英語四六級漢譯英之：六級實(shí)戰(zhàn)（二）

英語四六級漢譯英之：六級實(shí)戰(zhàn)（二）據(jù)世界衛(wèi)生組織調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)顯示，中國煙草消費(fèi)占全球三分之一。據(jù)國家衛(wèi)生部門估計(jì)，我國每年有100害他人健康。盡管國家衛(wèi)生部門2011年就出臺了公共場所禁止吸煙的規(guī)定，但這些規(guī)定并沒有嚴(yán)格執(zhí)行共場所禁煙，同時(shí)，要積極宣傳禁煙工作，及時(shí)制止他人在公共場所吸煙。一、理清時(shí)態(tài)本文是對公共場所吸煙危害和禁煙規(guī)定的客觀性描述，使用最頻繁的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。判斷過程：1.直接找信號詞，如“年——一般過去時(shí)，出臺了…并沒有（并聯(lián)系上下文語境判斷）——現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。.其余句子表述一般事實(shí)或經(jīng)常性動作，采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2二、合理斷并本文句子邏輯清晰，主干明確，枝葉也很好梳理。因此，可以根據(jù)意群斷句。據(jù)國家衛(wèi)生部門估計(jì)，我國每年有100多萬人死于與煙草有關(guān)的疾病。吸煙不僅危害自身健康，還會污染環(huán)境，盡管國家衛(wèi)生部門2011并沒有“嚴(yán)格執(zhí)行”。/目前，政府明確要求各級領(lǐng)導(dǎo)干部帶頭在醫(yī)院、公共交通設(shè)施和學(xué)校等公共場所禁煙，同時(shí)，要積極宣傳禁煙工作，及時(shí)制止他人在公共場所吸煙。三、找準(zhǔn)主干，梳理枝葉1.據(jù)世界衛(wèi)生組織調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)顯示，中國煙草消費(fèi)占全球三分之一。參考譯文1】AccordingthedatacollectedbytheWorldHealthOrganization,Chinesesmokersconsumeathirdoftheworld’scigarettes.【【參考譯文2AccordingthedatacollectedbytheWorldHealthOrganization,Chinaaccountsforathirdoftheworld’scigaretteconsumption.2.據(jù)國家衛(wèi)生部門估計(jì)，我國每年有100多萬人死于與煙草有關(guān)的疾病。參考譯文1】China’snationalhealthauthoritiesestimateoveramilliondeathsfromtobacco-relateddiseasesevery參考譯文estimatedbyChina’snationalhealthauthoritiesthatoveramillionpeoplediefromtobacco-relateddiseaseseveryyear.【【3.吸煙不僅危害自身健康，還會污染環(huán)境，危害他人健康。參考譯文】Smokingbadforthehealthofnotonlythesmokers,butalsothenon-smokersbecauseofpollutedair.【4.盡管國家衛(wèi)生部門年就出臺了公共場所禁止吸煙的規(guī)定，但這些規(guī)定并沒有嚴(yán)格執(zhí)行?！緟⒖甲g文】Althoughthenation'shealthministryissuedregulations2011smokingpublicplaces,theyhaven’tbeen"strictlyenforced".5.目前，政府明確要求各級領(lǐng)導(dǎo)干部帶頭在醫(yī)院、公共交通設(shè)施和學(xué)校等公共場所禁煙，參考譯文Atpresent,Chinesegovernmentexplicitlyrequiresofficialsatalllevelsnot【smokepublicplacessuchashospitals,publictransportorschoolssetagoodforthepublic.【參考譯文Atpresent,officialsatalllevelsareexplicitlyrequiredbythegovernmentnotsmokepublicplacessuchashospitals,publictransportorschoolssetagoodforthepublic.【參考譯文Atpresent,explicitlyrequiredbythegovernmentthatofficialsatalllevelssmokenocigarettepublicplacessuchashospitals,publictransportorschoolssetagoodexampleforthepublic.6.同時(shí)，要積極宣傳禁煙工作，及時(shí)制止他人在公共場所吸煙。參考譯文】Besides,theyshouldactivelypromotetheanti-smokingcampaignandpromptlystopotherpeoplefromsmokingpublicplaces.【,各級領(lǐng)導(dǎo)干部指代。另外，“同時(shí)”這個(gè)承上啟下的關(guān)聯(lián)詞除了“besides”外，還可以用“meanwhile”，“atthetime”，“moreover”等其他表達(dá)?！救膮⒖甲g文】AccordingthedatacollectedbytheWorldHealthOrganization,aboutonethreecigarettessmokedtheworldareChina.China’snationalhealthauthoritiesoveramilliondeathsfromtobacco-relateddiseaseseverySmokingbadforthehealthofnotonlythesmokers,butalsothenon-smokersbecauseofthepollutedair.Althoughthehealthministryissuedaregulation2011bansmokingpublicplaces,theyhaven'tbeen"strictlyenforced".Atpresent,Chinesegovernmentexplicitlyrequiresofficialsatalllevelsnotsmokepublicplacesashospitals,publictransportorschoolssetagoodexamplethepublic.Besides,theyshouldactivelypromotetheanti-smokingcampaignandpromptlystopotherpeoplefromsmokingpublicplaces.重點(diǎn)詞匯短語與表達(dá)：nationalhealthauthorit