高中考試英語11.應(yīng)用文之慰問信

應(yīng)用文11慰問信真題回顧假如你是新華中學的學生李華，你的美國朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準備期末考試未能及時回復。請根據(jù)雙下要點給他回封郵件：1.未及時回信的原因；2.你假期的打算(如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等)注意：1.詞數(shù)：120-150；2可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【參考范文】DearTom,Howiseverythinggoing?Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofansweringyourletterintime.Youknow,I’vebeenpreparingforthefinalexamsthesedays,soIforgottowriteback.Inyourletter,youaskedmeformyplansonsummervacation.Now,Iamwritingtotellyousomespecificdetails.Overall,threethingswillmakemysummervacationmeaningful.Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreamandIintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.Inaddition,itisafabulouschoicetovisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation,inordertoenjoyappealingsceneryandmakemorefriends.Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.Isincerelyapologizeagainformymistake.Bytheway,what’syourplantospendyoursummervacation?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本書面表達考查提綱類作文。從寫作要點和得分點來看，考生應(yīng)在宏觀上把握書信體寫作的要求，如格式、文體等，寫作段落以三段式為宜，首段體現(xiàn)問候、寫信背景等，尾段再次致歉、也可詢問Tom暑假里的打算，體現(xiàn)書信體的交際性；而中間段具體交待未及時回信的原因、假期的打算。考生在微觀層面上應(yīng)具體把握寫作的內(nèi)容和語言，做到句子之間有效的連接，長短句結(jié)合，多用doing及物做主語，句子加半句原因、結(jié)果、目的等具體細節(jié)的解釋、利用簡單而有效的中文思路擴展英文細節(jié)?？忌裟茉趯懽鞑糠肿龅絻?nèi)容充實符合要求、語言精彩與眾不同、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰一目了然，相信這樣的文章能讓考生獲得一個相對滿意的成績?！痉段狞c評】此范文表達流暢，語言優(yōu)美，內(nèi)容全面，符合題目要求。其中值得學習的句型有：不定式作目的狀語：Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreamandIintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.

非謂語動詞和定語從句：Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.【經(jīng)典套路】第一段：問候+寫信背景+寫信目的第二段：“道歉”部分(相當于“寫信背景”)第三段：“假期安排”部分第四段：補充說明+客套話慰問信(含抗“疫”慰問信)開頭句型1.

Iwas(awfully)sorrytohearthat

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句子

(your

teamlostthegame.)2.

Iwasshockedtohearof

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sth.(yourfailureintheexam.)3.

I’mwritingtotellyouhowsorry

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amtohearabout

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(yourloss

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Knowingyoursituation,

I

feelterriblysorryabout

sth.…中間段句型1.

Iquietunderstandhowyoufeelnow，but...我特別能理解你現(xiàn)在的感覺，但...2.

Youhavedevotedyourselfto...你在...方面付出了大量的精力和時間3.

Butasweallknow,itisextremelydifficulttodo...但是眾所周知，做...本身就極其困難4.

Toprepare...,youhavemadeeveryeffort.為了準備這次...,你已經(jīng)盡了最大努力5.

It’snotyourfaulttodo........不是你的錯結(jié)尾句型1.

Ifthereisanythingyouneedmetodo,don’thesitatetoletmeknow.2.

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candoanythingforyou,doletmeknow.3.

Remember,wewon’tbefarawayifyouneedanyhelp!4.

Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.必背模板模板=1\*GB3①Dear,Iwasverysorrytohearthat.(交代事由)It’sunderstandableforyouto.(表明主要觀點)However,ifyoucan

adopt

different

perspectives,.(提出建議)First,it’snormaltoloseinabasketballmatch,foryoucaneitherwinorlose.Ifyou’vetriedyourbest,whynotliftyourspiritsto

faceupto(直面)theresult?Anyway,.Besides,youcanalso.Therefore,if,youwill.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua模板=2\*GB3②Dear______,Iam______,Iamverysorrytohaveheardofyourpresentsituationthatyouaresobitterafter________./Iamshockedatthenewsabout______________(引出具體實情，表示惋惜和同情)Atpresent,_________decidesthatitwillgiveyou________whenyoureceivealetter.Thatwillofferyousomuchcourage.Ihopeyouwillmakeeffortstoovercomeallkindsofdifficulty,nomatterhowharditis.Youaresuretomakeit.(進一步安慰并鼓勵對方)Iwilltrymybestto________,whichmayhelpyou.Itwillgivemorecouragetoliveon.(表示自己意愿提供幫助)Mayyourecoversoon./Goodluckandbestwishestoyou!(表達愿望與祝福)Yourssincerely,__________________思路點金一、題型特點慰問信是向失敗者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天災(zāi)人禍的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此類信要寫得及時、簡明扼要，感情要真誠，措辭要貼切，盡量以樂觀的口吻減輕親友的煩惱和痛苦，并鼓勵對方對日后煩人生活、學習、工作充滿信心。二、寫作思路第一步：引出事實，表達惋惜和同情；第二步：安慰對方或鼓勵對方，預(yù)測未來；第三步：表達愿望和祝福。二、套用句式：1.Iwasshockedatthenewsabouttheearthquakein…聽聞……地震的消息我很震驚。2.On…,anincredibleandunknownearthquakesuddenlyhappenedin…,…Province.在……，……省……市突然發(fā)生了一場驚人的、未曾預(yù)知的地震。3.Wearesosorrytohearthenewsabouttheearthquake.聽到地震的消息我們很難過。4.Weareverysorrytolearnthat…我們非常遺憾地得知……5.Ijustheardthatyou’vebeenonthesicknesslastweek.我無法告知你當你聽到你發(fā)生事故我是多么難過。6.Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsorryIwastolearnofyouraccident.我剛剛得知上個星期你病了。7.IwasdeeplyconcernedwhenIlearnedthat…當我聽說……時，我非常關(guān)心8.Ijustwantedtoletyouknowhowconcernedweare.我只想要你知道我們是多么擔憂。9.Ihopeyouaregettingsomerelieffromthepain.我真心希望能減輕你的痛苦。10.Wearehopingforyourquickreturntohealth/earlyrecovery/rapidrecovery.我們真心/祈禱你能很快完全康復。11.Wearelookingforwardto/hopingandprayingforyourspeedyandfullrecovery.我們真心希望你早日康復。12.Onlywehavetheperseverancecanwedefeatthenaturaldisaster.我們只有不屈不撓才能戰(zhàn)勝自然災(zāi)難。13.Pleaseextendourdeepsympathytoyourfamily.請向你的家人轉(zhuǎn)達我們最深切的同情。14.IfthereisanythingIcandotohelpyou,pleaseletmeknow.如果需要我的幫助，請告知。必背范文假定你是高三學生李華，你的同學王平春節(jié)去武漢探親因新冠狀病毒肺炎疫情迅速擴散，他有發(fā)熱癥狀而暫時滯留武漢，請你代表全班同學給此時處于焦慮和郁悶中的他寫一封英文慰問信。要點如下：1.對其表示關(guān)心和同情。2.對其表示安慰并提供幫助。3.表達愿望和祝福。【參考范文】DearWangPin,KnowingthatyouaredelayedinWuhan,Iamreallygettingupsetaboutit.Soareourclassmates.I'mwritingtoconveyourconcerntoyouonbehalfoftheclass.WordscamethatWuhanwasinbadconditiondue