到渠成與上一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)相反Page50中間兩（三）段的邏輯1先順著說電腦用多的壞信息技術(shù)的優(yōu)劣信息技術(shù)informationtechnology對(duì)孩子的身心健康功過參半，一方面上網(wǎng)surfontheinternet可以讓他們獲取知識(shí)gainaccesstoknowledgeandinformation,更方便高效effectiveandefficient,在虛擬世界virtualworld里更能創(chuàng)新innovation，獲得自信self-esteem51信息技術(shù)的優(yōu)劣信息技術(shù)informationtechnol另一方面，上網(wǎng)時(shí)間過長(zhǎng)sittinginfrontofascreenfortoolong對(duì)視力和身體健康都有危害damagingtoboththeeyesandthephysicalposture；信息爆炸informationexplosion，電腦犯罪cybercrime，電腦游戲electronicgames暴力色情等；更重要的是，人們會(huì)覺得孤獨(dú)feelisolated因?yàn)槿狈γ鎸?duì)面的交流becauseofthelackofface-to-facecommunication/humaninteraction.52另一方面，上網(wǎng)時(shí)間過長(zhǎng)sittinginfrontofAnalysisofReport-Writing

Nowadays,someindividualsbehaveinananti-societyway,suchascommittingacrime.Ingeneral,itisthesocietytoblame.Whatcausestheanti-socialbehaviorsofindividuals?Whoshouldberesponsiblefordealingwithit?

Nowadays,werelyonnewsforourknowledge,butweareuncertainaboutthetruthofthesenews.Shouldwebelievejournalists?Whatqualitiesshouldagoodjournalistorcorrespondenthave?53AnalysisofReport-Writing

Now報(bào)告類的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)框架第一段引出背景回答問題第二段原因1+展開論證+例子第三段原因2+展開論證+例子第四段影響后果解決方案54劍8P167題目：P79Thereisno(little)doubtthat…ItisquitecommonthesedaysforsbtodosthThereisno(little)doubtthat…引出一個(gè)事實(shí)Thereislittledoubtthatmuseumsplayanirreplaceableroleinacountry’seducationalsystem.Itisquitecommonforsbtodosth…引出一個(gè)動(dòng)作Itisquitecommonthesedaysformanyyoungpeopletovisitmuseumswhentheytraveltoothercountries.報(bào)告類的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)框架第一段引出背景回答問題第二段原因1+展開論證報(bào)告類作文可能出現(xiàn)的原因：科技發(fā)展newtechnology城市化urbanization全球化globalization工作生活節(jié)奏加快fast-pacedworkandlifestyleacceleratingpace信息社會(huì)informationsociety會(huì)導(dǎo)致theimprovementofefficiency會(huì)導(dǎo)致stimulatetheworldeconomy會(huì)導(dǎo)致

勞動(dòng)重點(diǎn)的變化fromphysicalpowertointelligence55報(bào)告類作文可能出現(xiàn)的原因：科技發(fā)展newtechnolo三個(gè)層面的影響個(gè)人家庭社會(huì)//環(huán)境“產(chǎn)生影響”的短語(yǔ)56producePositiveEffectUponyieldNegativeImpactonHaveSerious/harmfulinfluenceprofound三個(gè)層面的影響個(gè)人56producePositiveEffe可能的解決之道各方面齊心協(xié)力makeconcertedeffort政府首先要負(fù)責(zé)，制定法律法規(guī)produceregulations相關(guān)團(tuán)體要做貢獻(xiàn)makecontribution公民個(gè)人要提升意識(shí)，積極參與enhanceawareness57可能的解決之道各方面齊心協(xié)力makeconcerted趁熱練一下Nowadays,wearelivinginathrow-awaysociety.Whatareitscausesandwhatareitsproblems?58趁熱練一下58第一段59報(bào)告類首段第一句標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句型:thesedays,oneofthemostunfortunateproblemswefaceliesinthefactthat…第二句(optional):舉個(gè)具體的例子第三句:inthisessay,therefore,Iwillproposethefollowingseveralreasons//measures…第一段59報(bào)告類首段第一句標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句型:thesedays,第二段60報(bào)告類第二段第一句標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句型:oneimportantreasonisthat…論證手段第一招：正反論證標(biāo)配：ontheotherhand;bycontrast;inthepast…butnowadays;unlike…Youngchildrencanenjoyalotofconvenienceandcomfortsincities….Bycontrast,childrencannotreceiveagoodeducationinthecountrybecauseofthepoorteachingfacilitiesandlackofwell-trainedteachers.Inthepast,oldpeopleagedoversixtywereratherfragile.Butnowadays,becauseofmedicineinnovationsandscientificexercises,seniorpeoplecouldstillenjoyalifewithvariousactivities.論證手段第二招：因果關(guān)系標(biāo)配：Asaresult;consequently;…whichmeans…;therefore…Computersandmodemshavefixedpeopleinfrontofthelittlescreen.Asaresult,friendsandrelativesmightloseclosecontactwitheachother. Someinformationinthenewspaperisnotreliablesimplebecausemanyjournalistsfabricatesensationalincidentsinordertomakethemselvesconspicuous.Reporters,likemanypeopleinotheroccupations,nowfeelthefiercecompetitionintheirowncircle.Consequently,someofthemdeliberatelyexaggerateorwhitewashcertainmatterstogaintheupperhandovertheircolleagues.Asaresult,theirreportsarecertainlynotdependable.論證手段第三招：舉例論證標(biāo)配：Forexample;Acaseinpointis…;Take…asanexample;Peoplecanenjoyalotofconvenienceandcomfortsincities.Forexample,thehealthcaresystemincitiesismuchbetterthanthatinthecountry,whichisveryimportantforchildren’shealth.不要太具體、個(gè)人的例子第二段60報(bào)告類第二段第一句標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句型:oneimport傷不起的框架一個(gè)事物的正反兩面兩個(gè)事物的對(duì)比討論61雅思寫作萬變不離其宗我們學(xué)過的段落武器引出背景直接表明觀點(diǎn)正反論證原因分析讓步段駁論段總結(jié)論點(diǎn)解決問題傷不起的框架一個(gè)事物的正反兩面兩個(gè)事物的對(duì)比討論61雅思寫作首段兩件事：引出話題，表明觀點(diǎn)三句話：#1#第一句：背景介紹4種可能的句型：1Itisquitecommonthesedaysforsb+地點(diǎn)+todosth+時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)2Thereislittledoubtthat+主題（名詞短語(yǔ)）havebecomehugeproblems//afrequenttopicofdiscussion.62重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板Thereisno(little)doubtthat…ItisquitecommonthesedaysforsbtodosthThereisno(little)doubtthat…引出一個(gè)事實(shí)Thereislittledoubtthatmuseumsplayanirreplaceableroleinacountry’seducationalsystem.Itisquitecommonforsbtodosth…引出一個(gè)動(dòng)作Itisquitecommonthesedaysformanyyoungpeopletovisitmuseumswhentheytraveltoothercountries.劍7P102首段兩件事：引出話題，表明觀點(diǎn)62重新打造屬于自己的12-13Recently,anincreasingnumberofpeople(具體化，或插入語(yǔ))expresstheirconcernaboutthephenomenonthat...4直接點(diǎn)：直接表明觀點(diǎn)，兩句話寫完首段Itendtoagreethat//Iagreewiththeviewthat….Thisispartlybecause….63重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板3Recently,anincreasingnumb#2#第二句話：展開辯論“是否應(yīng)該。?！?/p>

“是這樣。。還是應(yīng)該那樣。?！毕虏撸骸币恍┤苏J(rèn)為。。另一些人認(rèn)為。?！盚owever,whetheruniversitiesshouldmainlyprovidejob-relatedskillstograduatesisacontroversialissue.However,whetheruniversitiesshouldmainlyprovidejob-relatedskillsorpureknowledgetograduateshascausedheateddebate.Whilesomeclaimthatuniversitiesshouldfocusongivingaccesstoknowledge,thereareanincreasingnumberofpeoplebelievingthattheknowledgeandskillsneededintheworkplacearemoreimportantforuniversitygraduates.64重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板#2#第二句話：展開辯論64重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話#3#第三句話：表明觀點(diǎn)Inmyview,..//Myviewisthat..(表語(yǔ)從句)//Iagreewiththeviewthat..(同位語(yǔ)從句)forthefollowingreasons.Myviewisthatjob-relatedknowledgeandskillsshouldbethemainfocusofuniversities.65重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板#3#第三句話：表明觀點(diǎn)65重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話PlanA難度#4#第1句：本段中心句First,itisobviousthat…//thereislittledoubtthat..//onereasonforthisisthat..+最重要最明顯的論據(jù)First,itisobviousthatformoststudents,thepurposeofreceivinghighereducationistoobtainpracticalknowledgeandskills,whichwillenablethemtobecomequalifiedemployeesinthefuturejobmarket.66重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板第二段：三種寫法由你選PlanA難度66重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模#5#第2句：中心句的拓展、解釋、說明2個(gè)方向拓展：1）Thisisbecause..上一句話的原因Thisisbecausemostofthem,aftergraduation,willenterworkplaceandsupportthemselvesindependently.2）If…not…(反證中心句)Ifuniversitiesdonotpayenoughattentiontosuchskills,mostgraduateswillnotbeabletofinddecentpositionsintheworkplace,causinghigherunemploymentrate.3）,whichmeans…//consequently上一句話的結(jié)果67重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板#5#第2句：中心句的拓展、解釋、說明67重新打造屬于自己#6#第3句：第二個(gè)最明顯原因Anotherreasonliesinthefactthat…同位語(yǔ)從句Anotherreasonliesinthefactthatfocusingonthejob-relatedskillscanbenefitthecompanieswhichneedmoretalentswithpracticalskills.

68重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板#6#第3句：第二個(gè)最明顯原因68重新打造屬于自己的12-1#7#第4句：上一句的例證Forexample,..//Acaseinpointisthat…//Examplestosupportthisviewareeasilyfound.Forexample,HRsfromsomerenownedcompanies,suchasxx,choosetorecruitfutureemployeesfromthoseuniversitieswhofocusonpracticalworkingskills,fortheybelieve…69重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板#7#第4句：上一句的例證69重新打造屬于自己的12-15句#8#第5句：重申寫作觀點(diǎn)(optional)Therefore,itisimportant/necessary/appropriateforuniversitiesandcollegestogiveprioritytoknowledgeandskillsneededforworkplaces.70重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板#8#第5句：重申寫作觀點(diǎn)70重新打造屬于自己的12-15PlanB難度劍橋雅思7P173讓步段Itistruethat,however,對(duì)方的好處Moreover,//furthermore…Pureknowledge的作用：1）實(shí)用技能的基礎(chǔ)2）大學(xué)質(zhì)量的衡量標(biāo)準(zhǔn)71重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板另外一種考官推薦的方法PlanB難度71重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模#9#第1句：引蛇出洞可能用到的句型Thatisnottosaythat…not…這并不是說（反方觀點(diǎn)完全沒有道理）However,therecertainlyexistsomedangers/meritsin…確實(shí)存在（好處==壞處）However,itiscertainlytruethat…Thosewhoharbortheviewthat…believe…(推薦)那些持有（反方觀點(diǎn)）的人們認(rèn)為…定語(yǔ)從句同位語(yǔ)從句賓語(yǔ)從句72重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板第三段：駁論段或者讓步段（有可能用在第二段）Thosewhoharbortheviewthatthemainfunctionofuniversitiesshouldbetogiveaccesstopureknowledgebelievethatthetheoreticknowledgeisthefoundationofanypracticalskills.#9#第1句：引蛇出洞72重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模#10#第2句：靶子的簡(jiǎn)單論證Therecertainlyexistsomeuniversitieswhichearntheirreputationfromacademicknowledgeandtheoreticscholars.73重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板#10#第2句：靶子的簡(jiǎn)單論證73重新打造屬于自己的12-1#11#第3句：轉(zhuǎn)折+批判However,//butunfortunately,…(theyareoversimplifyingthesituation.)Butunfortunately,這個(gè)社會(huì)的發(fā)展依然依靠實(shí)用知識(shí)的推動(dòng)//這個(gè)社會(huì)依然更加重視實(shí)用知識(shí)的傳授，而且理論知識(shí)只適合一少部分學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)。74重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板#11#第3句：轉(zhuǎn)折+批判74重新打造屬于自己的12-15句#12#第1句：總結(jié)詞+總論點(diǎn)重申Inconclusion,..//Tosumup,Ibelievethat…//myviewisthat…Inconclusion,Ifirmlybelievethatthemajorfunctionofuniversitiesshouldbeprovidingmoststudentswithjob-relatedskillsandguaranteeinghighrateofemployment.75重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板末段：總結(jié)和升華#12#第1句：總結(jié)詞+總論點(diǎn)重申75重新打造屬于自己的12#13#第2句：兼顧反方Meanwhile,weshouldnotignoretheotherimportantrolesuniversitiesareundertaking（同時(shí)，我們不應(yīng)該忽略大學(xué)應(yīng)該承擔(dān)的其他重要職能）Meanwhile,theremaystillexistsomereasonswhypureknowledgeremainsthefocusofsomeuniversitystudents.76重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板#13#第2句：兼顧反方76重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話#14#第3句：howtodo..政府government;theauthoritiesconcerned;policy-makers采取具體措施adoptconcretemeasuresto…人們citizens;eachindividual;提高認(rèn)識(shí)raisetheawarenessthat…77重新打造屬于自己的12-15句話模板#14#第3句：howtodo..77重新打造屬于自己?？荚掝}核心詞匯及思路首先，語(yǔ)言是文化的載體languageisthevehicleofculture，是促進(jìn)不同文化背景的人之間的交流boost/facilitatecommunicationamongpeoplefromdifferentculturalbackgrounds。而且，語(yǔ)言也是一個(gè)國(guó)家和民族的獨(dú)特文化特征uniqueculturalidentity。背景：文化一體化culturalglobalization。

78語(yǔ)言與文化是否需要?jiǎng)?chuàng)造一個(gè)共同的語(yǔ)言？

Somesupportthatanewlanguageshouldbeinventedandusedbypeopleallaroundthewordforinternationalcommunication.Doyouthinkthebenefitsofthiswouldoutweightheproblems?常考話題核心詞匯及思路首先，語(yǔ)言是文化的載體language但是，英語(yǔ)的普及thespread/popularityofEnglish導(dǎo)致了giveriseto/leadto一些當(dāng)?shù)卣Z(yǔ)言的消失theextinctionofsomelocaldialects，//滅絕的邊緣onthevergeofextinction，這對(duì)文化多樣性culturaldiversity也是一種傷害。所以，保護(hù)和推廣本國(guó)的歷史和文化遺產(chǎn)是年輕一代不可推卸的責(zé)任。Itisanunavoidabletaskthattheyoungergenerationconserveandpromotetheirnationalhistoricalandculturalheritages.79但是，英語(yǔ)的普及thespread/popularity現(xiàn)代交流需要?jiǎng)?chuàng)造一個(gè)單一國(guó)際語(yǔ)言Thegrowthofmoderncommunicationhavecreatedademandofasingleinternationallanguageforpeoplearoundtheworld.國(guó)際貿(mào)易使共同語(yǔ)言成為必須practicalnecessity.貿(mào)易伙伴可能互相不理解incomprehensible80現(xiàn)代交流需要?jiǎng)?chuàng)造一個(gè)單一國(guó)際語(yǔ)言80傳統(tǒng)文化和藝術(shù)究竟應(yīng)不應(yīng)該保護(hù)？瀕臨滅絕onthevergeofextinction珍視和珍惜valueandcherish民族寶藏：nationaltreasures/heritagefromourancestors失去傳統(tǒng)，民族丟失根本feelrootless民族歸屬感senseofbelonging81傳統(tǒng)文化和藝術(shù)究竟應(yīng)不應(yīng)該保護(hù)？81有人怕保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)文化可能會(huì)增加政府負(fù)擔(dān)layaheavyburdenonthegovernment’sbudgets傳統(tǒng)文化也有經(jīng)濟(jì)價(jià)值economicvalueofthetraditionalarts.當(dāng)?shù)芈糜蝏oostlocaltourism一個(gè)好例子是(acaseinpointis)民族工藝品ethnichandicrafts82有人怕保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)文化可能會(huì)增加政府負(fù)擔(dān)layaheavy多元文化社會(huì)multi-culturedsocieties優(yōu)勢(shì)：文化多樣性culturaldiversity娛樂形式更加豐富awiderrangeofentertainment更豐富的旅游資源abundanttouristattractions832006.8.26Multi-culturalsocieties,whicharemixedwithdifferentethnicpeople,bringmorebenefitsthandrawbacks,towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?多元文化社會(huì)multi-culturedsocietie多元社會(huì)的劣勢(shì)：對(duì)少數(shù)民族歧視discriminationagainsttheminoritygroups不同文化之間的溝通障礙和文化沖突thebarrierforcommunicationandculturalshockamongvariouscultures民族沖突ethnicconflicts所以，政府與媒體應(yīng)該促成facilitate不同文化之間的溝通與相互信任interactionandmutualtrust.84多元社會(huì)的劣勢(shì)：84三歲看大studythebehaviorofthree-year-oldchildrentoseewhethertheywillgrowuptobecriminals人性humannature基因構(gòu)成geneticmakeup但是，家庭教育parenting,學(xué)校教育schooling，朋友影響influencefromfriends，媒體影響mediainfluence才是決定性影響因素thedeterminingfactors85犯罪問題三歲看大studythebehaviorofthr犯罪原因：缺乏良好教育pooreducation，家庭不幸unfortunatefamily，生活困難poverty，性格缺陷characterflaw解決方法Educatio